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Posted: 12 years ago
That was so good i think i read four chapter at a shot!!!

Loved them so so much!!!

And regarding pm if u are ol from mobile then u can pm only one person at a time and if u are ol from comp then 20 is max!!

And if u are telling about ppl not inur buddy list then also only one!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
thanks,by the way where are comments of my other members?😕

remember if you don't comment,i will stop this ff in middle.
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Posted: 12 years ago
Wow! nice updt :)
nd ya , lucy nvr evn think of stopping this ff! 😡
nd wht bout ur othr ff's? whn r u updating thm?
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: chand1234

Wow! nice updt :)
nd ya , lucy nvr evn think of stopping this ff! 😡

nd wht bout ur othr ff's? whn r u updating thm?


okay,i stopped that friendship and love one because i lost interest,i love writing when i find the story interesting,if story doesn't appeal to me,i abandon it,i stopped vampire knight because in true story my ...😭 my...kaname...😭 please don't remind me.
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Posted: 12 years ago
neeranjana at the opening of the companyneeranjana after her awakening seeing hrithvik for the first time.
neeramjana seeing yuuvi and amrit at her haldi


if sunil confronted anu instead of neera,then...

sunil-how could you do this to me?
anu-sry
Edited by lucykaede - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
chapter-4-the seed of evil(note-contains violence)
karthik was with nandini.they were playing in their playing room and it was a very big playroom,it had basketball,table tennis court and lots of other playing items.
there was a password to enter in these type of rooms.(i introduced this room as it is gonna play a role in some chapters)
in deep night...
neera wakes up..
neera-ah...she saw hrithvik sleeping next to her,shirtless and ah...ahm ahm...😳
neera-huh..😲 what? oh.my..god,what have i done in my sleep.i don't deserve to be with me at all.😭
neera kissed hrithvik's lips and wore her clothes.it was still raining...
neera dressed up,she wore a very cool london jacked(black coloured)and cute jeans.
she was about to go outside when nupur ,amrit and rathod came.
rathod-neeranjana..
neera turned..
neera-what?😡
amrit very scared,she bowed-glad to have you back.
neera came to amrit,they were all scared.neera gently touched amrit's face.
neera-you must be hating me.
amrit-surprisingly no,because to me this time my best friend neera is here.
nupur-where are you going?
neera-you know where i am going.
rathod-just tell me how you came back and in this form.i mean woah...😲 how is that possible?
neera-looks like you are not happy.
rathod-i am and its weird because in your both times we kissed.he he..😆
nupur-pathetic.😡
neera-🥱
nupur-please don't go.let it stay like this,you got a new life,enjoy it.you have everything you wanted.now what?
neera-it was something my original form wanted,not neeranjana.
nupur-yeah i forgot that you have thousands of names.sometimes i feel that you are a god.
neera-of hell...
amrit-this whole conversation is worthless,she is gonna do what she wants.
neera-look my granddaughter,oops my step sister is so intelligent.
amrit-ah ...yeah.. wait step sister???
nupur-isse yaad aya wo sunil,he took my permission to stay here.he has called your parents,they will reach here tomorrow evening.
amrit-wait step sister...hain...ah😕
neera-shekhar aur jhanvi yahan aa rahe hain??
nupur-virat aur maanvi bhe..
amrit-shekhar?? dad,dad yahan aa rahe hain(and boom😛...to my readers😆,how was the shock?😉 i bet you all are doing this now.😲)
neera-jaisa baap waisa beta,man to kar raha hain ke iske tukde tukde kar dun.
rathod-neera...😡
nupur-shekhar ko to kuch yaad nahe hain par...
neera-you want me to bring back his memories?
nupur-as you wish.😭
neera-yes,its my wish.i had to use my son to bring myself back.i needed this mind penetration power which my son had and i could gain it only by inheriting it.
rathod-so thats why you killed yourself,so that you could regenerate from your son with more powers,you are pathetic and insane,just for some powers,you destroyed nupur,amrit and your son's lives.
nupur-rathod...don't..😡
rathod was very angry,he left from there very coldly.
amrit was too sad,she ran to her room.
nupur touched her shoulders-i am sry for them.
neera-huh,sry...😭 miss nupur...(in a tone of calling a teacher)
nupur shocked...😲
neera-don't you ever think that i forgot your original colours.
nupur-i myself can never forget those horrible experiences.😭
suddenly karthik came with nandini.
karthik was sleepy eyes-mommy,what are you doing here?come lets go to our room.read me a song so that i can sleep.
neera-ss...sure...😭 and she hugged karthik.nupur took nandini.
neera took nandini from nupur.
neera-come lets go.she thinks-nupur is right,i have everything that i ever wanted,i will never let this happiness go now.i know i am being selfish but i was never a saint.
after reading karthik a story she went to her room,she saw hrithvik was awake)it was 3;00 at the morning and he had to get ready for training)
hrithvik-where you went?
neera-ah...to karthik's room,he wanted me there.
hrithvik-oh okay...i am going to shower,take out my clothes from almirah.
neera-okay...
as hrithvik was going to shower,his hands got touched to neera's hands and he felt her body really warm.
hrithvik-kya tumhe fever hain?
neera-huh?
hrithvik touched her face.
hrithvik-are tumhe to high fever hain,come sleep here.
neera-no i am..
hrithvik carried her and put her on the bed.he kissed her forehead and said-i just come in a minute.
as he went in the shower,neera became highly sad,she reminds..

flashback...

