FANFIC:Pyaar ke Risthey

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SETTING : 16 YEARS AFTER MUKTI LEFT BAJAJ HOUSE. PREM AND DEBO ARE KICKED OUT OF THE HOUSE BY PRERNA. THE BAJA FAMILY IS HAPPY.

SNEHA IS MARRIED TO KARAN KAPOOR AND HAS A SON ROHIT

KASAK IS ALSO MARRIED AND HAS A DAUHTER KUSUM

TUSHAAR AND DORIS HAS A DAUGHTER ISHIKA

ANURAG AND SAM HAS A SON NAME RAJ

MUKTI LIVES IN NEW YORK WITH HER DAUGHTER ASHNA (16 YRS)

MUKTI NOW OWN AN EVENT MANAGEMENT COMPANY AND VERY SUCCESSFUL.

ASHNA IS A VERY BRIGHT BUBBLY AND LOVING GIRL. SHE IS A REBEL AND SHE DOES WHAT SHE FEELS LIKE DOING. SHE LOVES HER MOM A LOT AND TRIES TO LISTEN SOMETIMES.SHE IS LIKE PREM/UDI. WITH HER BLINK ACCESORRIES.


TO GIVE YOU GUYS AN IDEA....

MIDNIGHT NEW YORK

MUKTI OPENS AASHNA€™S ROOM DOOR

MUKTI slips into Ashna€™s bed and kisses her on her forehead.

Mukti: HAPPY BIRTHDAY ANGEL€..

Ashna: thank you mom

Mukti: wow you are 16 huh??

Ashna: yea I guess so

Mukti: did I tell u the story about how you came into this world?

Ashna: oh boy!!! Here it comes

Mukti: it was a winter night in the hospital. I could smell the wind blowing through the window. I was in pain. Then the doctor said here she comes. I saw a small head and then a little angel came into this world. She bought me my happiness and joy. HAPPY BIRTHDAY MY DARLING

Ashna: thank you mom

Ashna: hey mom whats for breakfast??

Mukti: all your favs

Ashna: thanks mom but I have a quiz today I gotta run ok

Mukti: ashna you have to eat b4 you go

Ashna : I promise I will come back and eat. My friends are waiting mom

Mukti: kya karungi is ladki ka?

In the evening there is a party for Ashna

She feels very incomplete that she has no idea about her dad. Mukti tends to ignore the aubject whenever Ashna brings it up.

Ashna to herself: I need to find out now. I am going to college soon and I need to know who I am.

Ashna: mom today you have to tell me about my father. Agar aap mujse nahi kahengi tho main ghar se challi jaungi

Mukti: ashna stop it, neine pehle hi kaha tumse don€™t ask me these kind of question

Ashna: fine I will go to India and find myself

Mukti realizes that she has to tell ashna the truth

Mukti: fine mein bathungi€

Mukti: your father€™s name is prem prerna sharma€..mukti tells ashna everything about her past.

Ashna: mom so much has happened to you aur aap ne mujse kabhi kuch nahi kaha. Mein aapki best friend hu na??

Mutki: I am sorry beta. Jo aadhmi muje kuch nahi de saka who tumhe kya dega??

Ashna: mom but he doesn€™t even know I exists

Mukti: it doesn€™t matter ashna€

Ashna in school

Ashna€™s best friend/boyfriend Rohit

Rohit: hey sweetheart whats up??

Ashna: well nothing much...we are late to class..

Rohit: tell me something new

Ashna: hey rohit can you help me with something

Rohit: you did something again??

Ashna: no I didn€™t but I am going to

Rohit: what??

Ashna: I have to go to India??

Rohit: what???????? Are you nuts??

Ashna: come to the computer lab with me

Ashna goes and searches prem€™s name in google and she finds out that prem own KP industries in India

Ashna: wow got it€.ok dude I am off to India now

Rohit: hey summer is gonna start€what about our plans

Ashna: rohit understand na this is important. I need to find out about my father.

Rohit: ok fine but whatif aunty asks me€.

Ashna: well keep your mouth shut until I reach India

Rohit: you will get me killed one day

Ashna: come on be my best friend/boyfriend for once

Rohit: you say that all the time

Ashna: come on rohit

Mukti comes home after a long day

Mukti: Ashna you home??

She searches for ashna everywhere and then finds a letter

Dear Mom

I know you will be really mad when you find this letter but you need to understand that I have to know my father. I am going to India and find and get to know my dad. I will call you from there. Please don€™t come running after me. I promise I will take care of myself.

