Deewanapan_MG FF Note on Page: 13 - Page 3

Really good update. Love the characterisations of the characters. Can't wait for the next update.

Part-5

Geet goes to home…straight to her room leaving her bag on cosch and jump on bed…huuh aj to bohot tiring day tha yaar..said geet…thoda rest krti hu mama bhi ghar nahi he..and geet sleep…just about then her mobile rang reminding her abought task to be done …thought come to her mind…PROJECT??????...AAA…….I jyst hate it…ye teacher s ko bhi na meri nind kharab krne bada maja ata he…hmmm…Geet always hv habit of make reminders of task to be done…or else she may forgot kya krna he?...Chalo geet Puttar lag jao kam per said geet to herself…

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Topic kya tha????asked pari to yash

I think hmne ab tk topic select nahi kiya he ms mkup!!!!!!11howww….tumne muje ms mkup kaha u jangli!!!!!said fuming pari…common yar tum itna mkup krti ho to ms mkup nahi to our kya kahu?look at urself in mirror?kitnai layer pe layer he pata nahi?I bet tum bina mkup ke apne apko mirror me dekhkr pechan bhi na sakogi…UU moron apna face dekhna mirrorme den meri bat kro I Bet isiliye mira tuhme bhav nahi deti ...yash get angry on it…ya these 2 yash and meera like each other bt at same time fear to conface…anyway tumhe project ki bat krni he ya me ph rkhdu?

Yes these 2 people are fighting on phone…HEHEHE weird people…

Ha mene topic choose kiya he and tumhe mail bhi kiya he tum adha kam krne half me krdunga kal milkr sortout krdeng..then final ok ?asked yash…DONE said pari and they cut the call…

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Here our hero Maan is busy in his study..project was almost done…its cakewalk for him…beside adi is also with him…

ADI I its done bs kuch pic add krne he wo tum krlo…

HEHEHE adi giv his famous laugh…ab jb sb kuch tumne krdiya he to I can do this much ..afterall ye mera bhi project he…Who said ye mene kiya he almost sari detaild tumne to search ki he adi said maan..

Comon MAAN we know kisne ye kiya he…waisebhi I know ke best to hamari hi hoga ..akhir MSK ko koi hara nahi skta…and maa gv his famoue smirk .. anyway I will do it bay see u tomorrow…ok bye adi said maan

After adi left maan goes tohis new personal gym which is specialy build for him with all equipment…

MEERAAA shouted geet on other side of phine…

Geet shutup yaar …kitna chillayegi…arahi hu…thoda wait to kar…

Nahi kar skti…,muje kuch smj nahi rha uprse tu itna late kr rahi he…jaldi …kaha itna time laga rahiu he???

I'm here…my god geet…kitna hyper..take relax lambi sas le ..geet do what meera says..ok ab bata kya hua?

MEERA kuch smj nahi arha sb gdbd hogaya?

Kya hua tu batayebhi?ya yuhi…paheliya bijayegi?

Are yaar ye physics smj nahi arha?

GOD geeet!!!!!!!!!!11tune bs itni si bat ke liye itna sara drama kiya?geet maid baby face…

And I thought ke tuje project me problem he?

PROJECT me?wo to hogaya kbka?

WHAT????says shoked meera?

Ha…said geet like it is some causl thing…woto mene atehi krliya infact tumhareliye uski ek copy bhi banadi….ye dkho and geet showed meera cd which is made for her…

OMG geet tune itni jald kaise kiya???said mees happily…geet roled her eyes…mer mer…wo sb badme pehle muje ye smja then I will explain each and every term in project fine???

DEAL said meera happily…actually does not get enough information on topic so she thought to chane the topic but here our darling geet ne to PROJECT hi bana dala …and her problem solved…

Later both emrcd in study then meera bid bye to geet …

Next day in school.

So Guys all r ready with their project?

Yes sir…said all

Then teacher take project and go throught it…

Everyone asked to giv presentation then…and as guess our MSK is git high marks then darling geet then surprisingly yash and pari…

Later in canteen…

Hey weekend pe kya plan he?

Ummm what about aslworld?asked geet chirply..

Growup geet…said maan and geet twisted her lips..

