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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: mayuloveu

when will u update fiza? plz continue soon




sweeto it has been just a day..n weekends are tough for me.. so will try on sunday night or monday
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Posted: 13 years ago
Haan fiza ji Aisa julm kun hum par????kab milega update??
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Posted: 13 years ago
reham kero yaar kal hi tu update kiya hai... mil jay ga sunday ya monday tak.
Bachy aay hoay hain ghar per... aj tu so gay hain kal they will never let be here.. pora plan set hai un k...
so not posible
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Originally posted by: drfizaahmed

reham kero yaar kal hi tu update kiya hai... mil jay ga sunday ya monday tak.
Bachy aay hoay hain ghar per... aj tu so gay hain kal they will never let be here.. pora plan set hai un k...
so not posible



Kiske bache ?????
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Posted: 13 years ago
eagerly want to know what gonna happen to tai
kyunke bure ka injam bura hi hota hai
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PARDON ERRROS... havent rplyd to u all thanku so mcuh u all

Chapter: 30

Past:

Mayank: nupur…. Sirf ek rasta hai ab… per is mein kafi sari muskil asakti hai… aur woh kahin na kahin tumhain akelay dekhni hogi….

Nupur: kasa rasta tum bolo tu hum kuch bhi keray gay… is masla k haal nikla nhi hoga….

Mayank: hum tai jaan ki talluq wali baat man lyty hain…

She closed her eyes to let her tears escape from her eyes…

Mayank: per wasy nhi jasa woh soch rahi hain

Nupur: tum kya kah rahy hoo

Mayank: suno buhat aram se.. mein kal subha tai jaan se ja ker khud kaho ga k mein tum ko talluq day raha hoon.. maagr unko us se pehly mjhy papers dekhy hongy shares k…

Woh obvious hai mjhy se bhi papers mangy gi… tu woh mein unko dekha doon ga.. jis per meri sign nhi hogi na tumhari… thik hai…

Is baat k vaada kero ga k mein tum ko sham tak divorce day don ga… sham mein .. tum tai jaan k pass j ker yeah fake divorce papers show kero gi aur kaho gi k mein ny tum ko chor diya… per itni aqalmandi se k … un k hath mein na jay yeah papers.. aur kaho gi k shares k papers dain… warna tum abhi bhi iddat mein ho.. we can start living together again… agar unhony shares nhi diya mjhy tu

Nupur: han magar asa kasay hoga

Mayank: nupur is tarha .. humain shares bhi mily gay aur humari divorce bhi nhi hogi… tai jaan ki deemgh mein khain yeah baat nhi hogi k tum itna bara jhoot ya khel khel sakti ho…. Us ko jitna asli dekha sakti ho dekha na please…

Mein raat ki flight se Lahore chala gaya hoon yeah kahana hai… samny honga hi tu mjhy se woh zaban se tallaq mang nhi saky gi….

Jasay hi shares k papers mily gay … humary pass 3 month hongy.. tumhari so called iddat pori hony mein aur meray pass un shares se financial case clear kerny mein… aur mein phir US ja ker direct baat kero ga…

Nupur: aur mein yaah akeli

Mayank: han … tum yaha akeli hogi… nupur itni himat tum ko kerni hogi…. Mein har waqt tum se rabaty mein honga…. Yeah new sim rekho.. tum is se contact kero gi… taky kisi ko shaq na ho.. ek aur baat.. room se baat nhi kerna… tai jaan nazar rekhy gi… hosakta hai tum per dosri shadi k zoor bhi day…

She clutch his hand

Per asa kuch nhi hosakta… janti ho yeah baat haina.. mjhy 2 months tu lagy gay in sab ko handle kerny mein…. He cupped her face…. Nupur yeah plan buhat arms se kam keray ga.. magr sirf tab jab tum strongly aur chalaki se tai jaan ko handle kero gi.. zara sa khabrana… aur daar jana nhi… khass ker k jab… jab tum per kisis kism k dabao ho.. ya phir tab… jab sab ko is baat k pata chaly ga

Nupur: mayank per is se choti ami aur chaty papa ko kya mehsoos hoga…woh tum ko khabi maaf nhi keray gay… tum tu aur muskil mein ajao gay

Mayank: ami ko ksi n kisis tarha mein sach bata doon k…. baba aur baqi sab ko tab pata chal hi jay ga jab inshaAllah hum dobara sath hongy…. Mein tumhain itni bari muskil mein nhi dalta… per is k elwa aur ki haal nhi hai meray pass.. kcuh bhi nhi….

