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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: hemaDaganKhian

6 years leap😲NeeVik married😲n have 1 yr girl baby😲oh nooo...k im reacting too much but i xpected how NeeVik fall in love with each other...but but🥺but dont forget to add some cute romantic moments of NeeVik in comming tracks😳



this was one thing i wanted to clarify but forgot to do it.
i knw that you guys are annoyed by so many leaps but trust me honey if i wrote their love developing,the fanfiction stretched for an year with no progress in story.about neevik moments,you are gonna get loads of their passionate nights.😳
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: abhiya_pkyek

awesome updt ..loved it


thank you...😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
neera-why yuuvi always eat my cheesecake??sheesh
Edited by lucykaede - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: lucykaede


thanks for such a long comment,the bamn was something you have experienced in previous updates.he he he...
and sunil,well he is gonna make his come back soon.
and they have so many kids because neera never let him sleep in nights.poor hrithvik.bechara apne wives ke passion ka maara.😆


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O Mahadev!!!
Passion kuch zaada hiin bhara hua hai Neera main!!!😛
So ultimately she hs casted spell on Hritvik...
n both r madly in luv wid each othr n he luves her more than Surya i guess...
so i guess in evry update u'll describe one night rite???😉
rather than poor u shud call hm lucky!!!😆
so nw i expect atleast one night in evry update! 😳
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: coolfizzy


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O Mahadev!!!
Passion kuch zaada hiin bhara hua hai Neera main!!!😛
So ultimately she hs casted spell on Hritvik...
n both r madly in luv wid each othr n he luves her more than Surya i guess...
so i guess in evry update u'll describe one night rite???😉
rather than poor u shud call hm lucky!!!😆
so nw i expect atleast one night in evry update! 😳


i am not sure about nights but passion will be there.
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Posted: 12 years ago
Conti As Soon As You Can. want To Know What happens Next.
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Posted: 12 years ago
chapter-2-awakening
neera-no...
the woman saw in karthik's eyes.a heat of flame flew inside her body.she could not think of anything else but the boy in front of her.technically karthik should feel the same but he didn't.
karthik-hello aunty..(ha ha ha ha ..😆)
sunil comes on the terrace.
sunil-anandi...(yes anandi is suni's sister,he is the party)
neera and hrithvik also came on the terrace.
neera-you bitch...😡
anandi-huh😕
neera saw her with lethal eyes.she knew what she had to do.she wa damn angry.she was thinking of killing her by tearing her apart.
in party suddenly lights started going on and off.
nupur thinking-this awakening can't be stopped now.
neera finally awakens...
neera was about to kill anandi when hrithvik called her from behind...
hrithvik-neera..😕
neera turned and was about to kill the person when suddenly hrithvik's face turned in front of her into a boy saying-stop it...
neera-ah... oh you...
n
sunil-anandi,you blood bonded with him.😡
anandi-i couldn't help it.
hrithvik-neera what happened to you?and you,you blood bonded with my son,are you crazy?
karthik started crying..he ran and hugged his mommy.hrithvik took nandini.
neera was sad faced.
sunil to neera-look i am so sry mrs..ah..
neera saw sunil with angry eyes...sunil saw in her eyes and bamn he remembered everything...he just knew it was anu.
sunil shocked-anu...😲...anu...😭 anu you,what are you doing here?and this kid,this kid called you mother.how could you??😡
hrithvik-hello sir,she is my wife and her name is neeranjana,not anu.
sunil-i blood bonded with her years ago,she is my would be wife.
hrithvik-looks like you want to get killed.😡
neera-hrithvik he is right...
hrithvik shocked...
sunil-anu,where were you?you can't imagine how much i and your parents missed you.they think that you are dead but i knew that you weren't.you can't be otherwise i would feel completely dead.
karthik-daddy what is happening?
hrithvik-karthik go to your room.
karthik immediately left,anandi was totally confused,she too left.
neera-if you wanna stay alive just get the hell out of here.😡
sunil-anu what are you saying?leave him and come with me,i know where your parents are.
neera attacked him with her telekinetic powers,his head got hit on the terrace wall.
hrithvik-neera...
he placed his hand on her shoulder in confused state,neera saw his face,a tear fell from her eye.she pushed his hand and went away.
neera was coming downstairs with all her sad face,rathod came to the stairs to meet neera.
rathod-hey neera,how are...
neera saw rathod,her eyes were deeply sad.
rathod remembered those eyes...he saw those eyes before.
rathod shocked...😲
neera-nice to see you again and she left.she went outside.nupur saw her going outside.
nupur-oh boy..finally we couldn't save it.
ashish with her telepathy-you are useless.😆
nupur-shut up..😡(i love ashish and nupur's chem,their scenes are so funny)
hrithvik came downstairs...
hrithvik-master you saw neera,where she went?she was pretty angry.
nupur-i know,some girl blood bonded with karthik.
hrithvik-yes and a crazy guy is claiming neera as his wife.hrithvik ran outside.it was raining.
hrithvik was shouting...neera neera...
neera went to the forest.she was very sad.
finally hrithvik found her.
hrithvik-neera...
neera stopped..
neera-what do you want?
hrithvik-where are you going?and who was that guy?
neera-i am going back home.
hrithvik-what?what the hell are you saying?
neera-i remembered my home...a scene she reminded,a horrible forest,very dark and deep and a hut shaped mansion there,a dark room and big cross there with hot iron rods and axe,choppers...big iron balls...blood all around the room.outside on the top of that building is written...VALKYRIE.
hrithvik-what are you saying?come lets go.everybody is wondering about us.
neera shocked.she turned in shock.
neera crying-oh you really don't remember.
hrithvik-what?
neera-that i...crying...i..crying...decades ago...i...a scene came in front of hrithvik...no...stop it...
hrithvik-huh...😕
neera suddenly hugged hrithvik.
neera-sry...i am so sry...forgive me...so sry...
hrithvik-what you are apologizing for?
neera-oh honey,i am so so sry.
hrithvik thought she was apologizing for the broken shell.
hrithvik-oh you are sry for the shell,don't worry,i forgave you years ago.he hugged her tightly.
neera thinking-this time i will cherish this warmth.😭
sunil and anandi conversation...
sunil-you bloodbonded with my wife's child.
anandi-i don't understand,if she is anu then why she married that person.technically a blood bonded person isn't able to marry anyone else.bro i think you are wrong,she is not anu.
sunil-i am damn sure she is anu.i want answers,i am gonna talk to her.
anandi-we are just guests.
sunil-i am gonna go to miss nupur,i know she will understand my problem and let me stay here for sometime.
rathod went to a basement...
rathod searched for a photo there...
finally he found a frame...in that frame...there was picture of old neeranjana,rathod,little ashish,ashish's father,neeranjana's(old one)husband and two other mutants.he touched old neeranjana's face in the photo.

Edited by lucykaede - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
these two are exactly like mirrors,facing each other...
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Posted: 12 years ago
yuuvi-hey give me scenes as well.😆
a very young professor.
mohit-why the hell i am a mutant in this ff?i am tired of playing immortal.😡

Edited by lucykaede - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Amazing as usual...
The way u describe evrything...i really cn c evrything happening rite infront of me...
i actually wnted Sunil bck bt did'nt knwew dat u wud grant ma wish so soon...
Anandi blood bonded wid small Karthik...the way Sunil hd a blood bond wid Neera...
Its vry vry vry interesting...y Neera got angry about Anandi hving bloodbond wid Kartik???
Ok...so its super interesting...
Continue soon :)

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