OS : Dead love!lastpart pg23

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So guys here I come with my os'''..so here it goes''.

this story is totally fiction...

i dnt know aisa kuch hoga ya exist karega...

but i lyk these concepts.

so enjoy😊

"swayam ruko" she said to him''.

"mujhe pakdo Sharon''..he shouted running front catching her bag''

"swayam plzz"she bent down panting taking support of her knees''

"ahh my ankle is paining"she sat on her knees''..

"isiliye maine flats pehne keliye'"vicky said.she glared at him

"yeh jungle hai Sharon ramp nahi'"neha said and all giggled''.

But swayam''.ahh how could he see his angel in pain'..he walked upto her kneeled beside her and sat on his legs and pulled her onto his lap'''.

Awww was all that the rest could utter '..she sat in his lap confortably and pulled her shoes out''.

"frock pe shoes'..??"swayam giggled''she hit him slightly'..all giggled too but she started wearing the shoes'..

"waise bhi Sharon aaj kal teri man maani bohut bad rahi hai''.kabhi meri baat nahi sunti''meri chodo kisiki nahi sunti'..aaj kal tumhe apni manmaani karne se koi rokh nahi paaraha hai'.aur jo kar sakti hai wo ab''."he stopped when he realised wat he was saying''.all went numb'.sharon stopped wearing the shoes and looked down as tears rolled down her eyes''swayam controlled his tears ''..

He tried consoling her''she hugged him and cried''

"mai itni man maani karti hun na mujhe rokhne keliye ek baar nahi aasakti?????"she asked him innocently''.

He just gripped her more tight'''the gang somehow managed to cheer her up and started wlking''..

"hum rahenge kaha???"simmi asked'''

"Vicky ne bola usne koi ghar dekha''."nil said''

"guys I saw a house here when my car crashed once and yeah its too adventurous''.and ''''ahhh'.there it goes''."he showed

All looked at it but all except swicy got scared'

'.

"babu aur koi jagah nahi mili weeken spend karne keliye''"neha spoke'

Sw: chill neha'..kuch nahi hoga''its soo pleasant guys''.

He already started loving it..he felt so calm 'the turmoil inside him is now soothing him for unknown reason he felt good'.he took his and sharons abag and headed towards the house all alone'..all were looking at him'.suddenly Sharon ran and tugged his arm''.

"mai bhi chalti hun par saath hi rehna mujhe dar lag raha hai'"she said'..he smiled and kissed her forehead which rested on his shoulder'..all followed them with their partners''they entered the house'..yeah it looked fearful but the interior design was outstanding'.all sat for sometime somewhere making space''.

After 20 mins they started their work girls started cleaning while the boys did the furniture setting and dusting and all went out for sticks to fire when swayam went in serch of water'.finally after 5 hrs all was set''all flopped onto the sofa the one of old model but quite comfy'.all were talking when swayam entered with a big tray containing bowls of soul''.all quickly grabbed one for each as they were hell tired''.swayam sat and they started they talked laughed ,sang and danced and doing masti when suddenly swayam sat on the sofa and looked up his head resting back and closed his eyes'''.sharon found this and thus the rest too and they wet and sat beside hi..sharon tugged his arm and placed her cheek on his shoulder'.after 2 mins she felt a tear on her cheek'she gripped more tight and closed her eyes'he was missing her badly...his baby'..he protected her from the day he started walking''their parens were best of frnds and lived in the same mansion''sharon was his long relative so she too is soo close to her/''she was his eye candy'.she was the one who starts the masti''.the way she clapps her hands jumping and laughing lyk a 2 yrs kidhe loved her to core'.she was his bestfrnd''she was too close to him just like his soul'..but from last three months''he dnt now where she is how she is and y she left''

"I miss her too"she said and silently sobbed and same was with rest'.soon all fell asleep as they were hell tired'..

After a long tym neha suddenly jerked up and sat straight making Vicky to get up too'..he was ab to aske when he heard''

Uuummmhhmmmhmmm aaahhhahhaaa

(same song which was playing in bg)

They heard it again thus woke everyone'but swayam was sleeping peacefully..sharon shaked him hard

"kya hai sh''."he stopped when he heard''

Pyaar tune aahhahha'''

Ummhmmhmmhmm lalalalala''.