Love you

Aashna

Mukti: oh god kya karo is ladki ka??

KP INDUSTRIES

Prem: what happen about the new contract??

Debo: don€™t worry we will get it

Prem: ok keep working on it.

Ashna reaches India and takes a cab to KP industries

Ashna to the security

Ashna: Hey I wanna meet my dad

Sec: dad who€

Ashna: Prem Sharma

Sec: what??

Ashna: hey listen oldy€is he there??

Sec: he left for home

Ashna: give me his house address

The security doesn€™t wanna deal with ashna so he gives her the address

Ashna takes a cab and goes to Prem€™s house.

She walks right past the door and sits in the living room

Maid: aap kaun hai?? Yaha kya kar rahi hai?

Ashna: listen, first get me some sandwiches and something to drink ok

Maid: kya?

Ashna: why do u ask too many questions??

Debo: kaun hai??

Ashna: oh hey€aap kaun hai??

Debo: you are in my house and you are asking me who am i??

Ashna: is mr.prem sharma home??

Debo: who are you and why do you want to meet prem?

Ashna: well that€™s between me and mr.prem sharma isn€™t it? So how about you go and call him.

Debo: how dare you?

Ashna: don€™t waste time ok

Just then prem comes

Prem: whats going on here? Who is this girl??

Ashna stares at him

Ashna: hey mr.prem?

Prem: yes??

Ashna: I am ashna prem prerna sharma

Prem: what???

Ashna: yes I know that€™s how I felt when I heard my full name too. Too long na?? well lets make it short ashna sharma

Prem: what are you talking about?

Ashna: well lets make it short. I am your daughter

Debo: what?? Are you crazy??

Ashna: I told you before€plz don€™t come in between.

Prem: I think you have made a mistake. I don€™t have any daughter.

Ashna: Well I know€.thats you don€™t know u have a daughter. I found out few days ago too and I was so shocked

Prem: yeh ladki pagal hai. Send her away

Ashna: can€™t send me away and I won€™t go away

Prem: are insane??

Ashna: well listen€I think I should call you dad now€

Prem: what??

Ashna: listen, if u need proff get a DNA test ok. You will know yourself

Debo: prem don€™t listen to this girl. I know these kinds of girls€.she is here for money

Ashna: listen€you whatever€.better stay away from me and my dad€.or I will have to kill you.

Prem: who sent you? Where is your mom

Ashna: well u should know my mom Mukti Deshmukh

Prem: mukti??

Ashna: now u know

Prem: you are mukti€™s daughter?

Ashna: yours too€.

Debo: prem, don€™t listen to her, mukti sent her for revenge. U know these middle class ppl

Ashna: you don€™t want me to open my mouth ok.

Ashna: anywayz€.listen, I am hungry I hardly eat anything so if you all can stop with questions I want to eat something.

Ashna: you are the maid right€.where are my sandwiches??

Maid: I will get it

Ashna: good

Prem is confused. Mukti€™s daughter??

Ashna: dad €..

Prem: don€™t call me dad

Ashna: dad ko dad na bollu ho kya kahu?/

Prem: oh god€

Ashna: listen dad don€™t think too much. We can get a dna test tomorrow and solve everything. I a hungry now let me eat and then call my mom before she takes flight and comes here. My mom is a real mother India. Well if you excuse me can I use your phone.

Ashna goes and calls her mom

Ashna: hey mom how r ya??

Mukti: ashna where are you? I want you to be at home now

Ashna: mom that€™s impossible. I am in India. Even if I take flight home now I will be it will take me 24 hrs to be home.

Mukti: ashna why did u do this?

Ashna: mom I gave u the reason. Dad is all confused. I mean I know he would be he will be ok

Mukti: ashna give the phone to prem now

Ashna: dad mom on the line

Prem: hello

Mukti: prem€..put her on a flight and send her back to new york now.

Prem: mukti??......she feels emotional after listening to her voice after a long time.

Mukti is just worried about ashna

Mukti: prem, she is a kid she has no idea what she is doing. Please send her back.

Prem: is it true? Is she my??

Mukti: prem plz€understand send her back

Prem: you answer me€.is she my kid??

Mukti: yes she is€..so what??

Prem: how could you??

Mukti: how could I what? You didn€™t care for me€.how could I think that you would care for my daughter?

