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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: drrose31

update



excited for the next

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cont soon




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Posted: 12 years ago



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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: gargi12

awesome updt
Bt maan loves his geet
To iss lyf me hw cn dey b best enemy???
Cont soon
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: nature2

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: sdlife19

so maan to meet geet...




yup he will face geet now...
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Posted: 12 years ago
A PARALLEL LIFE






PART 4

Maan made his way to the family members he was living with he need to clarify all the circumstances in which he has gotton'. Indeed there is familiar similarilty but a vast difference'.a difference that always exist in parallel world'.. fortunately he was seeing a opposite faced side of his family that he won't be able to see in his own world 'but one thing that still makes him tremble is past '' he clearly remembers that he has indeed travel through the void that took him to this world'. Within spilt of seconds he landed in a different era'. Wondering how he himself is in this world'..

Payal went out of the room after giving him the much needed information that he didn't even thought can made his heartbeats raised '' he had lost his mishty in his world she is no more but he was wondering how did she is alive here according to him everything goes opposite in these two worlds'.. that somewhere means he is not alive here '.. may be he is also dead like his mishty there '..

Maan glanced at the photogaraphs'. It was same place there were places that he had seen in delhi changed into multiplex but here the serene and placid environment attracts him'.

Maan looked for someone who could help her '.. and found a man sitting with his legs crossed on the floor reading something '.. he didn't want to disturb him '. So patiently waited for him to complete '. He was looking around the mansion is indeed same but nnot renowated like his place'. Having things like furniture paintings even he noticed the utencils were of mixture of gold and silver '.

No one was there and he found it a suitable time to talk '..

Maan came infront of him in order to talk but the person ordered him to wait for some suitable time'..

Dinner was laid and it was served all the indian dishes that he didn't eat '.it was not unusual as his mother was serving he did eat a little telling that he is not that much hungry and when he was retiring to his room '.his daadaji called him'..

( since maan is in alternate world so I m referring the relations and relatives as his family members)

Dadaji: chaliye hamare saath hame bhi aapse baat karni hai'.

Maan simply oblised and followed him to the room '.. it was similar room but the windows were in left and door was opening outwards '' opposite of the room he had in KM'.

It was his room and a portariat of him hanging on the wall'a pure calmness '.tranquality was there on his face'.( means his clone's face whose room is this'.)

Maan started the conversation'..

Maan: mujhe aapse kuch kehna hai'..

Dadaji who was looking at his picture 'replied " mujhe pata hai tum hamare maan nahi ho'.."

Maan was shocked 'how did he know that he is not the person who belongs to them'.

Maan: app ko pata hai'.. ( he was asking getting all confused'..)

Dadaji: maan ab is duniya me nahi hai'.. he softly replied'.

Maan shouted WHAT!!!!! ''..

Dadaji looked at him with a hope that he will remain this deadly truth of his grandson secret '..but maan needed his answers '.

Maan: how did he died'and when'." Mera matlab hai'. Kitna samay hua hai maan ko mare '.is ko dekhkar toh lagta hai he wo mere jitna ho hoga'.."

Dadaji: ek mahina hua hai'.. maan ek din achanak behosh ho gaya aur pata chala ki wo duniya se hamesha ke liye chala gaya'."

Maan: iska matlab hai usko heart attack hua jaise meri mishty ko '..

Dadaji: kya bol rahe ho aur tum kahan se aaye ho'.yahan ke nahi lagte tumhari bhasha'chalchalan alag hai'..

Maan : me dusri duniya se aaya hun dadaji'.maan said with a little layer of tears in his eyes'however its been only somehours he is here but missing his home , his daadima who has no one except him'.

Dadaji: dusri duniya matlab'.

Maan made him sit on the chair and kneeled down'however he didn't belong to them but still they are like the shadow of his own family he carefully explained each and every details to him'..

Maan: mera naam MAAN SINGH KHURANA hai'maan said in a little MSK attitude which brought a smile on dadaji's face'..he too smiled 'it's the same smile his own grandfather used to have for him when he was small'. Mera accident hua tha'ek hadsa meri car ( ignore English words I m not good at hindi '.. ) pull pe se gir gai'par kuch palon ke baad mene dekha toh me yahan tha '.. mene maa ko dekha wo mujhe dekhar yahan le aai'.dadimaa ko dekha 'mera sirf iss duniya me meri daadi ke siva koi nahi hai'.. then he showed the pictures to him'.

Maan: ye mere ek dost ne li thi usne mujhe iss jagah ke bare me bataya tha'.aaj tak sirf kitabon me padha tha par aaj yakin hai kyunki me sach me yahan hun'. Meri duniya iss se bahut alag hai '.. me 2012 se hun'.

Dadaji asked him '..

Dadaji: tum pul par se gire the'..maan nodded in acceptance'..

Dadaji: tum maan hi ho'. Hamare maan na sahi par uska ehsaas tumme bhi hai'.

Maan: me wapas jaana chahta hun'.kya aap kuch kar sakte hai'.

Dadaji: hum kal jayenge ek jagah shayad tumhari me madad kar sakun'. So jao'.

He left the room'maan didn't left that room'.gazing at his portrait'.for somehow he get to know that his mishty and him'the maan who lived here died in same circumstances '' hear failure '.. his mishty was also fainted and without any notice she left '.and here maan died with same fate'..

Somewhere maan was waiting for the next day hoping to meet geetakshi '.. a girl who had same features same innocence retained 'maybe she is bit older than him'.he chucked at his own thought '.but he needs to see her at once before he leaves this place'..


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Edited by suhaaana - 12 years ago
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Edited by Jass.KN - 12 years ago

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