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This is my imagination, I am hoping that Khushi being true to her nature of looking only for the good in life will bring Shyam back to Anjali at RM & there on,,,,
I want Arnav & Khushi bond to get stronger withering all hardships & hence the OS, Hope you will njoi reading, Any resemblance to story coincidencal and I retain the sole copyright of my work
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~~~~ Hopes Rekindled ~~~~




Khushi closed hert eyes and a few drops of tears ran down her cheeks, she had tried to reach him once agn he had shut him she had felt lost once agn

After days of constant conflict between her mind & heart her heart said that Shyam ji can change after such a big loss of the baby, a devil or angel can change yet her mind said Arnavji cant be wrong, he has always had a great understanding of things, he was more experienced worldly
n he will never do anything to hurt di, his Di was always his priority, he placed her well being much ahead of himself and he will never dream of doing something which wasn't in best interest of her but she had seen slowly all his near & dear ones, slowly each one was inching away from him and she couldn't see that happening to him, she knew on outside he was tough
but inside he was still a 14 year old boy who was scared on being alone and loosing his dear ones but for once she hadn't been able to reach him.
She had tried to reason it with him, but the moment he had heard shyams name, he had blasted her, his fuse had blown he had not let her speak,,she knew he had been in pain, her actions had hurt him and that's why he had shut himself, but he had to trust hernot in her dreams would she think wrong for him or his family.
She knew if she hadn't bought Shyam back, the wedge between him n di would hv resulted in loss which would be irreplaceable bcz Di had been seeing Shyam behind his back, somewhere hurting the trust he had placed in her yet when it would hv come out it would hv brought the storm which would hv wiped the world for them,,,so to hold it she had done that & she had tried to explain it to him, but he had shut her out, he had rejected all her efforts to talk to him.
He had withdrawn his shell of ASR, he was back to shouting & breaking things everyone knew the reason but no one could reach him, nor her, nor naniji even niether di,,,,,she had called him, texted him, been to their room, every time he had rejected her.

At RM he avoided her and she had visited to AR too in a desperate measure to reach him, Amanji had responded ASR is bzy in a meeting, he will get back to you.

Khushi dint know how to reach to him, and today it was their sangeet, she had looked forward to this day, specially after the mehndi, they way he had shown his mehndi to her, she now believed
he did value her in his life
He had done so many things for her, he had gone against his thoughts abt marriage
and gvn her a marriage with rituals
He had given her the gifts which mite not be expensive but showed his
thoughts abt her
He had told her I love u dammit
and Finally when after the miscarriage at RM he had said "Mat jao" It had outlined his need for her

& when di had demanded he had been torn and then she had decided to get shyam back at RM, this was betryal in his eyes and tonight when she had come to RM, he had been standing in the lobby, she had approached him hesitantly n he had ignored her n left her standing there
slow tears had made way down the cheeks
She quickly moved to guest room and called NK on his mobile &chckd abt Shyamji, she had hired two PVT detectives and NK all were keeping track of shyam ji all activities n if he did anything, they will hv proof she had made sure she cant loose the gamble she had played this time, she had put her and Di life on gamble she hadn't been worried abt herself but di he cant let her be hurt agn, she was fragile she had understood that.
She had pulled the red saree he had gifted her for bday and the matching bangles and the earrings he had gifted her on the way back from date,she had ruined the date and he had gifted hr the most beautiful earrings, he had selected themselves, she had got a special backless blouse made for the saree,she knew tonite she willl get her chance to make apologies, make him listen to her.
She was praying fervently and suddenly everything went Black, she couldn't see anything an thud she had fallen, but before she could hit ground two strong hands had broken her fall, HP Nani Payal he had shrieked, and in a few mins the whole RM had collected, akash had called the doctor and HP had got ice cold water and bandage, Arnav when he had held her he had realized her body was burning with fever, and somewhere he was grateful he had reached before her fall, she mite hv hurt herself badly.
He changed bandage rapidly & nervously, she was still unconscious and it had been abt 30 mins

since he had caught her, he was nervous, but the doctor arrived just then she had chcked her, gv a injection to her and told him,,,

Mr. Raizada dunt worry, she fainted due to low BP which can be stress+hetic activity and no food on time I hv gvn her the medicine she should be better in no time, she had some fever and I hv gvn her a injection for paracetamol too, she will be awake soon.

He thanked the doctor and went to drop her back, when he returned she had woken up and nani n di had trying to gv her juice to her but she wasn't welcoming the juice.

As soon as Nani & Di saw him return, they tactfully made them sparse, soon Mami Payal n Akash also left, he came to her, sat near her, held her hand, she was shivering, eyes closed he leaned in, held her face in his large tanned hands & moved closer, he kissed her on forehead, once he kissed her forehead nad then he moved to her eyes & checks, he hugged her tightly choking her breathe.

Dunt u ever do that to me KKGSR, you could hv got hurt or sick, how dare you

Dunt you forget you are mine now KKGSR, Khushi closed her eyes & tears ran dwn once agn but silently she thanked DM at least he talked to her, all was not hope was kindling somewhere in the debris,,, but hope was alive

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Hey Dear, U hv reached Until here, it wont be a big effort to leave a comment, Please Please do leave comments, it tells me my strengths & weaknesses, will try to improve...
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If you liked this may be you gonna njoi my other work too,,, below I hv pasted the link

Perfect Gift: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/iss-pyaar-ko-kya-naam-doon/3109411/ipkknd-os-perfect-gift

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cool_tweety thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Me first😃, loved it Jhals.😃
Now for detailed comments..😆
firstly loved the fact that u wrote abt khushi wearing the pink saree..i so want her to wear that.
Secondly, i also loved ASR gifting a set during their date, i sooo wanted the date to last for some more time..but it was too short..jus like ur OS😛, thoda romance would have made my day..😃, but it was crisp n good.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Jhals, lovely os, ASR true to his nature closed himself of 4rm everybody and it was the scare which made him respond again. At least in ur OS she has some brains she hired detectives

loved the line don't 4get ur mine KKGSR.

Tweety - u just beat me to it thou id get the first spot
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Loved it, Jhlas! Emotional and yet, joyous! 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Wondeful OS Jhalak 🤗 ...loved it !
After friday's episode something like this was really needed...
Edited by spsharmila - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Jhals Superb👏

With the redsaree and bangles 🤢... Wonderful👏
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Posted: 13 years ago
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oh wow it was written sooo beautifully...you have kept them true to their characters...loved it very much dear...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Jhals brilliant. Wow love dit. Such a beautiful and good OS.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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a nice heart-warming story... lovely to see arnav worried about khushi despite being angry with her at her 'betrayal'... they really need to talk things out!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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ASR is acting so true to character, sulking, making himself impossible to reach, even by Khushi.
Poor Khushi, I wish ASR listens to her, at least now...

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