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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Hamlet53



CHIKINI MITTI emily... teri tu mein ROARRR..

NAKUSHA.. I THOUGHT I PUT UP A NOTE ABOUT UD.. ON PAGE 31 [ MAY BE FRIDAY]

http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3142343&TPN=31 PLEASE CHECK...

@ red ur right hammie tum chikni nahi hti toh sab PR pe phisaltay kaisay.
@ emily ab yeh chikni miti kal hazir ho jaaye gi toh tumhari kamyabi toh huwi na.
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Nakusha

hammiee

ud kyon nahin kiya .not even any assurance .how could u do this hammiee...missinggg u hammiee
kitne bhi toh karle sitam haas haas ke sahenge hum yeh pyar hoga na kum hammieee tere kasam
ab tahera .afzal your ud andolan wasn't working .any new master plan to wake up the sher from slumber😆

ye andolan agar nakaam raha toh sirf isliyay kee unity nahin thi,
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Posted: 12 years ago

Mishal Raheja as Major Dutta Patil

Painful Rapture ~ Chapter 61

If music be the food of love play on..Shakspeare

Dutta looked across at the sea of activity teeming away, one could say whatever Baji had set up, this garden party was complimenting both the crowd and the weather. Guests milled about, waiters served canopies while others, created an amazing centre piece of gaily and festively dressed to the occasion guests who interacted and indulged into the mouth watering Belgian chocolate fountain, along with a selection of dips including exotic fruits, marshmallows, and confectionery. Naku, sat looking hungrily at the revolving chocolate fountain, Dutta cleared his throat as he leaned towards her stiffly and enquired,"khana hai tune, tu ja Naku?..",but she gave him a wide eyed look with a declined shake of her head. Dutta pulled his mouth to one side and resumed his scrutinising of the crowd. He sat stiffened as if starched like a parched piece of paper.. he felt the bottom of his lower lip and a slanted smile played subtly on his smooth broad half exposed brow from underneath his dress cap, ummmh he thought paper tiger.. and he sided his face towards his bride , and self corrected ummh not really, babbar sher!.Naku felt his move and responded by shifting her head and her large green doe eyes hinged on to his narrowed looks. Amidst the fragrant aroma of the typical main dish mutton vade, or mutton biryani which was being consumed by a relaxed crowd, helping themselves from the buffet tables , there could be seen familiar faces by Dutta , warmly and heartily chugging don liquor down their throats.. his pupils ..ummh the lads dressed in full formal tuxedos complete with black bows..and a perplexed smile rode on his face, "what the bloody hell are these jokers doing here.. he mused, his pupils! He looked at Naku and informed quietly, "main zarra Baji se mil ke ata hoon", he stood up and serenely walked down the embellished stage and got hold of Baji,"oyee you git! why the hell have you invited my pupils? don't you know its encroaching the limit of pupil teacher relationship.. why are you such a thick ass Baji? he grilled, Baji turned to his beloved Bhao,"look Bhao, may I remind you that they are not your pupils any more, they are officers who had a narrow experience with you, and getting them here was your boss' idea and I just went along with it!" smirked Baji with an uncontrolled wink, and continued with his hand on his mate's shoulder, "so ja aur vahini ka saath beith ja good boy bun ke", he guffawed ,and Dutta glared at him with his hand on the hilt of his sword, and Baji dashed off sheepishly to mingle amongst the crowd. Dutta felt a hand over his shoulder and he turned and found Laren, dressed in full night out attire, an off shoulder black fish tail gown , with flowing auburn loosely waved below the shoulder tresses, smoky eyes makeup and scarlet red lipstick. She stood before him and inched closer and put her arms around his neck,"ohhh baaaby you look so handsome and dashing in your dress uniform, that I could easily from now on have lustful dreams about you for the rest of my life Dutta", confessed Lauren as she pressed her bosom lightly against his uniformed chest. Dutta crimsoned winsomely, and looked up across to Naku who sat on the stage a pretty picture of simplistic grace in her red and mustard sari.. he watched her, move her pearl Maharashtrain nath in her sharp nose and flared her nostrils in annoyance. He observed her half amused with right eyebrow raised, and Lauren up front and close to him.. and then he viewed that his woman approached them. Naku , stood boldly besides Lauren, ready to deter her assault on her husband, "hey Lauren, don't forget that congratulations are in order for me as well, not just Saab, I am his better half as the saying goes!", teased Naku with a smile gifted to Lauren and a narrowed green eyed monster look towards Dutta , who briskly moved back from Lauren and held his gloved hands behind his back. Lauren, turned to Naku, "of course my darling Nakusha, the brave PT who is the lion tamer now! and make sure you crack the whip at him if he gets wild!, cautioned Lauren, as she hugged Naku, but Dutta cocked his head with might and pride as he thought, she wouldn't dare! is ke main aise ke taise na kardoon. Soon he was accosted by his pupils, Bhatnagar in a lovely formal plain silk saree, and the lads, all smartly turned up heeled and saluted, Dutta almost smiled and bobbed his head with a certain stiff cordiality, when he was interrupted by an ivory anarkali clad Khan.. he paused briefly as she performed an adab with her right hand. Dutta nodded ,half amused and couldn't help but remind her,"ummh, officer, mufti does not alter the conformity of our ranks", he said icily and Khan lowered her oriental eyes gave a nervous smile and heeled her churridar mojari clad feet together and rigidly performed a salute which he acknowledged with equal formality. Naku , came along and gave her a warm embrace with a "ohhh Rajo this is such a pleasant surprise, to have you here!" and Khan shyly looked up at her ex- tutor , who lowered his eyes and turned his face slightly and spoke to his pupils "now tell me that you are all well placed and are loving your duties", Bhatnagar, out of practice, with hands held behind her back replied with a smile, "well Sir! Yes for well placed , however ummh challenging you could say for the duties, but have to say Sir you trained us well for the big bad world out there!" she confessed coupled with a compliment to her tutor, and his other pupils who surrounded his tall person , nodded in agreement ,and Dutta flushed, as he raised his hand with a ,"and I have no hesitation in admitting too, that it was indeed a pleasure to teach such a receptive group of pupils.. I guess I could see the makings of good officers in each one of you" he admitted.. he looked around embarrassed ,when reminded within himself he was the host as well, hence he called one of the waiters,"excuse me drinks here please,.. and Kapur's eyes lit up as he leaned towards, "yaar apne tu nikal, parethe", Dutta ,overheard ,as he palmed the officers to help themselves from the waiter's tray,"ummh just as long as you gentlemen know who you are and where you are.. "he warned as he lifted his goblet and said," to guts, muck, and nation!" and they all clicked glasses, as the officers burst into song "for he's a jolly good fellow and so say we all"!! there as a loud clang of cymbals and a booming of the base drums as eyes were drawn to this cacophony of exuberant ex-pupils honouring their tutor..the army brass band played popular military band numbers, ranging from, Scottish bagpipes