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Hey guys my name is sumi I'm new om IF n this is my firrst time ever writing I've commented in a few but I'm a silent reader soo here it goes critiscm is allowed n plz comment if u like thnxxx... MANYATA POV: gosh man this is killing me I'm trying to do evrything I can for uday n he is just makin it more hard for me how can he go away with jay like that... N I cnt belive he made her his excort to the charity ball but this time I'm gonna shock him actually gonna shock every one... Saying this she started gettin ready... UDAY'S POV... Hmm today I hve to look the best but seriusly wat was I thinking I got sooo busy in making manyata jealous that I ended up asking jay to the ball I dnt knw wat I was thinking well now I hve to bare her for an entire evening... AT THE CHARITY BALL: uday came down the stairs every girlz eyes were on him but he was only looking for one girl wondering if she came or not...( Uday was wearing a black tux n as usual he was luking dashing) jst then manyata comes down from the stairs n that's wen the soptlight hits her everyone including uday were shocked after seeing her (manyata was wearing a purple strapless gown wif her back showing n it was sooo tight that all her curves were showing she had left her her down n she had curled them at the endz ) all boys were staring at her n uday was burning with jealousy he face went red after seeing all those boyz staring at her... Manyata went by uday who was standing with jay vijay unnati n jagat... VB: OMG Mbhai u r looking smoking hot.. I mean truly gorgeous this time u also outdone jay I mean to say jay luks like a begger compared to u... JAY:how rude vijay bhai(n she stomps her feet n goes away from ther). UN:u r really looking gorgeous today manyata. M: thank u unnati n vijay bhai... Uday won't u say how I look..? UDAY:Hmm so now u want my opinion is it going to make any diffrence well I don't think so... Its better if I don't comment( n he also goes away from there). Manyata is really hurt afta wat uday said shez feeling really bad but tryz not to show it n starts to go from there cuz she new any minute her tears would start flowing from her eyes she excuses herslef ... But unnati n vijaybhai notice the main in her eyes but decide to live her alone cuz afta wat she did she has to sort things out herself ... Manyata goes 2wardz the bar n asks for a drink the baratnder refuses to give her... MANYATA: I dint ask u I'm orderin you to give me a drink... BARTENDER: yes ma'am here u go. manyata takes the drink n drinks the whole glass in one shot... Then she starts goin to uday n uday notices this but acts like he didn't see n continues flirting wif girlz n dancing with them now manyata was really feeling hurt but she keeps going toward uday... She reaches uday n says. Manyata: why uday why are u doing this to me why are u doing this to yourself huh answer me. Uday: why do u care manyata huh why do u.. Just goo away from here n let me live my life u hurt me n then come n ask me why I'm doing all this just goo away from here... Saying this uday starts going away from there n then comes back to the dance floor with jay... Manyata now was on the berge of breaking down but she cudnt cry infront of everyone so she runz out of the hall n goes out for some fresh air but as soon as she reaches the garden she falls on her knees n starts crying she cries soo much that her eyes were swollen but her tearz didn't seem to finsh after about 30 minutes of just crying in the garden she decidez to go home pack her bagz n go away from uday's life forever cuz that's wat he wants... Manyata was still crying in the car n she was having flashbacks of her life all those moments she spent wif uday all those happy moments then she get a flashback of wat uday had told her n she stops crying... She reaches the raj mahal n runs to her room n starts crying again she finally gets a hold of herslef she writes a letter to her family n uday that she is leaving to devgardh cuz by staying here she is just making matters worse.. She is about to live the palace wen she faints that's wen uday Vb J n unnati come home n they see manyata lying on the floor uday quickly runs to her n holdz her n tries waking her up but she is unconcious they quickly call the doctor n he says that manyata is just unconcious cuz she is weak seemz like she hasn't eaten for a few dayz ... Manyata finally regains concious n she asks if uday is here n vB says no his not here n manyata get sad hearing that she quickly gets up n starts goin while evry1 was callin her but she just kept walking she knew were uday wud be so she quickly got in the car n told the driver to go to uday niwas hotel.. The driver quickly drove there n manyata went to his room were she saw him drinking heavily manyata quickly ran to him n wen uday saw her he started shoutin at her.. Uday: why have u come here so that u can break my heart again why does it affect u soo badly of wat I doo with my life huh tell me why do u care so much I told u to go away then y do u keep coming back tell me manyata WHY u said u don't love me then WHY???? Manyata: Becuz I LOVE U GOD DAMMIT... Yes I love u I donno how n wen I started loving u but all I know is that I love u very much even more then myself it does effect me wen u do all this I dnt like seeing u hurt cuz seeing u hurt hurts me more then it hurts u but if that's wat ur decsion is then fine I'll go away from ur life... GOODBYE YUVRAAJ UDAYVEER SINGH ... Sayin this she starts going away but uday quicky grabs her hand n pulls he closee towardz him n he doez it with so much force that they both fall on each other on the bed n uday quickly hugs her tightly n says. Uday: manyata u don't know how long I've waited to hear this from u I u finally said it God I cnt belive it really happned I Love u too manyata I love u more then myself... Plz 4give me I knw I've been very rude to u but u had broken my heart soo many times I just cudnt help but feeling u'l do it again but afta wat u said 2day I knw that u luv me very much plz 4give me... All this while manyata was just hugin uday n cryin afta some while she said uday I'm soo sorry plz 4give me for all that I've done plzz 4give me n I promise I won't ever break ur heart evr again ... N saying this she pulls uday tightly n kiss jim on the lips ... Usay was caught offguard but he quickly also responce to the kiss with equaly enthusium n they both loack the night in each others armz... THAT'S it guys hope u enjoyed it

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Posted: 12 years ago
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lovely and awesome beautifully written please write more i loved your writing skills
this OS was beautifully written
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Very nice...very well written...keep it up.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Thanx guys for liking my OS I'l try writing more
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gr8 os plzz write more
i loved it
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Welcome to the DEK Forum Sumi.🤗
Fantastic OS , very well written .👏 👏 👏
Just loved it.😊 It's damn brilliant.😛
It's your first OS, But it's just great.👍🏼
Thanks for the beautiful OS.😊
Great work.👍🏼
I hope you'll write many more OS on Manveer, awesome.😊
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