a little girl was sleeping on a bed in an orphanage.she was barely 7 years old.she had a very high fever.
a lady entered the room.
lady-aye,kalmuhe uth jaa.she slapped the little girl.
little girl-ah...😭
girl-madam muzhe aaj bukhar hain,kya mein...she again slapped her.
she fell on the floor.
lady-kyun,tu kya koi maharaani hain kahe ke...jaa aur bacche uth ke apna apna kaam kar rahe hain,jaa bahar jaakar zhadu laga.
and she grabbed her hair and dragged her to outside,surprisingly that orphanage was in a deep dark forest.
girl started crying-why?why i have to endure this sadness?why?why my mother abandoned me here.
she took the zhadu and started cleaning the garden.suddenly she saw a beautiful puppy there.
puppy-bow wow...it was the most beautiful puppy of the world.
girl came to the puppy,it looked domestic one.
girl-are you alone?
puppy started licking her fingers
girl-did you parents abandoned you as well,just like me?while saying this she was crying.😭
girl-from now on,we will be each other allies,we will stay together,okay.
she hugged the puppy.the puppy ran into the forest.
in afternoon.
the girl was sitting alone,having really sad face.
suddenly two boys came to her and started beating her.
one boy-hey,why don't you ever talk,huh?
another boy-you are pathetic,you are not human,you are stupid.
and then she was in fever.
girl-ah...
suddenly another girl came.
girl-hey don't bully her.
one boy-oh what are you gonna do?
girl-i will complain that you were not doing your work.now go away.
those boys scared of complain ran away.
the girl gave her hand to her.
girl took her hand-thank you.
another girl-hey you have fever.
girl-yeah i know.
girl-so...thank you..
another girl-oh don't bother.but why didn't you answered them with some punches.
girl-because i know that their own sadness made them bully others,they find their happiness in other peoples pain.
another girl-hmm..wanna be friends?
girl-ah..sure...
another girl-you can rely on me,we will always be friends.she hugged the girl. fever girl was happy that she finally had a friend.
many days passed they became great friends...but they all have to endure the cruelity of the orphanage's manager.
one day fever girl took another girl to the forest.okay FEVER GIRL NAME IS-SUHANI.
another girl-wow what a beautiful dog.
suhani-i know,nice na.
another girl-yes.
suhani-but don't tell anyone about him.otherwise they may harm him just to make me cry.
girl-we are friends don't worry.
suhani-😊
next day suhani was sitting on a chair cleaning the table and was all sad when suddenly two boys came with that dog.
suhani-no,don't harm him.
boy-ha ha ha ha...i am finally seeing you this sad,you unhuman creature,you never laugh,never cry,now i will make you cry.the puppy was all scared.
suhani kicked that boy.
boy-ah...oh yeah now look.😡
two other boys grabbed her from the back.
suhani-no...
boy took a vase and started beating the dog,he beat him until he died.
suhani thinking-no..no why me?why this happening to me?why????????
suddenly her friend girl came,she got shocked.
girl-what are you doing?
boy-what are you talking about?you told us about this stupid dog,look he died.he he he..
girl-i know but you said you will only scare her but going this far...
suhani was shocked at this betrayl...
suhani lowered her head...she became highly angry..
suhani shouted-you know who isn't human,you know who isn't human,then she shouted very loud...PEOPELE LIKE YOU AND then she ripped off every person in the room with her telekinetic powers.they got ripped in a second.
neeranjana wakes up-huh...huh..she was scared...huh...
she thinks-my memories,they will never leave me alone.😭


okay i copied the flashback from this scene.this is the most epic scene in anime history and i wanted to use it in my story.
do watch it if you have guts,its gory and can disturb you so see it at your own risk.


don't hesitate to ask me any questions,i know this chapter is very very confusing.

Edited by lucykaede - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Ooohhh...
Super exciting!!!
Waiting 4 d nxt updates
Suhani z Neranjana? [old]

Super excited 4 d nest part:)
update soon :)
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: coolfizzy

Ooohhh...

Super exciting!!!
Waiting 4 d nxt updates
Suhani z Neranjana? [old]

Super excited 4 d nest part:)
update soon :)



to your question,i have only one answer-YES...
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Posted: 12 years ago
wow nice chapter Moni after my silence for last few chapters i liked this chapter alot👍🏼one thing i would like to share with u honey sometimes i feel like lost in stream of new characters 😕i know u want to cover wide story but if cut short some characters means it'll b more easy to close wid all characters n their relationship wid each other(without checking the CS evrytime 😆)hope u dont mind this opinion of mine 😉Amrit called Shekhar as dad but she's a step sis of Neera???
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Originally posted by: hemaDaganKhian

wow nice chapter Moni after my silence for last few chapters i liked this chapter alot👍🏼one thing i would like to share with u honey sometimes i feel like lost in stream of new characters 😕i know u want to cover wide story but if cut short some characters means it'll b more easy to close wid all characters n their relationship wid each other(without checking the CS evrytime 😆)hope u dont mind this opinion of mine 😉Amrit called Shekhar as dad but she's a step sis of Neera???


i know about your problem and thus i warn everybody to be very careful while reading updates.i know you wanna see other characters,but klitty,yuuvi,mohit and rathod are secondary characters,almost in stream with shekhar,jhanvi.these characters are like vishnu and saraswati of mahadeva,they will be brought up when necessary,the story of neeranjana has too much to tell that i barely get any ideas to develop these characters.honey please comment even if you don't like the update,if you don't tell me how will i improve it?

yes she is step sis of neera,means shekhar is dad of amrit and obviously of anu but anu is mother of shekhar.

i know this one is a very confusing thing but it will be cleared in last update of first generation.till then only you can speculate.

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