retreat, to the Gurkha march, the Punjabi pipe and drum band ,and the Rajhistani, Bengali, and frontier melodies.. tunes, beats ,rhythms that added to the ambience and an army flavour to the event.. although it did make Dutta ill at ease when he realised to have a band here really is stealing from the defence budget ,and that for personal edification. It was as if Parekh heard his grumbling from within,"oh there you are my finest officer,!" exclaimed a clear cut ,no nonsense voice behind him. Dutta stood to attention before his boss Parekh, "so congrats you son of a gun! but don't get too comfy! you're checking outaa here in a week's time....Dutta ,smiled but at the same time couldn't conceal his disbelief at what he'd heard ,but before he could seek further clarification, with fanfare from beating retreat, bugles and drums and gongs, appeared Baji the ceremonial host… Dutta shook his head, as he took off his dress hat and cradled it under his bent left elbow, as he remarked to his boss, "well Sir better take this sitting down, with Baji, he kicks up the most startling , out of the blue issues when he lets loose..! warned Dutta ,a little edgy of what was in store. Amongst roaring applause Baji stood on stage with a plasma screen behind him, with a joining of his hands he began,"so ladies and gentleman, seeing that you're supped and sloshed ,well a bit!.. may I now give you some pudding for your dessert.. now all who want puds !give us a loud cheer!" he yelled and in response got a vociferous yesss! and shrill of whistles and resounding claps. He spread his arms and continued, "ok ladies and gentleman! tonite marks Tekhati Mejwani, the after nuptial function of a man named Dutta and a girl called Nakusha… now my story begins when many moons ago a lion cub ummh sorry a boy was born in the household of Mr. and Mrs. Shree Ram Patil…. and here you see the picture of the little blighter in his birthday suit , getting his back side slapped by the doctor!"… there was tremendous applause and shouting as the picture forced Naku to cover her face and Dutta lowered his eyes red faced…but infused by the applause, Baji continued "and ladies and gentleman check this picture of a rather gleeful two years old Dutta, having his bottom dried and dusted with baby talc by his doting mother.. while his two older sisters Kala and Leela watch in envy at the apple of their mother's eye".. and look whose here people! it's the fair maiden Nakusha,6 years old with two plait's in her school shirt, tie and skirt.. and her little satchel awww!" went Baji.. Dutta looked up and smiled at his beloved's picture and dreamt his daughter would be like so, green eyes, spritely yet innocent…Baji continued as the next photo appeared, "and this is any body's guess who this young lad is? with his beaming father.. a smart! six year soldier in a camouflage uniform, blowing out the candles on his birthday cake…I guess he knew from the start whose foot steps he would be following" said Baji.. and Dutta blinked back a few tears as he slowly pushed back his head and gulped his stray tears. Loud claps, diverted Dutta's attention as he stood up to acknowledge the applause. Baji, smiled as he gathered that his Bhao received the item amicably, for he knew well what his bloody buddy was capable of if rubbed the wrong way ,so he showered another dimpled smile and proceeded with the photo session, as he brushed his palms.. "aand now glimpse of a love story in the making.. here! take a look at this picture of a young seven year old Dutta on a tree climbing expedition, retrieving a baby sparrow .. and a concerned three year old Naku..biting her fingers off below the tree!" and Dutta suddenly gave a quiet chuckle as he visually checked out his wife and wriggled his fingers and gave her a slow sly wink.. Baji, yelled "but look at this people, humpty dumpty had a great fall and ended up with a grazed knee but saved the sparrow chick, heyy! but check out , the TLC kiss given to Dutta's knee by the up coming PT!", and there as a loud cheer given for Naku, as Dutta raised his eye brows while he encouraged her to stand, to receive the praise , but Baji continued ,"hang on a minute people now take a look at a wounded soldier in hospital … and who should nurse him back to shape Mz. Lauren …. and Lauren stood amidst louds of whistles , as Baji stopped, but look who Dutta falls foryessshhh it's our fair and lovely Nakusha who wheels and whizzes him around in his wheel chair!"… well ladies and gentleman, now the big bold Dutta was really on the mend and round the bend!, hopelessly in love with the woman of his life… here they are ladies and gentlemen in a picture on their engagement day… and here they are today on their wedding day"!, and a huge picture of the wedded couple graced the plasma screen, as Baji turned towards his Bhao and vahini.. and in a loud voice he proclaimed," "ladies and gentleman I give you Dutta and Nakusha!"… and loud rounds of ovation followed for the couple who stood away from each other surrounded by friends family and colleagues.. Baji with elevated voice declared "ok everybody ,tea ,coffee and snacks will be served by the waiting staff so enjoy as the rest of the party continues with a special presentation from the officers of the Z regiment. To the drumbeat entered the tux clad smartly turned officers with posteriors poised out ..and both hands that waved.."ee e e um um a weh, ee e e um um a weh, wimoweh, wimoweh, wimoweh, wimoweh,……wimoweh, wimoweh, wimoweh ..they wiggled their bottoms as they moved in a circle their hand on their waists as they headed forward each other..singing Wimoweh, wimoweh, wimoweh, wimoweh , wimoweh, looking side ways at the seated fully uniformed Dutta, wimoweh, wimoweh, wimoweh they went.. as they carried on the jungle trudge and heaved stamp of one foot and in sync lift of the other foot , with their right hand placed on the person ahead's shoulder… then out of the circle came Kapur miming the shrilly voice whispering to everyone with one raised arm and finally slowly lowered his arm with a bow of his head at Dutta…."In the jungle , the mighty jungle.. The lion sleeps tonight, In the jungle the quiet jungle ..the lion sleeps tonight… and then the rest of the officers with knees moving stood before Dutta in a horizontal line repeating the chorus. Wimoweh, wimoweh, wimoweh, wimoweh, they carried on with the chorus bending knees and bouncing arms up in the space .. and Dutta felt his stubble face with a smile as Kapur one again began miming of the song, "Near the village, the peaceful village ..the lion sleeps tonight, Near the village the quiet village ..the lion sleeps tonight..Wimoweh, wimoweh, wimoweh, wimoweh…wimoweh, wimoweh ,they headed forward their necks and wriggled their protruding bottoms, swayed and hopped … and this time Singh jumped up into Kapurs arms ,while Kapur sang, Hush my darling ,don't fear my darling..the lion sleeps tonight..and they lay sideways on the floor with clasped hands and closed eyes pointing to Dutta, who chuckled, Hush my darling, don't fear my darling..The lion sleeps tonight.. they jumped up on their feet and skipped back into a circle and bopped and sang the chorus, their bodies swaying, unison, Wimoweh! Wimoweh! Wimoweh !Wimoweh!…bopped and then formed a horizontal line clicked heels and saluted Dutta, as Dutta stood up tall in his ceremonial dress and clapped lightly with his gloved hands, while everyone cheered at the exclusive performance of the officers.. Naku, smiled at Dutta, and he knew she warmed to the song for it referred to him as a lion.. although he mused, fat chance of him being a sleeping lion when he is with her..