All were feared but swayam just grabbed a lanther beside him lit it and ran up the stairs and examined each and every corner of house''but no..he found none'..all were too shocked+confused+feared to react'finally swayam ran down the stairs straight outside'..

All saw this and shouted his name and followed him but by the tym the went out he was no where''they stood there helplessly when Sharon was crying hard in fear of loosing him''

Here he was running like mad..

"kriya'..dammit kaha ho'..plzz mil jao'.plzz'..mai aur din nahi reh sakta tere bina''.plzz baby tumhe jitna dhaantna hai dhanto'par plzz wapas aajo''..i love u na''.plzz'..aajao'I know tum yahi kahin'.."he stopped in his track when he saw three wolves standing in front of him looking hungry at him'..he took two steps and fell into a trap and the cage closed ''his head hit the rod while falling'.he before becoming unconscious heard the wolves shout it felt like they were crying in pain'..and finally all blanked out'..all were crying and searched for him but no use'..as soon as the light rays hit they went in search for him in the cold weather''.

All were walking vishaka stopped when she found the three dead wolves'.she was a bit startled and walked back but fell on the cage'..

All went to help her and after she got up they saw swayam there'they opened the cage and took him to the house''after lot of trials he finally woke up '..he was just seeing around'..

Sw: mai yahan kaise??? Guys jaldi chalo warna who chalijayegi'..i cant let her go anymore'.

He stood up and was abt to go when Vicky pulled him back to couch'..

Vic: are u mad'haalat dekhi apni aur waise koun chala jayega???

Sw: kriya''mujhe usse dhoondhna hai'

Sh: kriya???? Wo yaha??? Tumhe kaise pata???

Sw: kal jo gaana koi gaa raha tha wo kria hi hai'..

Rinni: tumhe kaise pata

Sw: mai uski aawaaz jaanta hun guys'and wo rey keliye hamesha yahi gaana gaati hai'she loves this song a lot'.hamesha kehti hai ki use ye gaana sunte hi rey yaad aajata hai'..and she gets lost in his dreams'.

Vish: par wo kahin nahi hai dude ''humne poori jungle dhoodhliya tujhse dhoodhte waqt'..

Swayam shed silent tears'.all consoled him and nils mobile rang'..

Nil: hello'..

Rey: nil hum road ke paas khade hai ab iss jungle mei kahan aaye yaar??? Is it that necessary to come'..

Rey shouted'..he always wanted to be alone but none allow him especially his cousin siddhart who is his best of best frnd too''(more than Sharon)

Nil: yeah hum bas 5 mins mei aate hai'..

Rey: fast or else im gng..

He snapped and cut the call when sid bet his head'..he had to do a lot of work to bring him hear but he himself didn't like the thought of spending the weekend in this jungle''

Nil informed and swayam told not to tell abt kria till they were sure she was there with them''and went to freshen up''.

Nicky went and lead rey and sid to the house''sid stopped in front of the house'..

Sid: guys is it necessary to spend weekend here''?????

Rey: sid plzz'.im liking it'.im feeling my heart too light'.plzz'I wanna live hear'

All smiled ad headed into the house'.rey gave formal hugs to everyone with a small smile'..all were sitting when rey stood up actively and said

Rey: guys mai fresh hoke sojata hun im hell tired''

With asmile'.

Sh: rey are u ok ''??????

Rey: yeah Sharon im absolutely fine'mai aaj bohut khush hun im feeling very light today'.aisa lag raha hai ki wo ab meri baahon mei''.

His voice trailed off. As he remembered her''but soon he gave a smile and went up towards his room

Vicky placed hand on sid's shoulder ..he jumped in fear'.all looked at him for sumtym and burst out'.

Sh: btw her laugh'.tum toh humse jyaada darne lage???

He gave a fake smile and went to his room'and picked the towel and entered the washroom for face wash'.he splashed water for facewash eyes closed but felt sticky so he opened eyes and throwed himself back to the wall feared on seeing blood flow from the tap'.he quickly ran to the door but someone locked it from outside'.he tried shouting but he lost his voice''and suddenly he felt someone holding his throat and squeezing it'..his eyes were abt to go dark when suddenly he felt free and he rushed to door it was open and he quickly changed and went down to be with the others''..

