~MG SS:Ishq Wala Love...EPILOGUE-PG38 21/5 ~

Posted: 12 years ago
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NOTE
THIS SS IS NOW A COLLAB BETWEEN ME AND JASMINERAHUL...
THANK U 4 UR SUPPORT




~ISHQ WALA LOVE~

Character Sketch
Maan Singh Khurana(28)

Editor in chief-Midday Times,Mumbai as well as its owner...hates his family name as his father was a fraud and a womanizer business tycoon...lost his mother at birth...only family is Dadimaa...who live in Delhi...loves his newspaper and targets to make it the best an and its already popular upon 8 years of establishment...not an angry young man...but carefree and friendly...but a workaholic..

Geet Handa(26)

sweet,bubbly sub editor and personal assistant of Maan...very dedicated to her work...has been working for the paper from the very start...very supportive...the entire press works as a team...filled with friendship only...no formalities...

Yash Chauhan

Head Photographer...a high time flirt...carefree and sweet...in a relationship with MEERA KAPOOR...correspondent...

Meera Kapoor

chief correspondent at midday... geet's best friend...in a relation with Yash...very sweet

OTHER CHARACTERS TO BE INTRODUCED LATER...
HIGHLIGHT:no sameera...no dev...no brij...no sasha or tasha😃

Index

Part 1:below
part 2:page 2
Part 3:page 5
part 4:page 9


Edited by Paru_ - 11 years ago

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Posted: 12 years ago
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congrats for new ss

seems interesting

do cont ...

Posted: 12 years ago
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Part 1
YASH barges into the editor in chief's office...
Yash: Maan...woh photos mil gayi

Maan turned from his mac book to see Yash...{he liked all calling by his name not sir}
Maan: what???(he got excited and hugged him)...this would be such a sensation in tomorrow's news...
{Yash was sent to take pics of a corrupt police officer committing a crime}
Yash:party to ban ta hai boss...
Maan :zarror... tomorrow the treat is on me...
yash goes
geet walks into his cabin



maan:geet...kitni der lagadhi...mujhe kabki coffee chahhiye thi...
geet:sorry maan...woh ASHWIN murder case ka kuch lafda ho gaya tha...clippings kuch kam the
maan:adi is handling that case rite...then??
geet:bhool gayi kya...aaj pinky kii delivery hai...adi is on leave
maan:ha rite...chal Nupur aur MAyank to bhulao zara...aur ha apne uppar zyaada stress mat lena...

Nupur-the page 3 reporter walked into his cabin followed by Mayank:the sports corespondent

Maan:nupur...tum kal woh socialite Maya Sharma ke party cover karloge...
nupur:ji bhaiya...{he was her rakhi brother}
maan:aur mayank tum team selection ke venue...
all departed to their cabins
maan recieved a call...it was his dadimaa
Maan:hi dadimaa
dadi:jeete rahe bete...hum apko yeh batane ke liye phone kiya kii hum kuch ladkiyon kii photographs aapko mail ki hai...
maan:dadimaa...phir se...kitne baar kaha hai kii mujhe bilkul interest nahi hai shaadi karne main...
dadi:bete...hum bhoode ho gaye hai...aur aap 28 ho gaye hai...hum chahte hain kii humare ghar main hamare bahu jaldi aaye
maan:aapse baat karne ka koi matlab hi nahi dadi...chal main rakhti hoon...bbye
geet walks into his cabin...he sees his mood is spoiled
geet:phir se dadi maa ne photos bheji kya...
maan:roz ki kahani hai...tujhe pata hai...
geet:chodo yeh sab...bohot late jho gayi hai...
maan:geet...if you dont mind...kya main tumhe drop kar sakti hoon
geet smiled
geet:ok...thank you
IN THE CAR

maan:geet...tune abhi tak shaadi kyun nai kii...
geet:koi acha munda mila hi nahi...
maan:kab milegi...
geet:jaldi...i m still in search...
after some time
maan:geet...kya tum mere saath coffee ke liye kal jaa sakte ho...kal sunday hai...
geet:are u asking me on a DATE Mr.khurana...
maan:if that is what it is called then ok...
geet:fine...i will come
maan:geet...tera ghar aagaya...
geet:maan...do you mind coming in for a coffee
maan:sure...
they both walk towards the house...geet slides her hand in his...
she rings the bell...
the door opens...2 little kids stood at the door...
kids:mumma...paapa...aaap log aagaye...itne late kyun hua
geet and maan smiled and hugged them
precap:maaneet past



Edited by Paru_ - 11 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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interesting story dear..👏
loved the CS..
part 1 is a shocking update...maan geet ...mamma papa nikla..😲😕😕
kids calling them mamma papa...😕
😕😕😕😕😕😕
and then y dadi asked him to marry...may be she doesn't no...
what is the age of kids...
please dear..can't wait for next part...jaldi update karna...waiting
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Posted: 12 years ago
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nice CS, but yeh kya!!!!!! Yeh toh pura serprise package nikle.
Pehle maan's interrogation, then Geets answer.
Phir suddenly Maan asks her for date, then Geet Invite him to HER home,
And then suddenly, two kidz at the door, calling them MAMMA PAPPA😲😲😲
hehe, waiting eagerly for their past😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
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CS
very interesting...

part 1
Daadima is asking Maan to get married par yahan to Maan and Geet are parents of 2 kids...
cont soon dear...
pm me...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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omg..this is new..twist in 1st update it self..very nice..pls cont soon..
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Huh im shocked!!!pm me plz update soon
Posted: 12 years ago
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Part 2
MAANEET VILLA
"maannn" geet moaned as he madly kissed her on her belly and neck...

