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Posted: 12 years ago
take ur time shoba...will wait..
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Hey Shobha how r you dear and what about your work, i hope it's going well...
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I'm am missing my Dangerous Passionate Maan and lovely innocent beautiful Geet...Aur Dev Kaminey ko bhi😆
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Part 21

Dev: Jack, did you find out when the bloody Khuranna's and Handa's are coming back.
Jack: Boss….. its highly difficult to get the information and when you being the client of KC cant get through how do you believe tat I will get.

Dev marched towards Jack and threw him down while he straggled Jack with his leg on his neck with anger.

Dev: Don't you dare tell me wat I can do and wat not. it was your duty to get the information.

Jack coughed badly with the pressure of his legs on his neck while pleading holding his legs to leave me.

Jack: Boss….please.. leave me.. please.. boss… its not easy….. boss…

Dev pressed his legs more into him with anger.

Dev: than why the hell are you here. Don't forget tat your life is at my mercy. I just damn need the details about their trip.

Dev kicked him once again badly on his stomach almost making Jack to get up and flinch with pain. He got hold of his stomach and coughed a bit of blood while Dev gave him last warning.

Dev: remember Jack… I can kill you with no mercy at any second. Just don't forget tat you are here back coz of me and I very well know the new girl you are with. So its better tat you get everything at place before I take her along with your sister also.

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Geet stood facing the sea in her balcony with a smile playing on her lips. It was a genuine smile tat reached her eyes just by remembering the moment Maan sang for her but the smile did not last thinking about his changed behaviour. She clearly remembered the time when Maan was changed. She tried hard to remember the incidents in her life and to correlate it with Maan's change behaviour. She closed her eyes trying to remember their past and the moment she put pressure on her mind she drew back to the worst nightmare of her life opening her eyes in a jerk. She once again closed her eyes and flashbacks of some faces and hands reaching to touch her came infront. Hands trying to rip her dress and a knife almost ripping her skin flashed infront. She opened her eyes all sweating and ran to the mirror, looked at herself, and slipped her nighty down revealing the mark that she had always thought to be some injury but now she was sure tat it was not any injury. She slowly traced her fingers on it and tat very moment she knew wat it was. She brushed the mark as if trying to get out of those thoughts. She scratched it trying to remove those touches, which now flashed in her mind.

Maan who had come to see Geet, was shocked to see the way she was. He stood rooted at his place trying to know wat she was upto and the moment he realized tat she remembered the worst he ran to her. Maan stopped her from harming herself and looked at her skin above her cleavage tat was now fully red with her nail marks all over. Geet pushed him with her force and started to continue hurting herself but Maan was quick enough to hold her hand tight in his. Geet looked at him with tears in her eyes while Maan pulled her into a hug trying to soothe her aching heart with the realization of her past. Geet sobbed badly and finally she spoke out of fear.
Geet: You….. all…. Have…been…. Lying…… this mark….. i… know…. i.. remember…. He….
Maan could not take her pain of realization. It was not easy for them to make Geet believe tat nothing was wrong with her. After math of that incident the doctors had warned of worst situation as Geet was not only subjected to physical but mental harassment also. She used to even fear in her sleeps shouting for help and hence they had decided not to even speak about the incident back and as a result they had made a story of Geet being injured during an accident and for this they had to hospitalize her for making her believe it. but now seeing his Geet remembering and living those horrified moments made him to shake within.

Geet: no…. they…… touched……he….. put…his…. hand….. i.. shouted…..he.. tore…… my…. Dress…

Maan pulled Geet away from him and shouted.

Maan: No…. nothing happened to you… This mark (he placed his hand on the mark) is coz of tat accident that you had. There is nothing like tat

Geet pushed him away and started to scratch her body with her nails once again.

Geet: no… I know… I remember… he.. tried… he… touched.. me… here.. he.. touched.. me. Here…. You.. al.. told.. lies… Maa- Papa.. sab jhoot… I know… I remember now… it was.. all..

Maan pulled her towards himself and shook her making her to believe tat nothing happened to her.

Maan: No… Jaan. Nothing happened believe me… no one touched you…its only me…

Geet: no… he did… they.. did… they…
Geet fell down on her knees realizing the truth about her own life.
Geet: and…I.. know…now… you.. hate me… you hate… me… and… tats.. why… you.. get.. angry… I know… you.. hate me… you hate.. me….

Maan closed his eyes realizing tat she would say this in her state. He bent downed leveling himself to her and cupped her face.

Maan: Jaan… your Maan can never hate you.. he can never hate you Jaan. See my eyes Geet… do you feel tat I let tat B****** do anything to you. how can you think tat your Maan would let him touch his Jaan. I know tat I had to come early and m sorry for tat but trust me Jaan tat B****** did not touch my Jaan. He just (Maan closed his eyes while placed his lips on her cleavage) touched you here and nothing else but tat was long back Jaan no your skin, your body you heart your soul has only my touch. it only speaks about my love and touch everywhere. Trust me Jaan he did not do anything.

