Maaneet FF ~ Immeasurable Love ~ Pt9 Pg40| 5th Feb - Page 4

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Posted: 12 years ago
#31
congrats for new ff... loved the concept... do cont. soon dear... waiting...😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
#32
Nice stry
Wuld love to knw more
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Posted: 12 years ago
#33
Congrats on the new FF dear
cont soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#34
Lovely Concept 😉 👍🏼
Continue Soon 😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
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PART 2

note: the dialogues in italics are conversation through msgs.. if that confused u..

Next day came over pretty soon. The ring of my cell phone woke me up. Who the hell was texting me at this hour of morning? All my friends knew I wake up late on holidays. It was just 5 am for crying out loud.

Finally I managed to open my sleepy eyes and tried to comprehend what was written on the screen. Maan. Wait a sec, Maan!!??

Good morning geet :)

Omg.. I thought he would just delete my no. I drifted my mind to the convo we had last night. Wasn't it so personal? How can I expect him to just forget him after talking so much. I finally made my mind to think properly by washing my face with cold water so that I wasn't feeling sleepy anymore. Genuinely, I thought he's really nice. I mean I just talked to him for like 15 mins and here he is wishing me good morning! I had broken all my records today. I made someone my friend so fast.

I finally decided to reply him

Good morning.. itni jaldi uth jate ho aap??

Geet.. sunaina was right.. ek to tum already bhulakkad n subha subha to ur mind stops working!! Remember.. I do night shift.. to abhi abhi I left the office premises.. in the cab right now.. going home..

Ohh.. yaa.. wo I'm bhulakkad actually me.. sorry. Um, yar apko nind nahi aati kya.. n u texted me so early in the morning.. I was sleeping.. but I guess u already made me ur friend.. thanx a lot for that.. seriously..

U don't need to say sorry geet.. bhala koi aise kuch bhulne ke litye sorry kehta h.. ur too much! Of course ur my frnd geet.. we shared so much with each other yesterday.. doesn't that implies that we're friends?? N I don't think there is anything to say thanx in this.. actually its my pleasure to have made a new friend :)

Nahi yar.. its new for me na.. I mean itni jaldi to aaj tak koi frnd nahi bana mera.. so that's why..

Geet.. there's a first time for everything..

Ya I know..

Thank goodness.. kuch to pata h tumhe.. sunaina said tum ekdum paagal ho kuch nahi aata tumhe..

Hawww.. aisa lagta h apko aur apki behan ko.. koi nahi aane do use Monday ko school..!! n apko to mai.. jab call karoge tab batayugi..

Just kidding geet!! Waise.. kya bataogi mujhe??

If u were just kidding.. then kuch nahi batayugi..

Acha chalo.. I wasn't kidding.. ab to bolo kya bataogi..

Ur playing along with me??

Do u think so??

Yes I do..

Well then ok wahi samajh lo..

Nobody.. I repeat NOBODY plays along with Geet Handa

Oh ho.. acha ji.. n for ur info nobody.. mind u.. NOBODY takes my playing along so seriously :P

Oh really?? Aur kis kis ke sath do u play along??

See.. pehele to my friends.. then sunaina.. n ab tum bhi..

Mai to friends me hi aa gai na..

nahi nahi.. its diff yar.. friends me just males.. sunaina to behan h.. n u.. um, ur like.. I don't know.. ur diff

Aisa kya diff h mujhme??

Geet.. cant u see?? Its just been a day since we met n we're already teasing each other!! Talking so openly..

But playing along to male friends me bhi hoti hogi na.. n aisa to h nahi u wont have friends that r girls.. for instance reena..

Its just diff geet.. I don't know anything else.. n plz we're not gonna talk abt reena.. plz ok

Ok I'm sorry.. no reena in b/w us.. :)

Thanku so much.. n tumne sorry ki dukaan kholi hui h kya??

Ehrrmm.. nahi showroom khola hua h.. lol :p

Lolz.. :P

Ghar kab pahuchoge??

Sahi time pe pucha tumne.. in 5 mins.. so I guess we should bid good bye :p

Ok byee.. I love talking to u :) n fir kab baat hogi??

Um, whenever ur free..

Ok.. thanks bye

Plz stop this thanks n sorry ka showroom..

Ok ok bye :)


Bye geet :) n me too..

Wat me too??

Me too se I mean mujhe bhi bahut acha laga tumse baat karke.. :)

I'm glad if that's the case :)

Oh.. u should be.. bahut kam log maan singh khurana ko pasand aate hain.. so.. good job..

Acha ji.. n bahut kam logo se geet handa itna khulkar baat karti h.. u should be glad too..

Oh.. I am glad already.. don't u know..

Acha.. no I didn't knew.. how would i.. u didn't told me na..

Ya ya.. suno yar.. mumma nashta le aayi hain.. I have to eat ok bye..

Itni sati savere nashta..??

