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Posted: 12 years ago
wonderful ud ...plz continue soon and add me on yr pm list
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: muskanp

Congrats for t 50 part

Sorry me gayab from ur thd
Now I am back
UFf I missed so much of action & fun
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Loved it


OMG Di!!!!

You are back!! Love you Di!!!!

Hope you and the angels are doing well!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: $ara_$hachi

Ruchs, darling that was dhamakedaar and long, for sure. Truly, a golden jubilee part. Much of truth and mystery solved, phew. But have to admit, breath taking update.

Maan Singh Khurana, indeed the best. The whole expression delivered between the 2 KHURANAs and the 2 JERKs was amazing. Maan was the expandable. Kya planning thi, superb. Everything was wonderful. Every bit of it. Geet ka Maan ke liye pyaar, was the energy filled part. Every dialogue was indeed beautiful. Overall, bow down to you. Haye, precap was to die for.

Do cont soon and do PM me.


Awww me so overwhelmed sweets!!

Thank you so much!!

So glad that you liked it!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
Hi sweets!!!

UPDATING finally!!!

Love you Madhuri53, ksasi and maanluver…. Thank you so much for waiting so patiently!!!

Update coming up in a few minutes.. A li'l part typing left!!
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OMG!!! Am literally dancing!!! 142 likes????

Thank you so much dears!!! me loved the super overwhelming comments!!!

Me sorry for the extreme delay but couldn't help it!! Sorry!!!

This update is dedicated to Muskan Di and Yash-Mansi, our two dear angels who came in this world on 14th August!!!

A very Happy B'day Anshra Di!!!!! May god fulfill all your wishes and bless you!!!

Pweez drop by a message if you would like PMs dear!!!


PART - 51


Maaneet, Vicky and both the father figures left for their home, extremely exhausted with the day's proceedings but still relaxed and contended as their family was once again safe!!!

As soon as they reached home, they were pounded on by an array of questions by the female squad waiting for their arrival… Maaneet excused themselves and left for their room and nobody interfered as they could make out how tired Geet was… While Vicky, Mohinder and Raj explained all that happened…

At the end of the conversation, everyone seemed visibly relived and in a joyous mood… And why not, today they got rid of the biggest thorn in their life…

MAANEET's Room

Meanwhile there was complete silence in Maaneet's room… Sometimes words are not needed and just the silence is enough to express the most heart felt emotions… Both of them were lost in a deep hug, finding solace listening to each other's heartbeats…

After a few minutes, Maan felt a weight over his shoulder and realized that his Jaan had dozed off… he knew it was an extremely tiring day for her, emotionally as well as physically, he just kissed her on the forehead and lied down while pulling her down with him. He covered both of them with the comforter and lost himself in the dreamy world comprising of his Jaan and soon to be born angels…

NEXT DAY

The whole Khurana Mansion was bustling with activity… Large suitcases and bags were brought down the stairs and were getting decked up in a line near the entrance of the mansion… All the servants were busy running to complete the errands while the whole family was gathered in the hall except Vicky who seemed to be busy on phone… He seemed to be pacifying someone… (Any guesses???)

This was the exact scene that greeted Maan and Geet as they descended the stairs making them confused… They went down and stood next to Raj and Naina, looking at them questioningly…

"Arrey Maan, achchha hua tum aa gaye beta… We were just about to leave and wanted to see you both before we left…" Raj said patting his back…

"LEAVE??? Aaap kahan jaa rahey hain???" Maan asked shocked rather he panicked, he couldn't bear to get separated from his family once again…

"Ufff don't panic dude… Actually we all came from London in such a hurry that we dint get any time to wind up everything properly… I need to officially resign from the hospital aur dad ko bhi kuchh formalities complete karni hai to transfer the base headquarters of the business here… So mom and Pari also decided to come and pack up some required belongings…" Vicky explained patiently while giving his Doll a bear hug, as she had got very emotional at the thought of them leaving….

Though Maan wanted to stop them from going and argue that he could get all that done at the click of his fingers but didn't say anything, as he was never really good at expressing himself… He just kept mum and hugged them all one by one, suppressing all his emotions… But Geet could easily make out how he was feeling… She could read him inside out…

Pari and Naina bade a teary farewell to their son and daughter (Chi… chi… babaji… Daughter nahi daughter-in-law…)… No one really got much time to react as all this had been decided just yesterday night and they had their flight early in the morning…

"Dude… Take care of Doll and we will return very soon okay??? Also do me a favour… Sasha ka extra khyal rakhna…" Vicky whispered the last part in Maan's ear and winked at him, leaving a confused Maan behind…

"Mahi… Main ghar pahuch kar tujhe phone karunga…" Raj said to Mohinder signaling something with his hands and Mohinder nodded… Maan and Dadima were a little confused at their friendly exchange but shrugged it off…

"Bhabhi… Hamare bachchon ka dhyan rakhiyega…" Naina requested Rano, both of them getting teary, as both of them had become like sisters in these past few days…

"Geetu… Samrat, Zubin, Ankit, Nitin, Ishant etc ko koi message dena hai???" Pari asked Geet naughtily while everyone gave her a confused look as Geet whacked her head…

