The letter to my wife

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Posted: 12 years ago

#11

Originally posted by: Japonica
Beautiful and very poigant story, Ivre! Thank you.

Thanks a lot :)

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Sur_10

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Posted: 12 years ago

#12

Originally posted by: Escapist
You really need my feedback ??

Ok...

Grammar good, plot nice and not too cliched, emotions kept in check there was absolutely nothing over done...short and crisp.

And about what I felt, I don't think I need to tell you, do I ?? If, I do my post would be never ending.
Brilliant Sur loved it...

:)

Cheers,
F

Thank you so much Fatima!! :D

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Sur_10

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Posted: 12 years ago

#13

Originally posted by: bhadraprasad
A good work...With the first few lines itself the OS created a melancholic effect.Well done

Aww thats such a great thing to know!

Thanks a lot!

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insanelycrazy

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Posted: 12 years ago

#14

amazing OS!

you so beautifully describes arnav's insecurities and dillema.

what i loved was the part where KHushi thought arnav didn't realize what she going through, or what she was trying to achieve, but he did! he knew her as well as she knew him, only difference is that she was outspoken and he wans't! i love the play of emotions here. and wat he couldn't say, he poured it all out in his letter.

and and also, the first part, awesome imagery and choice of words :D :D :D

absolutely loved it :D :D :D