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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: sona-rai

waiting yar
my net is also not working properly


Hate these net providers!! Am really fed up from last many months but saki ek jaisi haalat hai...😭
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: ruchs


Hate these net providers!! Am really fed up from last many months but saki ek jaisi haalat hai...😭

from last month my net is giving me error saying "UNRESPONSIVE DSL"grrr😡speed to hai hi nahi 😡i'll refresh 1 page 10 times
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Posted: 12 years ago


Wowie!! Me got 141 likes!!! Am very very happy!! Thank you so much dears!!😳

An even bigger thank you to all the people who left me such awesome comments!! They really motivate me to write more!! As a treat, me is leaving a note at the end of the update!!!😉

Hope you like the update dears!! If you think anything is amiss, then please let me know!!😳

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PART - 53


While Geet went to the washroom to freshen up, Maan immediately took out the small box wrapped in a cute Minnie mouse gift-wrap from his pant pocket... He placed a little kiss on it and kept it on Geet's pillow!! As soon as he heard the lock of bathroom click open, he hurriedly cleared up the mess that Geet had created and rushed out of the room before Geet came out!!

Geet came out wiping her face with a towel, she kept the towel on the rim of the dressing table and looked around… She was surprised to find Maan missing, her eyes immediately drafted towards the place where the delicious cake was hoping that she could grab a bite or two before Maan noticed but was disappointed!!

"Babaji!! Yeh Maan bhi na kabhi kuchh nahi bhultey… Agar cake yahi chhod jaatey toh unka kya jaata???" She pouted!!

Maan, who was hiding behind the door, chuckled seeing his little wify's antics!!!

Geet then sat down on the bed deciding to read a few pages of the pregnancy books that Maan had got for her. She took the pillow to make herself comfortable when she noticed a box that fell down!! She picked it up and got extremely excited seeing a gift!!!

"Mere liye???" She asked to the gift!!

"Uff abbb yeh gift kabsey answer karney lagi???" Maan thought to himself and slapped his forehead wondering ki uski Jaan ka much nahi ho sakta!!

Geet gingerly opened the gift box, carefully opening each tape taking care not to tear the gift wrapper from any place while Maan grew impatient to see her reaction!! Finally she opened the last tape and took off the gift wrapper, she neatly folded it and kept it aside… At last she opened the box…

KHURANA CONSTRUCTION

Nothing was okay in KC since morning… A very important client was coming to finalize a project… It was a government project and thus didn't involve a lot of money but was very prestigious for the reputation of the company as it involved the construction of a world trade village… an integration of rural India with the world!!!

Sasha, who had been in charge of this project, was going berserk as she had just discovered that the blue prints of the project were not yet taken out, as the printer was not working yesterday… And now apparently the CD consisting of the blueprints had got damaged!!!

"How the hell is that possible???? Yeh CD kal maine khud CD protector mein daal kar MK ke cabin mein rakhi thi… Toh phir iss par itney scratches kaisey aa saktey hain???" Sasha was very puzzled and at the same time worried… MK had left a huge responsibility on her, trusting her… She couldn't disappoint him at any cost…

"Silly Me… Sasha uhh mera matlab hai ma'am… Aapne back up liya hoga na uss CD ka???" Tasha, Sasha's assistant chirped in….

"Yehi baat toh mere bhi samajh ke bahaar hai Tasha… Mere laptop ki ekk ekk file corrupt ho gayi hai… The damn machine has crashed…" Sasha sighed while keeping a hand on her aching temple…

"K… Kkk… Kyaa… he he he … abb hum kkkya karengge???" Adi stammered nervously…

"Abb toh hamarey paas ekk hi raasta hai…."

"Sasha… uhh silly me… Ma'am… Kaunsa raasta???"

"The one and only GMSK…"

Tasha and other team members were confused while Adi who understood gave his typical hyena laugh knowing well that only GMSK can save their skin and KC's reputation now!!

KHURANA MANSION

Just when Geet was about to open the box while Maan was waiting with baited breath, Geet's phone rang… Geet accidently dropped the box while Maan slapped his forehead once again… Geet picked up the box and kept it aside, and then she took her phone to answer the call… Maan was frustrated to no end; He glared at the oblivious Geet and then stormed off clearly very angry…

"Hello…"

"Geeettt"

Geet removed the phone immediately from her ear to save them from permanent damage!! She sighed and finally asked her over excited Bhabhi…

"Kya hua Sasha bhabhi???" Geet teased…. But she was instantly alarmed when she heard Sasha's story… She thought for a while then gave her an 'out of the world' idea before clicking the phone shut!!

