MG FF-Twisty Deewangi THD 3 THREAD 4 LINK Pg 141 - Page 50

Originally posted by: $ara_$hachi

@Ruchs, a 'hatke' part indeed. Kaafila jaldi update kariyo, that too a long part.

Maan ki Jaan is crying 'ganga jamuna' coz of Maan's possessiveness. Kya dekhne layak scene tha. Awe, whole family is gone but loved the starting of Maneet's drama. The 'farewell' scene was awesome. Each & every word was amazing, indeed. Ruchs, what to say more. Can't have enough either of them or you. Sara, loved it. Every ounce of it.

Do cont soon & do PM me.

A big thank you to all the lovely 131 people who liked the update!! A big hug to all the sweet people who left such encouraging comments!! Thank you so much dears!!😳

Am sorry for the extreme delay!! me holding ears!! Sholly!! Hope this update makes up for the delay!!😉

This update is dedicated to Mel, its only because of her that me got some time to type out this update over the last few days as she helped me with my college work!!!😳

Pweez drop my a message if you would like PMs dear!!😳

PART - 52

He made a baby face and looked at Geet for help but all he was awarded was with an angry pout from her... he sighed knowing that it was time to bear punishment for his behavior... Actually he didn't mind as he could do anything to make his Jaanoo happy once again...

Papaji awarded Maan with an angry glare and escorted Geet downstairs, soothing and consoling her all the way… Dadima and Rano who were clearing the breakfast table got alarmed seeing Geet like this and immediately rushed to her…

Papaji made Geet sit on the sofa while Rano hurriedly got a glass of water…

"Kya hua beta??? Hamari Geet aise ro kyun rahi hai??" Dadima asked getting worried by the second, as Geet's tears were nowhere near stopping…

"Yeh baat aap apney laadley potey se poochiye…" Mohinder replied angrily…

Maan also came following them, literally running behind them after he got out from the shock of Mohinder's anger…

"Geet… Geet… Jaan meri baat toh suno… Am Sorry…" Maan tried to pacify Geet kneeling down in front of a still hiccupping Geet, he tried to hold Geet's hand, but gulped and immediately retreated his hand back seeing Papaji's stern glare…

"Aapney aisa kya kiya Maan bete ki Geet iss tarah ro rahi hai???" Dadima reprimanded Maan…

"Arrey aap sab iss tarah se Maan par kyun chaddh rahey hain… Aap log toh jaantey hai na Geet ko… Chhoti chhoti baatein dil sey lagaa leti hai… Maan ko kuchh bataney ka mauka toh dijiye…" Rano supported Maan who himself was nearly in tears by now…

Maan silently thanked his Rano Ma, and saw that now everyone was looking at him expectantly… He cleared his throat and explained in a small voice how Geet told him about those idiots who tried to propose her, and how he couldn't stand it… His face turned red in anger once again while mentioning them…

He looked up to see everyone's reactions… Geet just turned her face away still pouting while Rano and Dadima muffled their laughter knowing well how possessive Maan is about Geet… Then finally he looked at Papaji but to his disappointment his face was absolutely expressionless…

Maan sighed dejectedly and hung his head low… Had he waited for a few more seconds, he would have seen the hidden laughter in Papaji's eyes!!!

"Hmmm… Abb galti ki hai toh sazaa toh milegi…" Papaji said with a straight face…

"Nahi nahi Maan ne koi galti nahi ki… Maan Singh Khurana can never be wrong…" Geet said proudly making everyone surprised and astonished specially Maan…

"Ohh toh phir aap unsey gussa nahi hai???" Dadima asked…

"Gussa hun…" Geet said cutely…

Now everyone was confused, on one side Geet is still angry on the other side she says that Maan cant be wrong??? Now what should they do???

"Achchha toh tum hi bata do ki Maan aisa kya karey ki tum maan jaao…" Rano asked Geet frustrated, after everyone gave up on any idea…

"Mujhe nahi pata…"

"WHHHAATTT???"The trio exclaimed shocked… If she doesn't know that who does???

Everyone racked their brains and finally Mohinder said…

" Chalo Maan lets do one thing young man… You do 100 sit ups… Okay??? That will be your sazaa…"

Maan agreed immediately and started doing sit ups… He got a sense of Dj vu remembering Geet's counting when last time he and Vicky were made to do sit ups… He shuddered hoping Geet doesn't start her out of the world counting this time or else he is gone!!

"Nahi nahi!!! Stop!!!" Geet shouted jumping off from the sofa and holding Maan's hand stopping him from continuing further… Geet jumped with such an impact that poor Papaji almost fell off the sofa!!!!

"Yeh aapne kya kiya Papaji??? Aapne mere Maan ko sazaa kaise di???" Geet said getting very angry on her Papaji…

Dadima, Rano, Maan and above all Papaji looked at her shocked!!! None of them knew how to react to this Maan ki Deewani!!!

