KTLKMiniFF:Comin Together..Pt-11/Pg-45(Romance)

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Ana

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Posted: 12 years ago

#131

Originally posted by: OneWish
Fantastic & worth the wait. My favorite part was Nidhi trying to fix Ashu's head on the bus. Despite her anger, she couldn't bare his discomfort. Then eventually falling asleep arm in arm. Loved it!

thanku sooo much dear...🤗
yup, nidhi can't bear ashu getting irritated and hurt...
luv ya dear😳😃

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Ana

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Posted: 12 years ago

#132

Originally posted by: ssktlk
very sweet update. Atleast she is back in his arms. Hope he doesn't let her go now. Please update soon.

thanku sooo much yara...
yup back in his arms, in his house, but just left is to be back in his life😳😃

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Ana

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Posted: 12 years ago

#133

Originally posted by: SSA777
Ana, read all 5 chapters in on go. What a great FF. So beautifully written. 👏👏

Can't wait for the next chapter. Post soon.

thanku sooo much dear
welcome to my post yaar...am glad you liked this...
am just gonna write...😳😃

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karajekar

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Posted: 12 years ago

#134

then will be next update sweetu

sonali

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Ana

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Posted: 12 years ago

#135

Originally posted by: karajekar

then will be next update sweetu

sonali

i m working on that soni g😳😃

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Ana

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Posted: 12 years ago

#136

Part 6

Ashutosh look around to see people looking at them and on the other hand, Nidhi was not in a mood to leave him. She was too scared. No matter how much Ashutosh just wanna keep her in his arms, but this wasn't the time. They have to take breakfast as they don't know after how long they will gt there next meal cause the soon they will get into hotel booked for them which was outside the village, they have to make a plan and get out to help the need children in order to cure there disease.

Nidhi was calm now and was gripping his coat in her fist tightly.

"Nidhi..." He took her name softly while rubbing her back.

"Humain abhi nashta karne chalna chahiye...patah nahin din bhar kuch khanay ko milay na milay" Ashutosh voice was soft that melted Nidhi's heart

"Uh-hun" She shook her head and pulled him even more closer that made Ashutosh give his famous side looped smile.

"Accha...abh chorne ka maan nahin hai" He said cheekily that made Nidhi smile as she bit her lip, blushing

"Kal tak tau pass bhi nahin aa rahi thi" And that ring a bell in Nidhi's mind as her smile faded and in an instant she was out from Ashutosh's arms. His arms stay wide open as hoping that she will get back in them again but to his disappointment, she turned her face away.

Ashutosh realize what he said and bit his lip feeling angry on himself. Why he keep pulling past in his present. The moments today are more beautiful than the past and what make them special is his Nidhi.

His hands curl into a fist as he tried to hold his anger back.

"Chalain" Nidhi said as she hugged herself and moved towards the wooden benches that were placed around the dhaba. She spotted Priyanka and Janki bhai with another nurse Malini taking lunch and went to them. Ashutosh looked at her retreating back and sighing, punched his fist in the air and followed her.

"Are Nidhi, kahan reh gaye thi yaar...chalo aa jaoo..." Priyanka made space beside herself for Nidhi and she sit down.

Ashutosh with heavy steps too reached the place and was about to say something but seeing Nidhi's forlorn look, stop himself.

Right then Ahana came with two tray's of food and jump beside Ashutosh with excited face

"Sir...app kahan thay...Main kab se appko dhoond rahi thi...chaliye koi baat nahin...dekhiye, main appke liye bhi breakfast lay k aye hoon" Ahana showed him the thali's while down, Nidhi was burning with anger. her nostrils were fluttering and that made Ashutosh, who was looking down at her, very well know that she does'nt like a bit of Ahana's coming around him. He was not in a situation to take risk anymore and his plan to make her jealous, was getting over-board.

"Dr.Ahana...Main apna nashta khud la sakta hoon" He said in a straight tone that made Ahana's smile fade away

"But sir...Main tau bus...apne liye leyne gaye tau socha k app k liye..." But she was cut in between by Ashutosh's angry voice

"Aapko mere liye sochne ki koi zaroorat nahin...Mera khayal rakhne walay log hain meray pass aur filhal...main apna khayal khud rakh sakta hoon" He said and went away towards Dhaba to get food.

Nidhi was feeling relieved now but seeing ahana's fell face, she felt bad too. Nidhi was feeling horrible that she used this girl as her weapon but she just wanna show his husband what it felt like when someone jump on you without a reason. Ahana and Mallika were different but she just wanna show ashutosh that it wasn't different for her. No matter Mallika was his long time friend, But for Nidhi, she was just another woman who try to take her place in Ashutosh's life. Ashutosh mistook mallika's action as of her friendship, but through Ahana, she wanna tell him how worse Nidhi herself used to feel seeing another woman bringing herself in in her husband's life.

Ahana put the plates down and with a sulking face, sit beside Malini, opposite to Nidhi and passing a fake smile to hide her embarrassment, she started taking her food. Soon ashutosh came with two trays of food and placing one infront of Nidhi, left to took his food with wardboys who were sitting on the table next to them. Nidhi look up at him but he was already turned till then.

She noticed the food. Her favorite. Gobi ka paratha with dahi and achar. And a cup of tea and by the smell of it she knew, it was there Adarak wali chai. (hehehehe...i also thought to include AWC here...😆)

Priyanka, janki bai and Malini smiled seeing the silent romance of this couple while Ahana was looking at Nidhi in pure envy.

