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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: raginisharma

i will say the pain of mayank and nupur ...is misrable ...



i have Doubt Nupur uski Apni Daughter nahi hai..warna koi ma Aisi ...lol ..


And what can i say About your Writing JUst AwesomešŸ‘ ..Keep Going ...😃



thanks alot dear for liking n giving me the honur of commenting
apna ff update kero naa ...
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: kheya-mayur

another superb update ...

it was so heart touchy ,mayur jaysa koi nahi .dey r just madefor each other .

m geting confused yar .which 1 is ur best ff?
dis 1 or gmh or csi ...
i can say alll these 3 ffs i can read countless time wid same excitement n same attachment



thanks alot dear
glad u liked it

lol thanks alot dear thts a huge compliemtn specially whn sumone say good abt GMYH i love it .. as thts my favt

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Originally posted by: kheya-mayur

lovely part ...
so mayur is going back to home ...
eagerly waiting to see how nupur stand strongly against her mom .

n plz show d reason behind tai jaans behaviour .
i cant digest a mother being so
being business oriented too much is ok , scolding ur daughter too much too is ok but going dat extent dat even her heart does not shake while braking her daughters home is too much ...

k reason to dikha



thanks alot dear
glad u liked it

she will n u will see it

dekho its very simple... she never believed mayank to be a person tht will marry her daughter... she can never thing so.. the only reason she planned to do so was to take shares...n have whole thing in her hand...

after tht she will make her mary a person who has tth class to be a part of Ahmed legacy.. not sumone like mayank who doenst maintain a class so fo being a millioner

so for her these relationships should be profitable not such
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: love.mayurarti

Superb update

Loved both the past n present part...Gunjan "hidden camera" so gud.mayank is so funny.loved mayur little cute moment
AHHH...just hate dat women tai jaan...kahe ki jaan hain wo...disgusted women.jo apni he beti ki jaan le rehi hain.
Looking forward



thanksa lot dear
glad u loved it

lol.. i m so glad u liked the little pinch of humor here

will cont soon


Originally posted by: Faria.

sighhh very heart wrenching and touchyyy update
Cascade again u made me emotional
GOSH Mayur were so helpless, Nupur was so vulnerable..
Cascade Taijan kahi tak nehi choda in dono ko...
i felt so so sad for them
though u r explaining their past but still my heart ached 4 them
They have suffered a lot
i just want to c how u will punish taijaan???
i m just waiting how u will make her life hell





thanks janu
sigh they were but just keep in mind now they are perfect
gladu felt it so much
thanks alot for liking



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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: drfizaahmed



thanks alot dear for liking n giving me the honur of commenting
apna ff update kero naa ...



Update ..Okay Sooner you will get ..within October i think Whole Story...šŸ˜›
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: raginisharma



Update ..Okay Sooner you will get ..within October i think Whole Story...šŸ˜›



ladies n gentleman please mark this note as witness... we are geting her ff update ...
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: -SupriyaluvsMN-

present ws good! bt yeh tai jaan... iski jaan lene ka man kar raha!😔



thanksa lot dear
tum sab k hawaly tai jaan

Originally posted by: --Ruchi--

Very heart touching update di...

sigh!!! continue soon




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Posted: 13 years ago

Rplyd to u all.. n there are many of u who donot press like… pls do so..i request u…

Chapter: 31

PAST

Hugging her one last time.. he got up… and went near the door, turning to look at her once and moved out… it was difficult leaving her like this in all the trouble was hell difficult.. placing the papers in his jacket .. he was at door lost in her face which was trying to act strong but can see how devastated she was……. When Samrat came like a blaze from outside and punch him hard making him crash on ground and breaking some things to….

Samrat who was haunting for him al over the city was now turning more n more aggressive, as the more amount of people he was meeting, things were getting worse.. mayank's flat caretaker told him that mayank has shifted here already and has gone out…. Making samrat anger shoot high pitch but what was bothering him much was the fact what made him do that… asay kaun se zaroorat hai…

The last person he thought he should ask was the only person right at this moment to call .. he dial his mothers number and she told him that it was a clause that mayank has added in Nikaha nama that if there divorce will happen all his shares 25% will be transfer back to mayank and that's why he divorce her … as his business was going down and he needs money….and he has been asking for that from her from pretty long

Samrat didn't trusted at this first but than he called there legal advisor and he confirm the clause in Nikaha Nama… and also the fact that mayank is completely bankrupt due to his greedy moves….