Nupur: yeah itna muskil nhi hai mein yeah kerlo gi… ami ko bhi tu pata chaly un ki chal ulti bhi parsakti hai… mein sab kerlo gi.. tum behrosa rekho…

Mayank: mjhy chahy koi maray ..kuch bhi kahay… tum khud per kaboo rekho gi

Nupur: maray ga kyunn

Mayank: kyun tumhara bhai shayd tumahray baba… mjh apni beti ki ziandgi se khelny per kuch nhi kahy gay…

Nupur: mayank tu

Mayank: abhi se nupur.. bus yeah nhi kerna hai himat nhi harni hai….. muskil safar hai… asa nhi chaly ga…. Kal se humain shayd 3 mehinay take k sath na rahy pay.. hosakta hai baat bhi kam ho…. Per is k yeah matlab tu nhi na k hum sath nhi hain… hmm..

She hugged him tight and he tried to calm her.. he is much more afraid of her than anyone else… if this plan failed or tai jaan got to know anything about this she is the one person who will be in the greatest trouble…

Nupur: sab thik hojay ga nah….

Mayank: umeed tu hai…

Nupur: mjhy daar lag raha hai…..

He crashed her more in his arms

Maayank: mjhy bhi…..

Present:

Dr.Nadir" good morning beta..

Nupur: good morning uncle… mein ghar jao…

Dr. Nadir: he chukled as it was almost everyday she asked tht… han aj tu tum chali h jao…

Nupur: sachi uncle..thanku…

Dr. Nadir: maagr abhi tum apana kayal rekho gi..oky….Allah hafiz…

Mayank: yeah kya horaha hai.. tum ko zara bhi sukoon nhi hai nah….. ab yeah kya ker rahi hoo

Nupur: packing…. Mjhy discharge mil gaya hai…. She said grinning widely…. Ab mein ghar jao gi….

He came forward and removed things from her hand… dragging her to bed he made her sit there, holding her hands softly… she was looking at him in surprise..

Mayank: tumhain sach mein ghar jana hai…..

The question brought back all that she almost forget

Nupur: mein tu bhool hi gai…. Hum jay gay kaha….

Mayank: tum batao… hum apny Clifton waly flat jasakty hain….. ya Ahmed house…. Jaha tum kaho gi…..

Nupur: mjhy ahmed house jana hai

Mayank: nupur…. Maagr kyun

Nupur: mayank jab tak hum yaha hain…. Mjhy waha jana hai… akhir bar sab ny buhat kuch kaha tha tum ko ..humary rishty ko.. bina kuch sochy samhjy…. Ab k… mein un sab ko ami ki sari asliyat bata ker hi raho gi….. pata tu chlay akhir woh chees kiya hai

Mayank: nupur tum abhi yeah sab

Nupur: mayank mein thik hoon….. aur jitna jaldi hoskay mein yeah sab kahtam ker k…. yaha se jana chahti hoon….. per yaha in ko arams se nhi rehny do gi… khbai nhi…. Tu hum ahmed house hi jay ga

He smiled widely…. His nupurs has stood so strong in all this

Mayank: thik hai… jo tum chaho..

Nupur: acha really…. Mjhy Oreo wali mcflurry kahini hai….

He shocked his head n laughed and than smirk

Mayank: abhi tu I can offer u sumthing more sweet….

Nupur: nhi.. hato.. mayank door hato…

He drageed her grip her from back…pulling her close when she was doing evry effort to make herself free….

Nupur: MAYank tickling nhi….

Mayank: bhagi kyun….. he kissed crok of her neck… making her tickle more…

Just than the sound of door knob twist, made them move apart…

Mayank: ohoo… aay aayy… meray khandan k hiden camera… aao aao bhabi…

Gunjan: ab k mein ny kya kiya….

The unbelievable pout of her…. And her question her timing .. mayank looked at nupur and they both burst in to laughter..

Gunjan: kya hai tum dono asay kyun hass raho…bolo nah..

And that made them laugh more…

Mayank: tum kamal ho…Allah k krishma… he was laughing

Gunjan: mayank tumahra qatal hojay ga kisi din…

Nupur: acha bus kero tum dono.. bhabi mera room saaf kero.. hum sham ko ghar arahy hain

She grin widely

Gunjan: really… aray wah yeah tu kamal ki kabar hai..tumahry bhai ki dayti hoon… woh buhat khuhs hoga

Nupur: mjhy dekhny tu ata nhi hai.. khush kaha hoga..

