Os on current track,2n part added

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The hall staff " can we close ?"

Akash no

Staff: you have to pay over time

NK: i will pay 10 times more , just leave us


Khushi : jiji hum aata hain aik min , she walk to her home as it was closed , she picked her cell and try to call him"woh hamara phone zaroor utai gai,she callled"she look at the broken bangles ,cell drop from her hand , "DM aap na hum ko " she said and picked up the broken bangles , "DM why with me , tell me why ? i didnot myself walk in his life nor he , you always arranged our meeting , you made my heart beat for him and his for me . why DM ? we both dont have Maa you are our why you did that to us , i could have fallen in love with some one else why he , why he ? she look at her self in mirror "Khushi Arnav ji na tumahara haath chordiya hamasaha hamasha kaleya " she look at her hand " aaj hamara haath khali haan " she look at her hands " Maa babuji , ab Arnav ji , ab hum ji nahi " she heard whisper she quickly ran out of back door


Arnav was all lost he was not able to decide ,when he saw Khushi number he picked the received the call , he had over heard the her conversation with her DM , his heart cried , he was shouting from other end calling her but she was not hearing him"Khushi i am coming "he could hear Akash and Payal

Payal :Khushi

Akash where is she ?

Payal :pehla Arnav ji aap yeh

Akash she was not feeling well i saw she was about to faint


Arnav heart lost a beat he drive as fast as he could to the place . he ran in "where is Khushi?"

anjali: choteey

Arnav DI i am fine where is she

Payal she is not in home

Arnav she called me but she didnot listened me

Garmia : came and beg Arnav" dont leave her dont"

Dadi : Arnav aap

Arnav please you both stop it here have to find her first , if i will not find her i loss her for ever "he ran out Akash and NK followed him .


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Arnav search for her like crazy where she can go? payal words echo in his ear she is not feeling well" how could i do that to her?" he bang on the wheel " why i " he had flash back of the suicide, he felt someone strangle his throat " i some how managed to live without Maa but Khushi . " tears flow down his eyes , he searched all the possible places , no sign of her , " hum rait kai tarah aap ka haat se " his hand sweat like anything ,his cell rang it was an unknown number "hello " he hit brake "where ? i am coming" he drives caller words echo in his ear " your wife met accident " it was enough from him to take his breath away "hum asie jagah jai ga ka aap hum ko dhood bhi nahi saka ga" "Khushi you can't do that to me , you promised me you will never leave me " he had reached the hospital he rush in, he could feel her presence , he inquired about her nursed point towards a ward . he walk in ,he saw his bride ,his Khushi sitting wrapping her arm around her knee

Khushi felt him ,she look at the door "Arnav ji bola in ko hum thek hain"

Dr: you are with her

Khushi he is my pati

Dr: see she fainted , her BP is very low , we are give her injection so she sleep well

Khushi : get down & hide behind him "nahi ab hum bilkul thek hai"

Arnav hold her arm he saw bruise, her fore head has bruise & it was bandaged "Dr she will be find"

DR: as you wish .he left in anger

Khushi free her hand, quickly wears her sandals , he was about to pass him he hold her arm "chora "

Arnav: "i didnot hold to leave " he walk back wards & stand in front of her

Khushi " hum na aap se koi baat nahi karnai"

Arnav" per mujhe ko tum se karni ha" he look at her she had closed her eyes , he cupped her face "Khushi"

Khushi" mera sar"she grasp his sharwani

Arnav" Dr "he picked her up & made her rest"Khushi"

Khushi"Arnav ji hum ko kuch nazar nahi araha "

Dr rush in he checked her " she has taken some kind of stress,her mind need relaxation, keep her away "

Arnav "tell me she is fine," he was caressing her pale face

DR: she is but you have to be very care full , he had given her injection. as Arnav was holding her arm" keep away from stress ,or she may go in coma" he said & walk out . his sentence scared life out of him

Arnav:" i will not let any thing happen to her , i lost maa but will not Khushi" he hug her as tight as he could " i loved my maa , but i love her too"

Edited by naddiya26 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Res res res
Beautifully written
Really nice and emotions well explained
Edited by Tishuu - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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will love to see something like this...update soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
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nice di...
waiting for the next part..
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Posted: 13 years ago
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beautifully written 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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does he find her before its too late or not
god tell me he finds her in time
why does this have to happen with arhi dont they deserve some happiness in their lives man
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Posted: 13 years ago
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its very nice plz continue soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Such an emotional os.loved it a lot.very painful.Hope K becomes ok.Happy that finally Arnav is with his K.Update soon
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awesome update plz continue soon and pm me

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