New OS:It's all your fault!! - Page 8

cute os 👏 👏 👏

Edited by -Sunset- - 11 years ago

Second time around that I read this and I loved it! still an adorable treat to read!!!

Superb Job both of you...Really👏. Khushi forbidden from Jalebi and how hard for her especially when Arnav is not there...Wow I like the dialogues n second part its really awesome👍🏼. End part like camera is starts to not to focus them...like Khushi blaberring about childhood memories and Chef Arnav listening to her with love concern and presenting her the most precious dishes to her .She must be most happy that she was presenting by Jalebi's present by her most valuable person.I can imagine all these things