Prem gives the phone to ashna

Ashna: mom chill€.i am fine. Dad is here to take care of me. I will handle myself. Please don€™t call me all the time and bother I will call you if I need something.

Prem and Debo are sitting and thinking

Ashna is busy eating€..

Ashna: oh god€why are you two so sad. Hey listen. I need to crash I am really tired. Where is my room??

Debo: you will stay here??

Ashna: yeaa€.is that something to ask? BTW who are you??

Prem to the maid: Is ka sanam upar kamre mein rakho

Ashna: oh yea dad€.can I use the internet. I need to write a mail to my boyfriend.

Prem: boyfriend??

Ashna: well he is mostly my best friend€anywayz€don€™t get all protective now.

Prem: you can use my laptop

Ashna: thanks and good night

Debo: prem are you crazy, how do u know she is your daughter?

Prem: because mukti won€™t lie to me

Debo: how can you trust her like this.

Prem: because I can

Debo : kuch socho€.ithne saalon ke bath

Prem: I will get a DNA test tomorrow.

MORNING

MUSIC BLASTING OFF FROM ASHNA€™S ROOM

Prem: whats going on??

Prem comes out side

Maid: sir, wooh ashna€.

Prem goes to ashna€™s room

Ashna is checking her mail and the music is blasting off

Prem comes and shuts off the music

Ashna: good morning dad

Prem: good morning, get ready I have to take you somewhere.

Just then debo comes

Debo to herself: I know that this is prem€™s daughter but it can€™t be. I need to do something.

Prem and Ashna go to the hospital

Ashna is looking out of the window

Ashna: oh god there are animals on the street

Prem: yea

Ashna: don€™t you have animal shelters??

Prem: well this is India

Ashna: oh k€€sure

Prem: is this your first time in India?

Ashna: yea€.i always wanted to come but mom never lets me

Prem: oh k

Prem is mostly quite through out

They reach the hospital and they give in the samples. The doctor says to come back tomorrow for results.

Prem: I will have to go to office. I driver will take you home.

In the evening

Prem comes home

Prem: ashna kaha hai

Debo: garden mein

Prem goes to the garden

Ashna: is on the phone

Ashna: hey darling I am fine. I miss you too. Well u know why I am here. Why don€™t you also come to India. We will have a blast.

Ashna sees Prem

Ashna: I gotta go now€.laterz

Prem: hhhhm€.how are you

Ashna: I am good

Prem: good€did u eat?

Ashna: yea I did

Prem: we r going out for dinner. Would you like to join?

Ashna: sure why not?

Prem ashna and debo go out for dinner

Prem: what would you like to have?

Ashna: I want rasgulas

Prem remembers how much he likes rasgulas

Prem: sure but have some dinner first

Ashna: well. Something w/o spice

Prem: ok sure

They all eat

Ashna: dad wanna dance??

Prem: that€™s ok I am good

Ashna: oh k suit yourself. I am off to dance

Ashna is dancing alone and enjoying herself. Just then prem sees that some guys is trying to dance with ashna

Prem goes on to the dance floor

Prem: ashna we have to go

Ashna: ok sure

They all come home

Ashna: I gotta call mom

Ashna: good morning mom

Mukti: good morning, how r u?

Ashna: I am good mom, I just came back home from dinner

Prem answers the parallel line and listens to the conversation.

Mukti: ashna I want you to come home

Ashna: mom I can€™t make me do what I don€™t wanna do

Mukti: ashna now u know who your dad is€so just come home

Ashna: mom if you keep saying I same thing I am not going to call you

Mukti: ok fine. Listen get a cell phone and I want to be in touch with you.

Ashna: ok mom I will ask dad for a cell tomorrow.

Mukti: you have your debit cards, use them and get a phone.

Ashna: ok mom sure I gotta sleep good night

Mukti: drink a glass of milk before you sleep. Turn your bedlight on if not you will get nightmares. Don€™t forget to say a prayer.

Ashna: mom I know€.plz€good night

Prem smiles listening to the conversation.

Next day prem and ashna go to the hospital to get the results.

Prem: doctor I am here to pick up the results

Doctor: prem I am sorry but the results are negative

Prem: what?? That€™s not possible

Prem leaves feeling sad

Ashna has no idea what to do

Prem takes ashna home

Ashna figures something is wrong.

Ashna goes to the hospital and sees that debonita is giving money to the doctor.

Debonita: I knew that girl was lying.

Prem is quite

Just then ashna comes in

Ashna: oh really?? I told you before not to come between me and my dad. Well u didn€™t listen.

