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Posted: 12 years ago


Just caught up wid the pics n chapters (my college is giving me a tough time, sorry for the delay!)

Awww.. I felt so sad for surya... but loving anu, Hrithvik though! superb FF... thanks for the PM..

Hugzzz
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Posted: 12 years ago
Update As Soon As Possible !! Please Di !!
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Posted: 12 years ago
thanks for all your comments readers.😳
i will try to update soon.😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
i am taking a long break.please don't force me to update.guys i am really sry but studies come first and ffs always divert my mind.don't worry i will update but till then you have to maintain your interest in it.
Edited by lucykaede - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
It's Okay Di, Take Ur Time !
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Posted: 12 years ago
first generation-volume 2-lily of chastity.
chapter-1-end was only the beginning.
6 years passed after that cruel incident.a lot of things happened in this timeline.rathod came and went away after knowing hrithvik and neera's engagement,they got engaged for karthik's sake.at first hrithvik was not comfortable with neera,he couldn't think of being with any other woman except surya but for some reason he felt really complete with neera.neera now become c.e.o of neeranjana enterprises and after her arrival in company,it got a big profit and its position went up.now after six years,neera also had a one year child.she was a girl.she name her nandini.(neera's first child)
now the party was going on,it was a beautiful night,kitty and mohit were married.yuuvi was still a bachelor.amrit was there in the party as well.
neera in her room.she was getting ready for the party,she wore a beautiful white saree with a diamond bracelt and a necklace,she was wearing beautiful long diamond earings.
neera-na na na ...na na ...na na na ...na na na na...(that music box tune)
karthik entered-mommy...
neera-oh ho...janaab to suit mein kya lag rahe hain.
karthik-mom please,ye tie baandh dijiye.
neera-sure my darling...
karthik came to her.she picked him in her arms and put him on the bed.she kneeled and started tieing his tie.
karthik was looking damn cute in the suit.he was humming a song with his big eyes down.
neera-hey whats the matter?
karthik-can i ask you something?
neera-sure..
karthik-how was my real mommy?😭was she beautiful like you?
neera kissed him on the cheek-kyun tumhe ye naye mommy nahin pasand?
karthik-nahin..
neera-haan?😲
karthik-no i mean..i wanna know more about her,how was she?please tell me.i only saw her photos.
neera-okay dokey...just enter in my head.
karthik happy-he touched neera's head.
karthik saw surya's images and scenes of the past.
he saw one scene..
surya-hrithvik maine kaha na boy he hoga.
hrithvik-par muzhe to girl chahiye.
surya-boy.
hrithvik-girl.
surya-boy😡
hrithvik-girl..
mohit-are bas bas...jo bhe ho,tum dono kaun sa saints ho,agar boy hua to agle baar girl aa jayege.
neera smiling...
surya-mohit...😳
another scene..surya was eating food when suddenly a black out came..
karthik-huh..karthik went into her memories..
karthik-main mommy ke memory mein.
the memory of surya's death.
surya pleading to save karthik and neera blocking her.karthik saw the face of the woman.he attacked her but it was only a memory.
suddenly memory changed.
karthik-ah..neera fell down.
karthik-mommy,mommy...
karthik again touched his mom's head...
karthik saw a beautiful forest and a girl under a tree.
karthik-huh??
girl saying to a rock there(the name vikrant was not inscribed on it as it was in previous memories)-i am sry,i am so sry,why i have to endure this horrible pain every time?you were my only friend and and ...ah ah...she cried.😭
suddenly karthik saw a boy behind the girl,the boy had a music box in his hand.it played the tune.
karthik-what a beautiful tune,but who is he?
hrithvik enters the room...
hrithvik-karthik..
karthik removed his hands.
hrithvik-neera,neera...karthik kya kiya tumne?
karthik-nothing dad...
hrithvik puts his one year old daughter on the bed.karthik nandini ko lekar jao neeche party mein aur amrit se kehna khyal rakhe iska.
karthik-okay dad.
hrithvik-neera...he touched her face.his warm touch made her tingled.he he...
neera opens her big beautiful eyes.she saw his face,the face she always wanted to cherish,she gets up.
neera-ah my head hurts.
hrithvik touched her face-what were you doing?why was karthik reading your memories?
neera-nothing..he wanted to see something and i allowed it.he smiled-thoda dhyan rakha karo.karthik is still a child.
neera smiled.
hrithvik-come lets go,hamein party mein jaana hain.
neera-i don't feel like going.
hrithvik-oh come on,chalo na.
neera-okay...but...
hrithvik-what??
she grabbed hrithvik's face and kissed him.it was a very gentle but passionate kiss.he grabbed her sexy waist and rubbed his hand to her naked back.(her blouse was backless.oooh hoo..wanna see sona in a white saree.)he then gently kissed on her neck.(in all their intimate moments,neera was the boss.😆neera could never get enough of hrithvik)
in party...
amrit to a guest-ofcourse,hamari company abhe aur bhe upar jayege,waise hum films mein bhe apne kismat aazmana chah rahe ahin..
karthik came with one year old nandini...nandini was wearing a purple frock with her cute purple hairband.
karthik did not give her to amrit but went to terrace to play with her.
on terrace..
karthik was playing with his sister...
karthik-he he he...he kissed his sister's cheek.he was making funny faces to nandini and she was giggling and saying-nee...ghee...
suddenly a woman came on the terrace.
woman-ah excuse me,hey you kid...
karthik saw her...the woman saw in his eyes and bamn...

