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{ scene 15 the 3 a.m phone call}

Sai- " Tamana!!"

Tamana- " mmm" ( sleepy then glances at clock) " sia my darling, kya tumhe pata hai raat ke kitne baje hai?" ( soundin cheerful, laughs) " bolo kya baat hai?"

Sia- " ha muje pata hai and im sorry lekin mujhe tumse ek bahut zaroori baat karne thi. Tamana woh woh"

Tamana- " woh woh kya? You sound upset. Is everything okay?"

Sia- ( upset) " tamana woh woh esha"

Tamana- (scared) " esha kay? esha ko kya hua? bolo Sia! kaho mujhe!"

Sia- ( says it quickly) " esha, esha hospital mein hai!"

Tamana- ( worried) '' what'' ( dramatic music and a flash) '' yeh sab kese hua?''

sia- '' woh sab mein tumhe kaal bataungi, mein kaal sube waha aarahi hoon, aur phir hum dono hospital chalenge!''

tamana- '' lekin...''

sia- '' sorry tamana lekin please raat bahut hogaye hai soojao, kaal milte hai, aur ha please yeh baat kise ko nahin baatana"

Tamana- " accha teek hai, kaal sube milte hai, bye"

{ scene 16 the next morning...Tamana's house}

Sia- ( walking into tamana's house) " good morning auntie"

T's mom- " good morning sia beta. Kaise ho?"

Sia- " main teek hoon. Tamana kaha hai? woh hume kuch kaam hai"

Tamana- ( before her mom can answer, tamana arrives looking very serious) " chalo mein tayar hoon. Achha bye mama"

sia - " bye auntie" ( they both leave)

{ scene 17 Payal's house}

( door bell rings)

Payal- ( opens door) " good morning Muskaan my sweetie!" ( pulls her through the door and spins her around)

Muskaan- " wow tum aaj ek bahut ache mood mein ho! Kyun?"

payal- " eh bas hun hi! lekin tum itni sube sube yaha?"

Muskan- " ha woh Saahil se kuch kaam tha"

Payal- ( surprised) " saahil se?"

Muskaan- " ha use woh mere photographs lene the"

Saahil- ( messy and greasy hair enters) " good morning muskaan" ( yawns)

Muskaan- " good morning kaise ho?"

saahil- ( again yawns and mumbles)

Muskaan- " abhi abhi uthe ho? Jao naha kar aao, eeekk how dirty!!"

Saahil- ( thinks) " dirty! hmmm" ( laughs then walks over to muskaan and rubs against her"

Muskaan- " SAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHIL" ( screams)

Saahil- ( laughs then runs away)

{ scene 18 in the car}

( sia driving in silence)

Tamana- " sia kuch to bolo! Esha...yeha sab kese hua? Sia! ( no answer) God dammit yaar kuch to batao!"

sia- ( faces her and suddenly stops the car) " shit yaar tum samajti kyun nahin! ( grabs her hand) " he hit esha! He hit her"

Tamana- ( shocked) " kaun? Kya? yeh tum kya keh rahi ho? muje to kuch bhi samaj mein nahi aata! What do you mean?"

Sia- " kaal tumhare aur Rhaul ke beech jo kuch bhi hua, uske bare mein esha use samjane gaye thi, aur phir Rhaul ka demak. Tmhe to pata hai ke rhaul ke demaki haalat teek nahin. he has a severe mental problem! Aur aur..."

Tamana- " aur kya? bolo sia! Tumhe meri kasam! bolo!"

Sia- " aur aur rhaul hit her. Rhaul ne esha ko bahut mara!"

Tamana- " oh my god! how can he do that? Usne! ( covers her mouth then she becomes stiff all of the sudden she is overtaken wit anger) " ab woh kese hai"

Sia- ( sighs) " pata nahin, woh to hospital ja kar he pata chalega" ( they drive off)

{ scene 19 Payal's house}

saahil- ( comes down wiping his hair with a towel)

Muskaan- " wow ab acche lag rahe ho"

Payal- ( laughs) " ayee bhai!"

Muskaan" yeh lo Saahil coffee! meine baniye hai."