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Before, the next item Baji insisted inclusion of the next section, "and now for a bit of traditional fun for what would life be minus frolic and mirth, so let's have some stiff drink..aaand may I have the shy new bride and her not so shy new groom!" Dutta looked across to Naku who sat on a three seater sofa in front of him, he stood up gallantly and presented his palm and she placed her tiny hand in his. Baji continued with his commentary "and so now we witness a practice of olden days, when! even women used to sip liquor from small silver bowls and this was funnily called nathi vagdya karane which meant to take aside nose rings to facilitate the sips! guffawed Baji with a wink, as a look of horror washed over Naku's face. The crowd cheered as Naku looked up at her husband in protest. Dutta bowed his head reassuringly and picked up the small silver bowl with liquor in it, with his gloved hand, held on a sliver tray by Kala who beamed cheek to cheek. Dutta brought closer the delicately carved sliver bowl to Naku's mouth, and she shyly and slowly parted her petal like lips , and looked up at him with her large green eyes, and he growled,"chaal ek ghunoot pe bhi le!",Naku tweaked her nose and Dutta pulled off his glove and with his slender fingers moved her pearly nath aside, amid loud jeering, and she sipped, and gulped! her eyes popping out, and people shouted , "more! more!" and she shook her head strongly, and Dutta shifted the silver bowl to his full lips and washed it down his throat, and placed the empty bowl back on the tray, pulled back his glove on ,and held her arm to take her place to her seat. On the way ,he leaned over her and whispered, "ab mera peene pe koi remarks nehi, tune bhi pee he aj ,sab ke samna", she giggled, as she sat down. Dutta ,amidst loud cheers went back to his settee facing Naku seated on the sofa before him, where his eyes feasted upon her beauty,at opportune moments. In fact he was mighty pleased with the sitting arrangement he mused, he would rather have her before him then beside him, as it was more aesthetically pleasing he chuckled, and Baji continued, "and now ladies and gentleman, it is know that she is a lady from the Forces! but did you know that she has a finer side? and aawaz tu kiya kehana!, and here she is tonight Officer Khan! with a song for her friend Nakusha! put your hands together for Khan!" introduced Baji. A demure Khan, made her entry fortified with cheers and whistles, and Dutta, rested his dress cap on the empty space on his two seat settee, and crossed his leg, his eyes firm and cold as he watched her take her position behind the settee where Naku sat. Khan spread her arms and felt Naku's shoulders, as she began her song with a pensive smile, her oriental eyes atop Naku's head "jaane kya baat hai, jaane kya baat hai, she smiled as her chin tapped Naku's crown, while her eyes stealthily fell upon Dutta, she shifted her face near Naku's face from behind and she sang, "neend nahin ati badi lambi raat hai,"she looped her arm around Naku's neck, while Dutta watched with icy eyes, what the hell has got hold of her, he thought, but Khan tapped the side of her head with Naku's head and carried on, "Saari saari raat mujhe isne jagaya, and again briefly smiled at Dutta, who blanked her out as he looked the other way "jaise koi sapna, jaise koi saaya, koi nahin lagta hai,koi mere saath hai, neend nahin aati badi lambi raat hai…"she came round and reached for Naku's hand as she touched her heart ,turned a wee bit towards Dutta and continued her tune "dhakdhak kabhi se jiya dol raha hai, ghungat abhi se mera khol raha hai, and she covered Naku's head with her own ivory chunni, and lifted it up to reveal Naku's face whose eyes shone at sound of khan's voice and the lyrics , but Khan turned her body to tackle Dutta, "door abhi to piya ki mulaqat hai, neend nahin aati badi lambi raat hai". Finally she stood and sang, as she sought the pretend nightly sky presence, "Jab jab dekhoon maein yeh chand sitare, aaisa lagta hai mujhe laaj ke mare jaise koi doli , koi baraat hai.." and bent to hug a seated Naku with a wink and the lyrics, "neend nahin aati badi lambi raat hai…Khan, bowed her upper body with an adab of her graceful hand, as she gathered her standing ovation from the spectators. A flabbergasted Baji checked out a not so amused faced Dutta but still kept in mind that this was a party item, although he mused by the looks off it, seemed more of party popper item!, so he hastened to amend things, "and now ladies and gentleman the grand finale act of the night.. Mr. and Mrs, Dutta ShreeRam Patil.. a love song chosen by me for my dearest Bhao and Vahini.. to the dance floor if you please" invited Baji to the people whom he adored the most in the world. Dutta moved tall and handsome towards where his lady love sat, leaned over and offered his dress uniformed clad elbow to Naku, who looked up to his lofty frame and rested her hand on his elbow, soon he also proffered his gloved other hand to aid her on her feet. They both walked towards the dance floor and once there, the floor and marquee lights dimmed. Bathed in spotlight they stood before each, her large green doe eyes and his narrow lion stare detained in a still visual bond. The moment lingered, as spectators looked upon the spotlight confined officer in full regimental colours gazing down besotted into the green eyes of his stunning woman attired in an elegant red and mustard saree, which rendered her for him as the most graceful woman in the whole wide world. Whilst his eyes refused to shift from her lovely face ,his gloved hands moved up and felt her rounded red bloused shoulders and the words of the song began, as Dutta looked intensely into her face ,his gloved fingers gripping her shoulders, "tere mere sapne abb ek rang hain, he assured her with his eyes and a bow of his chin, and he brought his face forward to hers a little and tipped up her chin , jaha bhee le jaye rahe ham sang hain, and he pulled her gently to his chest and folded one of her hands to his chest, while his other hand went round the small of her back, "mere tere dil kaa tay tha ek din milana, and he closed his eyes as his stubble cheek felt her soft cheek, "jaise bahar aane par tay hain phul kaa khilana, o mere jivan sathee and he clasped her tightly and rocked his body taut body against her petite frame, and she too responded to his movement and looked up into his eyes, whilst he looked back into her upturned face with hooded gazes, "tere dukh abb mere, mere sukh abb tere," and he rested his head on the top her head as she nestled her face under his indented broad doubled stubble chin, and they parted and she closed her eyes and threw back her head a little , as his gloved finger ran softly round her hooded eyes "tere yeh do naina, chand aur suraj mere," he held her face between his gloved palms, and tapped his forehead with hers, turned her around and pressed into her back his arms encircled around her waist he rocked, as he pressed his cheek against the side of her face, "o mere jivan sathee, and his face sank deeper into the nape of her soft smooth neck , and their eyes closed in sheer bliss ,to the words of the song, lakh mana le duniya, sath naa yeh chhutega", and before he got carried away she swivelled gently to face him and moved away a little from his tall frame, he reached for her hands and held them in his, to the words of the song "aake mere hatho me, hath naa yeh chhutega", lovingly and tenderly he brought his long and muscular arm around his wife's shoulder and walked away from the dance floor to the words of "o mere jivan sathee".., and every one clapped and many stood to cheer the newly married couple. Baji suddenly in a moment of high stupor jumped up before them and broke into a cavorting wiggle and a leap singing boisterously, "mera yaar bana hai dulha, ur phool khile hain dil ke, areee meri bhi shaadi ho jaaye, dua karo sab mil ke, he went towards Naku and fell to his knees singing, "aaj ki kushiyaan dekh ke mera dil bhi le angdaai, and hopped up and twirled before Dutta, "mera bhi ghar ho dhoom dhadakka, aur beja shenai ! main bhi sehara baandh!",he begged Dutta with clasped hands while Roops cheered the loudest and Dutta turned his head and gave her a glaring look, and Baji a slow rise of a clenched fist, and Baji touched his ear lobes sheepishly and put a lid on his frenzy. Dutta, again repetitively raised his ,palm to display his angst and Baji, recognized that he had to buckle his comedy capers, especially so as he saw Parekh approaching Dutta's way..

