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Posted: 13 years ago
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Hi everyone...😊
this is my first try to write something... i hope you will like it... plz... do press like and comment to tell me how was it... 😳


HER LEAVING



Repoters were all around the hotel to get a glimpse of Maan Singh Khurana... who won the best businessman of the year award from last five years... but he didn't give a damn about it... he ignored them and straight away went towards his car... repoters tries to take his pictures but his bodyguards shoved them away and he sat in his car... just then his cell phone rang... he was not in a mood to pick it up but seeing the caller he couldn't ignore it... he picked it up with a smile on his face... before he could say anything the caller said angrily...
Maan Singh Khurana... i am very angry with you...
Maan smiles hearing it... the only person in this world who can make him smile is her...
Maan - oh... may i ask the reason Geet Maan Singh Khurana...
its my birthday and you didn't come home yet... she pouted cutely as if he can see her on the phone...
Maan - i am sorry sweetheart but i am in a meeting and you have to wait for sometime more... he lied because he wanted to give her surprise and for it he have to stay away from her for few hours...
ok fine... you carry on with your boring meetings i am going to celebrate with my friends... she shouted and cut the call...
Maan - arey geet... sweety listen to me... but she had already cut the call... he shook his head at her nautanki and headed towards his desination...

Geet cut the call and was sitting on the bed with grumpy face... she notice some one was watching her... she shouted in anger...
Kya hai nakul baba...
Nakul - geet baby maan sir ne apko akele chodne ke liye mana kiya hai... he said looking at her going outside...
lekin mujhe apne friend ke ghar jana hai...
Nakul - wo main nahi janta jab maan sir aa jayenge aap chali jana lekin abhi aap kahin nahi ja sakti... he said and closed the door... she pouted and goes back to the room and open maan's study room to read some novel for pass time... when she was finding her favourite novel she look at a diary laying their... she pick it up reading it...
Geet (st) - i am sorry Godji... i know reading someone's diary is bad habit but ye to unki hai na... isiliye thodi si padh leti ho...

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As fast i was driving the car... at the same speed was the memories of my past running in my mind... there was nothing in front... only dark... i stopped the car in front of a lake... her favourite place... where we use to spend our time together... i sat there looking at the place where she used to sit... my heart was feeling heavy i wanted to cry on someone's shoulder... but as always there is noone for me... i blink my eyes as i felt wetness in the corner of my eyes... but her these words were stopping me from shedding tears... "boys does'nt look good while crying, specially my maan... so don't shed these precious tears... you should leave this crying work for me... i am your cry baby na... look who is looking like cry baby now..." unknowingly a smile crept on the corner of my lips as i remember these words.


This city was a mere stranger for me... when i saw her first time on the road... i was sitting in the bus at that time... going for a job interview... in that hot afternoon... she was looking like a fresh drop of dew... the glow on her face was filling me with positivity... i was feeling like chill ran down on my entire body... before i could feel that chilness more... the bus started... as soon as the bus stop at the red signal... i found myself standing in front of her... today also i don't know from where i got this much strength... but we didn't let strangeness come inbetween us... maybe she also have felt that we know each other since ages. From that time we started meeting often... we became friends and then lovers... two years passed like this... with her around i didn't feel the lonliness... she was always there for me... in sadness and in hapiness...


Suddenly the moon hide behind the clouds and the darkness crept all over and infront of my eyes... may be that day darkness also came infront of her eyes... her face didn't have that glow... infact it was looking pale... she was about to faint... but when she feel little better... she let go of it in the excuse of headache and tiredness... i wish i didn't have listen to her that day... from that day i couldn't read her expressions nor her eyes. The house which she decorated with her own hands... which was filled with our memories and love... suddenly she gave the keys and property papers to me... i didn't even once try to read the pain and tiredness in her eyes then.


After some days i got the biggest project of my life... which can give me everything which i dreamt of before coming in this city... maybe it was because of her struggle, hard work and efforts... but i have to go out of country for six months... i wanted to go with her... but it was not possible... my heart was not feeling good about it... i didn't wanted to leave her alone here... but she make me agree to do this... she made me realise that for my dreams to come true, i have to do it... and i did it only for her... the project was a great success becuse of it i become famous... and i started many new projects by the money which i gain from this project. But when i came back i got to know she left this city forever... she didnt left a single clue behind... i even hired detectives to find her... but i couldn't... i visit our house often to check if she came back... my heart wasn't ready to believe that she can leave me like this... like all days i came to our house... and the lights were on... my happiness knew no bounds... she finally came back to me... but when i open the door of the house with my set of keys... i didn't found her there... it was her cousin sister inside... i told my name to her and what she told left me senseless... she told me that she not only left this city but this world also... reason BRAIN TUMOR... when i heard this news i felt like someone has hit me with hot iron in the heart... she knew that i love her more than my life... i can't even imagine my life's single second without her... that's why she didn't told me anything... she kept all her pain with herself... she didn't once tried to share her pain with me... because she didn't wanted to come inbetween my dreams... today also i feel angry on her thought... how can she think something like that... didn't she knew my dreams and career are not important than her... didn't she see it in my eyes in these years... can't she for once tell me about it... how can she do this to me... how can she... but then i thought about her POV... maybe i would have done the same if i would have at her place... maybe...