Though there was no such clause in there ever in real..

Samrat now was completely out of senses .. and to make things worse mayank's travel agent told him that mayank is leaving to state in a day…. This all made him mad… he cant just believe mayank betrayed not only nupur but whole family so easily..

The voice of broken things made the Ahmed mansion awake and nupur who was hell worried rushed to out of the room and stod up in the terrace to see all… along with tai jaan taya and gunjan

Gunjan: kya ker rahy ho samrat..

Samrat: is se pocho is ny kya kiya hai… tujhy itni se bhi sharam nhi aai

Nupur: bhai rukho

Samrat: tum tu aj beech mein bolna hi maat … is ki taraf dari ( taking side) ker rahi hoo… is ki… he hited him again who was trying to get up..gunjan nupur k yaha se door rekho..

Mayank: Samrat meri baat tu sun

Samrat: mein teri baat suno… tu ny meri behan ki ziandagi barabd kerdi aur tu kahta hai mein teri baat suno…. Tujh se itni gir jany ki umeed nhi thi mjhy… apni galti chopnay k liyn tu ny us ko…

Taya jaan: akhir yeah ho kiya raha hai…

Samrat: baba is ny..he griped him from collar… is ny jis per humain bara behroosa tha… is gatiya admi ny nupur ko talluq day di… woh bhi sirf shares k liyan…

The house was in complete silent and nupur couldn't hold her self and was crying .. mayank was right nobody will spare him… and he was in terrible condition… why the hell he isn't stoping Samrat.. this isn't the way things were planned to cum out …

Shilpa: kya kaha tum ny….

Mayank was now hell shocked to see his mother on the door… shilpa who thought of giving surprise to her children was left in shock herself.. for mayank n nupur this was the most heel off situation as she was the only person they were seeking comfort in .. atleast for mayank … all that he was afraid of all he was having pain of he thought he will go n tell his mother as he cant share that all with nupur even, she is already is in terrible state… but lord has planned sumthing else..

Shilpa: kya kaha tum ny samart.. asa kasay hosakta hai

Samrat: is ny asa hi kiya hai choti ami is ny exactly asa hi kiya…. Is ny shares hasil kerny k liyan asa kya…. Bank corrupt hoa hai yeah….

Shilpa turned to mayank who was now horrified…

Mayank: ami meri baat sunay… please..

Shilpa: jo samrat kah raha hai kya yeah sach hai

Mayank: ami meri baat tu suno….

Shilpaa: mein ny pocha jo Samrat kah raha hai kya woh sach hai… bolo mayank…

Mayank: han…

The sound of her slap echoed in whole house… the grief that was in the ambience was dreadful.. yet tai jaan was enjoying the melo drama going on…. Wah kya secne hai…

Shilpa: " khabi socah bhi nhi tha jis yaqeen se nupur ko tum ko soba tha us ko tum apny liyan asa istemal kero gao…. Ghin ati hai mjhy tum per"

Mayank: ami meri baat tu suno… mein apko

Shilpa: aur tum ny in sab mein hum se baat kerna bhi zaroori nhi samjha.. kya kahty thy tum… acj nhi aany do gay nupur per… koi hath nhi lag sakty ga…. Zehir se baat hai tum kafi tu ho us ko barbad kerny ko… ksi aur ki kya zaroorat hai…

Samrat: aur tu aur yeah sehab shair chor ker bhag rahy hain… taky hum mein se kisi k sawalo k jawb hi nhi dayna… itna bara darphok aur gahitya insaan nikla tu… mjhy laga that u us se pyar kerny laga hai… per kitny aram se us ko isteml kerk phik diya…. Wah…