"Dr. Nidhi...Dr.Ashutosh app k liye kyun breakfast lay k aye?...Abhi tau mujhe lecture day rahay thay" She said in pure hatred. Nidhi look up at her and was in full mood to punch her face when Priyanka, on sensing the tension building up in Nidhi's body, hold one of Nidhi's hand in her's on the table and said

"Dr. Ahana...I think humain ye discussion baad k liye rakhni chahiye" She said and then turn to Nidhi. "Nidhi chalo jaldi se kha lo yaar...warna hum late ho jayein gay" And Nidhi started taking her food, unaware of the fact that Ashutosh was looking at her with the corner of his eyes.

After having food, they all took there place back in the bus and Ashutosh this time was the last one to get inside and on purpose, took seat beside Nidhi while Ahana was calling him back, but one look from him, and she turned quiet and sit in her place with a pout.

Nidhi shrieked herself in the seat to be a lil away from him but that wasn't helping as he pulled himself close to her.

They stay silent for sometime. Nidhi fixed her eyes on the view outside while ashutosh's were fixed on her.

"tum theek ho..." He asked sometime later.

And in reply, Nidhi just nodded.

They stay silent after that and reached the hotel in another half an hour where Ashutosh tried to help her with her bag but she quietly take it and left inside with janki bai and priyanka.

"Sir...Kia app mera wo red wala bag utarne main help karain gay" Ashutosh sigh. Why he should act when Nidhi is not around so he turned his face and look at Raghu, the wardboy who was taking out stuff.

"Raghu...Please app zara Dr. Ahana ki madad karain" and without giving another look to Ahana left inside with his hand bag, leaving her mouth-opened.

As Ashutosh entered, there was going on a argument.

"App aisa kaise kar sakte hain...bus 4 room book hain jab k mujhe Dr.Ranganath ne khud bataya tha k unhoon nay 5 room book kiye hain" Nidhi was saying out loud on the reception.

"Nahin madam, mujhe khud sahi se yaad hai...maine he rooms book kiye thay...or mujhe char rooms book karne ko kaha gaya tha jinh main 2 single beds hoon" The man on the reception said back.

"Ok ok" Nidhi hold up her hand to calm herself down. "App aisa karain k aik room or alot karain abhi mujhe" Nidhi added

"Sorry Maam...app tau dekh he sakti hain ke hamara hotel itna bara nahin hai...sirf 10 bedrooms hain or baqi chay(6) bedrooms abhi fill hain" The man said. Nidhi sigh as she was standing alone on the reception now.

One of the wardboys was already left for his room which he was about to share with the other wardboy. janki bai was going to share with nurse malini and Priyanka was off to her room which she had to share with Dr.Ahana. And there left only one room which was to be taken by Dr.Ashutosh.

Nidhi got that trick. It must be Anji's plan to let them stay in a room.

"Anji ki bachi...Main tumhain chooron gi nahin" Nidhi mumbled. Ashutosh reached near him till the time.

"Kia ho raha hai yahan?" he inquired.

"Sir, Kotnis General Hospital k under humain char rooms book karne ko kaha gaya tha...Likin ye maam keh rahi hain k humain paanch rooms book karne thay...abh or rooms available bhi nahin hai..." the man said apologetically

"Its ok" Ashutosh said in a calm tone. "Nidhi...tum mere saath aa rahi hoo" Ashutosh said as he moved forward to get her bag. But she pulled that back.

"G nahin dr.ashutosh...main Dr.Priyanaka aur Dr.Ahana k room main neeche zameen pe sou jaoon gi...likin app k saath nahin" Nidhi said a little bitterly that made ashutosh angry

Dr.Ahana too was there this time, fidgeting with her bag when she heard Ashutosh and Nidhi's words.

"dr.nidhi...abh app behas kar rahi hain...or hamare pass is sub k liye bilkul time nahin hai...chaliye mere saath" Ashutosh said as he took a step forward when Ahana bagged in.

"Sir if you don't mind, main app k saath room share kar sakti hoon" Ahana tried to give both of them some ease while Ashutosh and Nidhi both looked at her with angry faces

"You better don't interfere Dr.Ahana...mere room main just Nidhi reh sakti hai...or koi nahin" He said straightly and holding her bag in one hand and her wrist in another, he pulled them towards the room. While Ahana stand behind with breaking heart.

Part 7-------Page 22

(OK i know...ahana ko ashu-nidhi ka relation batanay kay bohut chances thay is update main...but yaar drama hai, baat thori lambi chalti hai...and i have a particular scene in mind that i want to write when ahana get to know about ashu-nidhi marriage...so don't throw anda tamatar's at me for that...)

Next part raat ko yaan kal update karne ki koshish karoon gi...don't worry g...good times are coming in next part 🤗 Confrontation coming😉

luv ya
ana

Edited by cool_SK - 12 years ago

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niniborn2rule

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Posted: 12 years ago

#137

ana yeh to full on drama hai...good good...jaldi jaldi update karo

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ZedZee

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Posted: 12 years ago

#138

awesome chapter ana...and longing to read the next chapter...as usual

😊 Great going😳oh oh and i loved the way ashu behaved with ahana😃

hehe 😃 tooo goood

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hilarious44

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Posted: 12 years ago

#139

Another great chapter dear👍🏼...i enjoyed each n every moment...Oh have fallen in love with this ashu all over again😳...plz keep writing...eagerly eagerly waiting for next update...superb job👏