Edited by lucykaede - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
O MY MAHADEV!!!!
this Update made my day!!!!
I cn imagine Hrithvik n Neera...
OOOhhh!!!!
super exciting!!!
n earlier he ws nt ready 2 accept her as he ws nt comfortable...lekin last last ke part main aisa lagta nhi hai...
Both r so vry much in luv wid each othr [hope his time its nt like surya, i mean she always felt dat Hritik ws nt her etc etc...]
Hritvik z really fast...nw he hs a daughter too!
n nw i noe hw cum they'll hv so mny kids in future!
N nw wat will happen 2 Sunil???usne bhi o itne sapne sajaaye the???
well its ok...i don't actually care bout him...
N wat ws d bamn in d end??? curiosity z building up...
Try 2 Update soon...although i noe hw tough it wud've been 4 u...as e1 im hving my exams...
Last time...
It ws amazing...
Luking 4ward 2 ur next update...
Try 2 update soon :)
Edited by coolfizzy - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
6 years leap😲NeeVik married😲n have 1 yr girl baby😲oh nooo...k im reacting too much but i xpected how NeeVik fall in love with each other...but but🥺but dont forget to add some cute romantic moments of NeeVik in comming tracks😳
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: coolfizzy

O MY MAHADEV!!!!

this Update made my day!!!!
I cn imagine Hrithvik n Neera...
OOOhhh!!!!
super exciting!!!
n earlier he ws nt ready 2 accept her as he ws nt comfortable...lekin last last ke part main aisa lagta nhi hai...
Both r so vry much in luv wid each othr [hope his time its nt like surya, i mean she always felt dat Hritik ws nt her etc etc...]
Hritvik z really fast...nw he hs a daughter too!
n nw i noe hw cum they'll hv so mny kids in future!
N nw wat will happen 2 Sunil???usne bhi o itne sapne sajaaye the???
well its ok...i don't actually care bout him...
N wat ws d bamn in d end??? curiosity z building up...
Try 2 Update soon...although i noe hw tough it wud've been 4 u...as e1 im hving my exams...
Last time...
It ws amazing...
Luking 4ward 2 ur next update...
Try 2 update soon :)


thanks for such a long comment,the bamn was something you have experienced in previous updates.he he he...
and sunil,well he is gonna make his come back soon.
and they have so many kids because neera never let him sleep in nights.poor hrithvik.bechara apne wives ke passion ka maara.😆

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