Maan pulled her into a hug while his eyes shed silent tears for the first time. He knew very well tat being the nave and innocent girl she would end up with all these thoughts if she was reminded about it and for tat reason he had to plan tat fake accident which her innocent mind believe in their words but now the realization about being physically molested was creating a havoc and fear of losing Maan further in her heart.
Maan: Believe me Jaan… you are as pure as our love. no one tarnished you with their filthy hands Jaan and I will never allow anyone.
Geet: but he did… he… did.. touch.. me… he did….
Maan pulled her out as his anger took over him and shouted at her.
Maan: just rememeber this Geet no one ever touched you nor will anyone. Don't forget tat you are Maan Singh Khuranna obsession and possession and no one is allowed to lay a filthy eye on my love. do you get it..

He pulled Geet more into him trying to take away her pain while Geet clinged to him as if trying to believe tat wat she remembered was only nightmare. It was not too late tat she fell asleep in his arms. Maan very gently carried her to the bed and mad her to sleep on him while taking her whole weight on him while sleep was far away from Maan. It was quite difficult for him to deal with the truth in his past which had made him to change being strict and an angry person from the one everyone knew and now the truth tat his Jaan remembered it was making him go wilder with her words.

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Geet opened her eyes only to find herself being locked in his arms over his body. She slowly raised her head to capture his face with her eyes as he always looked like a small baby sleeping. She pulled her had and traced his face from his forehead to his jaw feeling him while Maan who was wide awake with her movements was enjoying her fingers on him. Geet quite lost but when she remembered the last night, she stiffened and pulled her hand away making Maan to open his eyes. He scanned her face and the feel of her stiffened body did not take long from him to know wat she was thinking and the next second her lips were in his and she was flipped under him while he over her. He did not wait for her while he kept kissing her, nibbling, sucking and biting her lips making her to gasp for air opening her mouth letting him to enter her territory of sweetness. Maan pulled her tongue making her know tat he wanted her to kiss him back while his hands pulled her nighty up her body and his hands roaming freely on her bare skin creating the sensation. Geet could not hold back herself more and she responded back to his kiss trying to match the passion while her hands puling him more into her from his neck and pressing his hard toned chest into her soft curves. They kissed each other as if there was no tomorrow. It was not their first kiss but the kiss had the realization tat their belonged to each other since long and none could part them from each other. Maan saw her breathing heavenly and he slowly pulled away from her letting her to take in air but once she steadied her breadth she was once again pulled into a breath taking kiss while Geet obliged to his kiss with same passion. They broke after wat seems to be ages.
Geet: ( hitting him on his chest) you always do this. You know Annie Di always teases me seeing my swollen lips. Why do you kiss me so much.
Maan: and wat about you. don't you bit me.
Geet: when do I, liar.
Maan: Oh really… should I tell you when did you bite me.
Geet: ok.. I did but only once not like you who always does.
Maan: wat can I do if I find my Jaan so sweet tat I like to bite her.
Geet: haan.. sweet but you know how difficult it is to hid all this.
Maan traced her facial features smiling thinking tat he was capable of diverting her mind while Geet who was enjoying his fingers suddenly caught hold of his hand, which still had the deep cut mark, and in a moment she pulled herself away from his body while Maan looked at her eyes showing anger suddenly. He looked at her while her eyes still bored onto his hand and the realization of her being angry for tat night rushed into mind. He moved closer to her while slowly touching her shoulders.

Maan: Jaan.. Please m sorry..

Geet (jerking his hands away): sorry… why sorry..

Maan: Jaan m sorry…. Please I will never do tat again.

Geet turned facing him and said holding his hand and kissing slightly.
Geet: did I ever complain to you about how much you hurt me. I know you don't like anyone touching me but did I ever say tat when you punish me for no faults leaving those marks on my body, they hurt me. No never.. I can never ever say tat coz I always had a fear tat you may leave me one day and go. I never knew why you changed so suddenly. I always carved for my Maan.. The Maan who used to sing, dance and love me with his love but nope you changed and you changed so suddenly after making me forget tat worst past of my life. I blindly believed you all tat nothing happened to me but tat incident took away my Maan from me and the new Maan in front is not whom I know. You claim to love me, and I never deny tat but how could you hurt my life. I know tat I always fail to express my feelings for you. your anger always made me shut my mouth before I could express myself. I never complained anything and took everything as your love. But you hurt my Maan and I can't take this. You even can kill me but a mere scratch on you takes my life away. I can't see you hurt my Maan and will never be able to forgive myself thinking tat m the coz of all this. I know tat unknowingly I always land up getting closer to someone else but trust me I equally hate when they touch me when I only belong to you. my whole life is yours Maan, but please I beg you don't hurt yourself and if you do it I cant take it. it hurts your Jaan more than your punishment. Please.
Geet runs away while Maan sat there trying to register her words. The words she first time spoke tat how deep she loved him and he always gave her pain and pain. He sat there for long while Geet cried inside the washroom. It was not an easy day from her as the realization of her past with the emotional torture she was going since their last encounter where she had witnessed him hurting himself was taking a toll on her.

