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hey guys this is a story of my own... its not about armaan or jassi instead its a story that i hav been working on for a very long time... it involves many characters and different plots. its bout a group of friends who just want to get through in life and enjoy it...i just wanted 2 post it here on this forum beause i wanted comments so yeah here goes nothing...let me know what you think!!

{scene one...inside the house}

(a girl shown running down the stairs)

Tamana- ( hugs mom) "Good morning mama!" ( spins her around, and grabs some toast)" okay bye mama meh bhauht late hoo, mujhe jana hai bye!" " love you" ( waves)

T's mom- " puri pagal hai, lekin hai to meri hi Tamana" ( laughs)

{ title song / sequence}

{ scene 2-- college scene} ( everyone pacing around)

muskaan- "yaar class doo minute mein shuru hone wali hai, aur meri cousin Tamana ka koi bhi pata nahin!"

sia- " relax muskaan woh aaj ayegi"

esha- " nahin Sia, Muskaan teek ke rahi hai, waise to tamana ki adaat nahin ke woh deer se ayee , woh hamesha time par aati hai, to aaj kyun nahin? Kya kuch hua hai?"

Payal- " shut up esha, tum hamesha neagative kyun sochti ho? Tamana ko kuch nahin hua hai! Abhi time hai"

Muskaan- " lakin agar hume class mein seat nahin mili to?"

Sia- " uff yaar hume seat mil jayegi! Rocky aur Naina hai waha par!"

( bell rings)

Muskaan- " dekho meine kaha tha na!" ( everyone rushes to class)

esha- " shit yaar aaj to Tamana mar hi gaye"

Payal- " ab chalo bhi"

{ scene 3 in class} ( in class , no professor yet, naina surrounded by boys, and rocky off to the coner back facing face not shown)

Naina- " hey guys kaise ho? Tamana kaha hai?"

Payal- ( irritated) " hey Naina kya tumhe ladko ke siva aur kuch nahin sujta?"

Naina- ( hops off desk) "woh kya hai na Payal, yeh saab to sirf time pass hai, lakin tum meri choodo yeh baatao ke Tamana kaha hai? where the hell is she yaar?"

Muskaan- " woh abhi tak nahin ayee, lakin thank god wo kadus professor yaha par nahin"

Professor- " ahem ahem"

( muskaan scared and embarrassed, everyone takes a seat)

Professor- " good morning class, please take your seat. Miss Esha Singh?"

Esha- ( stands up) "Here sir"

professor- " Naina Agarwal?"

Naina- ( stands) " here sir"

professor- " Sia and Payal Mehta?"

both- ( stands) " here sir"

Professor- " Rocky desai?"

Rocky- ( stands) " here sir"

professor- ( looks up for the first time) " tum rocky ho?"

Rocky- " gee ha main hi Rocky hoon"

Proffessor- " lakin tum to ladki"

Rocky- ( gives a look) ( everyoen shown laughing)

Professor- ( clears throat) "ahem sorry... Muskaan Sahani?"

Muskaan- ( stands) " here sir"

( mute more attendance taken)

Professor- " Tamana Sahani?" ( no answer) " Tamana Sahani?" ( looks up takes off glasses)

Muskaan- ( stands) " sir woh actually woh Tamana meri cousin woh---"

Tamana- ( enters cutting muskaan off. Muskaan is relives) " Sorry sir"

Professor- "Miss Tamana Sahani?"

Tamana- ( taking a seat) " Gee sir"

Professor- " miss sahani, aap late ho. jo log late aate hai, woh mujhe bilkul bhi nahin pasand. Iss bar mein sirf tumhe warn karta hoon, ainda se yeh nahin hona chaye."

Tamana-( nods)

( mute class begins and class ends)

{ scene 4 everyone walking in the hall)

Rocky- " yo Tamana kaha thi tum man?"

Tamana- " jane do na yaar. Woh kuch zyada hi traffice tha"

Sia- " okay guys ab mein chalti hoon, Uday mujhe lene araha hai, use kuch shopping karni hai. Bye!"