Saahil _ ( grabs cup then puts it back down) " aree bapre agar tumne baniye hai, to muje nahin chaiye!"

Muskaan- " hey bahut achi bani hai!"

Saahil- ( laughs then sits down with payl and muskaan and starts talking while they all are enjoying coffee"

{ scene 20 the hospital}

Sia- ( to reception) " excuse me? Miss Esha Singh?"

reception- ( checks book) " room # 302"

Tamana- ( cheks rooms) " yaha" ( both enter)

Esha- (tries to sit up)" tum dono yaha? arre baba dekho mein bilkul teek hoon!"

Tamana- ( laughs then tears) " hospital main ho, aur upar se yeh kerahi ho ke bilkul teek ho! ( sia laughs and sits down) ( tamana holds esha's hands) im so sorry, yeh sab meri wajhe se hua''

esha- '' nahin woh'' ( tamana cuts her off and stands up and goes near the window)

sia- '' esha, tumne yeh sab kaise hone diya? rhaul itna ghir jayega humne kabhi bhi socha nahin tha. aur tumne, tumne apne police ke bayan mein yeh kaha ke tum seediya se ghir gaye? kyun? kyun tumne Rjaul ka naam nahin liya? kyun esha?"

Esha- ( turns away) " choodo yeh sab woh mera bhai hai. woh mujse bauhut pyar karta hai. yeh to sirf uske dimaki haalat ki wajahse."

tamana- ( turns with anger) '' esha, rhaul kaha hai?''

esha- '' tamana please...''

tamana- '' rhaul kaha hai?''

( silence)

tamana- ( mad) '' meine pucha rhaul kaha hai?'

esha- " nahin tamana"

tamana- " tumhe meri kasam esha, batao mujhe"

Esha- " tum hamesha kasam dedati ho! ( wimpers) Rhaul apne dosto ke saath college mein hai, lekin tamana ( tamana walks away) Tamana!!"

Tamana- ( stops and holds up her hand) " bas!" ( leaves the room)

Esha- Tamana! ruko! ( shakes sia) arre ruko use!

Sia- ( holds esha back) " jaane do use, iss bat rhaul ne apni limits cross kar he di"

Esha- " tamana kabhi bhi nahin sunti, ab kya hoga?"

Sia- " uske tum maat phikar karo"

esha- ( all excited) " acha suno kya tumne Mauritus ke liye packing kar li?"

Sia- " ha, lekin esha kya tum aise haalat mein......"

doctor- ( entering) " of course! kyun nahin! she'll be fine, waise bhi aaj usko discharge mil jayega. " ( checks her then leaves)

esha- " see meine kaha tha na! of course i can go! lekin ( sad face) yaar mujhe bahut darr lagraha hai, agar rhaul ne tamana ko kuch...."

sia- " shhh aisa kuch nahin hoga'' ( pats her head)

{ scene 21 payal's house}

muskaan- ( reaching top of stairs) " god Saahil you're to much! waise tumhara room kaunsa hai? Aaj mein phele bar dekungi! ( excited)

Saahil- " yeh wala" ( opens door and muskaan enters)

muskaan- ( looks around in awe. the room is filled with paintings and other kinds of art. Saahil is going through some stuff on his desk) " wow! Tmhe bhi paintings collect karne ka shauk hai?"

saahil- " ha mujhe paintings bahut pasand ha!"

muskaan- ( runs to the other side)" oh my god! wow yeh to meri favorite painting hai!"

saahil- " sach? meri bhi! god yaar humare tastes kitne milte hai!"

Muskaan- " god this is unbelieveable"

saahil- " muskaank, waise aaj raat ek painting exhabition hai, kya tum mere saath ana pasand karogi?" ( very casual)

muskaan- ( thinks) ***** FLASHBACK*****

( inside the car)

Muskaan- " neeraj, aaj raat ek painting exhabiton hai!, chalo na hum waha chalte hai! ( holds his arm)

Neeraj- ( driving) " what? kya tum pagal hogaye ho? i hate paintings, they're sucha bore yaar! no way!"

muskaan- " lekin neeraj paintings...."

Neeraj- " tum akele chali jao, aaj raat mein apne dosto ke saaath guzarunga!"