Prem: what are you talking about.

Ashna: well, your€whatever she is€gave money to the doctor and changed the reports.

Debo: that€™s not true€.khoot bol rahi hai yeh

Ashna: oh really?? Well if that€™s not true then whats this video all about

Ashna shows the video from her cell phone to prem

Debonita is shocked and scared

Ashna: these are the real reports and according to them I am your daughter.

Prem is furious

Debo: prem meri bath suno

Prem: you get lost from here before I do something

Debo leaves.

Prem goes up to€..ashna

Ashna: oh no plz no melodrama

Prem: I am sorry

Ashna: that€™s ok€bade bade dekhon mein aisi choti choti bathein hothi rehthi hai

Prem: huh??

Ashna: ddlj??...oh no€I gotta teach u so much.

MORNING

Prem to the Maid : ashna kaha hai??

Maid: air who subah se neechey nahi aayi

Prem: tumne utaya nahi

Maid: no sir

Prem: ok let go and check on her

Prem goes to ashna€™s room

Prem: ashna??

Ashna is sleeping

Prem tries to wake her up and realizes that she has high fever

Prem: omg!!!

Prem: doctor ko bulaoo fast

The doctor comes

Prem: doctor howz she??

Doctor: well, its just fever, I think because of the climate change. I gave her an injection, she will be fine. Give her these medicine every 4 hrs.

Prem: ok doctor

Prem sites next to ashna and gives her medicines

Ashna gets up and sees that prem is sleeping in a chair beside her.

Prem gets up

Prem: kaisi ho??

Ashna: I am good

Prem: don€™t get up. You need to rest.

Ashna: dad its just fever, I will be fine

Prem: no u shouln€™t

Ashna: can I atleast go to the bathroom?

Prem: oh k

Ashna gets better

Ashna: dad, I want you to have something

Prem: what??

Ashna: these are some pictures of me when I was small. I want u to have them.

Prem: oh k

Prem sees the pictures and his eyes are filled with tears. There are photos of Mukti and ashna.

Prem gets up and leaves

DINNER AT A RESTURANT

Prem and Ashna are having dinner

Just then Prerna comes in with Mr.Bajaj

They all bump into eachother

Prem: hello Mother India

Prerna: hello

Ashna: Hai I am ashna€

Prerna: Yeh kaun hai??

Prem is quite

Ashna: I am his daughter, ashna prem prerna sharma

Prerna: beti? Tumhari??

Prem: we have to go. He told ashna€™s hand and takes her home.

Ashna: what happen?? Did I do something?

Prem: nope nothing, go to your room.

Bajaj House

Prerna: Mr. Bajaj I am worried? Who ladki kaun thi? Why did she say she is prem€™s daughter?

Mr.Bajaj: I don€™t know prerna.

Prerna: I need to know whats going on.

Prerna goes to Prem€™s House

Ashna is sitting in the living room

Prerna comes in

Ashna: oh hai, may I help you?

Prerna just stares at ashna

Ashna: oh yea we met yesterday. Hey I am ashna€

Prerna: tum??

Ashna: well this is my dad€™s house

Prerna: dad??

Ashna: aap kaun hai??

Prerna: Main Prem ki mom hoon

Ashna: oh really?? Wow? That€™s mean you are my dadi

Prerna: dadi??

Prem comes down staris

Prem: mother India? Aap yaha kya kar rahi hai?

Prerna: prem yeh ladki kaun hai aur yeh tumhe dad kyu keh rahi hai

Prem: yeh meri beti hai

Prerna: tumhari beti kaha se aayi hai

Ashna: oh god, why do you guys keep questioning eachother. Ask me I will answer. Hey I am ashna prem prerna sharma. I am Mukti€™s daughter from new york. This is my dad.

Prerna: mukti? Mukti Ki beti??

Ashna: yes€.

Prem is just standing there quietly

Prerna: tumhe yeh kab patha challa??

Prem: kuch din pehlo and why do you care

Prerna: Yeh meri pothi hai. Tum keh rahe ho why do I care? Ithni badi bath ho gayi and you didn€™t bother to tell us

Prem: well I thought we r not on speaking terms

Ashna: one more family drama. God€..

Prem: ashna€

Ashna: oh k sorry continue.