Naina- " god yaar damn Payal tumhari di apni Sia kitni lucky hai. 3 saal hogaye uske aur Uday ke pyar ko lakin abhi bhi aisa lagta hai ke abhi abhi shuru hua hai"

Payal- ( laughs) " ha woh to hai"

Muskaan- " sach yaar they're the ideal couple"

Tamana- Ha ideal to woh dono hai he, lakin agar dekha jaaye to Tumhara aur neeraj ka couple bhi bura nahin" ( laughs and elbows her)

Muskaan- ( blushes) " ha neeraj se meh bauhut pyar karti hoon!"

Neeraj- ( comes fro behind) " meh bhi" ( laughs and they hug eachother)

Payal- " wah wah wah wah kya baat hai, iss baat par to coffee ho jaye! chalo chalo sab log canteen mein chalo"

( neeraj and muskaan entering into canteen holding hands)

{ scene 5 canteen} ( everyoen drinks coffe mute conversations and then done)

Rocky- " okay guys bye later"

Naina_ " eh ruko tum kaha jarahi ho?"

rocky- " football khelne aur kaha" ( gets up)

naina- ( grabs her arm) " wait yaar ladko ke saath? mujhe bhi khelna hai!"

Rocky- ( spins around) " tum? Kya? Khelogi?" ( laughs shocked)

Naina- " accha baba teek hai sirf dekungi! Kush?" ( stands up)

Rocky- ( laughs) " football ko yah ladko ko?"

Naina- ( annoyed) " yeh kaisa stupit sa sawal hai! of course ladko ko dekungi! ab chalo bhi!! ( pulls her both are fighting on ther way out)

esha- ( checks watch) " accha guys mein bhi chalti hoon. mujhe Deep se kuch important notes leni hai"

Tamana- " notes? mein tumhe deti hoon na notes."

Esha- " nahin woh actually"

Tamana- " oh acha acha samaj gayee..yeh special notes hai. wahi jo sirf Deep ke pass hai rite?" ( laughs)

Esha_ ( embarrassed) "bye!" ( leaves)

( neeraj and muskaan holding hands getting close)

Tamana- ( coughs) "ahem ahem Payal mujhe lagta hai ke ab hume chalna chaiye."

Payal- " lakin kyun? abhi tak meri coffee katam nahin hui"

Tamana- " oh really? accha to mein katam karti hoon ( grabs coffe and spills it in the garbage) Hogayee katam? ab chale?"

Payal- "Tamana!!"

Tamana- ( grabs payal winks and leaves)

Neeraj- ( laughs then immediatly stares at muskaan who is sipping her coffee)

Muskaan- ( gulps back) " kya? kay dekh rahe ho?"

Neeraj _ (laughs) " kuch nahin"

Muskaan- " nahin kaho mujhe"

Neeraj- " kuch nahin bas ke" ( squeezes her nose) " tum aaj bahut cute lagrahi ho!"

Muskaan- ( lughs) " tum bhi na" ( hits him slightly and laughs and then layes her head against his chest, neeralj rubs her head)

{ scene 6 inside Tamana's car}

Payal- " Tamana hum waha se kyun agayee?"

Tamana- " kyun ke stupit un dono love birds ko akela rehna tha!"

Payal- " Tumhe kaise pata? agar un dono ko akela rehana hota to kaha kyun nahin?"

Tamana- " ise baate kahi nahin jati sirf pate hona chaiheye"

Payal- " yeh sab meri samaj mein kyun nahin aata?"

Tamana- ( lughs and glances at her) " jab tum kise se pyar karogi tab sub kuch samaj mein ajaye ga"

Payal- " tum itne dave se yeh sab kese keh sakti ho? Tumne to kabhi pyar nahin kiya"

Tamana- " pyar kiya nahin jaata bas hojata hai and besides yaar meine na bahut love stories padi hai. aisa hi hota hai"

Payal- " nahin yaar mujhe lagta hai ke jab tumhari love stroy hogi nah to woh hum saaaab se alag hogi"

Tamana- " woh kyun"

Payal- " kyun ke tum hum sab se alag ho..aur waise bhi pyar mein to tumhe vishwas nahin..pate nahin tumhari zindagi mein kya hoga!"