To mayank nupurs luck tai jaan wasn't there to heard that mayank is going aboard.. she has gone to call police… everyone will thing that samrat has done in anger and so lets hit that coin to.. she called the finical company informing them he might be escaping aboard and in not time they send in police…

Shilpa: tu itna gir jay ga…

Nupur: koi us ki baat tu sunlo…. Nupur who was still standing up just listening to all was feeling extremely helpless.. gunjan was holding her tight and wasn't getting anything…. Mayank cant do this to nupur the only thing her heart again n again was saying and the way nupur still was behaving and mayank was quite…. Thinks aren't the same…

Taya jaan: beta pasa chaiy that u mjhy ek baar bolty tu… shares chaiy thy tu samrat k bhi day dyata… itni bari baat kerny ki zaroorat kyat hi……

He droped…himself on sofa having his head in his hand… out of all the things he was happy to see his daughter now finally in safe hand but things will change so much he cant believe…

Shilpa: aj mjhy Sharm arahi hai yeah soch ker bhi k mein ny nupur jasi larki tery liyan pasand ki aur usk meny ny kaha tha woh khbai nhi pechaty gi…. Per tum ny mjhy us k samny nazary milny k laiq nhi chora…. Tum ko tu beta kahty hoay bhi sharm ati hai..

She droped herself on the sofa and start crying… mayank was just looking at all and the way evry one was so adamant on the fact that he can go so low just for money he can… he has nothing to explain neither he want to.. he looked up to nupur who was completely broken and shocked his head to stop her and stay strong… gunjan looked at him and he turned around to walk away from this place….

Inspector: mayank sehab humary pass apki girfatari k warrant hai… ap company k pasay chora ker yaha se bhagny k plan ker rahy thy

Mayank: asa kuch nhi hai mein kahin nhi jaraha hoo aur yeah baat mein ny afzal sehba se bhi ki hai…

Inspector: talshi lo is ki….

Mayank: to his bad luck that was all surrounding him..he had a ticket of Lahore incase to prove tai jaan that he isn't here so cant say it verbally….

Inspector: yeah kya hai…. Tu humari khabar paki thi… ap chaly meray sath..

Mayank: magar ….

He looked around maybe someone stop them to do that all… yet nobody was even looking at..

Nupur: baba ap kuch kero…

Taya jaan: gunjan beta is ko yaha se lay jao….

Gunjan dragged her to her room… and gave her water…

Nupur: mayank bhag nhi raha hai…. Us ko koi tu police se nikla wao asay tu …. Asay tu nhi hona tha …

Gunjan: nupur akhir baat kiya hai … tum aj bhi us ko taraf dari ker rahi hoo…. Mayank tumhain kasay chor sakta hai… woh aj bhi itni takleef mein tha tm ko asa dekh ker… akhir baat kya hai..as kya hia hai

Nupur: baat.. she chukled pitfully… baat hi tu ajeeb hai…. Tum kuch ker sakti ho….

Gunjan: mein dekhti hoon…per tum

Nupur: pls agar tum uncle se

Gunjan: nupur mjhy nhi pata kya hua hai… per mayank mera bhi kuch klagta hai .. mein baba se bol do gi us ko kuch nhi hoga … for sure…

Nupur: gunjan mjhy akela chor do plesase…

She nodded in yes thought she wasn't feeling like leaving her, nupur seems to be complete torn and why not, the person she love the most left him… but how can this happen ti sint she only in love… the way mayank has kept her always…. he can't make her suffer like this.. and if he has done so…. God knows wht is behind all this that's appearing.. right now mayank needs her…

Gunjan went to her room as all of them were still down.. taya jaan in his room all in hell worried and denial..how can mayank do this to her daughter…. Wht is going on her he cant imagine…

Shilpa was not only just in pain , she was in anger… grief, and feeling helpless, where her up bringing lacked that his son left his wife just for mere money… money…

Gunjan: baba.. mjhy apki help chaiy…. Foron yeah kerday…. Aur car behj dayin jasay hi yeah kam ho… han subha behj dayna

Samrat came in and droped himself on the bed and hided his face in his hand…gunjan placed her hand on his shoulder and in an impulse he hugged her..he couldn't hold his tear seeing his sister fate..

