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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome part
thanks for Special part & PM
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Hu di..plzzz...pm me d special part n pm part...i m a slent reader n i a fan of ur ff...i had earlier also cmmntd n request 4 d pm...plzzz do pm...waitng eaferly 4 d part...
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Epilogue.

"Armaan! Tum kahaan ho? Please tang karna band karo na!" Riddhima yelled for him as she walked around, trying to find him with her hair tied up in a messy bun.
"Oye kaan khajoore! Tereko office nahin jaana kya? UTH!" Muskaan screamed her lungs off, trying to wake Rahul up, while he just wouldn't budge.
"Atul, main last time keh rahi hoon! Get up, and go take a shower, warna main tumhe kabhi baat nahin karungi!" Anjali said sternly and Atul immediately got up and ran to the bathroom, as she got back to work with a smile.
"Oye saand ki aulaad! Utho! Nikhil ko school chhodne nahin jaana kya?" She yelled, but Abhi just slept through her screams. When he didn't an inch, Nikki glared at him and sat on him, immediately waking him up as he coughed and slowly got up and walked to the bathroom.
This was the typical morning at Mallik Mansion. The boys had gotten super lazy after their marriage.. oops. Let's rewind that a little. About five years had passed by ever since Armaan and Riddhima had come back from their beautiful honeymoon. Shortly after that, Atul and Anjali; Rahul and Muskaan; and Abhi and Nikki got married and even they went on their honeymoon, so Armaan and Riddhima obviously used the empty house to their benefits. Very soon after that, they received the news of all four of the girls being pregnant, which meant quadruple happiness in the house.
Those nine months were pure torture for the boys. Handling the girls' mood swings was extremely difficult. One minute they would be extremely happy and sweet to the boys and then aggressive and abusive the next. Middle of the night, they wanted ice cream, chips, sweets and all other crazy things. But even though the nine months were torture, they were one of the best nine months of their lives. The feeling of having a baby ' their baby ' was overwhelming and beautiful.
Nine months later, four beautiful babies came into this world. Abhi and Nikki had Nikhil; Rahul and Muskaan had Remonica; Atul and Anjali had Aaryan; and Armaan and Riddhima had Arimaa. The feeling was out of the world and inexplicable.
Now the kids were four years old and going to preschool. Over the years, their friendship has gotten stronger and stronger. They always put their friends before themselves and they had pretty much sworn to love each other and always back up for them. It was amazing.
"Armaan! Kahaan ho tum?" Riddhima shouted for him as she walked around her room. All of a sudden, his big strong hands came and circled around her waist, making her jump 10 feet in the air.
"Good morning baby." Riddhima smiled lovingly as he nuzzled in her neck, placing slow, loving kisses along her nape.
"Where were you, Armaan?"
"Just wandering around. Damn I missed you." He said, pulling her slowly towards him and captured her lips, kissing her slowly and gently and she kissed him back but slowly pulled away after a while.
"Stop. You gotta go drop Arimaa off at school."
"No, it's Atul's turn today."
"Mmhmmm... and... what about office? Don't you have work today?"
"Yeah, but not that important, to be honest. Guess I'll just skip for today or distribute the work load between my three sweet brothers. I'm sure they won't mind."
"Why though?"
"I don't know. I guess I just... want to spend some time with you." She smiled and placed her arms around his neck as she looked at him with admiration in her eyes. "Why're you looking at me like that?" She slowly shook her head and stared into his eyes.
"Nothing. Just comparing."
"What to what?"
"The Armaan that's standing in front of me to the one that I met almost 6 years ago on the road." He smiled knowing exactly what she was talking about.
"And what do you see?"
"A totally different, but lovable guy, who mercilessly stole my heart." He smiled and pulled her close.
"And you know what I see when I look at you?"
"Hmm?"
"My angel, my savior, my love, my life. Everything." She blushed and shook her head.
"You're too cheesy, Armaan."
"I know... But it's the truth. Thank you so much, Riddhima, for coming into my life and making it better. I know, I've said this trillions of time, but I mean it every time I say it. You changed my life for the best. You gave me what no one ever could. You gave me all the love in the world, filled my life with happiness, which I probably never even dreamed of. Today, I have my brothers, my sister-in-laws, and most importantly. I have you and my precious daughter. I don't know what I'll do without you two." He spoke with all the love in the world, making her smile.
"Thank you." Armaan was confused. "For giving me, such a beautiful family." He smiled and embraced her, unaware of alll the eyes on them. On the door, stood the three brothers and besties, looking at them with pure admiration.
"See. I told you they are perfect for each other." Abhi said happily.
"Yep. Our brother's back."
"Can't believe they even got married. I swear, six years ago, I never thought these two devils are gonna marry each other." Muskaan said chuckling to herself.
"Who's the devil mom?" Remonica asked in her baby voice, making everyone look down to see the kids standing in front of them, and Muskaan picked Remonica up in her arms.
"No one's the devil sweetie."
"What were you all talking about?" Nikhil asked.
"We were talking about your Chachu and Chachi." Abhi said picking him up.
"What about them?" Aaryan questioned so Anjali picked him up too.
"We were talking about the way they met."
"Well, how did they meet?" Nikhil asked.
"Hmm.. that's a very long story dear. Let's just say they were meant to be. They met, fought, fell in love, went through tons of hurdles, but finally got together." Rahul spoke, looking at them lovingly.
"Just like a fairytale?" Remonica asked innocently, making them smile.
"Yeah Chiku, just like a fairytale." Atul said contently. In all this, they just didn't see Arimaa, who was standing there, listening to them talking about her parents. Seeing her cousins in his/her parent's arms, she felt kind of left out, so she looked at her parents and walked up to them; she pulled her father's hand with her tiny fingers, making them part.
"What happened Arimaa?" Riddhima asked with a smile. She didn't say anything, but held her arms up, telling Armaan to pick her up, which he did. He placed a sweet kiss on her cheeks, making her flash her cute little dimples.
"Daddy, I didn't know yours and Mumma's story was a fairytale." This confused them as they exchanged looks.
"Who said that?" Armaan questioned. She pointed at everyone at the door, surprising Armaan and Riddhima. They smiled widely, giving them a thumbs up, which Armaan and Riddhima happily returned as Armaan pulled Riddhima in his arms. This was it. Life was at its best. It couldn't get any better.
-The End-
Yeah... So... This is the end people. I just... can't believe this is the end of this fiction. The fact that I'm not gonna be writing updates for this FF again... not coming to this thread after a few weeks... Sigh. This story was very close to my heart, it always has been. I'm gonna miss this FF as much as you all will, maybe even more than that. This FF is like my baby, but like they say, everything comes to an end.

