Why you always get angry ? (Viren&Jeevika)

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hello Guys !
I am Thinking To write a story on Virika 😃
It would be my first story read the concept and tell me should i write and continue ?
The concept is Viren daily comes Home Late because of His work
Jeevika waits for he time when he and viren will get time to spend together
but viren totally busy forgets his wife and concentrate on his work and on one fine day
viren is all free he gets time to talk to jeevika but she ignores him !
Viren is confused what is happening I can write if you guys liked it i have great ideas in my mind !
Thanks,
Isra 😊
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Index
Part One Pg 2
Part Two Pg 3
Part Three Pg 4

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Please pleaseee do write FF's on Virika... I love them... please do PM me!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Thanks for the comment @Love_Kryan I will surely start if i got 4 more comments ! 😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
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i luved d concept plzz do cont n pm me
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Awesome concept !! Please continue soon :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Aww nice concept
Please pm me when you update!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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nice concept
continue soon n plz pm me whenver you continue...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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plz continues, i am waiting for long time to read virika os, but Please PM me when update!
thanks
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Thanks for The Comments Here is The Part One ! :D
The Day starts its Sunday so everyone decided to go to Mandir Viren in his thoughts Thinking how will he manao jeevika just then an idea comes into his mind He refused to go to mandir excusing that he is ill he cant come so Suwamini Bua says Jeevika will stay with you and jeevika do take care of Viren
Jeevika : Ji Buaji
Virat : Bua ji Kya mein be Bhabhi or Bhaie Ke Sath ruk Jao u know Bhaie ki tabiyaat theek nahie and bhabhi will be taking care of her so she needs help right
Viren Thinking : Yeh virat ku tapak gaya aa bhagwan jab deekho mere hi kebab mein haadi :/
Virat : Bhaie u said something
Viren : No
Suwamini Agrees
So everyone leaves for Mandir except Viren Virat Jeevika
Jeevika knew very well viren was laying so she decided to ignore him viren goes to vvirat and tells him the situation !
Virat : Oey Bhaie Kya zarurat thi bhabhi ko Time nahie dene ki ignore karne ki ap thodi deer unke sath rehte toh yeh hota hi nahie
Viren : Yaar, jo huwa so huwa now plz help me what should i do I am dying to talk with her !
Virat : Sochna Pade ga then virats face lit up he says something in viren ear
Viren ; Wah Mere bhaie Wah
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Viren and Jeevika in Room
Viren gets up and hugs jeevika from behind jeevika moves away Viren sings Tumhe deekho na yeh kiya ho gaya Tumhara hu mein or tum meri !
Jeevika cant stop herself from smiling she smiles a bit viren notices it Viren slowy goes near her and kisses her check Jeevika Blushed and Viren Says : Jeevika I know You are not angry ab maan bhi jao
I am sorry (Making a Puppy face)
Jeevika cant resist and says :Viren ji but u ignored me i was waiting for the moment we both will spend some time together but weeks passed and u was not even giving me a bit attention I wanted to talk to you share my feelings with u but...
Viren intrupts : Now toh I am with you na Plz Forgive me i know u will saying this he went a bit near to her
Jeevika : Acha Baba its ok and gives him a tight hug
They broke the hug after some time Viren says Jeeviks Come hear i have a surprise for u !
Jeeviak gives him a confused look Viren takes her in an old room of vadhera hosus decorated with flowers and on bed it was written I am sorry I love You Its Our Night Today
Precape
Viren so near to jeevika and about to kiss her :😳


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Posted: 12 years ago
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superb update...
continue soon n plz pm me..

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