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Everyone gathered outside the beach house while Maan was keenly observing his Jaan who was trying to avoid his gaze. He looked at her and gave a small smirk while she pouted her lips in anger. She looked at him from corner of her eyes and the next set of words made her to let out a small scream.
Maan: here everyone. Would like to know how many of you are interested in going for snorkeling.

Prem: wat.. I mean Maan are you sure tat you are talking about snorkeling. If its so tat it would be a great idea.

Prem eyed Annie while Annie gave a faint smile knowing his intentions.

Maan: off course Prem. I have already planned for it but want to know how many of you are coming.

Vicky: Bro… don't ask.. lets go.

Rajveer: Maan you all youngsters carry on we will be fine here. We cant come for snorkeling at this age, so its better tat we do something creative here.

Rano: Haan Maan.. you all carry on. And we need to do some shopping also so we will carry tat and you can go with you plans.

Prem: Tats great Maa.. and anyways it will be fun with youngsters as I know bade papa and papa are not anymore young for all this adventures.

Mohinder: Oye Prem.. don't forget tat I still charm girls more than you. its just tat we don't want to come in between you people so before I decide against you all make a move from here.

Dadima: Aur haan.. don't think tat you being alone can do all masti as I have Vicky keeping an eye on both you and Maan or else the day we reach Delhi back I wont mind getting you both couples married.

Vicky: Don't worry Dadima, I will after all I like to disturb the sweet romance between them.

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Geet and Annie dressed up in their swimming suits, which were strictly ordered, by Prem and Maan for them respectively. Maan was stunned to see his Jaan in the swimsuit as he had settled the best for her that would keep her glowing. All five were ready on the small ship that would take them into deep waters while Vicky kept a close watch on the couples. Vicky enjoyed troubling them and Geet had the perfect opportunity for staying away from Maan. Maan did like her distancing herself as that way he would enjoy manofying his sweet Jaan. They were already in deep sea while the man who was along with them to guide had given them the necessary instructions for their safety and how about to go. Though Maan, Prem and Vicky were not new to it they were careful as Annie and Geet were first time going deep into the sea for snorkeling. Prem held Annie while Maan held Geet and all five were inside the waters swimming through the deep waters of the rough sea. They dived deep into the sea reaching their destination and the scene in front of them took away their breadth. Geet and Annie could not believe tat they were actually deep inside the water and having a close look to the different fishes in water. The different colors and the way the fishes were swimming in groups and pairs made them to feel the happiness. Maan slowly pulled Geet by her waist making her to hold him tight in water while Prem pulled Annie and Vicky was far to away from them enjoying exploring the sea. Vicky did like such adventures and deep sea diving was his weakness and he would forget everything once he was inside and Maan had taken the best chance knowing about it very well. The couple moved away from each other for privacy while Geet who was enjoying her first snorkeling experience forgot tat she was angry on Maan and was not supposed to come close to him. Maan smiled pulling her while they went deep inside. Maan halted at a particular point and pulled Geet closer Geet looked at him while and could see the passion and smirk in his eyes. She understood his intentions and tried to pull away while the fishes tickled her bare legs. Maan slowly moved his hands on her waist pulling her top a bit up while Geet's eyes widen seeing anyone of them close to them. He pulled her more into him and his fingers tightened the hold on her almost digging but lovingly creating the sexual tension between them. Maan slowly moved his one hand on top reaching to her curves and kneading them through the water. Geet could not stop herself from digging her nails into his shoulder and moved closer while Maan pulled her legs up wrapping them into his waist making her feel his arousal which was prominent enough even in water. Geet felt his hardness onto her core as Maan had placed her exactly at the right position. They being in water did not hinder their romance and Maan having good control in deep waters did not stop him from feeling her. his one hand wrapped around which now reached inside her shorts stroking her core while Geet could just get closer to him more and more while his one hand pulled her head and removing their oxygen mask smacked his lips on hers and kissed her taking her into double pleasure which she could not deny. Maan kissed her sucking her lips and tasting the salty water but soon found her gasping for air and he instantly left her lips and put on the mask back again. His eyes looked at her flushed face while his hands still inside her shorts creating havoc. He liked to see the affect he has on her and tat showed how much she loved him and could not resist him even in her anger. Maan slowly unwrapped her legs and they both swam again taking a round around the waters while enjoying the nature's beauty.
Maan could see Geet getting tired and he at once decided to go back. He looked around for others and upon not finding them they both swam back to the ship and Maan took her to the small separate room which was there for each one. (lol.. Maan how much you will spend for the trip). Maan pulled Geet and once again captured her lips which had kept on teasing him and he wanted his share of love before anyone could disturb them on the ship. They parted after a while.
Maan: So Jaan.. how was the first experience in deep waters.
Geet: nice…
Maan: just nice..
He caressed her wet form with his hands while making Geet to lose her senses.
Geet: very nice….
Maan; only very nice.
Maan placed wet Kisses on her shoulders drinking the droplets of water.
Geet: Maannn.. please…
Maan continued playing with her skin pulling the top a bit from her shoulder.
Maan: say na Jaan.. how was it.. would you like to go once again.
Geet: hmmm….
Maan: so you don't mind me making love to you in water..
Geet: hmmm…