So now that this FF has been completed, can I get a little feedback from you all? I mean, I know many people don't like to write big comments and stuff, but please? I really want to know what you all think of this FF, your favorite parts, chapters, characters, what you liked, what you didn't like... yeah... Hope that isn't too much to ask for.
Thank you all so much for loving this FF so much. You all put up with the crazy tracks that came to my mind, tolerated the tremendous late updates and what not. I can't thank you guys enough for supporting me and this FF for more than a year. Thank you, thank you, thank you, thank you, thank you, thank you, thank you, thank you, thank you. Once again, thank you all, love you all, and... cya later with my next FF. Got a few ideas roaming in my mind. Not sure when I'll actually start writing though. But, whenever I do, I'll PM you guys. Let's see how many people are gonna like the next one. 😉
Love,
Medha. ❤️
Edited by Mrs.JGrover. - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
res *edited*
hey i m so sorry!i can't post a big comment right now but i promise i ll wn i get time!i m in such a rush, bt i felt guilty so i jst wanted to say tht!i m so sorry!😭
n hey i ws the first to reserve a place 😆👏yay!go me!😆
*EDITED AGAIN*😳
ok i knw i m really late to late to edit this comment t i hope u read it coz this is straight frm my heart..😃
i can't believe tht this ff had to end?!!!i ws very much addicted to this ff,i hv already read this ff 5 times n still reading as u post the chapers on fb..i really do love this ff!
u knw this ff has different feeling all together...i dnt knw how to explain it bt i feel as if i m actually there,witnessing everything tht happens.
which as a reader is really blissful!
All the characters r fabulous,as in all of them were my favourite,except the villians bt they also played a part in bringing AR closer(after seperating them😆)
bt all is well tht ends well right?!
my favourite chaper of this ff...hmmm...thts a real hard question..coz i really can't choose one n i would feel i m doing injustice to other chapters bt picking a certain chapter 😉😆
actually i hv enjoyed reading every chapter in this ff..all of them made me have different expressions on my face as i ws reading..sometime,laugh, *sad face*,*sigh*,*aaawww...*, *oyye hoyye*, *shocked* :O...n the list goes on...
i especially loved the chapter wn Armaan n Riddhima get married again!it ws so romantic n while reading tht i ws smiling like an idiot!(i knw tht coz my frnd took a picture of me while reading it, so yeah..😳)
then ofcourse wn Armaan suprises her n goes to get her back...it ws so funny!n all the gujarati dialogues..rofl!
the SPECIAL PART ws fabulous as well!(i ll never forget tht) :D
if list all the chapers then this comment will take so many pages so i ll cut it short..
riddhima being rihanna,armaan finding it out, THEIR FIRST MEETINg, hw they fall in love, their fights, their expressions, wn they were pretending to be married(LOl..tht ws epic!),wn they seperated😭😭😭, wn they met again, armaan patao-ing her, riddhima in her gussa on the naak mode,the gang's frndship,their care, their love, EVERYTHING,EVERY SINGLE THING IN THIS FF WAS JUST WONDERFUL!
i m so sad tht this ff is comming to an end...bt every good thing has to end one day..so 😭😭 i ll cope dw 😊😆
the epilogue ws mind-blowing!
yeah their story is like a fairytale!
every couple is finally together!n had their honeymoon n a kid...each!it ws so cute!
this ff had been really close to my heart n is one of my very loved ffs of all time!
thnk u so much for writing this ff!i bet everyone has enjoyed reading it to the fullest!👏⭐️
i hope u start writing another one as u r really a great writer n i would really love to read ur work...wn u decide to write another ff plz pm me or scrap me..😃😳
i love this ff to bits! <33 <3
love ya,
tc
Jinal <33<3<33
Edited by Jinal3patel - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Medzi!!!!!! I can't believe this is the end :( I'm so sad now. Anyways, this is one of the best FFs I have ever read. I am being honest!! I have reread this FF at least a couple of times in my free time and I can seem to never get tired of it! The whole concept and new twists and turns in the FF were awesome!! You have written this FF so beautifully and amazingly I can't say anything else. I just hope you come with another awesome concept soon!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
Omg awesome FF evr i read whn i read this story for the first time i tot it is boring buh later whn i continued reading i start loving it soo much tht i used to sleep at 4 or 5 at morning just to read this story it ws mindblowing ff it ws fun to wait for nxt part buh nw it finished :( buh anywayz u r right evrythng comes to end buh plzzz if u got time plzzz do start a new FF we will love to read it <3 :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
Oh madam mujhe special pm part nahi mila...chal jaldi pm kar
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Posted: 12 years ago
well medzi you have ask for long coment which in current sitauation i can't but i promise to in res this post by tonight or with in two days:D
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Posted: 12 years ago
awww. I m going to miss ths ff like crazy. Comment laterss
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome
loved it
but i will miss this ff very much

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