Prerna: mein esse apne ghar le ja rahi hoon

Prem: what? Yeh meri beti hai and she wil live right here

Prerna: yeh meri pothi hai

Ashna: wait a min, what going on? Why are you two fighting

Prem: be out of this

Ashna: ok hold on, I am not a thing that you guys will decide who will take me. Dad, can I go with Dadi ?

Prem: what?? Tum kahi nahi jaaoge

Ashna: not forever, I will come back in the evening. I have my cell I will call you to pick me up.

Prem: oh k

Prerna goes up to ashna and hugs her.

Prerna: aisa lagtha hai ki meri mukti aa gayi hai

Ashna: ok good grandma can we go now??

Prerna takes ashna to Bajaj House

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OUTSIDE BAJAJ HOUSE

Everyone are in the living room

Prerna: tum yehi ruko

Ashna: ok dadi

Prerna goes inside and tells bijju kaka to bring the puja thalli

Prerna does her ritual and brings ashna home

Prerna: Mr.Bajaj yeh Ashna hai, Prem aur Mukti Ki beti

Mr.Bajaj: kya??

Prerna: haa Mr.Bajaj yeh hamari pothi hai

Mr.Bajaj goes upto ashna and hugs her

Prerna introduces ashna to everyone.

Sneha: Mukti kaisi hai

Ashna: mom is fine.

Prerna: tum kab aayi beta

Ashna: bahut days ho gaye.

Prerna: ab tum hamare saath raho

Ashna: no dadi, sorry dad mere wait kar rahe hongey

Prerna: oh k

Ashna calls prem

Prem: hello

Ashna: dad can you pick me up??

Prem: ok fine I will send the driver

Ashna comes home

Ashna: hey dad, guess what I met everyone. I didn€™t know you had such a big family. I have so many cousins.

Prem: oh k good.

Debo: well, we don€™t talk to that family and its better to keep away from them

Ashna: well, they are my family and dadi bahut pyari hai. So guess what aunty, I will go there. And please don€™t tell me what to do. Thank you very much.

Debo: god baap pe gayi hai

Prem smiles

Ashna: god I am so sleepy dadi made me eat so much. Ok good night everyone.

Prem: good night


Next morning

BREAKFAST TABLE

Ashna: good morning paa

Prem: good morning

Ashna: what are your plans today

Prem: office

Ashna: god your life is so boring like moms. Tum log ithna kaam kyu karthey ho?

Prem smiles€.he remembers how he was

Maid: ashna beti tumhara phone hai

Ashna: wow I am so famous

Ashna: hello?

Prerna: ashna, mein tumhare liye car bej rahi hoon tum aaj ghar aana

Ashna: par dadi

Prerna: mein kuch sunna nahi chathi

Ashna: oh k I will be there

Prerna: good girl

Ashna: ab mein breakfast karlu

Prerna: ok bye beta

Ashna: paa€apki mom na€she is mother India senior.i thought my mom was like that. Yeh tho unse bhi danger nikli

Prem laughs

Ashna: dadi mere liye car bej rahi hai€can I go?

Prem: its up to u

Ashna: ok cool..

Ashna goes to bajaj house

Prerna: arre ashna€aao come sit

Ashna thanks dadi

Mr.bajaj: ashna tell me about your mom and everything

Ashna: well dadu€.mom moved to new york before I was born. I was born a month after she landed in new york. Mom owns a event management company.

Prerna is very happy to hear all this.

Ashna spends the whole day with the family and goes home in the evening.

Prem: how was your day

Ashna: dad dadi kitna khilathi hai??

Prem: oh yea I know

Ashna: well I am tired I am off to bed

Prem: your mom called

Ashna: ok I will call her

Ashna: hello mom

Mukti: ashna why aren€™t you calling??

Ashna: mom mein dadi ke ghar gayi thi

Mukti: dadi?? Chotima??

Ashna: yea€

Mukti: kaisi hai who

Ashna: she is good mom. Mom I am tired good nite. Here talk to dad

Mukti: ashna€.

Prem: hello

Mukti hello

Prem: kaisi ho

Mukti: mein teek hoon..i am running late bye€she hangs up


OFFICE

Prem: I would like to write some of my property on my daughter€™s name.

Lawyer: sure sir I will do the paper work and bring it to you.

Debo listens to this

Debo: I need to do something before this girl takes over everything.

Prem has a product launch party

Everyone is having fun at the party

Ashna is enjoying herself and prem is introducing her to everyone.

Ashna : paa I gotta go to the restroom

Prem: ok

After a while there is smoke

Prem: whats wrong??