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Parekh stopped before Dutta and Nakusha, and Dutta stood alert, "brilliant party you two! most enjoyable have to say, erhh do you mind if I borrow your husband for a while, Nakusha? he questioned as he turned to Naku, before she nodded an approval, both Dutta and Parekh walked with great influence towards Dutta's study. Both men faced each other, Dutta keenly awaited his boss's query. Parekh stood with his arms behind his back, tipping slightly on his toes, "right officer! it seems that duty calls, for immediate action, no faffing about straight sharp exploit! you up for it?, fired Parekh. Dutta with clicked heels saluted, with a bold," yes Sir"!, Parekh smiled, and tapped his finest officer on his broad shoulder, "ok, Dutta news has just be received by intelligence services, that there is low moral amongst troops at destination X, which is evident in low platoon performance even in minor skirmishes with the adversary. Now high command is of the opinion and I am in agreement as well that if the issue is not addressed forthwith, the likelihood is that it may have severe repercussions that may incur loss of home territory at point X.. So the brief is that you depart a.s.a.p for the area.. any questions Major? commanded Parekh. Dutta stood with his arms behind his back,"no Sir!a soldier obeys and honours his call of Duty!, he replied astutely. However Parekh , felt he owed his finest officer further explanation, despite the fact that Data asked no questions, "now Major as far as your UK trip is concerned, it is still on the cards, week from now on, it is regrettable that your honey money period has been marred, by this new development, but you may consider it a pure stroke of luck or the grace of smiling gods at you two, that it seems that due to heavy casualties many that are physio in nature Nakusha's services will be required under high commands special recommendation, her Dera hospital has been informed, and they cannot for see a snag, as she is already on leave, in fact her being an employee of a hospital affiliated under the military hospital makes things easier for her in terms of NOC to accompanying you to offer service and support to the platoons at point X, any opinions Dutta? asked Parekh. Dutta desired to roll his eyes after taking in the information he was imparted by his senior officer, but in a state of nothing short of barely credible, he replied curtly, "well Sir! with due respect, in terms of the UK trip, duty at home will always take precedence! with regards to my wife accompanying me at this short soldiers moral boosting visit all I can really say is that , I am blessed that now both of us can contribute to serving our country, me as my duty and she on humanitarian grounds", said Dutta with a brief touch of emotion, yet his wide school boy expression still sought some more unsolicited clarifications. Parekh studied his officers expression, it was admirable, this man was forever prepared to obey orders, whatever, he concluded, and then for he knew the pulse of his finest officer well he suggested, "right, now that it's sorted between officer to officer! let's involve the civvies now shall we? Hummh? AS , your spouse and your buddy Baji Rao!, but Parekh paused briefly ,and then carried on, "oh by the way, your mode of travel, an army supplies goods carrier plane to point X, will take off from the private aerodrome based near the military school at 10.00 am tomorrow morning so be on it the pair of you!" he added with a hearty laugh and a cheeky wink. Dutta lowered his head and gave half a wry smile as ,they both left the study back to the party, where the military band played the last waltz and couples danced each in their own imperfect and perfect style, however, but on sight , they seemed to be deriving pleasure. Dutta smiled and leaned towards his senior officer," Sir, I have been meaning to ask, I hope you don't mind, but an army band playing here at a civilian occasion? you see Sir! it's not my idea ,but I would hate to think that it's seen as if I was taking advantage of my profession, confessed Dutta apologetically. Parekh stared at him coldly with a ,"oh shut up Dutta! it was my idea and my arrangement! , I told Baji!, surely you're an officer, and using a simple band service for your wedding is the perks of your job, so consider it as a gift from me ,and now for heaven's sake don't look like such a wimp! although, sending you to destination unknown was not my idea it was the high commands, they wanted an officer with a soft touch, to give troops some TLC , and soft touch you have now Dutta"!… and he pointed towards Naku.

