Destiny changes lyf Kr n Ss SS Epilogue pg 31

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Me scared to post d new ss...

Accha hoga ki nahi????...

Hmm...tum sab hi decide karo...

Soo here is the cs...

~~CHARACTER SKETCH~~

KRIA RAIPRAKASH


A sweet,bubbly and cheerful girl...dancing is her passion...loves her aunt alot and so calls her mom...swayam her bestfriend...and loves rey..misses him...is going to join st.louis...hates sharon to the core...has a big secret which swayam,simmi and rey know...she is a little attitutive to people whom she hate...

REYAANSH SINGHAANIA

The heart thorbe of his college...dancing is his passion...all think he is a cassinova but loves just one girl and thats kria...misses her...maintains a one arm distance with sharon...but talks to her and is her closest friend...gets to know about kria by his bestfriend swayam...

SWAYAM SHEKHAWAT


A boy next door?????...naa...a born cassinova...ladki dekhti nahi flirting shuru...dosent flirt with kria...loves to dance...is another heart throb of st.louis...dosent talk to sharon...but has a soft corner for her...and always cheers her up when ever she is upset...

SHARON RAIPRAKASH


In reality she is sharon kapoor...but after her parents died...gautam and anjali adopted her as her parents were their bestfriend...is an attituve girl...diva of st.louis...dosent know why rey and swayam dont talk to her...loves swayam a lot...simmi is her bestfriend...she knows swayam has feelings for her as he was always their beside her whenever the group wouldnt be with her...

Kaisa tha??..so here is part 1...

~~PART 1~~

Reyam in the rehersal hall...sharon comes...
Rey-Gosh...m gonna meet her after 8years...m soo excited...
Swayam-Abe rey...shaant ho jaa...abhi jab voh aayegi...voh has has kar tujhe gale nahi lagayegi...
Rey-Royegi???...mana lunga usse...
Swayam-Jai ho reyaansh baba ki...uff...rey...she is KRIA...
Rey-Toh kissne kaha sharon hain!!...
Swayam smiled..
Rey-Sharon ka naam sunte hi smile...abe bachun...kria ko malum padega na toh...
Suddenly...
Voice-Toh kya??..
Reyam turn...and smiled seeing kria...
Reyam-KRIA!!...
Kria smiled...kria hugs rey...
Rey-Jaan...you have changed...
Kria-Aath saal baad mil rahe ho rey...obviously vahi choti bacchi nahi rahungi...
Rey smiled and kissed her hair...
Rey-Mujhse baat bhi nahi karni thi na...
Kria-Sorry na...ab tum apni jaan ko maaf nahi karoge'??...
Rey-Its okay...
Kria smiled...
Swayam-Oh love birds...mein bhi hun...
Kria hugs swayam...
Kria-I missed you two...
Sharon *slowly*-Yeh kaun hain!!...
Simmi came...
Simmi-He...
Sharon-Ssh...*slowly*...who is she????...
Simmi looks in...
Simmi-OMG!!...KRIA!!...
Kria broke the hug...she looks at reyam...
Reyam-Simmi...
Kria rolls her eyes...
Kria-And you must be sharon...
Sharon nods...
Kria-Kool...
Sharon-Newbies not allowed in my dad's rehersal hall...
Reyam and simmi gulp...
Kria-Oops...m soo sorry...i dint know...yeh tumhare DAD ka rehersal hall hain...mere DAD ka hota toh m sure i would have done the same...but apsos i dont have a dad...orphan you know..
Swayam-Kria?????...
Kria rolls her eyes and went away...
Reyam-Was it necessary sharon?????...
Sharon-What the hell...tum log uss weakling...
Rey-Shut up...voh weakling meri girlfriend hain and dare you say anything about her...
Rey went...swayam was gnna go...when he stops...
Swayam-Hey beautiful...tumhe nahi aana????...
Simmi-Shut up swayam...kria ko pata chala..she'll kill you...
Swayam-Voh thodi meri girlfriend hain...and basically...i have all the rights...
Simmi-Ya ya...chalo...and buy me some chocolates...
Swayam-As if she is gnna take those chocolates...
Simmi-Jaanti hun...try karna hain...
Simmi was in tears..
Swayam-Oh gosh...you girls and your emotional drama...yuck...
Simmi-Whatever...chalo mein aati hun...
Swayam-Ohkay baby...
Simmi hits her head...swayam went...
Sharon-Sim...
Simmi-Sharon...a request dont call me sim in front of kria...
Sharon-Why the hell is every one after this newbie...
Simmi-Sharon,..one day you will know it...
On the other hand...kria enters the canteen...the louians who were talking and laughing stop seeing the girl...swayam came...
Swayam-Arre PT USHA ruk jaa...
Kria-Dont you dare call me that...
Swayam-Whatever...now stop sulking...
Nilesh *to the group*-Swayam isint flirting with this girl?????...
All-Strange,...
Rey came...
Rey-Their you are...i thought you were in the fire escape...now lisin..
Kria dint...she was in tears...she hugs rey...all shocked...
All-KRIA!!!!!!!...
Kria-Abhi shock mat ho...mujhe accha nahi lag raha...
Still hugging rey...
Rey-Baatcutter...dont be upset...
Kria-I hate my life rey..
Sharon and simmi enter...swayam went to her...rey broke the hug...
Swayam-Jaan...stop wasting your tears...
Rey-For people who dont deserve it...
Kria smiled...now the group gave her a bone crashing hug...simmi went to her...
Simmi-Hey kria...
Kria-Guys...tell her to go...
Simmi-Kri..
Kria-Go to hell sim...oops sorry simmi!!!...
Simmi moves back...
Sharon-How dare you...
Kria-Urgh...simmi take your BESTFRIEND away...before i smack her head on the table..
Swayam-Kria...
Kria looks at him...
Kria-Tum hi le jao...meine aisa kuch expect zarur kia tha...lekin aisa nahi...thanks...tum logone mujhe wapas saccha proove kar dia..
She ran away from their...
Swayam-Urgh!!!...i so hate you sharon!!!!!!!!!...
He went away from their...all look at rey...
Rey-Mujhe mat dekho...mein toh baatcutter ko mana lunga...
Neha-Thats the point rey...
Rey-No.;...meine tum sabko warn kia tha...tum log usse hurt karoge and i will help you...naa...m not being selfish...lekin you hurted her...
He went...
Sharon-Whats going on!!!!!!!...
Simmi-You will get to know sharon..