Tamana- ( thinks and is serious)

Payal- " waise meri love love stroy kesi hogi? "

Tamana- " shuttup payal" ( mad sighs)

( scene 7 inside college hall)

Esha- ( looks around spots someone and runs down the hall) " Deep, deep, suno deep!"

Deep- ( stops, as esha catches up huffing. Deep smiles) "Esha kaise ho?"

esha- " mein teek hoon, tum kaise ho?" ( smiling alot)

Deep- ( checks watch) " uh Esha tumhe kuch kaam tha?"

Esha_ ( in a daze) " Nahin"

Deep- " nahin?"

Esha- ( snaps back to reality) " uh nahin mera matlab hai mujhe kaam, um um mujhe woh professor joshi ke notes chaiye"

Deep- " yeh lo" ( hands her the notes) " achha bye" ( no emotion at all, starts to walk away)

Esha- " uh, um Deep ruko, ( runs after him as he stops) tum jaldi main ho? ( brighly and happily) kya mein tumhe ghar chood do?"

deep- " nahin mein chala jaunga"

esha - " lakin"

deep- " its okay esha bye!" ( leaves walks away)

esha- "bye" ( to his turned back, waves hand, sad music plays esha is very hurt and leaves)

okay well i dont hav a title for this story yet so.... yeah here goes....

{ story continues}

{ scene 8 Outside Payal's house}

Tamana- ( arriving in the car) " yeh lo Payla tumhara ghar agaaya"

Payal- ( gets out) " undar nahi auogi? chalo nah waise bhi mujhe tumhe woh tumhari love poems ki book dene hai"

Tamana- ( gets out) " acha teek hai chalo"

Payal- ( enters, Saahil sitting on couch) " hi Bhaiyya"

Saahil- ( reading a book, doesnt look up just grunts)

Tamana- ( brightly) " hey Saahil"

Saahil- ( closes book, looks up happily) " Tamana Kaise ho?"

Payal- ( cutting in) " yeh kya baat hui? Tamana se baat kar rahe ho aur muhjse nahin?"

Saahil- ( gets up and crosses over to them) " woh iss liye ke tumhare saath to me rehta hoon aur Tamana hamesha yaha nahin hoti"

Tamana- ( laughs) " main teek hoon, aur tum batao tum kaise ho?" ( hits him playfully) " aur woh tumhari saari Girlfriends?" ( laughing walks into the kitchen)

Payal- ( already in kitchen) " girlfriends?" ( laughs harder) " Girlfriends, tumhe to pata hai na Bhai ko ladkiyon se allergy hai! unko ladkiyon mein koi interest nahin! Unko to unke computer aur kitabo se fursat he kaha milti hai! Kitne ladkiyon ke saath introduction karati hoon. Aur mera yeh bhai un saab ko yah to bhen yah dost banadeta hai"

Tamana- ( starts laughin)

Saahil- " ha ha aur mera mazak bano! Lakin ha yeh sach hai, mujhe koi ladki main interest nahin pyar karne keliye hoi pasand to anna chaiye." ( turns to leave and almost hits the door)

Payal/Tamana- ( end up laughing soo hard and mintues later Saahil comes back. They try to hide thier laughter)

Saahil- " aur ha yeh lo ( to Tamana) Tumhari kitab. iss mein poems bauhut ache thee" ( grunts and leaves and as soon as he leaves they both start laughing again)

Tamana- " acha Payal ab mein chalti hoon, kaal milte hai. bye!"

{scene 9 shopping mall}

Sia- ( tired) " Uday, ab aur kitni shopping karoge? hum log 2 bajse yaha par hai!"

Uday- ( laughs) " bas darling, ek aur cheese baki hai, aisa karo tum yaha par betho meh abhi aata hoon."

Sia- ( huffs) " teek hai" ( uday goes away and Sia is upset and starts talking to herslef) " uff yeh Uday bhi na Oh god"

Uday- ( uday comes and places a box of chocolates in front of Sia, Sia doesnt look up) " ahem ahem"

Sia- ( jumps up and hugs him) " Chocolates! Oh wow Uday!" ( kisses him on the cheek)

Uday- ( amazed) " wow chocolate ka yeh phal! Kya baat hai"

sia- " ab chalo bhi, bahut time hogaya hai!" ( tugs his arm)

Uday- ( laughs) " chalo" ( they leave)

ill continue with the next scenes later my mom is yelling!!

