Lamhe..:-Prem-Mukti romance Updtd Pg14 - Page 2

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Posted: 19 years ago
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itz awesome
plz cont soon
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Posted: 19 years ago
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thanks all i will post d 2nd part by 2day evening or by 2morrow 4 sure 😊
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👏 its AWESOMEEEEEEEE!Waiting impatiently for the next part 😃
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i hve no words shruti-its an awesome fanfic 👏
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ok shruti do it soon we be waiting 😉
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Read Part 1 on Pg No.1

Recap:Abhinav foundly called as Abhi played by Ejaz Khan 😳 Mukti's childhood frd buys d hotel.Prem-Mukti have an encounter at corridoor after which Prem gets a bit disturb.Abhi-Mukti go 4 dinner.

Part-2:

Abhi-Mukti r seated on d table where there is silence as if this silence wants 2 say something.D waiter comes there & asks their order wen Abhi says him 2 bring an orange juice wen Mukti says & a cup of black coffee wid lemon & in it.Abhi looks at Mukti.D waiter leaves Abhi says tht I thought u must have 4gottton my taste 2 d way u 4got .... he doesnot complete's d sentence.Mukti looks down & then humbles & says tht I thought v came here 4 dinner 2 which he says tht yes they have but d dinner place is not this,Mukti looks at him.

Just then Prem along wid Nayan comes over there & they sit in a table which is at a distance 4m Abhi-Mukti wen Nayan asks Prem how romantic d music is 2 which he says romantic this music is so slow & moreover he doesnot like it.Prem turns his head in a direction wen he c's Abhi-Mukti staring at each other Nayan says wat happ 2 which Prem says nothing.Nayan looks in d direction & says so r u feeling jealous of cing Mukti wid some1 else 2 which Prem says y wud he feel jealous? It makes no diff 2 him wid whomever Mukti is?

Mukti has her juice & Abhi has his cup of coffee & they turn back 2 leave wen she c's Prem.Prem-Mukti look at each other wid Prem having some ?'s in his eyes as 2 who is this guy? Wat r u doing wid him? But he doesnot approach Mukti.Abhi calls Mukti shall v go 2 which she looks at Abhi then back at Prem & then back at Abhi & says yes.

Prem gets up & is leaving wen Nayan asks him where is he going 2 which he says tht he has some imp work 2 which she asks imp work or he is feling insecure cing tht guy Abhi & Mukti 2gether? Prem turns back looks at her wid pain on his face as if she has touched d hurting part of his body & leaves in anger.

Abhi-Mukti r walking down d road wen Mukti says I had called up but Saahil Chachu told me tht u have gone abroad 4 ur MBA course.He had even asked me if there was something imp but she didn't say him anything & tht she didn't wanted his studies 2 suffer bcoz of her.Abhi says 'suffer' u knw wat Mukti d fact which hurted me a lot is tht I was not there by side of my frd wen she needed me moreover d frd who was always there wid me,wid whom I shared my every dream,who gave me support 2 go ahead & achieve my goals I wasn't by side of her wen she went through so many things in her life.He further adds Mukti u knw wats tht thing tht binds us 2gether or I shd say its common b/w me & u its d fact tht both of us lost ur mother wen v were small & I wud tel u something I use 2 feel jealous of u at times 2 which Mukti looks at him wid an ? on her face 2 which Abhi says wen I was doing my MBA course in London I use 2 think tht u r luckier than me as u r getting love of Choti Maa staying over here wid her & u r part in all d celebrationas in all ups & downs wid her.Abhi says Mukti u knw me more than any1 else do & mayb thts y I felt bad thinking how cud u didn't even try 2 contact me once in these 5 yrs?

Mukti is having tears rolling down her eyes.Mukti says wat shd I have done called u up & said tht d person whom I loved broke my trust.Mukti further adds Abhi I loved Prem a lot but 4 him I was just like many of girls who came in his life & went.I had started hating myself 4 loving him & somewhere even 2day I hate myself.U knw Abhi wen a girl's heart is broken by a person whom she loves dearly her whole world comes down shattering & thts wat has happ wid me 2.

Abhi comes 2wards her & says tht she isn't alone this time & tht he won't let her go through more.Mukti wipes her tears off & says weren't they going 2 have dinner.Mukti walks a distance wen Abhi says u still love him don't u?Mukti turns back & has no ans 2 Abhi this ? so she says if v stand here entire nite then they will have 2 sleep empty stomach so shall v go & have some food now.Abhi smiles & says well till he is there nothing as such is gonna happ.Abhi-Mukti reach a dhabba.Mukti looks at Abhi who says I thought this wud b d best place 2 have food rem wen they all college group had come over here 4 pinic & .... is abt 2 complete wen Mukti says tht how cud she 4get it after all bcoz of him they had missed their bus & .... Abhi says yes yes I rem y r u digging d past so much lets 4get it wen Mukti says 4geting past is not so easy & is lost in some thoughts wen Abhi snaps his fingers in front of her eyes & says now lets go its already 2 late & v have 2 reach hotel 2 since Choti Maa wud b worried abt their whereabouts.

Prem is in is room & looks at mirror in anger & c's Abhi-Mukti looking at each other wat he saw in morning.He is not able 2 get tht thing out of his mind.Prem takes d flower-vas kept beside him & throws it on d mirror.D mirror breaks in 2 pieces & Prem c's Mukti's face in it wen he sits down & is picking it up d broken piece wen his hands get a cut & it starts bleeding.Prem says it makes no diff 2 me wid whomever Mukti goes or she is wid.Wen he hears voice coming 4 outside.He opens d door & c's Abhi-Mukti 2gther.

Abhi says tht Mukti u must admit he is just d best 2 which Mukti says Abhi… n Abhi says ok yaar I was just chking if ur mood has changed or not.Mukti reaches outside her room & says Abhi thanks 2 which he says 4 wat 2 which she says whatever happ 2day she is feeling a bit better 2 which Abhi says tht he did all this as there is a big motive behind it afterall he is a businessman he wud always sign a deal which turns him profit 2 which Mukti says wat profit? 2 which he says tht he wanted his old frd Mukti back so tht he cud fight wid her once again.Mukti looks at him & smiles & so does Abhi.

D door opens Prerna says Mukti wat took u so long wen she looks at Abhi & says sorry I didn't c u 2 which he says Choti Maa now u will c me again & again 2 which Prerna says tht I wud really love 2 c him again & again.Mukti goes in & Prerna tells Abhi tht after many days she saw smile on Mukti's face 2 which Abhi says tht he is gonna return back every1's smile.Abhi leaves whereas Prerna says 2 herself tht mayb u can bring every1's smile back but my smile tht I have 2 find myself.

D song 'Kya Payr Karoge Mujhse' plays wherein Prerna remembers all d moments which she had spend wid Bajaj.Prerna comes back 2 senses wen Mukti calls her.

Prerna closes d door & goes inside meanwhile even Prem closes d door & he remembers flashback of watever happ just now abt Abhi-Mukti & gets more disturb thinking abt tht.

Edited by Manoj_Tina fan - 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago
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wowwwwwww!!!!!!!!!shruti dats awesome but who'll bandage bhaiya's hand 😕 😭
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Excellent stuff Shruti - I'm liking this Abhi guy and I think that's just what we need in the show to make Prem jealous...Ekta you listening??

Keep 'em coming sweetie!
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Excellent stuff Shruti - I'm liking this Abhi guy and I think that's just what we need in the show to make Prem jealous...Ekta you listening??

Keep 'em coming sweetie!
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Posted: 19 years ago
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aweoms stuff yaar totally loving this go abhi and mukti for now at least

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