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Posted: 12 years ago
#91
@ lucykaede
Nw dats actually tricky...
The antagonist...
i toh m suspicious about evry1!
super mysterious...
rathore...nupur etc etc...
well update soon soon soon :)
wud b waiting 4 ur PM :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
#92

Originally posted by: coolfizzy

@ lucykaede

Nw dats actually tricky...
The antagonist...
i toh m suspicious about evry1!
super mysterious...
rathore...nupur etc etc...
well update soon soon soon :)
wud b waiting 4 ur PM :)


he he he i know its very tricky,thats why i asked you.

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Posted: 12 years ago
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chapter-7-my guardian angel??(there is some violent parts)
parents were going in a bus to the valley where the bus fell.everyone looked calm as their children were okay but jhanvi and shekhar were still very much scared.the bus reached there.when parents reached there they saw the most cruel thing which they could see in their entire life.they started crying,some fainted,some got in state of shock.jhanvi and shekhar were like the sad feeling can't even be described.children body parts were lying here and there,reporter's body was like torn apart,only bus driver's hand was lying there.
shekhar-😭-ye killing waise he hue hain jaise arnab sir ke hue hain.kaun hain ye mutant jo humans ko maar raha hain.jhanvi fainted.
shekhar-jhanvi,jhanvi...😭
one day later(ye sad incident news mein aa gaya,bahut charcha ho rahe hain is accident ke,pehle bus valley mein girti hain,phir sab bach jaate hain sivay ek teacher aur student ke aur jab parents wahan jate hain to sabke body parts aise milte hain jaise torn kar diye hon.it became a big scandal)
reporter-to jaisa ke aap dekh rahe hain police ke paas ab tak koi jawaab nahe hain is killing ka,doctors ka kehna hain ke ye killing na to kise knife se ke gai hain,na he kise aur auzaar se par aisa kaise ho sakta hain,hamein call karein 9856471232 par.
yuvraaj-kaun ho sakta hain?
kitty-ye definitely koi telekinate he kar sakta hain par koi itna powerful kaise ho sakta hain?😲.hamne master nupur ke powers dekhe hain par wo bhe itna massacre nahi kar sakti.
mohit-koi connection to lag raha hain master ka is scandal se kyunki wo us kid ko jo waha se utha kar le aye hain.
kitty-aur professor bhe,kamaal hain,ye dono saath work karein,aisa rare he hota hain.
yuvraaj-rathod bhai yaha hote to kuch baat bhe karte master se,hamari to himmat he nahe hain kuch puchne ke.par jo bhe kaho wo bacche bahut pyaari hain.
kitty-abhe tak hosh nahe aya hain use.
in confinement room...
ashish-i think now its time,we have done all things which we could do.but what about her?won't she attack us again.
nupur-no...she will wait for the right time,its not her thing to kill someone instantly,she wants to torcher her first which i won't allow,not this time.
ashish-she is powerful than us.
nupur-i know but we are safe here,thanks to your father.
ashish 😡
anu was lying on a metal slab.her hands were tied.she started waking up.
ashish-huh...
nupur a little scared...
ashish-what do you think??is she in her senses or...our plan worked.
nupur-if it didn't worked,we are gonna be screwed.
anu opens her eyes,her eye colour was same to their goodwill.
nupur-thank god.
ashish-phew...
anu scared-mein,mein kahan hun??
nupur opened her hands...
anu-aap kaun hain?
nupur-hello darling,i am nupur.
ashish waved-i am professor ashish.
anu-muzhe aap yahan kyun laye hain??😭