Samrat: asa kyun hua gunjan…. Mayank asa kasay kersakta hai….nupur ki kya halt hogi.. mein tu us ko dekhny bhi nhi jasaka… hamehsa se bahcpan se itna maan tha nupur ko mayank per… jasay har chees se woh bacha lya ga us ko… aur aj us ny itni se baat k liyan us koo chro diya… nafrat arahi hai mjhy us per… dil ker raha hai aj hi qatal kerdo mein us k… pocha tha mein ny tu pyar nhi kerta tu na ker shadi us se… khel samjha tha unhony…

Gunjan: yeahi tu meray samhj nhi araha .., asa kasay kerskata hai woh…. Woh bhi itni se baat k liyan…. Samrat us ki baat ek baar sun tu lo

Samrat: tumhar deemgh karab hogaya hai kiya… us ki bat suno… aur kya farak perta hai kyun hoa yeah…. Ker tu diya us ny… mein ny khud laywer se baat ki hai…. Mayank ny loan liya tha huge amount k aur woh nhi utar saka.. islyn us ny nupur k nikah k clause k use kiya aur shares k sath sath money bhi mili usko….

Gunjan: per woh mang bhi tu sakta tha nah…. Shares tu us ko mil jatay

Samrat: aur pasay…. Ami se us ny kafi pasay bhi liyan hain…. Kam se yeah chal raha tha humain tu pata hi nhi tha…. Ab tu police bhi bhejy pari thi usk….

Gunjan: samrat yeah sab.. mjhy tu samhj nhi araha hai ….

Samrat: gunjan tumhara deemgh karab hogaya hai jo tum us ki baatein ker rahi ho… mjhy kabardar tum bhi na dekho us se baat kertay hoay aur na nupur… nupur kasai hai

Gunjan: thik hai so rahi hai… tum bhi sony ki khosih kero….. ab tu yeah hogaya hai…. Mein choti ami ko dekh aoo…. Woh tu ajeeb feel ker rahi hongi

Samrat: haan….

……..

Morning:

Bahar aao tumahri zamant hogi hai

Mayank was shocked zamant, maybe his mom felt so he was really happy he needs to tell her nothing such happen, but the man was the legal advisor of Afaq uncle..gunjan;s father…

Mayank sehba apki zamant kerdi hai bahar car hai ap gahr jasakty hain…

Mayank wasn't getting anything why will he help him in all this.. he sat in the car he has nothing to argue on. And the driver drove him to afaq mansion…. He was felling hell embarrassed and was not at feeling like going out.. yet having gunjan at door waiting for him impatiently he get sum strengthen… so gunjan did it all….

Gunjan: tum thik tu hona…. Un logo ny kuch kiya tu nhi nah…. She touched her cheek affectionately

Mayank: nhi.. tum ny meri zamant..

Gunjan: andar aoo….

Afaq: beta koi problem thi tu hum thy nah…. Jasay samrat hai wasy tum ho meray liyan… kya baat hai..

Gunjan: mayank kuch hai jo tum duno buhat dino se chopa rahy hoo.. akhir baat kiya hai…kuch tu bolo asay chup kyun ho… mjhy per tu behrosa ker sakty ho nah…

He smiled and looked at him

Mayank: kuch nhi… uncle ap meray shares rekh lay… mjhy kuch amount chaiy.. kafi zayda hai.. per agar ap mange kersaky tu… koi hard n fast rule nhi hai…. Mein states jaraha hoon tu hopfully us company k owner se mil ker deal waps hojaygi.. aur mein apko pasay return kerdo ga…

Afaq: beta shares rekhny ki mjhy koi zaroorat nhi hai…. Yeah cheque rekho jitni amount chaiy fill kero.. aur jab tak chao yaah rah sakty hoo apan hi ghar hai..

Gunjan: kya baat hai mayank… business mein itna sab ek dam se kasay hogaya..

Mayank: mera ek kam kero gi… baba ko yeah shares chaiy thy… ami tak is file ko pcoha do.. is mein 15% hain… aur gunjan humari maadat aur mat kero tum buaht muskil mein askti hoon… bus itna kero k nupur k kayal rekho….

