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Posted: 13 years ago
#51
hey dont get me wrong already i read this story but with different title and it seems to me the same ff becoz in that ff also i read that same broker and reys dad will help kriya and kriyansh fight in airport after that kriya will stay in singaniya mansion and after that rey and kriya will join in same college
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Posted: 13 years ago
#52

Originally posted by: CHOCOLATEKRIYA

hey dont get me wrong already i read this story but with different title and it seems to me the same ff becoz in that ff also i read that same broker and reys dad will help kriya and kriyansh fight in airport after that kriya will stay in singaniya mansion and after that rey and kriya will join in same college


hey dear. . .u r absolutly crect. . . nd i was cmposd for dis reactn. . .i hd posted sme parts before bt cnt cntinue so i restart wid sme renovatin. . . hope u wil like it. . .thanx
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Posted: 13 years ago
#53
o really then continue it and pm me when ever you updated it
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Posted: 13 years ago
#54

Originally posted by: CHOCOLATEKRIYA

o really then continue it and pm me when ever you updated it


Definately. . dear. . .I added u to my buddy list. . . so nxt tym. . .pakka pm. .plz give ur reviews. . .thank u. . .
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Posted: 13 years ago
#55
Hii Guys???? First of all Sorry for posting this boring note instead of next chapter... But I have true excuses for that, First, I'm not feeling well for last 2-3 days but my goodness I had comleted chapter 5 and it's read to post... But, My comp suffering from Net problem and I'm trying to fix it at my best... So sorry guys...but you have to wait till tommorow, please don't shout guys... I promise I won't pospond this further... Thank you for all the likes, comments and views... From, RaY
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Posted: 13 years ago
#56

Hii guys...I know my first word... sorry sorry sorry for so much late post...but anyway now I'm here and the post is all your's ...Enjoy😉


CHAPTER 5


" Universji kya aap bhi...aaj pehla din Mumbai me aur ye hal hai...koi purani dushmani nikal rahe ho kya?? Please...kuch acha kardo na..." , what will be the best thing other than this for Kria...she is just used to talk to Universji...and herself too..." Maa...kyu nahi aai tum mere sath...dekho kya hal ho gaya hai mera...Bed pe baith-baithke bor ho rahi hu..."...ohh is she sobbing...?? no way...

" Mai ajau beta andar...", Amma peeped from the door...what a timing...does she really know that Kria need someone...ofcourse she need...the day was horrible for her...

" aaiye na...apko puchne ki kya jarurat hai?? " adjusting herself in the bed, giving some space for Amma...

Amma smiled and entered in the room..." tumhe chot lagi hai na...haldi ka lep lagalo...zatse thik hojaegi..." with the bowl of haldi in the hand Amma reached to bed...

" Haldi??? Wo bhi Mumbai me..." isn't she is so child...

Amma smiled at her.." Kyu kya hua...??" get her leg straight...and start applying the haldi...

" Nahii... I mean ye haldi wagaira to sirf chote chote gao me hota hai na...?? Mumbai me to ...?? " as child excited to know each and everything Kria was behaving same...

" aisa kuch nai hota beta...Shehar bade hote hai...lod thodi na..." almost the haldi was completed on her scrath...but kria didn't scream...strong girl..." khana khaneke bad aram karna chaiye...tum ab aram karo...aur pareshan mat hona...mai hu yahi pe..." caressing Kria with the hand over the head...

" Thank u aunty...ummm...Amma... mai bula saki hu na aapko Amma...??"

"jarur beta ku nahi...ab aram karo..." and Amma goes...kria was really tired and went to sleep as she lean her head...

***

" What ???? R u serious...Please cut the crap Vicky...U can't do this..." Rey was moving to and fro...all over the room

" Rey...but what's wrong in that???..." Vicky added him to Rey's March but don't u dare Vicky to came in the midway of Rey..

" You...just Shut up Vicky...and leave my way..." hilarious look... oomph poor Vicky goes to his seat as fast he can go..." Swayam don't you told him...??" Rey turned to Swayam ...who was calmly seated in Sofa...and sharing popcorn with Nil...

" Rey...pehle to tu ghumna band kar...muze chakkar aa rahe hai...please Dude Chilll..." he goes to Rey and stops him, " He is in Love ...so obviously he gonna make such nonsense...and moreover jab wo ladki Neha ho to pakka pagalo wali bat hi karega...U chill ...take this popcorn..." Swayam offered popcorn to Rey...