nupur-oh honey don't cry.humne tumhe bachaya hain.
anu-bachaya hain??
ashish-yaad karo last time tumhare saath kya hua tha.
anu-mein mera music box baja...huh...mera box,mera box kahan hain,she became very impatient...mera box...mera box kahan hain,muzhe mera box do,she looked angry...😡
nupur-oh oh relax.ye lo tumhara box.
anu became calm after seeing it.
ashish thinks-ye box...ye box...itna imp hain inke liye...????😲
anu-aap muzhe yahan kyun laye hain?
nupur-ab tumhe yahe rehna hain.
anu shocked-par kyun??
nupur-tumhare powers wo tumhare andar grow kar rahe hain,tumhe hamara mutant school join karna padega,agar tumne apne powers ko control karna nahe sikha to tumhare jaan ja sakti hain.
anu-par aap log kaun hain?
nupur-mein bhe tumhare tarah ek mutant hun,ek telepath aur telekinate.
anu-mein telekinate nahe hun.
ashish laughed.😆...anu 😕 nupur😡
nupur-oh honey tum ho,tumhare bus jo khai mein giri the wo tumhare wazah se.
anu shocked-kya??😲
nupur-haan aur agar tumne apne powers ko control karna nahe sikha to ye powers tumhare aur tumhare aas pass ke logo ke jaan le sakti hain.
anu-par aap logo ko mere baare mein kaise pata chala??
nupur-baby mein telepath hun,aise cheezen sense kar lete hun,jab tumhari powers fully develop aur control ho jayenge to bas tum bhe sense kar sakoge.par wo tumhare powers ke ability par depend karega.to kya tum hamein join karoge??
anu-please meri mere parents se baat karwa dijiye,please.
nupur-sry na to tum apne parents se mil sakte ho aur na he kise aur apne jaane waale se.
anu-nahin aisa mat kijiye,please mere parents se muzhe milwa dijiye.mein aapka school join karunge par please ek baar.
nupur-i wish honey ke hum tumhare liye ye kar sakta par jab tak tumhari powers develop nahe ho jaati,sry tum sirf hamare jaane waale mutants se he mil sakti ho,don't worry tumhe yahan mansion mein koi problems nahe hoge.
anu started crying-aap aisa kyun kar rahe hain??please muzhe mere parents se milwa dijiye.
ashish talks to nupur telepathically
ashish-we have to trick her.agar inhone apne mind par stress dala to ho sakta hain.
nupur-i know..we have to trick her.ah tumhara naam kya hain?
anu-anushka kapoor...
nupur-okay to ise sabse pehle badalna hoga.
anu-jee?
nupur-haan,ab tumhara naam kya rakhen ah...niranjana kaisa rahega??
anu-ye aap sab kya keh rahe hain.
ashish-haan niranjana naam bahut accha hain.
yuvraaj enters-aapne bulaya master.
nupur-yuvraaj niranjana ko uska bedroom dikha do.
yuvraaj-aao niranjana...
anu-huh...par mere parents...??
anu-tumhare parents ka hum pura dhyan rakhenge,jab tumhare powers develop ho jayege tab tumhare parents kahan hain tum ye bhe dekh sakoge apne powers se.
anu-par aapne mera naam kyun change kiya hain???
nupur-hum tumhe preserve karke rakhna chahte hain,your powers are too precious.kal se tumhari training start ho jayege.ah yuvraaj..
yuvi-yes master.
nupur-aaj niranjana ko kitty ke saath sleep karne do,kitty ke saath iska man lagega.
yuvi-okay...anu grabbed yuvi's hands.
yuvi saw her with a smile,she was crying,he sat down...and wiped her tears.
yuvi-don't worry,mein bhe start mein bahut roya tha par ab mera yahan se jaane ka man he nahe karta.
anu-aapko bhe apne parents se alag kar diya gaya tha.😭
yuvi-haan..par uske chodo na,chalo tumhe room dikhata hun.
ashish-niranjana...huh...tum history ko repeat to nahe karne ka soch rahe ho.
nupur-history na repeat ho isliye to mein ye sab kar rahe hun.
Edited by lucykaede - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#94
a true definition of sadness
a true definition of gentleness


