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Posted: 12 years ago
hate this chachu really please kill him soon
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yaar ye chachu is etting on my nerves

bahut ho gya isska

how can he do dis wid geet!!!!!!!!!!!!

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Posted: 12 years ago
amazing dear
loved it
anand is getting on nerves😡
continue soon
keep writing

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Posted: 12 years ago
oh god!!such a big plot against maan..
hw will he prove himself?
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Posted: 12 years ago
part 5
that man he will suffer so much...
poor Maan...
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Posted: 12 years ago
part 6
ok am planning how that bas**** should be punished...
poor Maan...
cont soon dear...
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Posted: 12 years ago
poor maaneet
chaaachuuu i will kill u now 😡
u r soo dead MR.ANAND🤢
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Posted: 12 years ago
evil chachu...hate him...
amazing update bt why police came...hope nothng serious...
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Posted: 12 years ago


PART-7


Anand took her inside the house n made her sit on couch..he made her drink water n sat beside her to poison her mind again…"don't worry beta I already spoke with my boss…he agreed to help us…maan ajayega wapas"


Geet smiled in tears n hugged him.."thanku so much chachu…"

"koi nahi beta I can do this much for u n maan…but iam sad thinking how can maan do this"which made geet look at him.she nodded in no n about to say something.."no no beta don't take me wrong…iam not saying that maan did this intentionally…I know he would never intend to do wrong but he did that in anger..he wanted to win the challenge n in that hasty to find job in 24 hours he have to take up that job even if never wanted…"

Geet's heart is not ready to believe anything but her mind which got highly influenced by her chachu's poisionus words started thinking n she got angry on maan for taking up any job without thinking twice…

Anand observed facial gestures of geet who seemed lost in thinking n smirked n then continued…"maan would have accepted my offer tab koi nahi problem nahi hoti…but his ego never allowed him...i know he don't like me becoz he took me wrong thinking iam under estimating his ability but beta believ me I just wanted to help u…anyways I hope maan would take every step carefully from now..mein nahi chahta ki phir se aisi koi baat ho..mein chahtha hoon ki meri beti hamseha kush rahe isliye mein abhi bhi tayyar hoon ye rishte ke liye"he caressed her hair n left geet who stuck in conflict between mind n heart…


It's after 2 hours after maan's arrest n he is back now..anand's plan started working now n bringing back maan is also his part of the plan..maan reached home thinking the sequence of incidents turned out today n anand's evil smirk is raising his anger to peak…his anger have no bounds now…he sat on couch alone controlling his temper…

Geet who came there in anger saw maan sitting on couch n came to him.."u are really a stupid.."maan lit his head to find geet…"u don't know how I felt in these two hours…you are just impossible maan..who told u to take up that stupd job without thinking twice"

"geet plzz stop it now..u very well know that…"

"ha I very well know that you are an egoistic…you were not ready to accept chachu's offer as u wanted to do on ur own..but see what happened today,…ur anger n ego took u no where"

"geet just stop it!!!and u are still supporting ur chachu…u don't know what's happening do u even know that who sent me to jail???"maan sked holding her arms..

"ha I know it's none other than my chachu..ye kehna chahte ho na tum..that chachu who is ready to give his daughter's hand even after knowing u are jobless.that chachu who brought u back from jail n that chachu who is still ready to accept u "she almost screamed snapping away maan's hand…

Maan:bas geet..stop it now...geet do u know(he sighs when he saw her turning her face away)khair...i don't want to talk anything when u are not ready to listen me..

"why maan??dont u have any other complaint against chachu tell na…huh!!"geet spoke when found him silent.

Geet sighs when maan turns away in frustation showing his back…"I never expected this from u maan..i never thought you would do this just to complete stupid challenge and u are accusing chachu who loves u like his son.."


Maan turned to face her in shock.."is she beliveing that I was at mistake..what does she mean that she don't expect this from me??does that means she believe that I did wrong…no no my geet can never do that…she always stood for me n will do it now…still he wanted to listen from her…when he found something in her eyes he felt a pinch in his heart.


"geet(looked at her painfully) kya tumhe bhi lagtha hai ki mein galat kaam kar saktha hoon..kya tum bhi maanthi ho ki mein ne ye sab kiya???maan asked holding her arms tight..

Geet remained silent n this irked maan…"geet iam asking u something..answer me.."he asked sternly looking in to her eyes hoping to listen that she'll beleive him n she know that maan never can do any thing wrong….he have strong belief that his geet will never believe this n will stand for him…."maan leave it na" she said calmly n turned other side freeing herself from his grip.


Maan's hope started breaking slowly but still he have faith on his love; his geet…no she cant say like this..he knows that his geet believes him.after all she knows him very well.maan just wants to listen it once from her that she believes him.she don't belive that he can do any such cruel thing.without finding answer from her maan got frustated.."geet…"maan roared gritting his teeth..

Maan turned her to him again.

