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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome update.
really liked it.
liked the way arnav said these words:
owner man:"okk,sit here,what food you want?"
khushi looked at arnav,
arnav then gave the order that khushi had exactly ordered in previous times...
hearing that details khushi shocked...
"you still remember it?"
arnav:"i love to remember every moment that i share with you,it's my oxygen khushi"


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Posted: 12 years ago
Aww...that was indeed Awesome. continue soon Hun!
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Posted: 12 years ago
Just read ur story"s part one n its amazing 👏
U r a brilliant writer continue soon
Plz Pm me wenever u update
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Posted: 12 years ago
Hey, read all the chapters...apart from first few ones there is nothing that shows that Arnav is sorry for what he has done to Khushi. On the contrary he took both kids from her forcefully which is wrong...he always thinks about himself and not Khushi...first he throw Khushi out because HIS mother was hurt by her mother...when find out the truth he wanted Khushi back(i bet if he did not find truth and find out kids he would have taken kids from her and left her to die, he is selfish bas***d)

I understand that you do not want to show him crying and begging but in the process of that you forgetting that if he cry or beg he will not become something else or it is not going to hurt but it will show how much he is sorry for what he has done. At present it looks like he is not...and your story also portrays that...even men can cry and crying does not that they not men they too have feelings...and we all know that behind ruthless arrogant ASR there is soft, loving and caring Arnav...

When he throw Khushi out she was all alone. She suffered a lot in her pregnancy...something bad could have happened to her...she had to start everything from scratch.. She had no one to support whereas Arnav was living in a shantivan and had all luxuries and everyone to support him in his pain...

For me, after reading your story, all the raizada's are selfish (including Arnav), everyone thinks about Arnav and not Khushi...it was expected from Raizada's as groom's family always think about groom as he is their own blood and not bride as she is outsider. It looks like that they wants kid more than Khushi as they all are thinking about kids and Arnav but not Khushi...

I want him to know how much Khushi has suffered in her pregnancy and after that because of his stupid act. I also want all the Raizada's to repent to as they were indirectly supporting Arnav when he throw Khushi out...I want Arnav to accept Garima too...but I guess none of the above things going to happen as for that you have to show Arnav crying...
Edited by Geet13 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
hey,how are you all?i am sorry for late in updating this part...
Do you like the storyline that is going on,please be frank...
one of reader(Geet13) claimed that story is going not well,as i don't give justice to khushi...little bit partial for arnav...
If you think the storyline is bad,please share your thoughts,i will stop writing this SS...
Part 26
It was late night,khushi after getting refresh came to bad room,but arnav was not there...
khushi was uncomfortable to be with arnav but his absence was killing her...
"where is he devi maiyaa,please save him"
arnav was in guestroom,all lights were off,he covered himself under dark...
khuhsi sensed him as usual...she switched on the lights...
khushi:"arnavji...arnavji what happened?"
arnav's face was fully covered by his hand,khushi stepped forward and cupped his face...
arnav's eyes were red,as if arnav was crying...khuhsi could see the pain in his eyes...
"arnavji...aap"
arnav immediately hugged her around her waist...
"khushi,don't leave me alone,i will die khushi..."
khushi just stood still...arnav was breathing heavily,the child inside him was crying hard...
khushi caressing his hair,tried hard to calm down him,but arnav was behaving like child,as if his last support was snatched from him...
khushi sat beside him...
"arnavji,you don't need to say anything,please calm down"
arnav:"khushi,i never wanted to hurt you"
khushi:"sshhh,please don't say anything,i can not see you in such condition,please aap so jaiye"
arnav:"khushi,you will be here with me na?"
khushi nodded...:"you know,i always tried my best to hide myself away from you,i know only you can able to hurt me,and after knowing that i will get hurt again,i can't resist myself to feel for you"
arnav:"that's because you still love me khushi"
khushi:"may be...you are right...no..you are right,i still love you,but how can i forgive you arnavji?
love does not mean only feelings or physical relation...it's all about understanding,compromising..."
she paused...
arnav:"i know khushi,and i promise..."
khushi:"when we took our pheras,we promised each other that time infront of agni a lot,do you remember?"
arnav nodded...
Khushi:"but you have broken that promises,you did not trust me Arnavji...
how i tackle my children in that distress state,only devi mayiaa knows..."
"I know,you feel for me,you care for me,you always want to protect me,but it's not that you love me arnavji..."
arnav hugged her again with full of passion
:"but you can not leave me alone,khushi i know you had suffered a lot,but i also went through a tough mental state,of course,it's incomparable,but i can't bear your absence,i will kill myself khushi...this time,you don't even dare to leave me KHUSHI KUMARI GUPTA SINGH RAIJADA..."
khushi:"arnavji,please leave me"
arnav hugged her more tight and firmly said:"i will not let you go khushi"
khushi could not control herself for being stiff...she hugged her with equal passion and started crying...
arnav:"i will not hurt you anymore,promise khushi,trust,sacrifice-everything that you want from me,will be there in our new life"
arnav broke their hugging...he cupped her face passionately and started kissing...
khushi:"arnavji,i..."
arnav:"please don't stop me now..."
feeling the kisses after such a long time,khushi melted,her body responded against her mind...
Arnav took full advantage of it...(open your gutter mind)


next morning,khushi woke up early seeing arnav sleeping beside her with holding her hand...
khushi smiled with thought:"still he has the habit..."
she gently took her hand,placed a pillow there,
she took out for bath...after she came out from bath,she heard arnav's cell ringing...
she quickly received the call as it would disturb arnav's sleep...
she was about to say "hello",
but the other side person spoke first
:"hello Mr.Raijada,things go well na according to our plan? i just inform you that two months are already finished,is there any improvement in your relationships?"
khushi cut the call and stood there in shock...


Please give your positive and negative feedback,if you like my SS,don't forget to hit like button,any types of opinions are always welcome...



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Posted: 12 years ago
interstnggg
veryy interstngg
waitng 4 d nxt update
thnx 4 d pm'
n
cont asap:))
Edited by ar_sajan4evr - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
can u pls post the next update dear now
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Posted: 12 years ago
Wooww...Superb...but really scared what will happen now...plzz update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
i m really scared how will khushi react? dont make MU again...
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Posted: 12 years ago
fish!!!!!!!
she got to know about his plan...now she ll think its only to keep his children with him...he does not love her and all...
thanks for pm...plzz update soonish...and sorry if u dont find my comment...its that i have my exams lined up...i read when i get free time but i am able to sometime comment back...so plzz bear with this thing for sometime... :)

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