Gunjan: tum meri baat kyun taal rahy ho

Mayank: us baat k discus k koi faida nhi.. tum meri baat sunao… nupur.. mein tumhain details day raha hoon.. aur wasy tu mein ny samrat ko emil bhi kerdit hai.. woh mera phone tu attend kern hi raha hai…. Nupur depression ki patient hai…. Stress hai buaht … dhayna rekhna us per pressure nah ho …khabi bhi lagy k us ki tabiyat bighar rahi hai .. call Dr nadir.. woh us k case achy se janty hai ..he is handling it

Gunjan: WHAT… nupur ko kya hua…. Mayank tum nupur ko kasay chor sakty ho… us k pass tu hum sab hain hi… tum

Mayank: meray pass woh hai… tum gahr jao… kisi ko pata chal gaya tum ny meri maadat ki tum per qayamat aajy gi…. Bus nupur ko mein tumhain soob raha hoon… kayal rekhna…

Gunjan: haan…she doesn't know wht to saw .. why the hell both of them are not telling anything…

Mayank: kisi ko ghar mein pata nah chaly k tum ny yeah kiya hai… afaq uncle ny bussines relation per kiya hai… warna Samrat bhi tum se naraz hojay ga…

Gunjan: tum kya ker rahy hoo…. Kuch hai nah..

Mayank: is waqt tum per hi mein behorrsa ker sakta hoon kyun k tum deemgh se kam layti hoo… gunjan nupur buhat muskil mein aay gi ab…. Humari soch se zayda… jitna pass rah sakti ho rehna… please… ek do din tak us ko sedative day do… tak woh thora relax keray ….

Gunjan: thik hai….

Mayank: thanks afaq uncle … ap ny buhat bari muskil hall kerdi….

Afaq: koi baat nhi hai beta…. Itny saalo se janta hoon tum ko bhi aur Salman ko bhi… aur insaan ki pechan hai mjhy…. Chahy sab kuch bhi kahy itna tu mjhy pata hai.. tum kya ho…

Mjhy nhi lagta itna sab hony k bad states mein tumhin rehny ki jaga Salman k ghar mein milay gi…. Mera ek dost hai.. mein us se baat kerta hoon.. pasay hotel or rent per waste nhi kero… us k pass reh lo.. mein us ko inform kerdo ga.. woh arrange ker day ga

Mayank: nhi uncle mein mange kerlo ga

Afaq: please beta.. mjhy acha lagy ga… jab humara bora waqt tha tab tum ny na Salman ny khabi bhi humari maddat kerny se pechy nhi hata… tu phir… aj kam se kam hunain tu kerny do…. Humara talluq sirf gunjan ki wajah se tu nhi hai… tum ny buhat kiya hai humaray liyan…

Mayank: uncle gunjan hai ab humaray sath.. yeah baat sirf business ki nhi hai…. Ap please khosih keray k yeah in sab se door rahy…. Warna us k liyan

Afaq: kisi ko pata nhi chaly ga… yeah baat fikar maat kero mein gunjan se bhi nhi kaho ga… thik hai

Mayank: thanku. uncle

Afaq: tumhari states ki flight kab ki hai …

Mayank: kal raat ki…. Abhi mjhy company ko pasay waps kerny hai…pehly tu sirf shares day ker jata … per ab pasay clear hony se case automatically clear hojay ga…..

Afaq: beta meri mano tu pasay maat do…

Mayank: kyun uncle

Afaq: jin logo ny tum ko pehsaya hai… un ko tu yeah lagay ga k tum clear hogay hoo… aur woh koi nai planning keray ga… abhi in ko is guman mein rehny do k tum ny sirf shares girwi rekhy hain…. Tum jab kaho gay mein yaha se un ko day do ga….

Mayank: hm.. ap kah tu thik rahy hain… thik mein shares k k papers ki copy lawyer se banwa ker unko day ta hon..

