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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hey Hetal,

Good One! Loved it. waiting for more

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: kbtr

Haha! Wet sari! I gues he got too smitten with you! That's a beautiful and romantic OS. tfs😃

Lolzzz😳 well well.. looks like i need to ask him abt it...

Originally posted by: Omoraboti

Amna is such a sweetheart! that's a nice intro .. hope we will get to hear more from you.


Yup tonite u will hear more... :p
will send u a PM

Originally posted by: ddFan2012

Hey Hetal,

Good One! Loved it. waiting for more

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Thank you for the compliment...

Yup.. will update today...
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Lovely encounter, pretty romantic waiting for updates now!
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Originally posted by: ddFan2012

Lovely encounter, pretty romantic waiting for updates now!


was suppose to update today... but my Red mirchi wanna go out at 12am... pata nahi where he wants to take me at 12...

nope its not my birthday nor his.. not our anni... toh jaana kaha hai...

im sitting ready waiting for him...

so i can only update tomolo... sorry 😭
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Re-cap: Khushi and her friend Amna attended Navratri celebration. Khushi went to quench her thirsty but almost slipped... A strong arm held her from falling... The guy was rude and Khushi didn't like his manner of talking...Amna introduced herself and the guy introduced himself as Arnav Singh Raizada. Khushi walked away from them and started talking to her relative, Sejal but her gaze never left Arnav. Khushi called Amna and was taken back in jealousy when Amna kissed Arnav, a gesture of saying bye. Khushi decided to go back and they were walking to the car, Arnav called her. She turn in shock and was more surprised when Arnav said she will need his number to call him. Khushi bluntly denied and sat in the car. Amna took the car from Arnav and gave it to Khushi. Khushi was amazed as why will she call him until she realised Amna had given her phone to Arnav.


Ab Aage...

Amna was having her bath while I was drying my hair... I was so confused in my own thoughts... afterall my crazy bear had just done a huge blunder...

"What do I do now...? This crazy kangaroo has given my phone to that red mirchi... ARNAV SINGH RAIZADA... the name itself is so arrogant... how can one expect the person to be humble and down to earth.. uff what do I do now...??

Suddenly my house phone rang...


"Beta... tame kya choo?" (Dear... where are you?)

"Jai Jinendra mummy... hu ghare chu.. Navratri thi aavi gai... {Greeting mummy... I have got home from Navratri)

"Aane tamaro phone kya che"... (And where is your phone)

*All conversation in gujarati coz I'm a gujarati girl...*

"Maro phone... ermmm (my phone.. ermmm)😕

Crap.. i should have called mom and told her not to call on my mobile... she must have called and that red mirchi must have answered it... ohh crap.. what do I tell mom now... The thought was just bugging my head...

"Hello!!! Su thayu? Main ketli vaar try kero pan tame phone na upairo beta... silent ma che?" (Hello!!! What happened? I tried calling so many times but you didn't answer.. is it on silent mode?)

Wow... what a relieve... thank god he didn't answer the call...

"Haa mummy... silent ma che ane Kangroo na bag ma che..." (Yes mummy, its on silent and it is in Kangaroo's bag)

"Kangaroo?? My mom wondered"

"Arey maro matlab che.. Amna na handbag ma che.." (Arey I mean it is in Amna's handbag)..

"Acha its ok... aaram thi sui jau bane... goodnite" (Oh it is okie.. both of you sleep well... goodnite)

"Goodnite mummy"... wow.. I was now so relieved... Thankful that he didn't answer mom's call... but wait before he answer any other call... I need to call him...

NO!!!!! I'm not calling him... I looked at the time and it was quarter to 12am... Hmm generally no one calls me after this time.. so its okie...

I went to my laptop and started working on my assignment...

Khushi!!!!!!!!!!!!! I heard Amna scream...

Omg... what happen Amna.. I rushed to her...

Did you call the hot Arnav? 😉 she said while happily drying her hair...