Here rey freshened and came out of the washroom'.today he felt HER so close to him 'he sat on the window and looked out'.he looked around the jungle and a smile spread''she always loved these trees and all'he remembered how he used to take her to nurseries and gardens just to make her happy '..

He still remembers that day'he knew her from 8th'..and yeah he fell for her then itself''she in her cute pink skirt and white shirt'..and that high pony which jumps along with her whenever she smiles''the cute pouts which she makes when teacher scolds her''.her icecream madness''.she is soo childish but when comes to faceoffs or any other matter she is soo mature'..her attitude ., her style''.her wacking moves which always made him to get lost in her''..and all made him madly fall in love with her'..the whole gang were frnds from 8th except sid as he joined in 3rd yr'..that day''when they were in 1st yr ''..he took her to the nearby garden on his bicycle'.it was his routine'..swayam carried Sharon and rey carried kriya''on way they went to the garden'.she was jumping and catching the butterflies'..she was continuously jumping when she slipped and banged into him''he made her steady but now a days it was becoming difficult for him to hide his feelings and act just as her close frnd''he too noticed the change in her''she felt shy whenever he tucked her hair back''he caught her by shoulders to give support and leaned in finally placing his lips over hers''..both felt numb''.but soon both just pressed their lips over others with all force and after a long tym they flinched back realising what they did just now''she blushed and was gng when he stopped her and proposed''..he cant take it anymore''.she with a red face nodded and he hugged her tight''.and from that day her place changed from back to the front rod''same as swaron''when all came to know abt this swayam declared a freedom party as they were fed up as these two didn't realise their feelings from a long tym'..

He smiled wide on thinking abt how she blushed hugging him and hiding her face in his chest in the whole party teasing''

Rey: kriya''.kaha chaligayi??? Mere pyaar mei koi kami thi kya??? Koi problem thi kya??? Mujhe bata deti'''u know na angel im always there for u'.mujhse gussa thi??? Nah tum itni bewakoofi nahi kar sakti'itni choti baat pe itna bada decision nahi leti''.wapas aajao na''..im not able to live without u'..

he closed his eyes and leaned back'.he felt someone behind him'..he looked but found no one'.he again closed his eyes''.her laughing image played before him'..a tear rolled down his cheek''another one was abt to take its place when he felt someone sniffing''he turned back but found none .he looked away and another tear rolled down'again he heard someone sniffing'.he searched everywhere wiping his tears and finally when he didn't find anyone he fell on the bed..he wanted to sleep peacefully after so many days''..he just layed on the bed and closed his eyes''when he was abt to drift to sleep he felt a kiss on his cheek'he smiled and drifted to sleep hugging a pillow which felt like HER to him'..

at 9 he came down and sat with all he was somewhat active today all wondered what happened''..but were happy to see him happy all were sitting and simply talking '.it was almost 2 when they heard some sound'''

ummhmmm lalala''..

lalalalala''aahahaha'''

reyam stood up in jolt''looked at each other and grinned wide and ran out'''..and stood catching the raling'. (look at the pic of house)the whole forest was covered with fog..

.

'they were looking out when they heard a voice'''

pyaar tune kya kiya

yeh pyaar tune kya kiya?????/

reyam smiled''.they saw someone legs''they ran down when the gang stood there on the steps itself''slowly the fog cleared and finally they saw their sweetheart dancing her heart out looking lyk a angel in white'

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.rey just got lost in her just as the times when she used to dance around him with him in middle eyes closed and totally into him on the very same song'..this was soo close to him''swayam had tears in his eyes finally his baby was in front of him''back to him'.

Rey walked front''.and as her usual dance she jumped''.kicked high'.swayed her body lyk a feather''.and stood eyes closed still and spreading her arms'..and as usual rey hugged her from back and dug his face in her neck''.she stiffened for second looked at him and throwed her head back closing her eyes and caressed his face with left hand'..they stayed lyk that for hell lot of tym''..for every second reys grip on her increased'''finally swayam walked front to take his baby into his arms''

By the sound kriyaansh separated and next was she had a hard blow''

Kr: rey''she said with tears and shocked'..

But swayam slapped her next'.she looked at the two imp persons in her life with tears and with a pout'..both pulled her into a tight hug they started pouring qsns on her when Sharon hugged her and soon gang followed'but she never answered,,,,''after pulling back all were stil qsning when swayam spoke'..