We r going to camping and will do traking…inform Maan

WOWWW!!!!!exclaimed everyone…

So guyes its done then we will meet tomorrow at 6.30 as it will take time to reach their …

Everyone noded in affirmation…and r happy with just thought of campain and traking…

project compleate tracking plan it

Really good update. Cant wait for the next update.

awesome update

Part-6

Next day early morning'

Maan wokeup 'goto gym doing his workout'then go to room for freshnup and get ready for outing'

Here Geet woke with alarm and hurrily run towords washroom to get ready as she got late'our geet is never an erlyriser gyues'then she come out in bathrobe standing infront of cpbord'MMM' what should ware??i think shorts r good chanlem asani hogi then looking upwords to her babaji'hena..

All gather in one place and are ready to go for camp'as Maam himself take permission for it..and no one could say no to him as according to all he is way much mature to handle all'Any is also with them as she make a fuss over it and our darling geet she also favr it'so maan cant hv any say in it'but he worn any not to do any mischief...

The journey got started'they all are going in minivolwo'it is full furnish and luxurious'hv all facility like fridge,TV'all are engad in doing full masti'Geet and any seat together planning somethimg and maal having eye on then as when these 2 got together he knew they do onething or other'

SAM is busy in her as usual flirting'but her recent one is Karan'as he do all project work of her and apart from that right now she dosent hv anyone here so she is just doing timepass'yash and meera as usual fighting over something'pari and Vicky discussing over some stiff'adi is busy with his camera'ya adi loves photographi'this camera is gifted by MAAN to him'and he carry it where ever he gies'

Later they do breakfast in bus only as they hv reach destination on time'

Later they reach place'its outside delhi'an jungle'all vacant bus'

While looking at place SAM said what the hell is this??????me yaha nahi rukne wali'kitni grmi he yaha

I will get sun burns and blemishes on my skin'and look at here OUCHHH kitne creatures he yaha'

Geet started laughing listening to sam's word'unhe insect kehteh SAM NOT CREATURE'again she started to laugh..whatever'but I mnot staying here saying so she stared to go in bus 'tumlog jao me yahi thik hu'

All shakes their head' n only MAAN said'kisine tumhe invite nahi kiya tha

SAM'.and agr tumhari yahi marji he to tum bs me betho or u gan go back'

All strart to enjoy the place'driver took all bags and stuff from bus and leave them tere'

Maan ,Adi,Yash started to make tents'

Geet is looking at grenary lovingly'its so seren and beautiful place'she saw an beautiful bird is there she goes behin it'she capter that bird and shouted for any while talting to it like that bird is listening to her'

HIII,Me GEET our tum??????are tumhara naan kya he ?let me guess UMMM'.then she thought for while'Haa'tmhara nam sweety he'hena?that bird like 'just look confusingly at her 'geet then said'tumhe pata he sweety mere bunny ka nam he'wo itna big he'stretching her arm wide and showing to bird ops imean sweety 'waise ye naam acha hena???kyu na ho mene jo rakha he'then she giggle'she again asked' BUT tum yaha akele kya kar r he ho???Tumhe friend nahi he kya?sweety thinking'great first she capture me,then she name me and nnow asking y I'm alone'these human I tell u'r so cofusing species'and our geet continue her bkbk even with bird'

Are geeet ''kaha ho tum'Shouted any'

Me yaha hu any'..replied geet'then showing her sweety'ye dekho mera naya friend sweety'puara hena'SWEETY SAY HELO TO ANY'dekha any ye tumhe hi kehrah he'

Geet tumhe ye kahase mila?our iska naam sweety he kisne bataya?

ARE AUR kisne sweety ne'said geet causly'

KYAAA????isne bataya ?ye bolta bhi he'

Nahi yar..mene iska nam rakha and ise pasan bhi aya'hena sweety'said geet

Lekin sweety kyu?tumhe kaise pata ye ldka he ya ldki?

Are ha yeto mene sochahi nahi'said geet '

AB kya kare?asked geet'while bechara sweety looking confusingly to any and geet'and thought'ye dono itni stipidsi batp itne serious kaise hosktehe?