What the heck yaar Amna.. you scared me... NOP!! I didn't and I'm not going to call him...

'Well your phone is with him Khushi'...Amna tried to persuading me

Yes kangaroo I know its with him.. and all credit to you rite...😳

Hey doll.. relax... While you was away talking to some chick... he asked me if you had a boyfriend... first and the most direct question... so of course i said NO... and I knew I need to get you to call him...

What!!! he asked you such question?? He is rude and arrogant that I saw but he is also crazy and stupid... And you are worse Amna... couldn't you say Yes I have a boyfriend...?

Doll.. that of course I said...

Huh? I was confused at Amna's sudden change of words... "But earlier you said you told him I don't have a boyfriend..."

Arey crazy woman... I said Khushi doesn't have a boyfriend... but yes I (Amna) has a boyfriend... Samji silly girl... Amna chuckled while walking away...

Omg!!! This girl will make me mad... Amna... (while walking behind her) you changed the party in a split second... you are suppose to shuuu the guy away but you are opening ways for him to come here... whats wrong with you...😡

Nothing Khushi... he helped you and you have to say thank you... thats all... and also get your N96 back from him...😆

I just went off to bed not wanting to hear or think about that rude arrogant man...

I tossed and turn on the bed when Amna jumped in and said 'SORRY'... I wanted to be the cupid but didn't know you will be hurt... I thought you too got attracted... I saw you staring at him amazed at his physic... and yaa his eyes killed you rite...come on doll.. We have been friends for 15 years now... its different that we parted 6 years ago as my parents decided to go off to UK... but we have had our childhood together... I know you that much okie...

She was right I thought in my head... Our friendship is too deep... we don't need words to express our feeling... This is one part I can't run away from when it comes to Amna... our friendship... but I was in denial... nope... I didn't get attracted to him, his physic or his eyes...and why is he our topic now??

Khushi... you remember Jaivin...? Once while practicing for school drama, he tried holding you hand... you were only 11 and you slapped him sooo hard 😆 that poor 12 year old guy CRIED 🤣 both me and Amna ended up laughing...

Yeaaa I remember it so well... poor guy.. since then he never came near me... 😆 But wait...😕 what has that got to do with this...?

Khushi... you didn't slap Arnav in fact you stood there staying comfortable by him... 😉

Amna.. you need glasses.. my foot was hurting and I wasn't sure what happened so was trying to get to reality... now shut up and sleep... no more ARNAV SINGH RAIZADA... goodnite.. I hugged her and tucked myself in bed...

Goodnite doll.. but i bet you will call... the card is with you rite...I'm just checking.. Amna went on but I ignored and fell asleep...

4.45am...


Khushi... Pick that damn phone... its ringing for the 8th time now... please answer it... its bugging my sleep...

Hmm.. what!!!! 8th time?? huh?? house phone... ohh shit!! who is it at this time... crap crap...

I ran towards the house phone...

"hello...???" 'HellO...?''HELLO!!!!!!' 😡😡 Who is this.. why are you bugging me middle of the night... crazy...

Ohh so you recognized its me...? the voice was so familiar on the other side...

Omg!!!! Bhai...!!!!! you are crazy you know... its almost 5am here... how are you... awww missed you voice...

Hey hey chill... can I speak now..? Firstly... how are you? Second.. sorry I woke you up but it was urgent... Thirdly... where is your phone..? Luckily you stay alone.. other mama mami would have sliced me by now... 😆

Ohh bhai... relax... firstly.. I'm absolutely fine... fasting for navratri but all good... secondly... if its to wake up from sleep to hear you... I never mind it 😃 and thirdly... my phone...😕 you called is it.. did anyone pick up?

Khushi... who would pick up your phone beside you yourself?

Bhai... someone took my phone by mistake...