Naku who occupied herself with her fingers till they dropped off was relieved to see her Saab, once again ,she tried to study his expression from a distance and surmised that he was in good spirits as both men were smile ridden. Dutta, still with Parekh, looked at her and requested ,calmly, "Naku, can you get hold of Baji, AS, and the rest of the family and come over to my study please, kuch baat karne hai, tum sab se". Naku's heart sank, as she went towards Baji dancing with Roops on the dance floor," Baji and Roops can you gather the rest of the family and head for Saab's study please.. it's urgent.."relayed Naku, and went towards AS. On hearing the request, she began to lose calm, but Naku put her arm around her mother in law assuredly, while she repeated that there was probably no cause for concern..

Parekh stood formally before Dutta's family, he ensured that the ladies all had places to sit. He was sensitive and respectful enough to realize that the matriarchal figure of the household had to be addressed first. "AS," he began and explained the predicament before him and possibly one that the family faced as well. He noted the look of incredulity that ran across all the family members, but Parekh was aware that for Dutta the opinion that held most weight would be that of his mother's , hence Parekh awaited upon her reaction. AS, looked at the apple of her eye who looked back into his mother's eyes with a beseeching expression,"dekhian Birgadier Shahib, jhanhan tak Dutta ka sawal hai, humein pata hai ,kisi bhi waqat, kisi bhi jaga us ka bulava ah sakta hai, haan ,yeh zaroor thura chinta hai ke us ke abhi abhi shaadi hoi hai ,hafta baad woh bidash chala jaye ga tu , apne patni ke saath waqat kab bitiya ga "she said like a true mother. Dutta folded his arm and stroked his face , while Naku turned crimson. Before Dutta explained, Parekh revealed the plan of Naku, accompanying her son, and was pleased to note elation on the faces of all present.AS, although pleased, still showed concern, "humien Dutta ke chinta nehi hai bargadier Shahib ,who tu mahaz pe jata rehta hai ,humein aopne phool jaise bahu ke chinta hai, us kuch hog ye tu? she confessed. Dutta rolled his eyes and shook his head and looked at Baji for help, and Baji chipped, "AS ,ap kyon tension late ho , Bhao hai udher, Naku ka kahyal rekna ko ,mera mano tu AS ,asshirwaad de ke bhejo un dono ko , border pe honeymoon manmien ge ye dono!!" he guffawed, while others exchanged glances furtively. Kala looked at Dutta, pensively and then spoke,"ummh Dutta , does Naku's family know about this development that she would be accompanying you to an unknown army destination?" Dutta looked at Naku ,perplexed by his sisters query and felt he had to give his view regarding the matter, "tai aap theekh bolte hain, I agree Naku's family needs to be in the loop as much as my own family but we will have to check with you Sir in terms of dissemination of restricted information, "he said as he turned towards his boss. Parekh, turned towards Naku and reasoned, "well Nakusha you are a trained PT, and as such would be of use at this place, moreover the high command have taken this into consideration, apart from being the wife officer ordained for this special duty, hence I don't see why yourself or Dutta cannot inform your family ,however I would expect you to maintain confidentiality about the place and other classified issues about which you will be briefed before you land at point x, so yes inform your family but warn them too about only needs to know side of affairs!" clarified Parekh. He nodded to check if all understand and then addressed Dutta, "OK, AS, and everyone else thanks for the fantastic time, and you Baji! you are great at organising duos, so well done, and I'll see you around, Namaste" he folded his palms before AS, and saluted back at a saluting Dutta. Both Dutta and Naku walked back Brigadier Parekh to his staff car with thanks and salutations. Inside the party was beginning to subside and Dutta looked at his wife with downcast eyes, "Naku, sarra time maine ne dossere cheezoon main guzzar diya woh mammaji kiya soochien ge mera bara mein?", Naku , shook her head up at him as they walked back into the now dimly lit marquee, "woh sab theekh hai Saab , he knows that you were in conference with Brigadier Parekh, no problem challo ,let's see if can catch up now" Dutta found a nice secluded corner with tea lights,"ja Naku round up your family and waiters ko bolein chai bhi le ker ayien! I am waiting here in this green corner , and tell Baji to get extra chairs and set them up here", he shouted as she went to look for her family. Dutta, stood with deep esteem as he saw mammi je ,his wife and Naku's parent's approach the seated area he had ear marked for a quiet family time. Naku's mammaji looked at Dutta and approved of his looks ,his uniform and the whole fuction, "bahut aache lag reha ho Dutta , aur humari beti bhi khub kush nazar ah rehe hai , tumhara fuction ,aur hum sab ko bulne ke liya bahut bahhut tumhara aur tumhare Aye Shaib ke dhaniwaad ,"he admitted formally. Dutta smiled at him in all earnestness, and considered it good fortune to have him there as ,Dutta thought it best to maintain eye contact with Mamma ji ,whilst telling them about Naku. Much to his relief ,Naku turned up with tea she'd made herself, he smiled and