both maan and geet lay bare under the duvet making love...
"geet...u seriously hav no clue how u turn me on with that Black nighty of yours..."
"geet:acha...who had insisted on buying it for me...

maan:thats why i love you sooo much Mrs khurana...he nuzzled his head into her neck
geet:maan...kab tak hum sab se hamare shaadi ke baare main chupayenge maan...its been 7 years...aur payal aur palak(their twin daughters) ab 5 saal ke hue hai...

maan:bohot jald geet...main saarri duniya ko bataunga kii tum mere liye koun ho...


mere asliyat aur parivaar ke baare main jaante hue bhi tum mere saath...
geet stops him...

geet:maan aapse kitni baar kaha hai kii ateet ke baare main kuch mat kahena...ab aap mere zindagi hai...aur mere payal aur palak...
maan:i am sorry jaan...main dobara nahi kahoonga...i promise..

geet:maan...i think ab hume jaldi logo ko batana hoga warna kuc mahino main gadbad ho jaoge...
maan:matlab
geet blushes and looks down...she takes his hand and places it on her tummy...

maan realized what she intended to say...he was elated..
maan:sach...jaan...tumhe kab ...

geet:ha maan...mere jr.maan aa rahe hai...humare payal aur palak ka bhai...
maan was excited...he carries geet and yells
"I'M THE HAPPIEST MAN IN THE WORLD!!!!!!
geet giggled seeing his excitement
maan takes her lips in his and kisses her with deep passion...both had tears in their eyes...
maan lies down on her lap and caresses her still flat tummy...


"hi baby...i m your papa maan...i love u and ur maama shoo much as well as your sissies... i promise bacha...jab tum iss duniya main aaoge to pure haq se KHURANA bankar aaoge...i promise...
they both hug and sleep with maan still caressing her tummy...
they remember their past...


*FLASHBACK*
9 years ago

This was the news headlines of every newspaper on that fateful day...
"Famous and renown Photographer of THE HINDU, Mohinder Handa (52)and his family members were found murdered in their residence in Delhi last night...his Wife Rano Handa(48),younger daughter Preeti(14) were slaughtered while Mr.handa was hanged to the ceiling fan in his room.his son Armaan(22) is reportedly missing and Daughter GEET HANDA(17) is struggling for her life in ICU...doctors say that chances of her survival is scarce.police officials reveal that the prime suspect is none other than Virendar Khurana-the business tycoon as of their rivalry of Mohinder submitting proofs against his rape of a 15 year old girl 2 months back which was published in all newspapers...police shall be arresting Virendar Khurana soon."

Maan had read this news...it was not new to him as the fact itself disgusted hi m that his father was a b*****d...he was shocked upon what he did to the Handa's. he knew that his father would not spare the girl left as she was the prime witness...he didn't not want another girl to become his dad's prey...something in his conscious pushed him to rescue this girl...

Maan went to the hospital... he spoke to the doctors...they told him that her condition is better now...
ACP Aryaan Desai was friend of Maan...
Maan spoke to him regarding Geet Handa
ACP told him that it would be better to shift her to another town now that VIRENDAR is behind bars and it should be done before he is bailed out...he knew Maan's genuine nature and honesty
Maan:aaj se geet meri zimmedari hai aryaan...chahe jo ho jaaye...i will protect her...
he shifted along with geet to Mumbai...she was still in shock and trauma thus not talking at all...
he didnt not reveal anything at all to DADIMAA but just told her that he is going to mumbai to start his newspaper...he took along his Moms property as he wanted nothing of his dad...

Maan revealed his identity to geet...she was hesitant in the beginning but his friendly and truthful nature helped her identify the Maan sans the Khurana...

both become great friends...geet completes her studies while Maan was setting up his business...his NEWsPAPER with all support from Geet...

2 years pass...Maan was 21 and geet was 19...both were falling for each other...
they finally confessed their love and Maan proposed for marriage
geet despite knowing all truth accepted him...
Maan and geet married secretly
and they really didn't have a friend circle then...
they feared Virendar finding out so did not even mention it to Dadimaa...
their marital life was amazing...the understanding between them was outstanding.
..they loved each other like no other...the newspaper was finally formed... Maan' s old classmate Yash and Meera join them...all team become great friends but not to personal level as they do not reveal their marital status to them.they introduce themselves as "best friends"...
almost a year later...geet gets pregnant...both were elated to become parents but this was a matter they could not hide from others...so they decide to go to Bangalore on the pretext of doing their "MBA crash course" for a year...geet and Maan there experience the bliss of pregnancy and parenthood...
there she gives birth to twins and thus become parents to payal and palak...



they return to Mumbai but the news which welcomed them was shocking...

Armaan Handa Jailed For Killing Virendar Khurana
geet was shattered...all these years Maan and geet tried searching for Armaan but failed to find him and now he had killed Virendar...
Maan consoled her...he wasn't upset about his father but upset for geet and her brother was behind bars...

geet and Maan forget everything and move on...their angels made their life ever blissful and happy...they still pretended not to be married in front of the world
all were fine until their kids turned 3...they had to be put in school...maan and geet had gone to drop them on their first day when yash and meera spotted them there...they were shocked...

then they were told...they were happy for them...
this was the life of Maaneet
*flashback over*
maan sees geet sleeping peacefully in his arms...he suddenly hears payal crying...she gets nightmares everynight..he didnt want to disturb geet .he takes her in his arms and pats her to sleep


PRECAP
BLAST FROM THE PAST
NEW ENTRY (female)

i hope you all liked the updates...
will show some Maaneet moments from past elaborately in future parts...







Edited by Paru_ - 11 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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amazing update dear...👏
u r giving shock after shock after each update...they are married for 7 years..😲😲😲geet is again pregnant😲😊😊😛
felt bad for geet she lost her family...
loved the update dear

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