VERY IMPORTANT-THE DUTY OF A WRITER

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hi friends,
Iam still watching PSH, and after the last episode, I wanted to say something abt the show.
I think u all agree with me that It is the primary duty of any writer, whether a columist, a story writer, a novelist or a script writer, to give proper justification to the story and the characters that they have created.
Sugni, having a strong mind, morals, values and loyalties, always dreamt to get married, to love and tobe loved by one man only. Sardhakai was her own decision to go away from vicky, so that TVS and Reva can unite. Yes, agreed that still she thought of TVS and his wife welfare. But, now what we see is that she is happy with adi around and she can trust him. Where were her qualities once appreciated by everyone(audience).
Vikram, dignified, royal, positive, full of energy, optimistic, filling the aura with just his presence on the screen. Now disgraced, want to divorce his wife who is normal, and want to get sugni at any cost.
Aditya, full of hatred for bednis, immature, obedient to his mother, confused abt his feelings for amritha. Now he seems tobe mentally mature behavior, want to save that lady whom till yesterday he hated from his core. Still not bothered abt his fiancee amu, claiming all around what he did that for his family's welfare.
Reva, this particular character, the CVS are really messed up with. One episode she had been lunatic before the marriage itself. other episode that accident happened coz she as usual became aggresive and lost her mental balance. Again she says after accident she lost her memory and went back to her brother, where she was told by her bro that TVS-her husband is in love with someone else and abt to marry her. And to stop that she pretends tobe pagal by her bro's plan, and suddenly appears in front of dhanuma from nowhere. Is this makes any sense to you? If she lost her memory, how come she went back to her bro's house. If she is normal, then why all the family members declared her as pagal in the early episodes. In the latest episode she asks sugni to become someone else's. Is she indicating adi. If that is so, then what abt amu? This character is really very much irritating. In recent episode she says she came back after one yr, and no one in the family ask her abt that.
Amritha, beautiful, intelligent, kind hearted and in deep love with adi. Suddenly her parents come on the stage who were not there on the engament ceremony of adi-amritha. It seems that amu is their only child, then howcome they were not present in the function. And they disapprove their daughter's sagai with adi, and took away amu. Amu says that her parents took her phone, so she wasn't able to talk to adi. U believe that in this 21st century of technology, she didn't get a way to contact adi.
What happened to TJS, his wife, his son, younger sis of TVS. The CVS they wanted to give some twist , so adi did sardhakai to sugni. Well, upto some extent that is ok with the story. But why they keep changing Reva's condition as pagal and normal.
I want to say to the team PSH(script writers), its a wonderful story that u guys created with such beautiful characters and strong actors. Do not spoil this with unnecessary twist and turns. Vikram and Sugni (according to the early story) both suffered in their lives and I think its time for them to have happiness in their lives. For aditya, he too suffered in his childhood coz of a bedni. Now with the help of sugni, he should come out of those haunting memories and forgo his hatred. But sugni must not end up marrying adi. This is absolutely not justified. They should become very good friends. thats all. because the CVs already built a very strong relation and bonding between SUGVI to such extent that they were not able to live without each other. Don't spoil that bond, and if u do so, you will crush the central characters of the show.
What all I want to say is that pls. do not spoil the image of this great show, and don't disgrace these beautiful characters of the story. Good Luck and best wishes.
Bye friends.

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Posted: 12 years ago
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nice anagha...very refreshing...and heart touching...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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i feel some thing is wrong,first they changed their writing team, then director, and after 10-12 days they changed to the director again... don't know what is going on... they r confused from the beginning first they wanted to make to V, villain,a owner... if u remember initial promo... then after start, they decided to showing a love story... and when everything was looking nice... they added rewa... but they confused about her too, first they shown she is mental... now they showing she is pretending... they suddenly did disappear to some important characters, like JT her wife his son... haldi chacha etc... everything was weird but not unbearable... but from sardhakai this show became a nightmare... everything gone to beyond the imagination, far to logic... whole team is confused what to do ? but in this whole chakkar, they are not realizing what r they doing...? they r making sug's character so ugly,dirty and selfish... if they have some problem and and they r not able to decide, who should be writer and who should be director... and what to do ? then ... till the arrangement... in this situation, why not they utilize to varun... they r really dumbo... if they have a person like him, who is writer/director... in the past he did as such, then why not in this show...he can help them... if not himself... then , he can suggest some name... and i think he can do better compair to their silly team,... don't know what they want ? but i feel show needs a fresh start without any delay...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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In Indian television writers think that if we do twist and turns, the audiences will ooh and ahhh and remain glued to the screens. That is not the case; when changes are made that are inconsistent and unjustified, the audience gets upset and wants to walk away. It also ruins an entire show. It's always good to have different writers and directors - soaps and dramas in teh UK and US do this too BUT there is consistency!!!! The changes are justified and make sense. The writers are SMARTER than their audience members. When the audience is tearing up the show and pointing out nonsense and inconsistencies, the writers and creative team should hang their heads in shame. Unfortunately, their egos are exploding everywhere that their arrogance prevents them from making the humble step towards listening.
The fact we were all blocked from the Phir Subah Hogi webpage says it all - these creative directors are too proud to listen.

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