Afaq: meri car lay jao

Mayank: uncle please…. Ap k buhat shukaria ap yeah sab ker rahy hain…. Jab meray apny meray sath nhi hai… magar mei mange kerlo ga… ap muskil mein na ay.. kuch bhi zaroorat hogi tu mein ap se mang lo ga…

Afaq: thik hai magar tum raat ko yahin aao.. akely maat raho… please yeah meri request hai…

Mayank: uncle

Afaq: please beta

Mayank: sigh ji thik hai…. Mein ata hoon …ap please gunjan k ghar waps behj dain

…………….

Moving out he called a cab and ask the lawyer to cum to his flat … he told him all what to have on the agreement.. this time he was 300 times more carefull…the laywer draft it accordingly and than left to gave it to the finical company..

They wer just the 10% shares.. so he wasn't cleared right now…. He needs more than 50% according to the contract… yet this match will make them quite for sumtime….

Next he has to know whts going on at the house.. his heart was sinking just knowing what she must be going through… plus he was terribly missing her… one look, one touch, just mere presence of her all around was making him at peace… and now he certainly donot know how he is gonna spend rest of the day…

He dialed the no of new sim he gave her… but than stoped and text her… wht if she is surrounded with so many people…

To his good luck, just than shilpa and samrat has left her room, trying to make her sleep… and she has placed the cell under her pillow to know if its ringing….

It rung and she went and locked the door… and text him to call….

Nupur: tum thk ho nah.unhony kuch kiya tu nhi … tum abhi bhi wahin ho …

Mayank: hey hey… shhh… kitna bolti hoo tum…. Bulkily biwi ho… non stop sawalat ki barish…

Nupur: mayankkk…

Mayank: nupurrr… mein thik ho.. bulkily thik ho… kisi ki majal k mjhy hat lagy…. Afaq uncle ny zamant keradi thi.. subha hi ghar agay hoon… shares k document submit ker daiy hain… aur baba waly gunjan ko diya hai.. woh ami ko day gay…. So not to worry… sab abhi tak under control hai… per ek baat tu batao zara….. meri biwi kasai hai….

She hugged her self and closed her eyes

Nupur: mein thik hoon

Mayank: asa wala thik hai nhi chaly ga…. Nupur yeah sab tu hona tha..kuch naya tu nhi hai… best is k tai jaan ko itna se bhi shaq nhi hoa.. hum per …. Hai nah..

Nupur: han so tu hai… magar choti ami ny bhi

Mayank: its oky…. Ami ko baad mein handle ker lay ga… shayd mein galat soch raha tha k ami mjhy sunay gi….

Nupur: mayank asa nhi hai k woh tum se

Mayank: aray us ko chor.. tum bus apna kayal rekho.. kahan khaya

Nupur: haan kah liya tha

Mayank: nupur ko laparwai nhi chaly gi samjhi tum…. Mjhy meri biwi bulkily wasy hi waps chaiy jasay k mein chor ker jaraha hoon samjhi ap… meri kal ki flight hai… jany se pehly phone kero ga… thik hai…. Kcuh nhi hoga… mein sirf tum se 21 hrs door hoon ..kuch bhi hoga I will be there oky

Nupur: mera sab kayal rekh lay ga… aur mein bhi.. tum apna kayal rekho ga… sab ki baato ko zayda socho ga nhi…jasa tumhari addat hai nah… pakr k bahti jata hoo…. He smiled… sojao… tum tu kal bhi nhi soay ho..

Mayank: hm. Wasy kal mera kasoor nhi tha k mein nhi soya…

Nupur: mayankk…tum nah.. she smiled whole heartedly

Mayank: that more like it.. he smiled...

Nupur: fikar nhi kerna thik hai

Mayank: ji huqam… take care…. Allah hafiz…

Nupur: mayank

Mayank: pata hai… I love ya too..

Nupur: Allah hafiz

Hanging up the phone and smile.. she can make him feel al well.. perfect.. and this one thing that will give him strengthen has always been his strengthen … he will do it all quickly and will get her back…he cant help to think about all that evry one was saying at home… Samrat words hurted.. yet wht hurted the most was his mother's word… she even didn't tried to listen to him once.. even now when he was trying to call her she didn't picked up…yet cut the phone.. gunjan can believe that there is sumthing big behind all this.. yet nobody else does… wao…

She lied down in relief hearing his voice, hearing his smile, she can feel a bit relief… it felt so good to be sure he is fine.. and perfect.. and that all she needs… just him..

