MN FF-*Kuch to hain Tujhse Raabta* Prt-14,Pg-83 - Page 4

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Posted: 13 years ago
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nice concept shafyyy thanks for pm me ...,,,,,,,,, :)))
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: DaMiniii

sounds interesting! thanks for the pm and please do pm me when you update!



sure dear...


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Originally posted by: Roses-khushi

nice concept shafyyy thanks for pm me ...,,,,,,,,, :)))









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Originally posted by: preethis

very nice concept dear...





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Thank you so much...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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intresting cs...nice...u didn't added samrats character?????????
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Originally posted by: ridzzi

intresting cs...nice...u didn't added samrats character?????????
thanx for the pm...luv u... :-)



yup..Even Gunjan also have very small role only in inital chapters my full focus is On

Mayank and nupur

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Thanks for Liking it...


Here is my first part...
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Kuch to hain Tujhse Raabta
Part-1-Intro...



Lying on my bed ,feeling lonely so thought so surf something on my laptop,,a story or some poem I hardly like Videos but stories are something which I really love to read in my free time as on searching I came across a word Fanfiction-India-Forums,as I click on this link ,I opened and saw that there are many , many people who have wrote Fanfictions about varoius couples and one was My favorite couple from my fav serial MJHT.

I just loved it.I read all the fanfictions related to my favourite couple and was so eager to reply about their beautifull fanfiction stories that immdiately made my account and sends request to many people.After a minute there came a PM to my inbox .It was a poem from someone ..someone named Hate_me.I really wonder Who is person who's username is Hate_me and even I didn't send any request to him of being friend.I open his message and read his poem.It was a dark poem,contains only miseries and pain.Reading this poem tears formed in my eyes,I wonder what the person must be feeling when he wrote this poem.I quickly went to his account and saw he didn't have much friends and also very less comments were there on his poem.I was like how could be possible because it is a platform where what ever you post about your feelings or imagination in the form of poem or stories you surely get either appreciation or citicism.But in his case everything was different.I was becoming more curious to know about him.Actually in his account I got to know that he is male.*Silly thought*.

Shrugging these thought out of my mind .I decided to post my story which I usually wrote when I am alone,so why not posting it on such an awsome board.May be I get feww comments to improve my writing skills,u see I am very fond of writing apart from teaching,but was very shy to upload like this on net,his Fanfiction-India 'Forums will surely help me out it.

After posting my comment ,i kept my laptop on hybernate as I was very eagerto read people comments and can't wait to open it again after being shut down.

Sleep was slowly slowy reaching to my eyes and I really don't know when I went to my dream land.

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A man was coming in white horse wearing white shirt and sort of dark blue jeans .He stops at a point ,get down from his horse and walk towards a girl who was waiting for someone may be for that man only.He picks up the guitar lying their and plays very beautifull tune..slowly that girl turned and her face is shown'she is none other than that Nupur.Her long hair were blowing and a content smile was playing on her lips;as if she was enjoying the tune which he was playing,That man was flashing million doller smile to her and played the tune of her favourite song.

You're the one 'Baby you are the one

You may be

Just a lil bit deewani

Thodi thodi si crazy

But baby you're the one

Tum jaisi (jaisi)
Hai na koi yun deewani (deewani)
Thodi thodi si crazy
But baby you're the one
(You're the one)

Nupur was swaying in his words and was turning around..Round and round, enjoying his each and every word as if they are meant only and only for her, suddenly her leg trip and she mentally prepared her self to join the ground but somewhere in her heart she knew he will catch her. He will protect her from falling down; He'll be there no matter what.


Next Part...



Part-2



Edited by shafyyy - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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wow starting with a dream sequence,amazing

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