{ story continues}

{ scene 10 field }

( naina and rocky enter the field, naina sits down on the bench, and Rocky goes to play football with the guys)

Rocky- " okay boys lets play" ( holdin the ball)

Tushaar- ( enters and snatches the ball and then starts walking around rocky in circles) " Hi im Tushaar Khanna shayed aapne naam suna ho"

Rocky- " ball do"

Tushaar- " xcuse me? kya kaha? meine suna nahin"

rocky- ( thorugh clenched teeth) " meine kaha baal do!" ( reaches for the call but misses)

Tushaar- ( laughs) " baap re baap itna sara gussa. Miss Rocky ek raaz ki baat baatao shayed aap ko pata nahin lekin" ( goes close 2 her and whispers in her ear) " aap ek ladki ho" ( then loudly) " lekin behave to aise karti ho jaise ke tum ladka ho"

( all the other boys laugh)

Rocky- ( a little shocked and embarrased) " mujhe yeh tumhari bakwas nahin suni. Hume ball do. Hume Khelna hai."

Tushaar- ( laughs) "Khelna hai?" ( laughs) " god ur to funny" ( snaps fingers in front of her) " excuse me madam yeh ladko ka khel hai"

Rocky- " kya?"

Tushaar- " suna nahin? chali jao yaha se, mujhe ladkiyon ko harane mein koi interest nahin"

Rocky- ( grabs his collar) " eh suno harne wale to tum ho"

Tushaar- ( laughs) " bewakoof"

Rocky- " kay? eh tum!!" ( lets go of his collar and pushes him to the ground and is now on top of him hitting him and both of them are fighting with eachother roling around all over the grass)

( now enters naina and arjun to seperate the two. running to catch up to tushaar and rocky arjun trips and ends up taking down naina with him) ( naina and arjun are on the floor both are entacted in a tight embrace staring hard at eachother. Niether of them is willing to let go. Both are in shock. there is sweet silence. Suddently this silence is broken by the loud erupting screams of Tushaar and Rocky. Naina and Arjun scramble to thier feet and grab the two)

Naina- ( holding rocky) " rocky rocky choodo use!"

Arjun- ( holding tushaar) " Tushaar nahin, uske moo maat lago"

( tushaar and rocky still trying to fightin continuesly reach out for eachother)

Tushaar- " arjun choodo arjun!" ( huffs and stops and arjun lets go)

Rocky - ( straining for him ) " naina let go"

Tushaar- ( walks up to rocky and starts laughing and making faces then he walks away)

Rocky- ( huffs) " naina usne dekha tumne naina!" ( jumps up and down)

Naina _ " chalo yaha se" ( tugs her) " chalo bhi tum" ( rocky talks on and on about how tushaar is an idiot but naina is not listening and is focused else where. Naina turns around and smiles at arjun and he smiles back)

Rocky- " naina!!"

Naina- ( snaps out of it)" ha sunrahi hoon chalo" ( they walk off the field)

{ scene 11 Outside Payal's house... ( incase no body noticed payal and sia are sisters)

Uday- " yeh lo tumhara ghar agayaa"

Sia " ha woh to hai, okay bye!" ( gets out and walks away)

Uday - " bye"

Sia ( suddently turns around and comes rushing back to the car door) " I LOVE YOU!!" ( laughs and runs away like a little girl)

Uday_ ( laughs and just shakes his head and drives away)

( leave comments will continue after i go take a shower)

that was cool plz continue

Okay guys im bak! so sorry to keep u all waiting but i was really busy this weekend and didnt hav time to post okay so here the story continues..

{ scene 12 inside Tamana's house}

T's mom- ( while cooking food) " to barso tum sab woh college ki trip par charahe ho? Mauritus?

Tamana- ( reading a book)" ha mama. Hum sab Maritus charahe hai. Meine sab kuch de diya hai. Fees wagera.

T's mom- " kya tumne packing kar li?"