Guy: sir there is fire in the restroom we need to vacate this place

Prem: restroom€OMG!!! ASHNA

Prem runs and sees that ashna is stuck inside

Prem jumps into the fire and rescues her

Prem takes Ashna to the hospital

The news is on the tv

Prerna comes running to the hospital

Prerna: prem ashna kaisi hai

Prem: ab tak kuch nahi patha, she is in the OT

Prerna: yeh sab kaise hua??

Prem: patha nahi

Prem: has tears in his eyes

Prerna is crying

Prem calls mukti

Mukti: hello

Prem: mukti? Ashna??

Mukti: kya hua ashna ko??

Prem: woohh ek accident

Mukti: what?? I am coming

Mukti reaches India

Mukti runs to the hospital

Prem sees mukti and he is shocked the way she looks

He looks much more pretty.

Mukti: kaha hai meri beti??

Prem: she is in the icu

Mukti: what? I knew it€tum usse maar daloge

Prem: kya??

Mukti: how did this happen? How did u let this happen? Who bachi hai prem

Prerna: mukti control yourself

Mukti: chotima, ashna meri zindagi hai. Main uske bina nahi reh sakthi

Just then the doctor comes out

Doctor: she is out of danger you can go met her

Mukti runs inside everyone follow her

Mukti sees her and starts crying

Mukti: ashna?? Open your eyes

Prem is next to the bed too

Ashna slowly opens her eyes

Mukti: ashna€

Ashna: mom??

Mukti mukti kisses ashna. Meri bachi€.i am here now. Kuch nahi hoga tumhe

Ashna: mom I got so scared

Mukti: I know jaan€.you are fine now

Everyone has tears in their eyes.

Doctor: she is fine now you can take her home.

Prem: thanks doctor

Mukti: no she won€™t go with you. I will take her to a hotel

Prem: she is my daughter too and she will go to my house

Mukti has no choice

Prem : carries ashna and takes her home

Ashna is in her bedroom

Mukti: thanks

Prem: its ok

Mukti goes to ashna€™s room

Mukti: howz my baby??

Ashna: I am fine mom.

Mukti: I told you not to come here. Tum meri bath nahi sunthi

Ashna: mom plz don€™t start

Mukti: ok fine€.we are going home in 2 days

Ashna: mom plz€

Mutki: I don€™t wanna listen to anything ashna.

Ashna: mom you can€™t take me.

Mukti: u know what€.between us we always have democracy€.we never did anything which one was us were against but now I think I should pull the mom card out. We are leaving tomorrow and that€™s it. I don€™t wanna listen to anything.

Ashna: we will see

Mukti: oh yea we will

Mukti leaves the room

Prem: mukti tum

Mukti: you stay out of this


Next day

Prerna comes to Prem€™s house

Prerna: ashna kaisi hai??

Mukti: she is fine chotima

Prerna: ashna kaisi ho beta

Ashna: I am fine dadi

Mukti: chotima hum dono evening ki flight se ja rahe hai

Prerna: kya? Tum asise kaisa kar sakthi ho

Mukti: chotima, mujhe patha hai ki who fire kuch accident nahi tha. Kissi ne karwaya hai aur mein apni beti ko khona nahi chathi.

Prerna: par mukti

Mukti: chotima plz

Ashna: mom

Mukti: ashna, I told you before and I am telling you now. I am doing this for your own good

Prerna: teek hai mukti jot um teek samjo.pay ek baar mere saath ghar aaoo

Prerna takes mukti and ashna home

Mukti meets everyone and in the evening they go to airport

Prem comes to the airport too

Ashna is telling bye to everyone

Ashna: dad thanks so much

Prem: nahi beta€
Ashna hugs prem

Prem has tears in his eyes. In these days unknowingly he became close to ashna.

Ashna: paa take care bye

Prem: bye
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Posted: 18 years ago
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cooll man u updated so soon ..... continue soon
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Posted: 18 years ago
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very good start its a good fanfiction do count soon 👏 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
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omg that is so gud plz continue soon 👏
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wow 👏 plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz continue soon! it was awesome!!
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Posted: 18 years ago
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awesome 👏
plz cont soon
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Posted: 18 years ago
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wow jus read da ff n it's great ur an amazing writer jus had a question i was wonderin if ur da sam person who wrote da kahbi alvida na kehna ff anyways continue soon can't wait 2 read da next part
Edited by mandy07 - 18 years ago

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