Gunjan: asai baat nhi hai nupur.. bus us ki himat nhi hoti tum dono k samna kerny gi… tum ghar chalo gi tu sab thik hojay ga… thanks mayank… tum is baat k liyn razi hogay…

Nupur: raazi kasay nhi hota.. biwi k huq hai

Gunjan: aha.. mayank is per jagny k baad kuch zayda dawao ka asar hai haina

Mayank: exactly she is hallucinating her empowerment on me…

Gunjan: aby hat … woh tu sab ko pata hai she has… joro k ghulm..

Mayank: dekho hiden camera.. woh mein proudly hoon… apko koi masala ha…

Gunjan: yeah tu mjhy hidden camera kyun bol rahy hoo…

And agin there laughter session started… samrat who always cum to see her and always didn't find strength to face Mayank was standing outside n looking form there.. smiling at them atlast things are getting the wa they were…

Past:

It was the most difficult step, moving towards that greedy ladies room was the most difficult step for him… it was kinda acceptance of defeat and he is now ready to face all the humialtion and may be her insulating words and deed… but than this is how it is…. He knocked the door

Tai jaan: oh… ap humary kamry mein… itni khush naseeb kab se hogay hum…..

The pain, the losser aahh everything was so advent on his face so much… the way her words pricked him was the most delitefull sight she would evr have asked for…he gulp down the lump and tried to speak

Mayank: mein apki sharat many ko razi hoo

Tai jaan: kya kaha tum ny … mein ny suna nhi

Mayank: he closed his eyes trying to make his anger clam down….. mein apki sharat many ko taiyar hoon

Tai jaan: tum exactly bol kiya rahy ho… zara tafseel se bolo..

Mayank: mein nupur ko talluq day do ga.. ap shares k papers banway…..

Tai jaan: KYA… really… tum ny har manli…. Tum sach kah rahy hoo… kamal hai… she was mocking at him as much as she can… it was lifetime moment for her to have like this….

Mayank: is sab se apko koi matlab nhi

Tai jaan: oh tu rasi jal gai bal nhi gaya abhi tak…. Zaroorat kis k hai….. bolo… zaroorat kis ki hai

Mayank: meri…

Tai jaan: tu zaara mangny mein ajizi( plead) low…. Bheek mangny aay ho tu bihkari tu lagao…. Chalo shabash… zara tareeqay se mango…. Sir choka ker hath maat choro…magar thora tu tareeka lao… shoro hojao…

She sat on her chair and looked at him as if waiting for him plead…. Mayank has never flet so disgust so low so humiliated and helpless all his life ..they way right now he is felling…. He was feeling he is turning dead more n more in fornt of her….

Mayank: ap …… ap..

Tai jaan: han han shabash agay

Mayank: ap… meray shares mjhy day dain ……….please….

Tai jaan: thik hai.. chalo jao maaf kiya itny per hi…. Maagr talluq nama kaha hai

Mayank: pehly ap mjhy shares k papers show keray phir…. Nupur ko woh bhi day do ga… papers ready hain…..

Tai jaan: chalo tumahin zayda tang nhi kertay…. Thik hai dophar tak tum ko shares k papers mil dekh jay gay… aur jab nupur k hath mein talluq nama hoga … tu tumahry hath mein shares…

Mayank: ji…

He was about to leave

Tai jaan: aray zara bhi courtesy nhi tum mein… shukria tu aada kertay jao….

He just wish he can kill that woman right there…just right there….

Mayank: jab kam hojay ga tu kero ga…

With that he moved away as fast as possible…. His head will blew with anger if he stay a moment there… tai jaan chuckled and bring out the papers that were already ready… she signed them… and kept them aside.. knowing pretyy well …nupur will b cuming with divorce papers pretty soon…. Wao…. Finally everything at its place

………..

Nupur: kya hua

Mayank: baat hogai hai.. she agreed… ab sab kuch tum per hai…. Yeah papers hai…. Dhay han rahy.. tai jaan k hath na lagay…. Mein cheesay dekh lo.. I have to pack things or yaha se hata nhi hogi…..

Nupur rushed to him and hugged him tightly.. he hugged her back closing his eyes…. He certainly is in no mood to tell wht her mother is in to that will make her moral down…nupur on the other hand cant believe what her mother has made him do….. she was right at the door when she was humiliating her husband…

Mayank: tumhary pass ho hamesha

Nupur:: janti hoo….. tumhary sath ho hamesha…. Mein yaha sab dekh lo gi… fikar nhi kerna…. She broke away and cuped his face.. apna kayal rekhna…

He noded in yes….