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Present:

Mayank: ab bahit jao abhi jany mein 2 ghate hain…. Please thora rest kerlo.. he said making her lye down on bed and she grip his hand not to let him go..

He smiled and joined her ..she snuggled to him close.. she knew she need to ask him all that..

Nupur: choti ami se baat hoi

Mayank: hm

Nupur: mayank bus … ab bahar jao un sab se.. maat socho us din k baray mein.. jab sab ny tumahin… she said resting her chin on his torso and placing her plm on his cheek

Mayank: nupur mein kis k baray mein nhi scoh raha.. tum janti ho mjhy samrat se koi shikyat nhi ahi.. woh ata tu mjhy hamesha ki tarah hi pata.. us k reaction normal tha… obvious hai us ki behan ki ziangdi thi aur kahin na kahin woh pagal horaha tha yeah scoh ker k mein ny asa kyun …hmesha se impulse hai woh hum janty hain…

Nupur: jani thoon… tumahin choti ami ki baat ki takleef hai sab se zayda

Mayank: is se bahr nikalna asan nhi hai… mjhy soch ker hi ajeeb laagta hai k ..ek min mein ami ny meray baray mein sari ray kayab kerli… chalo us waqt nhi per baad mein khabi… kahbi tu meri baat sunti.. mein lakh per khosih ki.. per har baar ami ny mjhy apan beta many se hi inkar kerdiya…

Mein soch ker hi ajeeb lagta tha k.. mein asa hoon… mein itn be aetibar aur naliaq tha k unhony ek baar yeah socha bhi nhi k akhir baat kyat hi… woh tu sab se zayda yeah janti thi… tum se bhi zayda k mein tumahry sath asa khabi nhi kero ga… phir bhi… phir unhony asa hi socha..yaqeen se ghusay se nhi…

Nupur: mayank please… khoish kero .. bhool jao is baat ko.. maat socho… please

He smiled and kissed her forehead

Mayank: lhosih keroga paka… aur sach mein ab sochy ko aur buaht kuch hai.. naya ghar naya shair naya bussines nai zindagi sab k baray mein sochna hai… hmm..

She nodded in yes and snuggled back..

Mayank: and what about nai biwi..

She raised her head

Nupur: qatal nhi kerdo gi us k bhi aur tumahra bhi….

He giigled and hugged her back… asking her to sleep for sumtime…

Edited by drfizaahmed - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Awesome update
loved it lodsss
Beautifully written
loved it to d coreee
Gosh!!!!!!! i just hateee that GA to d coreee...
kamini aurat uske muh mein kirey parey...Khuda usko kabhi maaf na akrein
kitniii jhuti makkar aur ghatiyaaa kisam ki aurat hain
Ma kya aurat kehlane ke bhi layak nhi hain...
uff!!!!! Samrat ne mere i mean Nupur ke Mayank ko mara...
waise ab ase waqt pyar toh karega nhi marega hi.sigh!
bt Gosh! felt bad for MN n Shipla aunty too...sigh!
loved Gunjan n her family to d coreee
kash ke woh pehle hi unki madat leta bt i know as yeh sai nhi lagta unse zameer ko bt.still...sigh!!!!!!!!!!
loved d last past part...
it was nice n adorable
n Gosh!!! i love d present as usual...
waise qatal karne mein madad lagey toh main hoon Nupur ke liye..šŸ˜‰šŸ˜†šŸ¤£
bt i know uski kabhi naubat nhi ayegi 😳
loved it lodsss
love u lodsss API šŸ¤—šŸ¤—šŸ¤—
Edited by -Anila- - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: drfizaahmed



ladies n gentleman please mark this note as witness... we are geting her ff update ...


No no please Don't take it Seriously ...šŸ˜†šŸ˜†šŸ˜†
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Posted: 13 years ago
Loved the update. Finally you updated. But it was worth waiting to get such a nice update.

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