remarked, "mausi dekha ap ke beti na khud apna hatoon se chai buniye, bole tha maine isi waiters ko bol chai le kar ayea , pun ap ke sekhai hoi gun us mein hein" ,he acknowledged shyly. Naku, smiled sweetly, as she bent and offered cups of tea to everyone and then sat beside her mother and looked across to Dutta, with large widened eyes. He pulled his bottom lip inwards and squared his shoulders and explained the situation regarding their daughter, mamma ji ,rested his hand on Dutta's knee and replied graciously,"dekho beta, Naku ab tumhra patni hai ,aur kudh bhi samjhedar lardki hai, isliye tum na jo faisla liye hai humara aisharwaad tum duno ke saath hai, aur yeh bhi kehna mein zarrori samjhta hoon ki, hum saab ko tum duno pe bhaut maan hai ke tum na humien ye baat batiye ", Dutta bowed his head and further broached the classified information feature. Babi and Ganapat along with Sethji were clearly told by both Dutta and mammaji to keep the news only to themselves. Babi felt her briskly beaded brow and she mopped and pressed it down by her sari pallu," humari Naku ko koi jaan ka khutra tu nehi Saab ?queried Babi and Naku linked her arm in her mother's arm and protested, "Aye , jaan ka khatra tu her sephi ka hai ,sirf teri beta ko nehi! Kuch nehi hoga mera ko! Bappa aur Saab duno mera saath hoon ge,"she consoled her mother, and Babi put her arm round Naku's shoulder and maintained, "haan aur tere aye babba ka aashirwaad bhi tere saath hoga" confirmed Babi as she covered her mouth with her pallu. Dutta looked perceptively at Naku and her families reactions ,and concluded how human emotions are so alike when it to comes to shielding their loved ones in the face of harm, yet again he faced the prompt pluck of a soldiers family.. and his head almost elevated that he belonged to the spirited realms of grit! His thoughts of grandeur were intersected by the voice of his mother,"aacha Dutta , ab hum sab ko aram kerne de raat ho chale hai, aur tu, Naku , Baji aur Kala sab ko shukariye kar dena hum tu thak kaie hai , chall Babi aur ap sab log bhi aram kerte hain…", invited AS, as she looked at the rest of Naku's family , and Dutta stood up and slowly his eyes slanted towards his Naku's and his lips parted with a slight sided quiver of his bottom lip.

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Naku broke the optical paging between them and moved aside in respect to let the elders pass as they retreatd to their guest rooms. Dutta moved closer to her and their shoulders touched and he looked down into her upturned green doe eyes and blinked slowly. Naku turned to the noise coming from the bar area, and looked up at Dutta and recommended, "Saab aap ne apne officers se zayeeda baat nehi ki, the party is nearly over may be we can saunter over and say our farewells to them along with some chatter", Dutta smiled at his sensible wife and finally very lightly his gloved hand closed round her delicate wrist as they walked towards the rowdy group of officers. As Dutta neared the young officers, they subdued themselves, but nevertheless he was delighted to see that Major Ram was the centre of attention and he jested, "I see Major Ram you are holding court here," Ram, smiled and responded, "now major! just checking the sharpness of your trained officers ? and all hushed as Dutta raised an eye brow and queried, "and so how did they fare Major Ram?" Ram turned to Dutta ,"well they are all rising lion cubs striding towards becoming the lion himself who trained them! confirmed Ram,andboth men laughed ,and Kapur swayed and and bopped to the words which every one sang yet gin.."Wimoweh! Wimoweh! the lion still roars tonight… and once again they take the last shot of their drinks , clapping, singing "for he's a jolly good fellow and so say all of us ".Dutta smiled shyly and his eyes suddenly feel upon his subdued women officers and he walked up to them ,and looked at Bhatnagar, "officer my personal driver is dropping you home, if that's ok with you?", he informed with concern. Bhatnagar, smiled and disclosed "thank you Sir, but my father will be coming to collect me, and he should be here shortly, thanks for having me here and all the very best to you and your wife "said Bhatnagar, as she saluted Dutta, and moved forward and embraced Naku. After Bhatnagar left, Naku moved towards a withdrawn Khan ,and put her arm around Khan's shoulder, and lauded her contribution to the function, "look Khan, loved your song, "jaane kya baat hai" ,thanks for dedicating it to me and Saab, didn't she do well Saab? Naku caught Dutta unaware, and he nodded with a brief,"hummh, but noticed a snubbed look in Khan's oriental eyes, and politely continued, as he turned towards her "how's your work going at the military school Khan?, her eyes lit up and she looked back in his narrow eyes and replied daringly ,"well Sir, its going well , has its highs and lows, but it would be brilliant if you dropped by and gave my work a surprise inspection,"Dutta, looked back at her with an impassioned vacant face and replied curtly," officer as much as I want to, it would not be possible, at the moment, due to my concurrent commitments, but in the distant future, yes sure I would be honoured to arrange a visit with the military school to inspect your work at the firing range", spoke Dutta as the good officer and even better encouraging tutor.