Rey gives WTH look to swayam...take the popcorn and go to the Sofa...

" Ohhk fine...Love is ohhhk...But what's the need of Proposal...if he don't wanna killed by Sharon...He should wait..." Rey was peaces off and giving the suggestion...in which he was very confident...

" But rey..." Vicky beeped again...

" Shuttt Uppp.,..." this was the trio to make him Shut...with Rey, Swayam and Nil were too getting irritated with his beeping...

" That is what we are trying to tell him...dude...but he is just going gaga over his Kaagu...What the fish is this kaagu and baabu????" ..How much Nil will control himself to not complain about Vicky...he was eagerly waiting for that...

" Rey...now plz...tu hi isse samza ...that ye woqt sahi nahi hai..." Swayam giving the ' Help me dude' look to Rey...and Rey sighed again...and why not if Vicky proposed Neha...Then the Sharon's Volcano directly hit Swayam...and Rey want everything smooth between them...so Rey have to stop Vicky...

" Listen...My bro...Vicky...U've to understand what I mean to say...it's not the correct time...and that's final...U're not going to propose Neha...Understand...???" Now Rey turned to be the Boss and he has that right to Rebel yell at his child hood buddy...Now Vicky has no choice ...at last majority wins...

" Ohk dude ...as u say..." ohh puppy face...but that was enough for the trio to celebrate their winning...

" thanks Rey at last man gaya Vicky..." ...Swayam gives the side hug to Rey..." Gimme the beat Guys..." Nil used to do that...but here is no chance to the beat..." Not again..." they screamed over him and Nil was shut...awww...

" ohhk Guys...have to Go...some Work..." Rey bid a bye to everyone and whisper in Swayam's ear..." Dude this time Volcano get cooled but I can't say about next..." was Rey grinning...ohh that was leg pulling...he giggled and says Bye... and Swayam too gives him the Sigh of relief and says Bye...

***

The door bell rings...

" Rey baba...aagaye aap...??" Amma opened the door and greeted Rey with big smile...

" Ammaa...I missed u so so so much..." how this guy managed to be such cute...he hugged Amma...

" Arre hume bhi to miss kiya karo...?? "

" Dad...How will I forget u..." and he finally walks in the home and hugged his dad..." Miss u dad..."

" Missed u too ...Ohhk ...go fast and fresh n up...I was waiting for u for Dinner,... I m very hungry..."

" Ohh yes me too..." and he ready to go to his room...but turned and..." hey Dad...that Broker...whose address u send me was the crook...his office is sealed now and he run away with the customer's fees...Me and Vicky had checked..."

" ohhh...shit... ohhk beta...thanks u go..." his expressions were changed...Rey was about to climb the Staircase ...His dad engrossed in his thought ...kria ko btana padega...and he call..." Kria ...??? "

Rey stopped and turned..." Kya kiya Dad?? " Was he sounded as Kiya...no it was Kria...then Rey heard it as kiya...

" maine kya kiya Rey...?? " generous reply from his dad...he really didn't do anything...

" Just now u said Kya Kiya...?? " Rey found his dad miserable...and he step down the staircase to find what's wrong...

And...Bumped..." oouch..." he screamed holding is head ...with one of his hand...

" aah...hhh" she bounced back with that sudden bump on the back of staircase ...there were two staircases one to go to Basement and other in right angle to go to second floor...she looks over...Eyes widened..." aaap...?????"

Was that familiar aap??? For him he sensed that...he looks over his hand getting out of his head..." What theee...not again...??"

She was again firm climb one step and...at his place..." Aap yaha kya kar rahe ho...??? "

Is that only question she has to ask..." What do u mean by that???"

" ohhh achha...hindi...What r u doing here...?? " she really translate him...oh god...

She is mad ..." not hindi... mere ghar me rahke muzsehi puch rahi ho??? Is what I mean..."

" mera ghar...??? " is she giggling...?? Rey flared the WTH look..." No ye tumhara nahi ...uncle ka ghar hai..." pointing over Rey's dad...who was now look miserable...trying to understand...what's going on till now...

Rey look at his dad and again glared at her..." your uncle...and my Dad...!!!!!! " ohh now he felt superior...and now he giggled...actualy he was giggling...