Tum jao gay kaha…

Mayank: flat per.. aur do din mein America….tickets agay hain.. nupur yaha jo kuch ho…. Jo bhi kuch mjhy batao gi… waha ja ker mein ami se baat kerlo ga tu woh yaha tumhary pass ajay gay….

Nupur: kis ko apny pas bhi tu rekho… tumhara kayal kaun rekhy ga…

He smiled and kissed her soflty…

Mayank: tum hona… kafi hai……abhi jab tak mein yaha hoon meray pass rehoo…

It was late afternoon and it was nupur's turn to go and act.. she was already feeling her self so low and down.. mayank left the house purpose fully…as he has to settle things outside too

Nupur looked at the divorce papers and she find nothing fake in them… she was scared…. They were so real .. so much that she cant just make her heart out of the fear .. what if things didn't settle in 3 months… will they have to be apart…

She looked at them and cant stop her tears to fall hysterically… she was feeling completely broken and more she cant believe her own mother…. Her own mother is enjoying all this…. What exactly she is to her…. If mayank isn't there in her life she knows very well she donot have any life…. Any life at all… its all darkness … all around…

She moved out and enter her mothers room….. she was lost, tired, numb… and torn.. and all this made tai jaan belived mayank has indeed given her divorce.. she just cant belive he really did that… amzing … wao

Nupur: sab kahtam hoga…. Ab tu khush hogi nah ap…. Chor diya us ny mjhy….. mein bulkily aklei hogai…. Chala gaya woh meri ziandagi se…

Nupur was sumhwere afraid of the fact that he is going away… he has left her… she knew it was stupid … yet her depression attacks sumhwere were talking there role in charge… making her believe that what is appearing is half truth…. There will be no road towards each other from here after

Nupur : yeah lay..divorce papers…. Apki beti ko talluq hogai… aur ap duniya ki woh wahid maa hongi jo is baat k jashan many gi…. MANay

Tai jaan just looked at the papers and was about to snatch them… when nupur hugged them tight but she read mayank' signature on it… and she was satisfied with the way nupur was… crying endlessly… fanatically..unknow to the fact that she was more hurt of her mother than any thing

Nupur: per mein apk samny kyun rooh rahi hoo… she wiped her tears that was no use… ap tu chahti hi yeah thi nah.. so wohi hoo… jeet gai ap

Tai jaan: yeah pagal pany k drama zayda kerny ki zaroorat nhi hai… us ny tum ko apni zarorat k liya chora hai….

Nupur: janti ho mayank ny mjhy zaroorat k liyan chora hai….

The voice of tai jaan n nupur made Samrat stoped in his tracks…. He was out station and just arrived..though was suppose to arrived 2morow… what he saw made him so worried… nupur trying to get up from floor crying endlessly and tai jaan shouting … yet what made him shocked was the statement " mayank ny zaroorat k liya hi chora hai":

Nupur: tu lay us ki zaroorat pori kero ab mein… mjhy shares k papers chaiy

Tai jaan: taluq ko register tu hony do

Nupur: kya hogaya hai apko… talluq register hona ho… us ny mjhy day di hai… tu woh tu hogi nah…. Sab kahtam hogaya nah…. MJHY shares k papers day abi k abhi… warna mein khud ko kahtam kerlo gi…. Agar meri qurabni us ko ksis kam na aai

Smarat felt his whole world collapse right ther….it cant be true no way it cant be true .. mayank cant give divorce to her no way… he rushed to gunjan to ask whts going on and more over to ask mayank….

Nupur felt her self having no more energy …she was feeling evry dizzy…. Was feeling she will faint any moment.. tai jaan panic a little bit … its inst good if anything happen to nupur.. things will turn nasty and than mayank will not keep quite… she moved forward and gave the file to nupur… nupur collected her self and leave to her room….clsoing the door she didn't knew mayank has already return.. so quietly that evry one in the house knew he has left with a bag….

Samrat who was hunting for him in the house asked the servant and he told him exactly the same.. he dorve his car off to office and his flat to search for him ..he isn't gona spare him at all….

Mayank when saw nupur entering such he rushed to her as she fainted in his arms… he was dead now… this cant happen…

Picking her up he made her lye on bed…he was hell worried now… tht was exactly he was panicking for… sprinkle water .. she opened her eyes and hugged him and he too try to clam her down..