Phew!!!!!...kaisa laga??????...should i continue??????...
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NO UPDATE OF THIS SS ON PG 6 AND AFTER 50 LIKES...😈
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Character sketch - Scroll up...
Part 1 - Scroll up..
Part 2 - Pg 7
Part 3 - Pg 16
Part 4- Pg 20
Part 5 - Pg 24
Edited by kriyaanshfreva - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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IT Ws gud Do pm Wen u UPdate!!!!!!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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wow amazing loved it
plz continue
thanx for the pm

kitana likhti ho thak nhn jati but boht acha likhti ho aur update jaldi karna..
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Awesome ss but thoda confusing tha continue soon
Thanx for d pm
Edited by sharuKR - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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another ff!!! gr8
amazing update
and like sharon even I'll ask whats going on?
y does kriya hate simmi n sharon both?? and last part thoda confusing tha
update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Yaar m totaly new concept superb. . . .
Jst lovd it. . . . . .
Saare charactres r so diffrnt. . . . .
Swayum a big filrt. . . .
Sum body jst pinch me. . . . . . . . . .
Rey n kriya al ready in a relationshp woww. . . .
Bt,wat the hel iz hapng. . . . . . . .
Kriya sab se naaraaz kyu ho gayi???. . . .
M hell confusd. . . . . .
Y does she hate simmi and sharon?? . . . . .
Godd agar maine do min iske baare mai aur socha toh m damm sure ki mai pagal ho jaungi. . . . .
Iska only 1 solutin hai,
nd tat iz,
nxt part jaldi update karo. . . . . . .
Nice n unqiue concept. . .
Lovd it to the core. . .. . .
Thankz 4 d pm. . . . . .
update soon. . . .. . . .
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Posted: 12 years ago
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looks interesting...

lekin huya kya tha?????????
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Posted: 12 years ago
#9
The stroy seems really interesting..
Do continue soon..

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Posted: 12 years ago
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amazing start...
Y kriya hate sharon nd simmi
thankx 4 d pm
nd update soon

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