Virmaan ke Mohabbat ka safar...Hamari nazar...:)

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-Chulbuli natkhat si ek ladki

Ek pyare se ladke par thi bhadki

-Ladka bhi tha bahut hi shaitaan

ladki ko karta tha har pal hairaan

-Unki nok jhok thi Mithi aur surili

Ladka bindaas,ladki bhi nahi thi sharmili

-Ladki ke ek problem ka kiya ladke ne solution

Ladki ne partner bana ke kar diya uska promotion

-Ladke-ladki ki frendship me ek maud aaya

Ladke ka past lauta naam tha uska maya

-Ab un dono ki aisi ho gayi thi haalaatein

Mobile par baat kar ke katthi thi din aur raatein

-Maaya ka pyaar ladke ko bilkul nahi bhaya

Wo ladki se pyaar karta hai uski samajh aaya

-Inn sab baaton se ladki thi Anjaan

Apni beemari se wo khud thi pareshan

-Jis Din ladke ne ladki ki beemari ke bare mein jaana

andar se toota,par har haal me usse tha dosti ko nibhana

-Apne pyaar ko ladke ne dil me hi daba diya

Achche sachche Dost ka har farz ada kiya

-Ladka dheere dheere ho gaya ladki ke liye bahut khaas

dheere dheere ladki ko bhi hone laga pyaar ka ehsaas

-Ladki ke baal ude, tha uska behad hi bura haal

ladke ne apne baal kata ke banaya pyaar ka ek misaal

-Bahut katinaiyo ka saamna kar ke dono ne kiya ikraar

Bechain hai do dil,haan unhe hai ek dusre se pyaar


Jashn ka hai Mahaul Ho gayi pyaar ki jeet

Meet ban jayenge kuchh dino mein manmeet

-Virmaan ki kuchh dino mein hai

Dono mil ke badhayenge chotu Virmaans ki abaadi..

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ananyakai thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
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omg dis is so cute n awesum
loved it to d core
u made me remember der whole journey in fraction of seconds loved it

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Posted: 12 years ago
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omggg THIS WS SOO SOO PERFECT divz...totally loved it...BRILLIANT job once again...👏👏👏👏👏👏
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Posted: 12 years ago
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ur such beautiful poet yaar...nice one loved it

ant the title caught me in lovely one
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Divz if u r india...y dnt u participate in d ehmmbh contest...am sure u can win it wid this poem...this is a BEST WAY to wish virman for their marriage...do think abt it
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Posted: 12 years ago
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u remind me whole journey from their first meeting to partner promotion maya's entry her cancer revelation the epic epi viraat was bald
and the wedding awee wish we get that scene but that's not possiable
and most ausum hillarious was chotu virmans yes we all know virman r so talanted in few years india will be over populated by all chotu virmans🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: viratmanvi

omg dis is so cute n awesum
loved it to d core
u made me remember der whole journey in fraction of seconds loved it

Glad you liked it..Yup their love journey is awesome...Thanks Dear..🤗

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: nikki028

omggg THIS WS SOO SOO PERFECT divz...totally loved it...BRILLIANT job once again...👏

Thanks Nikki you are always encouraging...Glad i met you in this Forum...🤗

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: lakshm

ur such beautiful poet yaar...nice one loved it


ant the title caught me in lovely one

Thanks Lakshm...yup i love writing poems and stories...these are my passions...😳

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Posted: 12 years ago
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and the last line 🤣
so good darling loved it to the core

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