the most sadistic love story.Elfen Lied Eye
Edited by lucykaede - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#95
second generation character sketch(i know you guys must be thinking what an odd girl,she just started the story and then jumped to second generation but trust me readers,second generation is very much connected to first generation story.don't worry moharika fans will get their enough dose because second generati0n is not coming anytime soon.first generation is not finished yet,actually not even started.😆)
1-karthik-son of hrithvik and suryashree.will brought up by neeranjana/anuskha and hrithvik.neeranjana loves him very much,sometimes neglecting her own children for him.this makes him sad because he thinks she pays attention to him because his actual mother died.he loves his step siblings very much.
anandi jha-sister of sunil jha,will develop blood bond with karthik but he will pay no attention to her.

3-nandini-first child of hrithvik and anu,very studious and a little jealous of her younger sister because her younger sister is as powerful as her mother but she is not.

4-jhanvi-anu named her after her mother,not as powerful as her mother but still very powerful.second generation revolves around her story connected to first generation
5-rehan-anu's youngest son, carefree person,has a drastic love for sports car,his power is fire.






Edited by lucykaede - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#96


neeranjana-she will be seen in back stories,neeranjana enterprises was named after her.

professor ashish sharma-he will have a bigger role in second generation.


Edited by lucykaede - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#97
Confused a bit...
although all d charecters r amazing...
bt Kathik...z bought up by anushka/niranjana n hrithvik???
i mean anuska/niranjana r 2 diff. person rite...so hw???
n i liked d update...
Anu in mutant school...
not fair...family ko toh inform karna tha...
well nvr mind :)

read ur commnet dat u'll update late nw...
plz try 2 update it soon :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
#98

Originally posted by: coolfizzy

Confused a bit...

although all d charecters r amazing...
bt Kathik...z bought up by anushka/niranjana n hrithvik???
i mean anuska/niranjana r 2 diff. person rite...so hw???
n i liked d update...
Anu in mutant school...
not fair...family ko toh inform karna tha...
well nvr mind :)

read ur commnet dat u'll update late nw...
plz try 2 update it soon :)



i am here to remove your confusions...
okay niranjana is just a name that nupur gave to anu.there are some secrets and i don't wanna give hints so soon.honey you should read update properly,nupur has named anu,niranjana.
and yes family ko inform karna chahiye par please patience rakhein,every action has some motive behind it.i already warned my readers that they have to make themselves extemely patient.at first the story will look hell confusing but mysteries will solve just a bit later.

and thank you for your comment.

and about karthik,yes he will brought up by anu and hrithvik because surya will die.i think i already mentioned it.😕
Edited by lucykaede - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#99
CHAPTER-8-a requited unrequited love.
yuvi took anu to kitty's room.
kitty-oh she is awaken.
yuvi-she has joined us,now we have to take care of her.her training will start tomorrow.
kitty kneels-hello cutie,whats your name?
yuvi-neeranjana.
kitty-shut up i asked her.
anu-neeranjana(sadly😭)she thinks-agar maine zyada problems create kare to ho sakta hain ye log muzhe torcher karein.
nupur comes from behind and she giggled,she pats her on the head.
nupur-there is no way in the world i am gonna torcher you my darling.
anu-huh??you read my mind?
nupur-i told you i am a telepath but you need to learn to block your brain as you are a telepath as well.
kitty-wow she is a telepath.
nupur-hmm...a telekinate as well.
yuvi-awesome.
suddenly nupur's phone rings...***ring***ring***
nupur-hello..
amrit-hey mother,its me...
nupur-why you called?
amrit-i am coming back from my trip.i will land tomorrow.
nupur-okay,by the way we have a new mutant here.
amrit-oh really who is it?
nupur-she is a young girl,a telepath and telekinate.
amrit-wow just like us.
nupur-yup,its your responsibility to take care of her when i am not around.
amrit-okey dokey...she smiled.
anu-please atleast let me talk to my parents.
kitty-you can't,even if your parents are mutants you just can't talk to them or call them.our school is super secret,you will attend normal school in day and our school in early morning and evening.
anu-why are you doing this to me??she started crying.
yuvi kneels and pats her head-don't cry,when you will grow up you will come to understand this.
she closed her eyes...suddenly her head started hurting,she fainted...
nupur shocked...she thinks-no...
in her dream..
anu is wandering in deep dark forest...
anu-huh...she saw a little girl all drowned in blood.
she thinks-who is she??
then she saw a boy with a music box.he opened the box.
the suddenly her dream changed to other...
a cute young teenage girl is preparing food.
girl shouts-vikrant...just take care of her...i will be back...and another teen girl is all lying on the floor covered in blood.a teen boy...she couldn't see his face clearly...
boy pats her head-don't worry,you will be just fine.i am here for you.the girl lying on the floor grabs his face and took his hand and placed it on her chest...boy shocked...
anu-aaa..aaa...suddenly the thoughts again started fading...
it felt like someone was blocking it and trying to erase it.
surya-huh.hrithvik was not at home...
surya ran to her room and opened her almirah.she was searching for a particular thing...
surya opens a drawer and took out a beautiful a rare purple coloured sea shell.(its alternative earth)
surya reminds(happened decades ago)-she as a child with her cousin hrithvik and his sister.
hrithvik-hey...kala(his sister)what are you doing?
kala-brother i am trying to find a sea shell.
surya was sitting with him on the beach.
surya-tum kal chale jaoge na.
hrithvik-haan to...
surya-i don't want you to go.
hrithvik-are main waapas aaonga na,phir se...he he he...tab tak tum chaucer khelna seekh jaana,hamesha muzhse haar jaati ho.
surya-shut up.😡
hrithvik-he he...
surya-kya tum muzhe pasand karte ho?😳
hrithvik-huh,ofcourse you are my cousin,i really like you.
surya-no i meant...kala comes to him.
kala-brother see what i found??
hrithvik-wow,this is beautiful kala,a purple coloured sea shell,its so rare.
kala-yup,its nice na,i will gift this to dad on his birthday tomorrow.
hrithvik-he will be happy to see it...
surya comes out of her thoughts...
surya-after that your life totally changed.i was always jealous of other girls who touched you,came close to you and still you never paid any attention to me and when we finally become one it was not the real you.she started crying.wish you actually loved me.😭

next update title-my new beginning as niranjana.


next update will be in october.till then try to puzzle out the mystery.
Edited by lucykaede - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Oh lovely updates..

as usual I'm a little late hun.. hehe. Loved both the updates.. awww I just loved anu-yuvi's convo.. n gosh! I love Hrithvik-Surya.. poor surya will die..

anyway.. superb update.. Keep up the great work :)

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