Arshi ff : Jab tak hain jaan ( part 1 updt- pg 1 )

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Jab tak hain jaan

Teri aankhon ki namkeen mastiyan
Teri hansi ki beparwaah gustakhiyaan
Teri zulfon ki leharaati angdaiyaan
Nahi bhoolunga main
Jab tak hai jaan, jab tak hai jaan

Tera haath se haath chhodna
Tera saayon se rukh modna
Tera palat ke phir na dekhna
Nahin maaf karunga main
Jab tak hai jaan, jab tak hai jaan

Baarishon mein bedhadak tere naachne se
Baat baat pe bewajah tere roothne se
Chhoti chhoti teri bachkani badmashiyon se
Mohabbat karunga main
Jab tak hai jaan, jab tak hai jaan..

Tere jhoothe kasme vaadon se
Tere jalte sulagte khwabon se
Teri be-raham duaaon se
Nafrat karunga main
Jab tak hai jaan, jab tak hai jaan

Guyzzz this is an arshi ff plzzz tell me if u want me to continue '''.im waitin for ur comments '''

Plzzz say sumthing'''. Im a newbie '.. n this honestly my first ff''.rather I shud say '' this my first fiction''. Any suggestions ????? please feel free to say'''''


Prologue

does love once forgotten happen again ????? will the lost love be found again ?? will hearts prove to be right ?? will hearts rule brains and memories ???? Life is a mysterious maze '..no one knows when what will happen''here is a story of arnav and khushi


how is it ???????
comments or likes...
im ready fr all chappals n tomatoes on my face


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Posted: 12 years ago
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nice title and poem
but dear, would appreciate a short prologue which will give us an overview of the storyline, that will make the members interesting to read. this is just an humble suggestion from my end. because every1 wont understand the storyline from this poem.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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wat ???????? only 2 replies i thought my forum frnds r very encouraging... am i wrong ??????????
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PART 1

London 2012

AR office london branch

Arnav : Daffodil where are my files dammit ?

Daffodil : sorry asr '.i think they are in my cabin'I'll be right back asr.

Arnav : get out and be right back

Daffodil leaves the cabin hurrying into her cabin for the files her boss asked. She knows her boss's anger. He's like a hunter in a jungle waiting to attack a tiger .. but yeah the tiger may be very big but nothing can beat asr.

Asr cabin after few hours'

Asr : ( resting in his chair throwing his head backwards ) why do I feel like im missing something important in my life''I only know how my life is from past 5 years' I don't remember how it was before 'wish I could remember how it was !!! was I this arrogant then too?

His life felt like he was living in hell . he didn't understand why he was feeling like this'his di,nani,mami,jiju,akaash,payal'.everyone said he was like dis before too '.but he felt a tug at his heart whenever he saw an indian girl in an anarkali'was there some one in his life before. ???

Daffodil enters the cabin

Daffodil: asr here are the files you asked for '..

Asr : yeah keep them in my bag im going back home..

As soon as he enters his mansion, he goes into his di's room and knocks on his door

Anjali : come chotey.. come in

Arnav : di I have to ask you something really important..

Anjali: of course chotey ..you know you can ask your di anything'

Arnav : was there someone important in my life before my accident whom I am missing out'. ?

Anjali : ( hesitates for a second ) n. '.n'.no chotey 'I've introduced every person after you regained your consiousness after the accident'.

Arnav : are you sure di ?

Anjali : of course im suree

Arnav : thanks di 'I've gotaa do my work di'see you at dinner ..bye'

Anjali : bye'how can I say the truth chotey that u had a very imp. Person in your who betrayed everyone including me '..wish I could say that your love whom you gave your heart is a betrayer'she tried to steal my husband chotey'she played with your emotions..im happy now that we started our life all over again'.and don't remember your bitter past






ok guysss ...shyaam is same here and yeah by the way anjali is in a thought that her hubby is best and inspiring husband... in this ff payal isnt khushi's sis...only aakash's wife...left alll same as in show...and characters will be revealed slowly one by one ... in the coming chapters...comments n likes welcome ... n yeah im ready for chapppals and tomatoes...buddy me for pms...

Edited by sameera_asr - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Arnav lost his memory and Anjali is not revealing about kushi...great start when u introduce kushi then...Update is good and title is also nice...if u have time can u please pm me when u update
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: kethgowthami

Arnav lost his memory and Anjali is not revealing about kushi...great start when u introduce kushi then...Update is good and title is also nice...if u have time can u please pm me when u update


please buddy me guysss n i will pm...for next update

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