"Ufff yeh sab hamari Geet ke admirers reh chuke hai and poor them must be wondering unki future girlfriend kahan gayi…" Pari teased Geet to lighten the atmosphere and jumped in the car before Geet could murder her… Thankfully for her, Maan had not heard the last remark as he was busy listening to something Vicky was saying in his ear…

Mohinder, Rano and Dadima escorted a very emotional Maan and Geet to the breakfast table after the four left. They had to literally force them to eat the breakfast, as neither of them was really interested in eating it…

The house suddenly seemed so silent and strangely Maan who loved silence now hated it… He decided to work from home today and left for his study while Geet left to their room to finish some errands…

MAANEET's Room

Maan needed a file which was in his room so he made his way to his room but the sight that greeted him made his heart stop, Geet was talking to someone on phone and was literally jumping around as she used to do when she was a kid… She was just about to trip on the hanger that had fallen on the floor when Maan caught her in time… The phone slipped from her hand and fell on the floor while she closed her eyes due to fear…

Maan straightened her and then blasted…

"WHAT THE HELL ARE YOU DOING??? FOR GODSAKE GEET, WHY DO YOU KEEP FORGETTING YOU ARE PREGNANT… TUM KOI DUDH PEETI BACHCHI NAHI HO THAT WE HAVE TO KEEP A CHECK ON YOU 24X7…"Maan was unable to keep his anger in check as he still couldn't get the images out of his head of those horrible days when Geet had been hospitalized and lay like a lifeless soul in the hospital bed… Just its thought made him shudder…

Big fat tears rolled down Geet's eyes making Maan guilty immediately, he took a deep breath to gulp down his anger but patience was never his forte…

Still he asked a little softly " Shhh… Jaan dekho agar tum gir jaati to…" Maan tried to make her understand…

But Geet started crying more if that was even possible… Maan knew that she was hurt due to his scolding but she had become a lot cranky these days due to her pregnancy mood swings thus it was quite tough to pacify her…

"Geet… Jaan… Achcha mujhe yeh batao ki yeh Samrat, Zubin, Ankit, Nitin, Ishant etc ka kya scene hai???" Maan desperately tried to change the topic and thankfully it worked…

First Geet looked a little shocked that Maan had heard Meera but then she replied innocently…

"Yeh sab na…hic… woh… hic… toh mere college ke… hic friends hai… hic… Wo sab na.. hic… mere group mein hain aur mujhsey… hic… bahut pyaaar… hic… kartey hain… hic…" Geet spoke excitedly while still hiccupping…

"What tumsey PYAAR kartey hain???" Maan asked shocked and confused, His blood was literally boiling!!!

"Arrey haan… hic… wo toh… hic… mujhey sab ek ek baar propose… hic… bhi kar.. chukey hain… hic…" Geet innocently confessed…

To say Maan was shocked would be an understatement!!! Those rascals had dared to propose his WIFE and he had no freaking clue about it… How dare they lay their filthy eyes on his wife??? He knew Geet was not at fault… she was so beautiful that anyone could get attracted to her but he couldn't digest this… That there was someone who dared to look at her… to drool at her except HIM!!! Usually he was very calm with Geet but today even he was unable to keep his anger in check, maybe it was because his mood was already bad due to his family's sudden departure…

"WHAT???? Aur tum mujhe yeh abb bata rahi ho??? How dare they… Aur tumhari himmat kaisey hui… Tumne unhe allow kaise kiya???" Maan asked angrily… He knew he was being unreasonable but he couldn't help it… He was unreasonably possessive about his little wify!!

And once again the Ganga- Jamuna began to flow…

"Shh… Soory Jaaanooo… Shhh… Please ro mat sweety… Main tumhari aankhon mein aasoon nahi dekh sakta sweety… Shhh… Sorry… Shhh…"Maan expected Geet to stop crying as he knew that Geet could never bear him saying Sorry, however angry she was, but he was in for a surprise and Geet ran away and someone, who tried to calm her, engulfed her in a soothing hug on the door…

Maan turned and saw two murderous eyes giving him deadly looks, clearly spelling trouble for him, it was none other than Papaji!!!!

"MAAANNN!!! Tumhari himmat kaise hui meri beti ko rulaane ki…" Papaji shouted on him making him shiver…

Oops!! Maan forgot that there was one more person who couldn't bear to see tears in his princess's eyes!! Poor Maan!! He was now gone!!!

PRECAP

Ummm… Me wondering whose Sazaa it is???

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Edited by ruchs - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

awesome

now maan is truly gone..

beautiful upt

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Posted: 12 years ago
Maan's family returned and he is sad sad... Maan ne geet pe chillaya ab dekho kya hoga😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
lovely part dear now maan has to work alot
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Posted: 12 years ago
it family bidding goodbye samrat,zub... proposer maan anger geet crying confession of proposal maan shouting geet crying mohinder angry



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Posted: 12 years ago
Lovely update..
aww..they all went back..
already missing them...
ye geet bhi na hamesha maan ko darathe rahthi ho..

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