He bhgwan muje bachao'pata nahi mere nam ka our kya karenge'MUMyyy he mentally shouted for her mother'

And our darling geet and any ran to tent..to others to find solution to their probles'

Guyes these two are realy child they don't know such things'

AT CAMP PLACE'

Maan is preparing everything for outing'.

Then geet and any come there with serious face 'all see their faces and know that now some trouble is coming'

HEY guyes see muje kon mila'new friend'

All then notice a beautiful bird in geet hand'.

WOW 'geet kitna pyara he ye'Listening to which geet gave wide smile'

HENA'isiliye mene iska nam sweety rakha sweet nam he na ise suit krta hena'dekha any sbko mera nam kitna pasnd aya'

Lekin geet per hm pata kaise lagaye'

Again geet and any become serious like its most serious matter in the world'

Mera then asked'kya hua? Kya pata lagana he?

Geet look at mera'thought for while then she look towords maan with big grin'

Maan saw it then'thought ..now what is she upto?

Maan tumhe to sab pata hota hena?asked geet

Saf saf batado kya prob he geet'said maan

koi ldka he ya ldki ye kaise pata chalta he?

WHAT?????asked maan astonished ...while all look geet surprisinfle'

BATAONA????ab hme jaise tumhare bal chote he'tum ldkoke kpde pehnteho'to tum ldke ho'ldkiyoke bal bade hote he'per isne nato ldkose kpde pehne he nato iske bal ldkiyo ki tarh bade he'me kaise pata lagau ki ye ldka he ya ldki'muje fir accordingly iska naam rkhna he'so pls bataona kaise pata lgatehe ke kon ldka our kon ldki he?

And dekhona bhai isne to erings bhi nahi pehni he iseliye yeto bilkul bhi ldki nahi hua na?'said any'

And now no one could control their laughter'all burst into laughter'

Where geet and Any could not understand why they r laughing'

OH GOD geet tumhe itnabhi nahi pata?said pari while laughing'

Siriously dude'said yash'

Dev and Vicky to join them'

No one thought that geet will giv such explanation to them'for charactering MALE and FEMAL species'

GEET SUCH KID U R'..said mira and starting laughing'

All r again laughing includeing maan'

Mainwhile geet and any felt hurt because of their behaviuor'all r making fun of them'tears form in their eyes'.they r on verg of crying

Maan notice it and ask all to stop'

Geet just ran from their 'while crying'

Maan ran behind her'

GEET 'GEET'ruko'meri bat suno'GEET'but geet is not listening just crying and running'

She is so much hurt'her friends make fun of her'

Geet meri bat to suno'ruko plz'man said'while running behind her'

Jao muje nahi krni tumse bat tom Bohot bure ho..bohot bohot bure'saying so she again run'

Mainwile maan get hold of her'holding her arm..Geet meri bat suno'na plz'

Nahi'Muje nahi sunna'tum sb bohot bure ho'sb mujper has rahe the'timbhi'aisa bhi kya puchliya mene ha?

Ok I'm sorry pls not stop cring'he said wiping her tears'stop ur tears'u r good girlna'

Geet noded inosently'maan look at her teary eyes'he felt bad for laughing at her'specialy when he know how inocent and naiv geet is'

Maan just hug her'like keeping her safe from all world'

Geet still snobing in maans arm and hiting him with her tiny fist'jao mije nahi bat krni tumse'tuym mere best friend hona'then said '.nahi 'nahi ho'best friend aisa nahi krte'

Sorry baba'then he hild his ears'plz abto maf krdo..

Geet just smile at his cute guesture'then again came question reminding her of reason of all this mess..

Maan 'she said cutely'

Ha mishty'said maan sweetly'some time lovingle maan said mishty to her which only maan geet and any knew'

Again geet continue in her babyish voice'Maan bataona'Kaise pata lagayeng Kew o Ldka he Ya ldki..muje uska nam rakhna he'looking at maan innocently'

OH GOD y me'?

Said maan mentally'Now what will he answer'sometime innocent is deth for us thought maan'

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poor bird geet so innocent maan manofying his mishtiit

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I loved the update. Geet is so innocent and naive.

Brilliant Update.

Thanks for the PM