Sw: kriya apne bestfrnd ko nahi milegi?? He is there''go sid is waiting for u''.

He said trying hard to give a big smile'..yes he was her bestfrnd even though she knew him for just two yrs''.swayam didn't feel jealous but felt sad as he thought he couldn't give her the love she was expecting from her bestfrnd'''

Kria looked at him(swayam) with teary eyes and hugged him tight and cried out loud..reyam were concerned but let her cry her heart'.but they were tensed''this was not their kria ''.by looking in her eyes they could say''.she was way too matured'..finally she pulled back and went to sid''all looked at them ''all were smiling but to their surprise kriya gripped his throat he cried in pain''all went to her who was growling like a hungry hound with her teeth pressed''.rey wrapped his arms around her and pulled her back''

Rey: are u out of mind kriya'..

Sw: for god sake kya kar rahi thi'he is ur bestfrnd''

Kr: yeh mera best frnd nahi hai''.she growled all were shocked''.

All were with sid and Sharon standing in middle of them swayam some feet away from kria''.suddenly kria shouted sharons name panicking Sharon feared and looked around to see what happened '..everyones attention shifted to Sharon and next second kriya dragged sid back with a hand around his neck and before everyone could move towards her he laid there with neck twisted totally and his soul already out of body!!!!!!!!!!!


so here it ends for today!!!!!!!!

hmm doubt haina ki ye kaisi end hai????

hmm i think u all saw my next res too...

yeah a last part...

i want everyone to cmnt...

lyk also plzz.it means a lot to me

love u all...

keep loving...😊

-deetha



LASTPART!!!


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Posted: 12 years ago
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The fiorst part must say was interesting..
Never herad this song before pata nahi how i missed it..So much emos into it..
The way Swayam feels kria.Rey to feels her seems startange..The incidents that are occuring around Feeel like Kria is the one saving both her closed wants...
Waiting to read more

For the next part..
I must say mere confusions bad gaye,..Mumma..yeah ladki mujhe confuse karing..
K back to the update.
Kria finally mil gayai..
But my doubt now is woh insaan hai ya nahi???
And y is she killing sid...

Edited by asmaju - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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story sounds good...

Swayam sharon are too cute...

its super mysterious till now...lost kria, jungle, wolf's and not to forget the song is making it more scary
So 2nd part is up
it was quiet interesting...

Awww it was kria who kissed him on his cheek...

Finally they saw her...
Hayeee kriyansh hug...loved it

even swayam's concern about her...his bff...fabulous

But kria insaan hai ya nahi?and wats with sid?what he did with her?
Ahh so many confusions...update soon


Waiting 4 the rest to be posted
Edited by --Kinjal-- - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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res

unres...
dis is damn gud...d initial swaron cuteness, n rey n kriya ka kya bolu..unka toh pyaar AMAR hai...plz jaldi update kardo...strng feelin datkriya is dead n sid is responsible...so mayb it was her who saved swayam
PS: the washroom scene wid sid gave me d creeps
Edited by sweetangelpayal - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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saddy wala na banayio main pehle se boling...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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amazing update deethašŸ‘

simply mindblowing😊

but vat did sid do to kriyašŸ˜•
Edited by aishu3003 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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not fair asma... i wanted to res first!
nywys... res
unres...
deetu! amazing OS... the way u've expressed every emotion shareyam felt, the gang & sid... really gud!
ohhh... shit! kaafi dreadful tareeke se kriya killed sid... lovely OS!!!
Edited by kriyaanshd3 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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guys it will take some tym
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unres😃

hey deethu it was really intrstng os yr,,,,,,,,,,i m loving it

plz update nxt prt soon plz plz plz😃
Edited by kuhu_Arsha - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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RES... šŸ˜†
*UnRes*
Awesum os deetha...
Swaron's part was cute...
Swayam teasing sharon.. Aww...
Nd then Luved the way u described ShaReYam's feelings...
Kriyaansh confession awwiee...
Awesome...

Par i am bohot confused...
Kriya ko kya hua?
Is she human or not.??
Woh sid ko q maaring??

2nd part jaldi update karna... 😊
Edited by hetalt29 - 12 years ago

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