Lamhe..:-Prem-Mukti romance Updtd Pg14 - Page 4

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Posted: 19 years ago
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Oh wow Shruti each part is better than the last one hun!The great updater is truly a great writer too! 😆 I never knew that 😛
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Posted: 19 years ago
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as usual anohter awesome update shruti im totally loving reading this and the occasional indro stunts as well 👏 👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
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plz continue soon its too good!!!!! 👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Shruti Di, awwwwwwwwwwwweeeeeesssssssssooooooommmmmmeeee, jaw dropping fanfic 😆 keeep up the good work!
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Posted: 19 years ago
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tHNKS FOR THE FAN-FIC IT ROCKS
And Plz update soon
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Read Part 3 on Pg 6

Recap:Prem-Mukti have an encounter.Nayan does Prem's dressing.Prem-Mukti remember d moments they spend 2gether.Abhi-Mukti have an conversation abt Mr.Bajaj.Anurag-Sam have a conversation on phone regarding Mr.Bajaj.

Part-4:

Mukti tells Abhi abt Anurag-Prerna conversation 2 which Abhi says once this thing is sort out they can focus on K Channel.Mukti says Samay-Sulab r handling d channel very well so they don't need 2 worry abt tht.Abhi getrs a call on his cel & he gets upset yet again.He disconnects d call.Mukti asks him who was it 2 which he says no1 2 which Mukti says tht is he hiding something 4m her 2 which he says no & tht now they have lot of work 2 do & leaves meanwhile Mukti is left thinking wat is disturbing Abhi so much & y isn't he sharing his heart out wid her.

An invitation is sent 2 every1 staying in d hotel abt a party being organized in d hotel but d name of d person who is holding d party is not mentioned 2 any1 as it is said 2 b a surprise.Prem-Nayan & Komolika r in room wen Komolika says who this person cud b 2 which Nayan says mayb its Prerna 2 which Komolika says Prerna does whatever she does it on 'Danke ka chot' she wud have come over here 2 invite them herself personally 2 which Nayan says if its not her who it cud b? wen Prem says they will find out in d evening whoever d person is.

Prerna is getting ready.Anurag comes in Prerna's room & asks her if she is ready 2 which she says tht yes se is 2 which Anurag asks where is Mukti 2 which she says she will met them at party wid along wid Abhi.Anurag-Prerna r walking wen they meet Komolika on their way who starts taunting them saying 2 Anurag if Sam wud have been here 2 along wid them then it wudf have been a perfect case of 'Pati,Patni or who..' looking at Prerna wen Anurag is abt 2 yel at her but Prerna stops him & says let it b & tht 'Jo khud jitna gira hua hota hai who puri duniya ko waisa hi samajta hai' & they both leave.

Anurag-Prerna reach d venue but there is dark out there.Anurag tells Prerna he will go & c wats d prob & leaves.Prerna comes in d hall in d middle wen flowers fall on her & lights r on.She looks up then down in front & c's Abhi-Mukti standing along wid other guests & applauding.Prerna says wat is all this 2 which Abhi sys tht now since she is d owner of this palce she really deserves all this a VIP treatment.Mukti adds Choti Maa this was all Abhi's plan & v also took Anurag uncle in this palsn wen Prerna says Anurag wen he comes there & says yes Prerna after all Abhi-Mukti r rite she deserves 2 have all this she has put in lots of efforts 4 K Channel 2.Abhi says now Choti Maa u also have 2 cut d cake.Prerna is cutting d cake where its written 'All d best' wen Prem-Nayan-Komolika enter where Komolika is angry as usual,Prem disturb looking Abhi-Mukti 2 gether & Nayan disturb looking at Prem's reaction or I wud say 'Wat a disturbing scene'😆

D music plays & every1 is called on dance floor along wid their respective partners while Anurag-Prerna r standing wid each other.Abhi comes there & says Mukti who is also standing over there lets go 2 which she says where 2 which Abhi says 2 eat food 2 which Mukti says wat 2 which Abhi says offcourse 2 dance 2 which mukti says she doesnot wish 2 but Prerna tells her 2 go & dancer wid Abhi 2 which Abhi says 'Choti Maa' thanks a lot so now can I & puts his hand 4ward & Mukti gives her hand 2 him.

Abhi-Mukti r dancing on d song 'Bekarar pyar hai aaja thoda intezar hai aaja' while Prem is looking at them.Nayan says 2 Prem lets go & dance 2 which Prem says he isn't interested 2 whiuch Nayan says not interested or… wen Prem looks at her & says tht how many times shd I say u this tht u r not my wife or my fianc so just stop interfering in my life again & again.

Prerna rem her & Bajaj dance & their romantic moments while song plays & smiles.

Abhi says 2 Mukti she dances well & where did she learn this wen Mukti rem her 1st dance wid Prem followed by their 2nd dance & Abhi says wat happ I asked u something.Mukti says tht he always was a good dancer since college days after all 4 'Patofying' girls along wid his charm his dance always use 2 help him 2 which he says yes but then there was 1 girl whom he was never able 2 'Patofy' 2 which Mukti asks who 2 which he looks at her meanwhile Mukti looks down.Prem who is watching all this sitting in bar corner asks d waiter 2 give him 1 more drink & drinks it.He empties around 5-6 glass.

Prem walks out,drunk but he not net let alcohol get in2 his head he knws wat he is doing.Prem is very frustated wen Nayan comes outside & says wat happ Prem 2 which he turns back & says nothing 2 which Nayan says oh I thought mayb.. wen Prem says wat u thought tht I m getting affectyed by cing Mukti & tht guy dancing & tht it makes no diff 2 him.Nayan says I never told anything such he is only saying all this & tells him lets go inside & enjoy d party wen Prem says u enjoy d party I need some rest I m very tired & leaves.

Prem is walking wen 'Kabhi Naa Sukoon Aaya' sad music version plays.

Abhi-Mukti reach d table where Anurag-Prerna r seated on & 4 of them have their dinner & rush 2 their respective room.Abhi 4gets his phone on d table while walking 2wards their room Mukti c's her braslet missing & rem th she had removed it & kept it on table since it was coming out again & again.She goes back over there takes her braslet & trns back 2 leave wen she hears a sound she turns back & c's Abhi cell ringing.Mukti picks up d phone 2 ans & is shocked.

Edited by Manoj_Tina fan - 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Hey thanks Shruti! Its great - I wonder who was on the other end of the phone...
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Posted: 19 years ago
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this ff is really amazing by shurtiiii 👏 👏 👏

i really enjoyd to reading itttt 👏 👏 👏

it totally roxxxxxxxx 👏 👏 👏

luv to reading it more nd more 👏 👏 👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
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oooohhh awesoem yaar i ownder whos at the other end of the call sounds mysterious
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Posted: 19 years ago
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lovely shruti!!! 👏 👏 👏
great fanfiction!!!!!
cant wait to see wats the big secret

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