Mayank: nupur tum se nhi horaha hai tu . maat stress lo.. hum kuch aur sochy gay

Nupur: nhi mayank mein thik hoo… bus mein daar gai thi k ami mjhy per yaqeen nhi keray gi tu… jab sab hogaya tu… islyn bus… mein sab kerlo gi… yeah file ….

Mayank: janta hon …u did it… tum janti ho yeah sab se muskil step the …. Ab tu sab asan hai… hum sath hain.. aur humary pass ass bhi hai ap… magar agar tum thik nhi hoo tu

Nupur: mein thik hoo mayank…. Bus thora daar gai thi aur kuch nhi…mjhy laga ta ami pakar lay gi mjhy… per ab hogaya nah… tu ap yaha se agay tu hum sab janty hain nah,… ab nhi hoga…. Tum jao… yaha rukhna thik nhi hai…

Mayank: apna kayal rekhna.. mein jana nhi chahta per

Nupur: janti ho zaroori hai.. jao…

Mayank: nupur yaha se agay …. Kuch galat nhi hoga… bus duwa kerti rehna….aur hamesha yaad rekhna… mein pass hi hon tumhary hamesha…

Hugging her on last time.. he got up… and went near the door, turning to look at her once and moved out… it was difficult leaving her like this in all the trouble was hell difficult.. placing the papers in his jacket .. he was at door…. When Samrat came like a blaze from outside and punch him hard making him crash on ground and breaking somthings to….

Edited by drfizaahmed - 13 years ago
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YA ALLAH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!😲😲😲
Samrat ne Mayank ko mara!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! 😲🄺😲
ufff!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! i sooo wanna kill that bloody woman...Ghatiya, Jalil, Wahiyat aurat!!!! ufff!!!!!!!!!! agar yeh fiction character na hoti toh main sach mein iska katal kar deti...arhhh
i sooo wanna kill her!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
API...ap jara yeh toh bataye ke kya soch kar asi wahiyat aurat ka character apne zehen mein ayašŸ¤“????????? ufff!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! maine asi Saas dekhi hain bt MA kabhi nhi dekha!!! can't blv any Mother can be like this...can stoop sooo low!!!! 😔
Sigh!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Awesome update...😳
Beautifully writtenšŸ‘šŸ‘šŸ‘
loved it lodsss 😳
it was sooo Beautifulll..
Mayank is a genius! bt still felt sooo Bad for BOTH of Them...Sigh!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
bechare kese ghatiya aurat se inka wasta hain...hayeee ALLAH!!!!
i wish Mayank uss aurat ko ek thappar toh marey chalo badi hain toh woh na sahi bt han i want ke koi toh plzzz uss GA ko do/char thappar jaroor marey...plzzz
when Mayank said mujhe bhi!!!! was like...šŸ˜” awww
ufff!!!! thank God ke ab sab thik hain...uff!! warna toh main khud hi mar jati tension ke marey...šŸ˜†
n their Present was tooo cute!!!!!!!! MA!
i loved Nupur here she was sooo cute n Mayank was sooo adorable n Romantic šŸ˜‰ šŸ˜†
n OMG!!!!!!!!! 🤣 Hidden Camera!!! WAH!!!!!!!!! kya naam socha hain...By God!!!!!! kamal ka hain...🤣🤣 just like Gunjan's timing!! ab toh even i think usko kese pata chalta hain lolzzz 🤣
awww...Samrat andar nhi ata...Sigh!
i hope ke usss GA ko acchi saja miley n baki sab bhttt acche se rahe n sab tik ho jaye...
i sooo loved this part...
Deep n Heart Touching which will made u sad then bring a smile on ur face n then again will make u more sad feeling their pain...Sigh!
loved it to BITS
u r Awesome API!!!! ā­ļøā­ļøā­ļø
love u lodsss API šŸ¤—šŸ¤—šŸ¤—
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Posted: 13 years ago
Everyone missunderstood Mayank.. even samrat...
Tai jaan is so evil does happiness of her daughter meant anything to her..?


Present was nice.. and good...
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Posted: 13 years ago
Thank u Fiza 4 the quick update sis šŸ¤—
as always it was Amazing, loved their plan, but they went through a lot of pain, i keep saying i hate Tai jaan 🤢, i hope she'll be punished for wat she done to Mayur,,,
again painful update, u wrote beautifully sis
thanks for the pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
how can samrat hit mayank? samrat should ask forgiveness to mayank. plz update soon. loved it

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