" Dad...Da...a...a...d...???" She looked at her hand which was still pointing over Rey's dad...And she takes her hand...actually pointed hand get down... no wayyy..." universji kyu?? Bola tha na kuch achha karna..." she murmerd...and flares the Sorry look to Rey...and that was enough for Rey to understands that she is embarrassed ...he didn't bother further...

" Tum dono jante ho Ek dusre ko...??? " and now he can't control himself to peeped between them...Now what????...they looked at Rey's dad...again at each other...R they trying to find answer...

Kria...with confusing look..." ab uncle ko bta diya ki...( she remembered the Police station incident ) nahii...unhe bura lagega yar...unka beta wo bhi Police station...aur mere bare me kya sochenge...?? "

" Nahi to... ", Kriya said...but same time she heard what Rey said..." Yes..."...they looked at each other... Rey look with the suspious look and..." nahhi ???? " but how...Kalse to milte aa rahe hai...I think this girl is mad at worst...

Kria was surprised to hear that yes...and again glared at him..." Yes???" ...But kyu...khudbhi marne wala hai aur muze bhi marwayega...

Ohhk that was more to create confusion in Dad's and Amma's mind...as their faces were proof of that...full of confusion...Rey takes the step forward..." Dad...that Police station ...Girl...remember?? that's she..."

"Whattt...aise keh raha hai jaise mai akele gai thi waha..." Kria was frying with that reply...and trying to digest that he really told everything about Police station...

" ohhh...achhaa...Kria..." now the lines of confusion over Rey's dad head was vanished...and He laughed...now he can understands the situation ...but that was not important than the problem which he gonna tell Kria ...he controlled himself..." Ohhk Rey now go...beta ...remember the dinner...?? " he want to tell Kria the problem...and don't want to involve Rey in that cause he don't know enough about the situation...

" yahh of course..." Rey was sure he can talk about Kria any other time...so he turned to go to his room...ohhh not again...he giggled again...How much this boy can control his giggling on Kria who was looking in the ...' I wanna kill you ' Look...and he goes finally...

" Kria...controll...gaya wo..." and she has in the relief now..." uncle aapne bulaya tha...? " now she goes to Rey's Dad...

" haa beta...wo..." ...he knew that what will be her reaction ...but he actually tried to narrate it very understandingly...and he narrate all the Broker's glory...

" kyaaa??? Aise kaise bhag sakta hai wo...ab mai...kya??"

" Kria beta chinta mat karo...bade sahib ... sab thik kar denge..." Amma tried to console her...

" maa ko btana padega..." Kria controlled herself from the shock and behaved maturely...

" haa...u don't worry mai bat kar lunga...U don't panic beta...sab thik hoga...ab tum jao ...aram karo...bhot der ho gai hai..." Rey's dad tried his best...

" ohk uncle..." and she goes... and she too tried her best to not get panicked...

***

" Bade sahib..."

" hmmm"

" Ek bat bolu..."

" kahiye na Amma..." And the Next second...is what we called as mood distraction... the thing Amma said is..." Kya hum Kria ko apne ghar nahi rakh sakte...?"

" arre waa Amma...apne to mere muh ki Bat kehdi...Mai Kria ki mom se bat karunga...and I know wo meri bat nahi talengi..." and he lastly smiled over Amma...

***

" she is at my home...can't believe it..she is really..." drying himself with that towel...was he thinking about Kria...ohh yes he was..." Chilll chill dude...why r u getting Hyper...she is just at u'r home...but she was weird...cute too...whatt...Rey...what's this cute...??? she was weird only...and stop to gaga and concentrate on u'rself..." Rey has now got his senses...was he talking to himself...

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Posted: 13 years ago
#57

Originally posted by: dildostidance01

amazing update...no precap?


Sorry... Next time pakka precap...😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Wowww. . . .
Awsome update. . . . .
Lovd it. . . .
Yeh kriya bhi na. . .
Ha ha ha. . .she is too funny. . . . . .
Bt,i m lil confusd about tat nil,vicky,swayum and reys part. . .i realy didnt get wat was hapning there??!!. . . .
Bt,kriya and rey's part was awsome. . . .
Plz update nxt part realy soon. . .
Egarly waitng 4 it. . .
And plz plz pm me. . . . .
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Awesome updates
loved them
thnxx for the pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
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osssommm...

loved it...

their interactin is grt...

nd rey is drooling over her...

yeh babu aur kagu ni sudharne wale...

sharon ka kya hoga jab use kriya k baare m pta chalega...

continue soon...

thanxxx 4 pm

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