***** FLASHBACK ENDS*****

saahil- ( taps muskaan)" muskaan? kaha kogayi? kya aaj raat chalogi?"

Muskaan- ( thinks ) " ha chalungi!"

Saahil- " great! to yeh lo tumhare photographs, tumhe raat ko 7 baje pik karne ayunga! bye!"

Muskaan- " bye" ( leaves and then she is outside his door ( closed) smiles and holds photographs close to her chest, then thinks for awhile and skips down the stairs)

{ scene 22 tamana's big blow up}

Tamana- ( thinking in her car/ flashes bak to the images of rhaul, ehsa and eveything. suddleny she stops the car with a jolt and arrives at the college. she slmas teh door shut and walks off)

Tamana- ( to a random person) " tumne rhaul ko dekha hai?"

1st person- " nahin sorry" ( walks off)

Tamana- ( stops another person) " hey kay tumne rhaul singh ko kahin dheka hai?"

2nd person- " ha woh apne dosto ke saath canteen main hai"

Tamana- " acha thanx " ( she runs off. After a while tamana reaches the canteen and bursts through the doors. she looks around and spots rhaul. she then walks over to him silently and simply stands in front of him)

rhaul- ( very xcited) " tamana! Tum yaha mujse milne?" ( stands up and goes to give her a hug. Tamana pushes him off and slaps him hard rite across his face)

Tamana- ( points finger, really mad) " yeh chaata eshe ke liye tha, tumhari himmat kaise hui use haat lagane ko? Mera gussa uspe kyu nikala? ( holds his collar) Mera gussa esha par? kyun? che rhaul! ( scoffs)

Rhaul- ( puts his hands behind his head) " tamana meri jaan, me tumse kabhi gussa nahin ho sakta. ( tamana tightens her grip on his collar) tum meri zindagi ho. ( places his hands on top of hers) I love you, aur yum yeh baat achi tara se janti ho! ( smiles)

Tamana- ( frees her hands)" bas rhaul mein yaha tumhari bakwas nahin sune ayee hoon. ( very angry) mein yaha sirf tumhe warn karne ayee hoon. Inda se esha ko koi taklef mat dena! varna tumhare liye acha nahin hoga! ( gets very mad picks up a glass and smashes it on his table then snaps her fingers in front of his face and leaves)

Rhaul- ( jus stands there in shock and stres at her leaving.. a few mintues pass and his friend comes up to him)

friend- " itna sub kuch hogaya, aur tumne kuch nahin kya?"

Rhaul- ( rubs his cheek and then places a hand on his friends shoulder) " usne mujhe yaha chua! God yaar shes so amazing! Mujhe uss din ka intazaar hai jab woh bhi mujse apna pyar ka ikrar karegi!"

Friend- " aur agar aisa nahin hua to?"

Rhaul- ( places his hands on the tables and laughs then suddenly picks up a piece of broken glass and slices his cheek) " Dobara kabhi bhi aise baat maat kena! ( leaves)

{ scence 23 Tamana's quiet time}

Tamana- ( drives really fast and swerves her car into the beach, then gets out and makes her way to the water. she simply walks barefoot along side the edge of the water while rubbing her arms with her hands)

***** INNER THOUGHTS *****

( sad music)

Pata nahin yeh sab kaise hogaya. Yeh sab kyun hua? Aisa nahin hoona chaiye tha. Esha ki kya galti hai? Meri kya bhool hai? Rhaul ka dil toodne meh mujhe koi kushi nahin milti, lekin rhaul ki zid ki wajhe se mein apne zindagi nahin barbad karungi. Meine Rhaul ko kahbi bhi apna dost nahin mana.. to pyar? pyar to bauhut door ki baat hai! Har haal mein mujhe Rhaul se picha choodrana paadega! ( kicks the water and screams loudly) " I HATE YOU RHAUL!! SUNA TUMNE I HATE YOU!!" ( then turns to leave)

okay guys thas enuff for now.. ill post more 2morrow and keep in mind that i keep mentioning the maurtius trip because its very special... there tamana will meet vishaal....... ( the love of her life.... )

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