(my fingers were crossed... bhai is one person i never lie to... ohh talking about bhai.. let me introduce him first... Rusharb bhai.. he is my buva's son.. stays in Germany with his parents, wife and beautiful Phool, my niece ...and yes her name is Phool Rusharb Shah... 😃... Bhai and I share a very different relationship... we are best friends, we are partners in crime.. we are best bro-sis... we are best fighters... wow... it can go on and on... My cousin sister [Rusharb bhai's real sister] and I were very close since young.. so eventually I am the close to Rusharb bhai among all we cousins... but since she passed away...her empty space in our lives and heart got us bonded so much more.. so now I'm the closest to Rusharb bhai..)

Anywayz what is so urgent bhai..? Is everything okie...?

Yes everything is beyond ok my lil rakabi... (Bhai calls me rakabi [tea saucer] at times because once i knocked him with it...)

Then bhai... 5am? that too more than 8 times i guess you called... i'm getting worried...

Arey relax... Phool wanna talk... and she has something to say...

Bhaii...(I'm here worried and he is playing games...😡)

Hey fiya (Phool calls me fiya as in Buva)... how yoou...

Awww my adorable phool... fiya is sleepy...😆 how are you gulaabchan 😆...?

I'm on sky fiya... news for you...

Wow... my 5 year old cutie flower has news for me... tell me beta...I'm listening...

Fiya if girl I wanna name her Jasmine and if boy I want to name him Garden...🤡

OMG!!!! My Niece was sooo innocent... Phool... what did you just said beta...😲 Jasmine.. Garden... beta can i speak to papa..?

Ok fiya.. papa talk..

Bhai... ohh my god... 🤗 🥳 🤪

I'm going to be an aunt again??... and whats with Jasmine and Garden.. ohh wait how many months...???

I was all over the place... bhabi is pregnant ohhh yea... 🤗 🥳 🤪Bhai.. hello...?

Khushi 😃... Toral is 7 weeks pregnant... and we just got to know today... When she was expecting Phool... you were the first after mummy papa to know the news... So we wanted to keep up with the trend...😳

Bhai... I'm crying now... I'm sooo happy... where is bhabi??

Well she is talking to her mother.. for now you sleep which I know you wont... but yea.. call us later when the sun has rise there... for now goodnite... Bhai was about to hang up...

Bhaiii... wait... CONGRATZ... He 😆 and said.. same to you fiya 😉

We both hanged up... ohh lord... I can't be happier... I'm going to be aunt again...

Now I surely can't sleep and bhai knew me so well... I quickly showered and got dress... I left a note for Amna stating I have gone to the temple... very very big news... will tell her when I c her...

I drove to the temple... I couldn't thank Devi Maiya without visiting her house, Mandir...

Just on time for Aarti... and I prayed for the happy news...I got prasad for everyone... As I was distributing prasad... someone came to my back and slightly lean to whisper something in my ears...

"I waited for you call... but you didn't call... don't you need your phone...Your mummy called and your bhai was buzzing me at middle of the night... resulting me widely awake and came to temple..."

I turned and was shocked... ohh crap... ARNAV SINGH RAIZADA...??? I knew this is a huge co-incident because Kangaroo is sleeping soundly at home... ohh GOD... what is this suppose to mean...?

I hid my surprise expression and folded my arms... "Well Mr. Raizada... probably you didn't hear me well.. I clearly told you I won't call... so its not my fault that you waited...

"Hmmm okie.. no problems... but yea next time I won't hesitate to pick the call... have a good day..." saying this he left with that victory smirk on his face!!

Crap!!! 😡 Ego!!! Ego!!! Ego!!! I won't call thats for sure...

I prayed once again before leaving and as I walked towards my car.. he voiced out for me again...

Khushi... one moment...

He quickly step towards me... I was least interest but don't know why still waiting to hear what he wanted to say...

"Look it was an extreme co-incident that I met you today... looks like there is a connection... yesterday we met at Devi Maiya's occasion... and today too... So call me okie..."

Mr. Raizada... are you deaf or stupid...? Don't you get it.. I don't want to call you... and why should I? Not interested...