GEET please... don't stop me today from crying... i won't be able to handle myself today...i cried as the rain droplets soaked my shirt... i cried all night like a child sitting on the same place where once we use to spend our time together... my tears didn't stop for a second... today i fulfill my all dreams... i got the award of Best Businessman of the Year... but she is not here to celebrate it with me... i am alone in this world like she left me... leaving me broken... how will i live without you now... Plz... come back... come back to your maan... otherwise your maan will die geet your maan will die.

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This was the first and last entry in the diary... by the end of it she has tears in her eyes... she wiped her tears... closing the diary... thats why he never smile... and she remember yesterday he was totally broken... because it was her birthday today and he was remembering her... she promised herself she will never let him lonely from nowon... she left from there putting the diary on its place...

when she came outside she saw maan standing in the hall with her favourite cake in his hand...
Maan - Happy Birthday Sweety... he said lifting her up and kissing her forehead...
Geet - Thank You So Much Papa... she said smiling showing him her cute dimples...
Maan - what my sweetheart wants on her 12th Birthday... he said as they sat on the sofa...
Geet - i want my mumma... she said looking straight in his eyes... his smile faded as he heard her...
Maan - mumma is not here sweety... i told you na... she is in NY doing her dream job... he said controling his tears which is threatning to fall... chalo now cut the cake... he said trying to change the topic...
Geet - no i will not until i see my mumma...
Maan - geeettt... he shouted... which made her scare and she ran to her room crying... maan closed his eyes in frustration... this is the first time he shouted on her... and he is not liking it at all... he told her stories about her mumma from the day she came in her life... and today he is regregting it to put false hope in her heart... he should have told her that her mumma will never come back... he still remember how he had found her on the road when she was 7 yrs old... from then he had seen his geet in her... she has same nose... same eyes and same glow on her face as he had seen on geet for the first time they met... thats why he named her geet... and he is alive today only because of her... otherwise he would have died that very day when he came to know his geet left him... when he didn't found her parents or anyone related to her he adopted her... and she was GEET MAAN SINGH KHURANA from that day... the name which he loved his whole life... and will always love... because she was his soul... his life... his strength... his everything... he sighed and open the door of her room and saw crying... he closed his eyes feeling miserable...

Maan - geet sweety... he began only to cut off by her...
Mumma will never come na... wo Godji ke pass chali gayi haina...??? she asked rubbing her teary eyes...
Maan shook his head vigrously as tears also began to fill in his eyes... Geet... he don't know what to say... he just hugged her tight and cried... both cried in each other embrace... trying to fill the loss of their life with each other... after sometime he composed himself when he notice her sobbing badly...
Maan - aise nahi kehte bacha... he tried to say again but she again cut him inbetween...
nahin maine aapki diary padhi... wahan aapne likha hai... aap jhoot mat bolo...
Maan sighed in frustration... composing himself he cupped her face...
Maan - dekho sweety... mumma toh yahan hai na he said pointing at her heart... wo hamesha hamare dil me rahengi... aur hum hamesha unhe apne dil mein zinda rakhenge... she nodded still with teary face... chalo smile now... she smile weakily...
Aaj mumma ka bhi birthday haina... toh we will cut two cakes one for mumma and one for me... she said cutely and maan smile fakely at her finally seeing her smile... he told her to take a shower till he order one more cake she nodded happily... and ran to the washroom... she came back and ran in the where the other cake was ready... she ran into maan's arms...
Papa chalo cake cut karo... they cut the both cake together... maan closed his eyes as he cut his geet's cake... Happy Birthday Jaan... same was with little geet... as wished her mother whom she never met before... but love is unconditional... it never ask anything just give everything... Happy Birthday Mumma... her papa and mumma was everything... he gave her new life... and she will be always with him through thick and thin of the life... she will never let him feel lonely again... she promised herself as she open her eyes... and kissed his cheeks... maan smiled opening his eyes and kissed her forehead...
Maan - chalo now be ready... hum aj bahar dinner karenge ok... she nodded and left to her room...
Maan enters his room and saw his geet sitting on his bed... he goes towards her and pecked her lips...
Maan - happy birthday jaan... she shied and disappear without saying anything... he sighed at his imagination and started thinking about tonight's surprise which will definetly bring big smile on his sweety's face...

At night Maan takes Geet to Disney land in his private jet... which she was asking for quite few months but he was not able to take her due to his busy schedule... she was jumping with excitement when they reach there... and maan smile seeing her happy... only thing which can make him happy is her happiness... they stayed there for 3 weeks as geet wanted and maan obliged happily... anything for his sweety... when they returned back from there he closed his eyes remembering his geet... Happy Birthday once again Jaan... I Miss You... he said wishing her last time for the day...

This was Maan Singh Khurana's life... no matter whatever he did to keep himself away from this pain but in the end of the day his geet's thought always fill his heart and eyes with painful tears... i promised geet in next life i will not let you do this to me... you will be mine and this is my promise... he said the same thing which he says everyday before going to sleep... he closed his eyes as sleep took over his eyes... the only place where he can meet his geet... in his dreams.


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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: priti11

heart wrenching OS...
loved it...

thanx dear... m so glad u lyk it 😳
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Heart touchng 1 ya plz add me to ur buddy list n pm me plz...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: nishnal

Heart touchng 1 ya plz add me to ur buddy list n pm me plz...


thanx dear... added you... 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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such a sad story ! you made me cry ! but beautiful !
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Posted: 13 years ago
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it was heartwrenching and painful to read.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: harshia

beautiful os, loved it

thanx dear...😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: kavya.sravya

such a sad story ! you made me cry ! but beautiful !


thanx...
m glad you like it... 😊
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kyun rula diya
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emotional os...
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