"Jaao am not going to talk to you…" Geet said turning her face away…

"Par puttar main toh sirf…" Papaji tried to explain himself but shut up immediately seeing his daughter's angry eyes…

Till date no one had seen Geet getting angry on her Papaji!!! But today her Papaji did a huge mistake… oops correction… a disaster by punishing her Maan…

Papaji immediately held his ears and started doing sit ups to make up for his mistake… Rano, Dadima and Maan had their mouth hanging open with shock seeing Mohinder actually doing SIT UPS!!!

"Arrey Waah!!! Kitne sonney lag rahey hain aise!!" Rano giggled getting excited…

Geet waited for him to finish five sit-ups but didn't have the heart to punish him beyond that and stopped him and hugged him!!! Everyone chuckled seeing their adorable cutie who cant remain angry with anyone for long…

Maan came forward to hug her too but he was taken aback when he was awarded with another angry glare…

"Main abhi bhi gussa hun…" Geet declared and left stomping her feet on the way!!

All of them looked at each other and burst out laughing knowing well her Jhoota gussa!!!

EVENING

Maan was working hard on making the chocolate truffle cake to manayofy his Jaan!! He knew that she wasn't angry on him any more but he loved to pamper his little wify!!! His cake was almost done and now he was setting it, decorating it with chocolate sauce and his Jaan's favorite Gems!!!

He took the icing cone and lovingly wrote 'Love you Jaanoo' in his beautiful handwriting which his little wify adored so much!!!

He kept the cake in a box and made his way towards his room silently making sure that no one was seeing him… He didn't want to become the recipient of his family's teasing later on… But unknown to him three prying eyes had witnessed his lovely cooking skills and none of them had even thought for a while about teasing!! The two ladies were busy wiping their tears of joy as their kids were once again heading towards the happy life they deserved, while the fatherly figure felt his chest broaden with pride for his lovely son-in-law!! His daughter could have never got anything better!!!

MAANEET's ROOM

Geet was busy working on something since morning!!! She had all her color pencils and HB pencils strewn all over the bed and she herself was sprawled on the giant pillow, busy sketching something in her sketchbook!!

Maan silently made his way towards his wify trying to peep in her sketchbook wondering what was she doing since last few hours but our little wify was aware of his presence even before he had entered the room so she cleverly hid the page and opened a fresh one!!

Maan sighed noticing his wify had changed the page and crept near her ear and whispered "Surprise!!!" taking her by surprise!!

Geet immediately turned and saw that her drop dead gorgeous husband was holding a box type of utensil in his hand!!

"Mere liye???" She squealed in delight while snatching away the box even before Maan could answer!!

Geet's eyes glistened with delight seeing the yummilicious cake and of course the even yummier gems!!! She moved ahead and gave Maan a giant hug sitting on her knees while balancing the cake in one hand!!

"I love you…. love you… love you… love you a lot!!!!!" She shouted in his ear and immediately started eating the cake without even bothering to actually cut it properly…

"Arrey Geet… isse kaat toh lo…" Maan chided her but his plea fell on deaf ears…

She first ate up all the Gems and Maan grinned knowing how much she loves them… She kept one aside for him and made him eat it lovingly!! Then she licked away all the cream while Maan was having a hard time controlling himself and had to look away!! Then she tore small pieces from the cake and ate them moaning in delight!!

Poor Maan cursed himself for this idea as all these sinful images and sounds were giving him a hard time!! He really wanted to have her there and then but had to control himself for the sake of the babies!!

She offered him a piece sweetly with her cream filled fingers which Maan gladly accepted… In the process helping her by licking her fingers clean as well, making her apple red!!!

"Bas… Geet abb baaki ka kal…" Maan warned and took the semi-finished cake from her!!

Geet pouted!! And snatched the cake away from him…

"Now don't make those baby faces dear… Itna saara sweet ekk saath is not good for the babies…"

Geet half-heartedly agreed at the mention of her babies!! And got off the bed to wash her face which was full of chocolate!! But Maan had other plans….

PRECAP

Sasha!!!! He he!!!!😆

The POLICE STATEMENT!!!

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

PREV - PART 51 NEXT -PART 53

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

Hope you all liked the update dears!! Me hoping that me was able to revive some Deewangi magic!!!

Me waiting for your reviews!! Pweez do let me know honestly if you felt me lacked somewhere!!!😳

You can find catch me and my work at my blog too- Ruchi's DEN!!!!

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

and hit the like button!!!!

Ruchi….😳

awww lovely naughty update yar muahhh

nice update

update geet cute never be angry on anyone and maan cake geet eating

Awesome awesome update...
Loves it so much
Haye innocent geet couldn't c her maan getting punished...
Love their family moments
Eagarly waiting for next...
Pls contionue soon

hahaha owesome update
rogfflz i loved dat part whn rano said mohinder hayee kinne cute lagh rahe hai buhahahaaa

amazing update