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Posted: 13 years ago
#11
Part 5



"Hame maaf kar do bitiya...hame maaf kar do", Garima says with her tears flowing continuously.

Bua ji comes to Garima and says, "Bas karo Garima.. Bas karo... Hamri titaliya doosron ke kaaran kitne dukh sahi.. Aur nahi... Ab aur nahi... Tum rona band karo"

*Anjali and Naani start crying again. Shyam and Daadi are expressionless! Babu ji looks helpless. Khushi is unable to speak a word*


NK calls Arnav and gives him the good news that Khushi has regained consciousness. Arnav immediately runs to his car. Forgets to fasten his seatbelt, (which he never forgets!) and drives faster than he's ever drew to see his lovely lady.


With great difficulty Khushi tries to speak a few words. "Hu..m...ya...haan?"
"Arn..av..ji...kaha..ha..i?",she asks.


"Chote aaye rahe hai bitiya. Aap aaraam kijiye, aapko uthne ki kono zarurat naahi hai", says Naani and pats her cheek.

"Ham..ari am..ma nird..osh hai...Un..ki koi galti na..hi hai.", she says, defending Garima.

Mami ji stands up to say something sarcastic, but before she could utter a word, NK takes her outside and requests her not to say anything which might hurt others. Mami stops her blabbering.

Arnav reaches the hospital and runs to the ICU faster than Usain Bolt. He opens the door to find Khushi lying on the bed, looking at him.

They look at each other for a while and Khushi turns away. Silently she weeps. Arnav, slowly goes to her...touches her soft cheek and looks at her. He was too happy to shed a tear and too sad to say a word. It felt like an ice which burnt in fire...Two different emotions flooded his mind.. He did nothing but stare at her with a mixed expression.


All of the others in the room leave the two people alone.

Khushi turns back to him.
"I...am...

...I am sorry Khushi", Arnav apologizes.

Khushi is confused about what to say. She looks at him expressionlessly.. Her eyes looked soulless...lifeless..dried up... Though she had a million things to ask and say, she remained silent..

"Say something Khushi... I am really sorry... I know I hurt you... But I was confused.. I love my mother too.. I know I was late, but I came.. Only for you... Because I knew you were faultless.. Tumhari koi galti nahi thi..."

Khushi still remained silent..



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Ah guys, totally tired today. Please don't bash me for stopping it here.
I have no idea how this story's gonna turn up further. Hope for the best... Don't forget to leave your comments and also hit LIKE, if you liked it 😊
Thanks!


Edited by ywini96 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#12
waiting for next part..
plz pm me the update
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Posted: 13 years ago
#13
jst read it and its nyc
pm me for next update plz
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Posted: 13 years ago
#14
Painful :( UFFF 🥺
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Posted: 13 years ago
#15
Awesome...Update Soon & Plzz PM Me 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
#16
Part 6


"Hamari kya galti thi? Hamne aap par bharosa kiya tha Arnav ji, par aapne apna waada nahi nibhaaya.", she says in her mind.

"Aaj main yahaan khada hoon, toh sirf tumhari wajah se. Yahaan sirf dard, dhokha.. aur.. nafrat ke alawa kuch nahi hai. Kaise main tumhe pyaar de paata?

Pehli baar jab main tumse mila tha toh main nahi jaanta tha ki hamare pasts aise jude honge. Jab tumse nafrat karne laga, mujhe nahi pata tha.. jab tumse pyaar karne laga, tab bhi nahi pata tha.


Tumne mujhe pyaar karna sikhaaya Khushi. Tum samajh sakti ho ki meri maa aur mere pyaar ke beech faisla karna kitna mushkil tha.

Main jaanta hoon Khushi. Maine kisi aur ki galti ke liye tumhein punish kiya. Meri maa aaj zinda hoti toh shayad yeh hi kehti ki mujhe tumhe kisi aur ki galti ke liye sazaa nahi dena chahiye. Forgive me Khushi.. Please forgive me..", he begs for forgiveness.
Khushi starts weeping. Tears run down her suave cheeks.

"Aapko lagta hai ki hamari Amma aapke Amma-babuji ke maut ki zimmedar hai? Toh aap hamare paas kyun aaye?", she questions.

"Khushi, I don't want to talk about this. Mujhe sirf tumhari fiqr hai. Mujhe tum chahiye Khushi, I need YOU! Damn it", he replies.

"Ham jaante hai hamari Amma galat nahi ho sakti. Ham aapke saath kaise rahenge Arnav ji? Ham apne pyaar aur Amma ke beech mein kisi ek ko nahi chun sakte!", she shouts!


Hearing Khushi's loud words, everyone comes in to check what happened! Naani asks, "Kya hua chote? Khushi bitiya kaahe chillaa rahi hai?"

"Kuch nahi Naani, Khushi mujhse shaadi nahi karna chahti", he says.

"Kyun bitiya? Aise... achaanak, man kaisan badal diya?", Nani asks Khushi.

"Hamari Amma galat nahi hai Naani ji. Woh Arnav ji ke Amma-Babuji ke maut ki zimmedar nahi hai", Khushi answers Naani.

"Shaant ho jaayiye bitiya. Aap aaraam kijiye. Aap pehle theek ho jaayiye, ham sab iske baare mein baad mein baat karenge, aap so jaayiye abhi.", Naani tries to console Khushi.


Khushi shuts her eyes but her tears don't seem to stop...

Arnav stays mum.. He's dumbstruck... Unable to verbalize the cyclone going on in his heart..

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IMPORTANT!
That's all for today guys...hope you liked it...leave you comments...check my index for the previous parts...
INDEX- https://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3211322&PID=65890321&#65890321

I won't be able to PM everyone. I'm really sorry guys. I'm a little busy these days. I'll update the parts. You can check my INDEX to get the link of the next parts.



Edited by ywini96 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#17
Excellent please continue soon. This is what I wanted to happen... It's kind of weird tht u wrote it exactly like I imagined it... Weird right?
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Posted: 13 years ago
#18

Originally posted by: daniclayton

Excellent please continue soon. This is what I wanted to happen... It's kind of weird tht u wrote it exactly like I imagined it... Weird right?


haha...but I have no idea how my story is going to turn out further... 😉
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Posted: 13 years ago
#19

Originally posted by: -Tintin.

Painful :( UFFF 🥺


where there is love there's pain :)


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Posted: 13 years ago
#20
I Have A Feeling That Khushi Will Faint 🤔

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