"Hey babaji… Bass yeh idea kaam aa jaaye… Parr itney saarey coincidences ekk saath nahi ho saktey… Kahin koi aisa toh nahi hai ko nahi chahta ki hamari KC ko yeh project miley??? Mujhe office jaana chaiyeh waisey bhi its already five, I must leave fast…" Geet thought determinedly and then got up to freshen up completely forgetting about the poor box that lay forgotten on the bed!!!

MAAN's study

As soon as Maan left from there grumpily, Nakul announced the arrival of the police inspector to him… Maan requested the inspector to follow him to his study… He didn't want to remind his Jaan of all those horrifying incidents and the pain they had endured due to it, Geet was already not keeping too well and he didn't want to add to her stress!! But he was oblivious to the khhichdi his dear little wify and sis-in-law were pakayofying behind his back!!!

"Please be comfortable Sir…" Maan said after requesting the inspector, sub inspector and his two havaldars to have as seat on the sofas… He himself sat on the recliner cum sofa…

"So Mr. Khurana I guess abb humein saari formalities puri kar leni chaiyeh…"

"Jee inspector… Aap mujhe bataiye ki kya kya karna hai… Waise maine apney lawyer sey bhi baat kar li hai and he must be on his way…"

"Actually uski shaaya zaroorat nahi padegi because Brij ne kaafi had tak ikbaal-e-jurm yaani ki self confession kar liya hai…"

Maan was quite surprised to learn about this…

"That's great inspector… Mujhe bilkul ummeed nahi thi ki uske jaisa aadmi apney muh sey apne gunah kabool karega…"

"Abb jab police ki laathi aur third degree torture milta hai toh achchhey sey achchhey logon ka muh khul jaata hai…" Inspector smirked…

"Well so lets come to the point… Pehley main aapko wo saarey charges bata deta hoon jo Brij par lagey hain aur jo bhi karnaamey useny aur uskey kamine saathiyon ne kiye hai phir aap mujhe bata dijiyega if I miss out anything…"

Maan nodded agreeing as well as requesting the inspector to go ahead… Inspector signaled one of the havaldars who opened a big file that was in his hand and began…

"Brij Handa, son of Mr. Rajendra Handa, he had been a local goon since the age of sixteen, involved in honour killings taking place in his village Hoshiarpur… He was majorly involved in killing of Chaani, a local girl who had married her boyfriend against her parents wishes…"

Maan was actually not surprised to hear this… He had a fair idea about it as once Geet had mentioned about her friend Chaani and what all Rajji told her, when he had asked her why she hated Hoshiyarpur so much!!

"… At the age of 18, he along with his father Mr. Rajendra Handa had duped Mrs. Rano Handa and her daughter Miss. Geet Handa of their property and above all their home, Handa Mansion, taking advantage of the apparent demise of Mr. Mohinder Handa…"

Maan's eyes turned red at this, as he clearly remembered the time when he had seen his Rano Ma so helpless and his innocent wify coming in terms with this money sucking cruel world… How those leeches had gone to the extent of trying to separate him from his Geet!!!

"… Mr Brij has also confessed that the brakes of Mr. Mohinder Handa's car had been tampered by him and his father, and some technical faults had been created because of which there was a blast in the car…"

"WHAT??? Yeh aap KYA KEH RAHEY HAIN???" Maan was shocked out of his wits… it was not an accident, it was an attempt to murder????

PRECAP

Some Major Revelations in the Report!!

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PREV -PART 52 NEXT -PART 54

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Edited by ruchs - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
It ws small update
maaneet r missing
galat baat
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Posted: 12 years ago
Geet is really cute. Maan was dying for her to open the gift she is taking her own sweet time. But alas at the end she din open the gift😉 Btw what might it be in the wrapper...

What was Sasha's plan??? And who did the damage
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome yeah geet bhi na gift hi nahi khola
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Posted: 12 years ago
wow great story pl\z update soon
it's awesome story to read
thanks for the pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
Ruchs, yeh kya tha? Update kum police statement aur office load zyada tha. And still something, rather someone left. Who?? Mein toh lamba comment tabhi dungi jab next lambe wala update hoga.
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Posted: 12 years ago
Hey what was in the gift wrap...aww sasha and KC in trouble...oh no so mohinder's car was breakfailed... ab aage kya hoga yaar..waiting dear...do cont soon...
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Posted: 12 years ago
update geet couldn't open gift maan got to know that mohinder car break was failed it was not accident but attempt to murder



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