Tamana- "nahin todi baki hai"

T's mom- " joa ja kar packing kar lo, tum kabhi kuch kaam dhang se nahin karti"

Tamana- ( annoyed) " mama mein bhad me kar longi"

T's mom- Tum kabhi kuch kaam nahin karti, hamesha se kuch nahin, kamse kaam apni cheeso kay to kyal rako"

( T's mom is really nagging and wont be quiet she just keeps talking and talking)

Tamana- ( angry) " mama BAS! Kaha na kar longi, ( gets up and grabs her things) " yaha par teek se ek romance novel bhi nahin padsakti" ( leaves)

( few mintues pass and T's mom is upset and still mumbling all of the sudden Tamana comes back)

tamana- ( hold ears) " sorry mam!" ( kisses her and then turns her back) " lekin mama aap hamesha mere piche pad ti hai"

T's mom- ( hugs her) " beta woh iss liye kyun ke mein tumhara bhala chati hoon"

Tamana- " accha teek hai mama ab mein jao?" ( laughs and her dad walks in) " hi Papa" ( then runs past him and goes upstairs and uses her mobile to call someone)

{ scene 13 the phone call}

Rhaul- " hello?"

Tamana- " Rhaul, esha to phone do"

Rhaul- ( he is very serious he is not kidding around, he really does love her and is crazy about her like a pyscho) " tamana! Tamana meri jaan! Kaise ho? I love you Tamana, mein tumse bhaut pyar karta hoon, aur mujhe yeh bhi pata hai ke tum bhi mujse pyar karti ho! Tum chuppa ti kyun ho? Kaho na, kaho ke you also love me! Tamana! Tamana!

Tamana- ( says it very coldly)" Rhaul tum yeh baat ache se jante ho ke mein tumse pyar nahin karti, aur nahe kabhi karungi. Ab bas please tumhari bhen esha ko phone do!"

Rhaul- ( annoyes) " tum baat kyun nahin samajti! Tum sirf meri ho! Mein tumhare liye kuch bhi karne ke liye tayar hoon! sirf ek bar kedo ke tum bhi mujse pyar karti ho, Tamana i know you love me! Kenese daro maat!

Tamana- ( annoyed) " esha hai?"

Rhaul- ( frantic) "God dammit yaar, Esha ghar par nahin hai, lekin tum meri baat suno, Tamana i love---" ( tamana hangs up) " Tamana! Tamana? Hello? Hello Tamana?" ( screams and throws the phone then runs straight into his room and starts to throws everything around and then just falls on the floor crying while holding Tamana's photo)

{ scene 14 inside Rhaul's room)

Esha- ( just comes home and passes Rhaul's room where she hears him crying so she goes inside) " Bhaiyya? Bhaiyya?" ( looks around and then sees him on the floor. she runs to him and scoops him into her arms) " Bhaiyya please control yourself" ( grabs the photo and puts it to the side)

Rhaul- ( shakes esha's shoulders) " mujhe Tamana har haal main chaiye. Mein use bahut pyar karta hoon"

Esha- ( removes his hands and grabs his face) " bhaiyya, please" ( lets go and stands up) " bahiyya bas! Tamana aap se pyar nahin karti, use bhagwaan ke liye akela chood do plea--"

Rhaul- ( grabs the back of her neck) " shhhhh" ( puts a finger up to her lips) " ek dum chup!" " shhhhhh" ( face close) " wo sirf meri hai!" ( screams and twists esha's arm) " suna tumne?" ( twists it harder)

Esha- ( winces in pain) " Bhaiyya, mujhe dard ho raha hai" ( screams)

Rhaul- ( laughs) " to socha nahin ke mujhe tumhari baaatoa se kitna dard hua hoga!"

Esha- ( still with her arm twisted) "Bhaiyya! aap pagal ho!! Tamana ko phul jao"

Rhaul- ( screams) " nahin" ( he screams again and throw Esha headfirst into the wall, esha hits the wall and being to bleed and the maid comes runningin)

Maid- " esha baby, esha! Koi doctor ko bulao!" ( rhaul, gets shocked and just backs up into the corner)

okay guys sorry i gotta go ill post more later 2nite!!!! leave comments!!!!!!!