Geet.. wo.. I need to eat something every 2 hours.. uhm.. bcoz.. u knw.. um.. sunaina must have told u..

Nahi aisa to kuch nahi bataya.. aap batado na.. why so??

Geet tum sunaina se puch lena.. bye ok..


Ok bye..

He didn't replied after that. Why does he always leave me on cliffhangers?? That reminded me of last night. What was the cliffhanger last night? Oh ya.. his.. I just couldn't say it.. I didn't knew why but I didn't liked this marriage thing.. I just didn't.

Suddenly my phone rang. Without checking who it is I answered the call taking it to be Maan.

Aap to nashta kar rahe the na..

Kya bol rahi h tu geet?? Mujhe aap bula rahi h n wo bhi as a ladka.. hav u gone nuts??

Oops.. its u.. sorry sunaina.. wo I thought its.. ma

Maan??

Nahi matlab ha..

Baat hui teri maan se??

Ha hui na.. then I murmured.. Kuch zyada hi baat ho gayi..

Kya?

Nahi kuch nahi..

Kuch paagal h tu?? Bol na

Ha wo I texted him happy anniversary to he said thanks n can I call u to I said ok to bas baat ho gayi..

Omg geet!! Stranger se baat ki tune?? Exciting huh!!

Stranger kaha?? He's ur bhai na.. to mera bhi to.. I just couldn't say that.. that was srsly too much to say

Shut up.. no bhai vai.. just frnd ok na..

Ha ha I know.. u don't blv in these blood bonded relationships.. n he's too close to u.. so if u go accd to ur blf that no one related to u by blood loves u then he wont love u.. but he does love u.. a lot.. so that's why he cant

she cut me in b/w

Geet.. chup kar.. bolna shuru karti h to chup hi nahi hoti..

U got it na

Ha baba I got it.. waise thanks a lot geet.. u did so much for me..

Nahi sunaina.. thank YOU..

Wo kyu??

For giving me a new frnd..

Geet.. r u kidding.. ek din me frnd..

Yes.. in fact abhi unse hi baat kar rahi thi msg se..

Omg geet.. I'm so shocked.. ye to jaadu ho gaya'

Haina.. I know.. maine unhe kaha bhi ki he did something.. pata nahi kya kiya jo I was able to talk so freely to him..

Wow.. geet.. good yar.. tu agar aise hi change ho jayegi to armaan bhi tujhe shayad..

Sunaina.. no armaan talks.. plz

Oops sorry

Acha thek h chalo bye.. time dekha h.. its 8 pm.. u n ur brother deprived me of 3 hrs of sleep..

Matlab tu 5 baje se uthi hui h..

Ya.. wo he texted me so..

Baat karni padegi mujhe unse.. i want to know every single detail.. tu ja so ja but sun pehle tell him to call me today um at sharp 12 noon.. ok na

Ok sure.. bye

Bye

After cutting sunaina's call I immediately texted maan n tried to sleep. Suddenly i remem what maan had told me.. eat something every 2 hrs.. dammit.. i didn't even asked sunaina.. babaji ap mujhe yaad dila dena.. sham ko use cal karke puchugi..

Just then his reply came

Ok us se baat hui kya??

Ya hui.. mujhe ninni aa rahi h.. ttyl..

What is ninni geet!! :p

Arre wo bache bolte hain na

I know.. but ur not bachi geet

Ha.. whatever.. chaddo ap.. m so rahi hu bye plz

Ok lazy girl.. bye :) good night.. or night disguised as morning i should say :p

i laughed

very funny.. i mean bilkul funny nahi.. bye


So finally updated :)

hope u guys like it :)

BTW TRUTH ABT MAANS MARRIAGE N ALL WOULD BE OUT SOON.. I'm GOING TO DO THIS IN FAST FWD.. MUJHE JALDI SE JAAN JAANU WALE SCENES PE AANA H.. COS THE'RE THE BEST.. BLV ME U ALL WUD LOVE IT.. LIKE I DO :)

Love,

mahima


PREV- part 1 NEXT- Part 3


Edited by mahimak - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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thanks a lot dearie :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
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lovely update
thanx for the pm...
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Originally posted by: dona86

lovely update

thanx for the pm...


thanks a lottish :))
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Posted: 12 years ago
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thank yuhhh :))
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Posted: 12 years ago
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it is really very interesting update...

but left some questions behind----

---Sunaina said that her brother is angry with her so she told Geet to call and congratulate him on her behalf but from their text conversation it doesn't seems that he is really angry on her but instead it seems that Sunaina used to tell everything to him about Geet...

----when Geet called him it looks like he was already waiting for her call...

----what is this every2 hrs he have to eat something...does he have diabeties problem...

----Sunaina said he is married but when he reach home his mother is serving him breakfast instead of his wife...I think this wife and anniversary drama is planned by Sunaina to make them talk to each other...

waiting for next part...

thanx for pm...


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