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Dutta, Naku, Baji , and Kala, received the remainder of the guests valedictions, and future good wishes as, Mr.and Mrs. Dutta Patil. Time fast approached midnight and Dutta and Naku headed towards their, room. Dutta 's eyes wandered around the room and he remarked dryly, "don't you think so Naku, these shuhag raat decorations should come down now? ummh remind me to order Baji to act upon it, hummh?", Naku looked up at him with a dead pan stare which made him respond, "ab hujhe kya hoi hai jo isa mujhe ghoor rehe hai kuch gulat kaha main ne kiya?," she smiled briefly and gazed at him with fondness, "nahin Saab, sahi kaha hai ap ne suhag raat to khatam hog gaye hai, so the room should be restored to its original look", he looked at her intently and made way towards her gradually, as he undid his dress jacket button. She reduced the distance between them, and lifted her arms as she carefully undid his dress uniform jacket. Dutta closed his eyes in contentment, as she got on with it,"hummh this is sheer bliss to be undressed by the hands of your woman,"he chuckled and she poked his tummy with a response, "wife actually". His arms pulled her into his tough frame , looked into her eyes, with a plea, "ab main thujhe undress karoon , hummh?",Naku shook her head, and slipped out of his embrace.. and he watched helplessly as she took out his dress suit covering from his wardrobe and neatly put away his jacket, he stood behind her in his three quarter white vest , and dress trousers, and in misery remarked,"mere sune ke kapre nikal while I have a quick shower" , and he withdrew into the bathroom and before he shut the door he flung his black trousers at her, in a foul mood. Naku , was busily packing away , their stuff for the trip next morning and he emerged from the bathroom with his small red towel over his shoulders with naked torso ,clad in his white night pyjama, "what the hell are you up to now woman?" he growled, and she continued her task busily.He literally pulled her to face him and barked at her, "band kar ye sab , and get into bed and pati ke sawa kar, samjhe!",and crashed his mouth on hers and she trembled as if she didn't know what hit her!… to be continued Hamlet53~ 7.9.12

Precap: the deafening strafing continued..as Naku, clung to Dutta's chest, and he put his arm around her back protectively..


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Hammie

Apologies again for the ruckus n posts which hurt you, when u were being extremely patient n gracious. You need not apologise as its ur prerogative to decide the timing n the destiny of ur Ff. just got carried away taking u n PR to be our own, lol... You deserve better fans (unlike me) surely. Hopefully u wil forgive me someday for my transgressions.

The update kicking off with the last to last of the post marriage ceremonies. The newly wed look settled n ready to greet the invitees. But Dutta not happy to see his ex students, surprises me. Thought he would be more generous n welcoming, no such discomfort with the ravishing head nurse Lauren? hugging shugging... hmm, understandable, comfortable with goodlooking ladies n to top it she,s like an old flame... But naku has him tied to her pallu, hardluck DSPji, wait for better opportunities.
Parekh arriving n the brief exchange of pleasantries...the discomfort with khan was more than evident. Its strange he holds grudges against a student whom he mentored n supported throughout. Atleast naku is more gracious when she,s supposed to be more insecure.
Wish to see baji someday relaxed n enjoyg an occasion. The beast of burden made a wonderful show, a slideshow of the couple, cute one indeed! But the surprises galore...with the presentation of the officers, what a sight it must be to see them singing n stepping to the lion king tune...followed by a marati tradition with the bride n groom tasting a drink. But d mother of all surprises had to be khan singing n she has proved again to be a gutsy lady, her frequently stealing glances at major was cheap to say the least. she has never truly hid her feelings, overtly or covertly making it known.. Its the couple,s turn to dazzle to a beatiful song. Naku, i must say is strange, readily dancing in front of an audience but all shy n coy with her husband. Baji,s desperate attempt to draw their attention to his plight goes in vain, no takers for baji,s plea. He too deserves better treatment.
Parekh,s announcement of naku accompanying major n his reasong was a shocker.. Nevertheless a boon to the couple. His family relieved for dutta except AS worrying for naku? baji,s right. The formality of taking naku,s family in d loop was on d expected lines..
Naku has a tuff job at hand with dis man n his narcissist attitudes.. umm, his patronising offer of transport to d ladies, thankfully bhatnagar didnt need it. khan, surely this lady has a thick skin too...trying hard to please him even thou the writing is crystal clear.
Naku donning the role of his batwoman too, pity her. tell u naku, courtship days r better where one is wooed than ordered around.