Well you are afraid... because I know you found me attractive and you can't resist...

Huh??? Please step out of your dreamland Mr. Raizada... what made you think I'm attracted to you...?

Well... you habit of wiping you nose again & again...makes me feel that...

He seriously observed me... crap!!! Am I so readable..? Well... that just my habit... not indicating I'm attracted... silly thought... Finishing that i turned to open my car...

We are destine to meet... again for sure

You are wrong Mr. Raizada... this is just co-incident.. don't give it destiny's name...

Okie... lets bet... If you meet me co-incidentally as you put it...hmm lets say three times ..then you have to come for a dinner with me...

No Mr. Raizada... I don't want to bet on any of such crazy things... and dinner with you.. its a waste of MY time...

You know I'm saying the truth regarding us being destine.. thats why you are afraid...

Stop challenging me coz it ain't working...

Okie Khushi... if you think it is a challenge... accept it or call yourself a coward...

How dare he...😲😡 I'm not a coward okie!!! And why am I listening to your crap... (Again i turned towards my car)

Prove it by accepting my challenge... or else you surely are a coward...

I was pissed!!! Fine... I agree... 3 times... CO-INCIDENTALLY... If we meet ... I'll go out for dinner... but if we don't ... dare you come near me again!!!!!

Saying this I turned and opened my driver seat car door...As I was about to seat...

Khushi... (His hand was holding my arm...) Here you go... your phone... I have saved my number in it... so its easier for you to call me...I know you will if not today then someday... but you will...have a nice day...

Saying this he left... and didn't turn back... I was stunned... What was he...? A mind reader? A rude man? A sweet flirt? A crazy egoist creep? A challenger? or A Genius Playboy?

Thinking of all these... I just looked at my phone and closed my eyes... Hey Devi Maiya... I don't know what is your plan... but this is the best way to give me my questions...

1. Am I attracted to him?

2. Is he the guy I had waited for?

3. Is he genuine?

4. Is this your wish, Devi Maiya?

If all this answers is YES... then i would love to meet him 3 times... but no cheating please...

I sat in the car and drove off... 2 hot news for Amna... couldn't wait to reach home...

I thought it would be fun keeping her stunned and impatient... so I called her from my phone...

She wasn't aware of what happened so she thought it was Arnav calling...

'Hey hunk... I'm sorry i know she didn't call... but she did look interested in your topic... but wanted to ask... do you like her.. just by seeing her once? she is my best friend you know...'... Amna and her non-brake train...

Kangaroo... shut up... don't get so overwhelmed okie...

Khushi!!! What the hell... you have your phone..? but you said you are going to the temple rite!!! Ohh crap wait.. you wrote... very very big news...whats happening...🤪

Amna.. relax... will be home in 15minutes... so will tell you then...

Bye for now...saying this i hanged up.. oh yea she will now be pulling her hair out trying to figure ot what happened. 😆

To Be Continued...

Hey guys... how was it?

Well this is surely a sequence fit for Arnav and Khushi but this is actually the real life story...
This is the continuation of how i met my version of ASR...
I mentioned in my previous OS about how similar is my ASR and some part of my life is so clear in IPKKND... So i thought i would use my real life encounters with my ASR to present it for Arshi Fans...

Do let me know what do you think about this...


humsafar... this is specially for you as you wanted to know how did me and my ASR met 😳



Edited by hetalmkn - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Loved the update...can imagine ASR and Khushi in such a situation...Thanks for the PM
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Posted: 12 years ago
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tht was so cute!!...n hey i m also gujrati so njoyd d phone convo in gujrati a lot!!...😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Yikes! The Gujarati conversation was my favourite! Khoob j saaru update che, behn!! Loved it!
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very beautiful update, loved it. please cont soon.
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Thanks guys...

Lolzz continue... 🤣

Its rock n roll 3 years of my life...

how do i update all... okie i will surely... you guys need to know if this version of 'ASR' won the bet or not... 😆

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