"mein tumse kuch pooch raha hoon muje jawab chahiye..plz speak out damit!"he asked her supressing his anger which was due to his breaking hope."maan plz calm down…plz leave this now.it doesn't matter..ab aage ke bhare mein socho..u think how.."


"it matters to me damit!!muje ye jaana zaruri hai ki tum kya sochti ho..it really doesnt matter if it's about others but it is about what u think about me"maan almost screamed producing echoes around…he is not finding any positive expression from her eyes n his hope almost shattered in to pieces but still he is hoping to listen postive answer from her…he sighed calming his anger n held her arms…

"geet say yes or no..kya tumhe bhi lagtha hai ki mein ne ye sab kiya..bolo geet jawab do.."he asked looking in to her eyes knotting his eyebrows.geet tried to say something but maan stopped her saying.."I just want to listen yes or no…ha ya naa"he asked sternly shooking her shoulder…"ha"geet said closing her eyes tight..she don't know what n why she said but she spit out what her mind allowed her to say.maan's heart broke in to pieces with her answer..he never ever expected this…he never thought that his geet would refuse to believe him n say what other's said.he left her at once in shock n walked back taking slow steps…it seemed to him that his world stopped at once..how can geet think like that when she knows him very well…he just want it to be a horrible dream but alas it's reality…


Geet realised what she said..she never wanted to say that but her chachu's words influenced her brain n in confusion she spit out that…"maan wo mera matalab tha ki tum challenge jeetne ki jaldi mein you would have taken wrong step"

She was stopped from speaking further by maan when he showed her his hand indicating her to stop..




"bas…bas geet"(he closed his eyes tight allowing the tears to slip down😭)


he turned to other side showing his back to her…"I got my answer geet..u don't need to say anything…geet I never thought that(paused)"he closed his eyes tighetening his fists…

He took a sigh n spoke.."geet tum sacchai nahi jaanthi infact tum sunna hi nahi chahti….geet i believe that trust n faith is most important in any relation..no relation can stand without them…har rishte mein ek doosre par vishwas hona zaroori hai…and today there is none of them in between us which I never thought will happen.."


Geet knotted her eye brows trying to understand what maan is saying…but she got that he is again trying to blame her chachu indirectly holding him responsible again all in this which she cant endure..

"geet jaha vishwaas nahi hota waha pyaar nahi hota aur jaha pyaar nahi hota waha maan ek pal ke liye bhi nahi rahega..😭"he spoke in chocked voice n stormed out from there without even looking at her once leaving her in shock…

Geet angrily went out while maan rushed to his room..meera who saw geet entering home in anger enquired the reason n geet told her everything.."nahi di…maan jiju can never do this n you know that…di plz maan jiju ko rokho na plz unse baat karo plz di don't hurt urself n jiju"

Geet started recollecting what she spoke to maan n realised that she did a mistake but this time her ego is stopping her….meera again pleaded and tried to make her understand..anand who is listening this joyfully cursed meera under his breath for spoiling his plan.."ye meera ki bacchi kya karne ki soch rahi hai…nahi nahi mein aisa hone nahi doonga.."he took out the chain which is exactly an imitation of geet's chain which is in maan's neck…"ab aakhri chaal..iske baad maan aur geet kabhi ek nahi honge"he smiled evillly n he hit his head against wall allowing it to bleed..

"geet beta..beta jaldi chalo station chalthe hai…maan is leaving this city beta plz jaldi chalo rokho maan ko jaane se"anand said with crocodile tears n holding his head which is bleeding..geet n meera n shocked to see him in that state…"chachu what happened to u??"geet asked worriedly looking at his forehead where it's bleeding…"wo beta I was trying to stop maan…believe me I pleaded him a lot but wo bahut gusse me tha toh…muje bura nahi laga ki wo muj par haat utaya…I felt bad for this"n he showed the chain to geet which left her shocked n her heart broke in to million pieces as she recollected" "maan this chain is my mom's..u know it's very valuable to me n very close to my heart..ye hamesha se mere saath tha n iam giving this to u..ise hamesha apne paas rakhna..muje lagega ki mera dil tumhare pass hai..if u take off this chain…(sighs)then I'll think that u erased me from ur heart.."tears slipped down from her eyes as she took it from anand..she stood there numb…

He let out some tears again pretending.."koi nahi beta tumhare liye kuch bhi..chalo maan ko rokthe hai.."n she held geet's hand but she stopped him..

"ko zarurat nahi hai chachu…if we want to go let him go..kisi ko rookne zarurat nahi hai..if he want he himself will come to me"geet said absent mindedly looking at her chain without a blink..she ran to her room not able to control her tears n shut the door with a bang..

Past ended

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Ok guys I ended past as I promised…plz give me ur comments now as I kept my promise…plz plz leave ur comments….from next part present will start n ha iam planning to end it in 3 parts



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that bas... anand made geet confuse and create mu between and maan left please make this bas... pay for his every deed



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