Thank you hammie for the UD n d pm. Hope you continue to retain d vigour n passion for writing. Me had to do justice to the reserved spot.
My Best Wishes to You.. Take Good Care, Bye.
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hello hammie kitne dino ka intazar ka baad finally you R here with UD
SHUKRIYA MEHERBANI
i read the UD
i enjoy every bit and only i can say


super
awesome
thank for the ud
waiting for next plz plzz hammie ud soon

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Painful Rapture - Chapter 61

Hi Bambaram ! Aagayi mein aagayi ...

Party time! Yaar me chuckled when Naku was staring at the chocolate fountain and he told if she wants to eat then go LOL...then he would've said we all know where the fat is dropping haha...although me want chocolate...

When his pupil showed up I went hain err uhhmm...and like we discussed glad you tackled the professional aspect of having them there...and how they ended up there had good reason so all good :)

Yaar! I enjoyed the picture slide and Baaji's little presentation it was so cute! Loved the pictures he selected and the mention of his father etc was a great touch...reminder of who he looked up to and bringing him in an important function as well...very nice touch!

Now what can I say about the officer's performance...ee ee e e um ym a weh! woooh me smiled widely here. I was like OH NO WAY this song haaa...now it was hilarious to picture a perforance on it none the less but this song brings back a lot of good childhood memories LOL...fun song it is...gosh you had me seriously singing while my eyes read the segement ...loved the reference it had to him and his musing that most probably he wouldn't be sleeping with her around. I beg to differ...he has better chances of with her chunni then her when they are in PN :P haa...

sip of liquour ... interesting traditional addition...loved his remark to her after, saying she can't say anything to him on drinking as she herself drank ...typical of him to remark in such a way! :P

me chuckling now at who is performing the Jaane Kya Baat Hai...Khan dearest...churofied Supriya performance lol...now what an awkward performance...Dutta not amused with reason of course and Naku well she's a daft one often :P ...I did like its addition though pulled her in between again lol...

Now Baaji, of course, knows when to do what...quickly trying to make that performance of Khan's history in no time ...he has the newly married couple dance..I didn't know the song till you told me to look it up ... very nice...I quite liked the song so thank you for helping me find it...really loved it..and the performance by the pair of them was no less...it was wonderful :) and yaar no doubt Baaji was to make an entrace there haha...loved his performance...showed the love he had for them as well :)

Alright so Dutta has to go on mission...and well well well ...would you look how luck would have it ...who but his wife to get the pleasure of of joining him on duty also...well love the thought of having a honeymoon in the middle of nowhere ... they seem to be most romantic in jungles :P I definitely like the way you have ensured the inclusion of family and also maintaining the confidentiality needed...family knowing whereabouts and their typical concerns are aspects needed to be included...so glad you tackled that too..

The last bit...well i know the secret behind the coming about of that...but I have to add hammie...throughout the entire UD something was amiss...and I got to this part and felt it most ...as if it was written for sake of writing something :S ..you are missing in the UD! Humm...hope you are ok?

Anyway did enjoy the read...although that party was long...you know me and parties yaar...I was like oh its still going...so me quite enjoyed the break during the gathering of fam and breaking news to them...

anyway definitely looking forward to the next wala...
lots of love and hugs...shall meet again very soon :P
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friends for praying for me now am perfectly fine as for update its


party is on full mood dutta asking for chocolate to nakku
baaji also invited dutta pupils on saying of parekh good all enjoying party all pupils doing masti
baaji showing pictures of tasha from childhood and khan song fab jane kya baat and dutta ne nakku ko pila di can't remark on him ab usne bhi pi hai duty call nakku also going with dutta great they informed family and last scene of room was awsem














Edited by tamanna1391 - 12 years ago
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hi hammiee
kitna tadpaiya but it was worth it .amazinggg UD 😊
wht a function! chocolate fountain mouth watering 😆mutton vada kaha se itna information u get hammiee mutton biryani ke bajai next time change it to chicken biryani . 😆luv wht my mom makes worlds best biryani .back to UD
duttas student were invited too all smartly turned up .lauren poor lady can only dream abt dutta 😊naku made her realised he is her man 2nd kabab mein haddi was there too need i name khan .kya gaana shana
enjoyed the band had all the shades of india & bit of videshi bagpiper😊
naku had to finally taste alcohol 😆slide show was amazing .baji & his super idea .i just loved the part .childhood se like shaadi tak .bechare baji darkas pe AS gor karna jaiheye baji aur roops ke engagement😊
z regiment ka presentation was funny .dutta & naku on the dance floor loved them .they looked amazing together 😊its one of my fav song .hammiee its telephaty 😆
finally the parekh instruction to leave next morning but hammiee loved the twist naku accompanying him .although on the official capacity magar saat toh rahein ge .naku will get the taste of her hubby army life .x destination can't wait to know in detail .humse toh khulasa kardo hammiee 😆
dutta taking into consideration naku fly opinion & his own .they all agreed thankfully
hammiee i felt like a part of the function & it all seemed like eye witness account .u r extermely gifted u out do urself .i feel this story deserve to be printed & i just want it to go .the only problem is unlike the novel i can't just jump on the next chapter .hammiee ke marze aur mercy pe it depends😆
waiting for the next UD .looking frwd to new experience of dutta & his bride .loved everybit
hammiee plz UD on time & like always ur amazinggg & best among the best😊
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Dear hammie

Didnt realize you to be preoccupied with more important issues while i was hankering for the UD.. .. Extremely sorry for bein so insensitive. Hope u can forgive me 😳

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Originally posted by: -bharti-

Dear hammie

Didnt realize you to be preoccupied with more important issues while i was hankering for the UD.. .. Extremely sorry for bein so insensitive. Hope u can forgive me 😳

sorry hammie me too was not being nice abbout the ud . realy very very sorry!
r sorry se ghussa kam na ho toh pm se nikal do
ab ghalti ki hai toh bhugatni toh paday gi na

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