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Tina

@mtina0207

Dazzler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#31

Originally posted by: -Sadi-
It was really really beautiful and awesome OS... loved the story...awesome

Thank you so much dearieee...:)

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Tina

@mtina0207

Dazzler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#32

Originally posted by: Omoraboti
"Long enuf?" - you got me hyperventilating there & what followed did not make me any better! 😆

WOW...That was good i guess

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Tina

@mtina0207

Dazzler

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#33

Originally posted by: ASRandKKGSRFan
Hey!

This was a really great OS! And as for writing any other OS's, I'd say yesss! Go for it! You clearly have a lot of talent, so why let it go to waste 😃.

The way in which Arnav goes after Khushi is amaaazing. I mean you can literally imagine it playing out 😉. I'm glad that Arnav here actually wants to marry Khushi after having sex with her, whereas in many OS's that didn't happen. This was a happy and exciting OS.

Please continue to write more and if you do, then please PM me. Thanks!

Thanks dear...I will try...but in OSs i think the scope for detail is very less, which is the fun in story telling. but lets see if i can put up with something more. will surely PM u

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Tina

@mtina0207

Dazzler

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#34

Originally posted by: natalie12
really calming on sundays.
very romantic.
but dont u think arnav was too quick in his decisions??
that khuhsi gave up too quick??
i know this is not an ss to point out details.but just saying.

Yes it was...that is what i was trying to depict, that once ur heart knoiws tat the other person is the soulmate, there is no fear or hesitation in anything and there is no sense of right or wrong.. Thnk u for the comment

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roshaan

@roshaan

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#35

awesum beautiful os it was indeed a sunday trest for me thx for pm

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Shivani Priyam

@Shivani_Priyam

Navigator

Posted: 13 years ago

#36

Firstly Tina never never on this planet give up writing 'cause you do that BLOODY AMAZING!!!!And the OS was fantastic. No wonder Arnav was all smitten and was on mission. Could you continue it please!!!!

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Tina

@mtina0207

Dazzler

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#37

Originally posted by: Shivani_Priyam
Firstly Tina never never on this planet give up writing 'cause you do that BLOODY AMAZING!!!!And the OS was fantastic. No wonder Arnav was all smitten and was on mission. Could you continue it please!!!!

Hey Shivani. thank you soo soos much for beautiful words. Iam hardly a writer to give up writing. Started this FF?SS (thats the first ever anything that i have written) and am so blessed that its liked by so many.

with regards to continue this...i think i will make an SS on smilar theme seperately or try and continue this sometime in Novemebt. Currently wanna finish the one am writing as in 5th of October i wont get time to breathe and dont wanna keep people dangling.

so promise will see what i can do...

thanks for loving my work...ur response literally overwhelms me

Mwah

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chavvi16

@chavvi16

Stunner

Posted: 13 years ago

#38

Well if I thought you write your ff brilliantly this is even better
Man that was something
He just fell in love cut out the dating bit went straight to making love to her and then proposed her in his friends wedding
Dude was that a short cut or what
Amazing.that was no really
Hope you come with more OS like this