Maan: So shall we go once again right now…

Geeet: hmmm

And tats when she opened her eyes and realized wats she said. She turned around and looked at him giving a smirk while she cutely hit him on his chest. Maan loved her cute acts and pulled her into a hug and before he could pull her for a kiss there was a knock on the door bringing them back from their passion. Maan straightened Geet's swimsuit and opened the door only to see Prem, Vicky and Annie giving them angry glares.

Vicky: Haan.. so Bro…. was this your snorkeling plan.

Maan gave him a glare but Vicky was not ready to keep quite.

Vicky: I don't know wats wrong with you four. These two (pointing towards Annie and Prem) chi… even in deep waters they don't leave a chance to romance and you too here in this room.. I definitely need to tell Dadima tat its high time tat they get you four married or else me poor boy have to witness all your romance.

Prem: Vicky.. why do I feel tat you are jealous tat you don't have a girlfriend. See Vicky.. if you really need one than I can ask Annie or Geet to find one for you.

Vicky: Ohh really Prem bhai.. tat would be of great help. But you know.. I can understand how bad is Annie Di's selection after all m having a jeeta jagta proof in front of me.

Annie fumed in anger with his comment and pouched on Vicky like a lioness.

Annie: Wat did you say tat my choice is bad.. I will really show you how bad is my choice right now.

Geet joined Annie and they both threw Vicky on the bed and started to hit the poor fellow while Maan and Prem enjoyed their cute fight.

Prem: Maan.. thanks for the trip. It was much needed for all of us.

Maan: I know Prem but more than you, I needed it.

Prem: Hmmm.. Maan I know tat you don't like anyone of us to interfere into your personal matters but still being a brother and a friend I would just say tat she is still nave Maan and she does snot even know the real world.

Maan: She knows Prem.. she knows..
Prem at moment freezed on his place getting the meaning of his words. The reality struck to him and his eyes reached to his baby sister from whom they had hidden the truth by telling so many lies and her being the innocent and nave did not even question them and believed to their words. His eyes moistened remembering the horrified incident while his hands clenched into fist.
Prem: how…
Maan: I cant explain Prem but she has come to know the real truth. I know she looks happy but m scared tat the incident may once again leave her shattered. She was just 15 at tat time but now she knows the truth and….

Prem: and wat Maan…

Prem followed Maan eyes and there he could see the slight reddening of her skin near her delicate neck which Geet tried to hide but right now she did not even realize it.

Prem: How could she do tat Maan and where were you.
Maan: I could not stop her Prem.. I could not. the realization tat she was touched by some filthy hands made her wild and I fear for this more. I don't know tat is she hiding her pain with her smile or did she really trust my words last night.
Prem: but who reminded her of her dreadful past Maan.
Maan: its none other than me Prem. Its my anger and again the sudden change of my behavior made her to go in her past and tats when the reality hit her. The hard reality of her being kidnapped and molested at a tender age and than my change in behavior from her Maan to Maan Singh Khuranna. Ironically the person who always kept her away from tat past is the cause for reminding it and I being MSK could not do anything to stop her from remembering it.
Prem was shocked and angry hearing tat Maan was the reason behind but one look on at his eyes made Prem sure tat he was equally disturbed and hurt for being the reason. He comfortably placed a hand on his shoulder telling him tat it was only him who could make her understand tat nothing has happened to her.

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Maan entered in Geet's room only to find her sitting in the balcony all lost in her own world of misery. Maan saw her tat though she was lost but her hands were slowly rubbing her skin as if trying to remove even the last bits of those filthy touches. Maan slowly closed the door and reached near her. He stood behind the chair and when he felt her increasing the pressure of her hands on her skin, he grabs them making her stop hurting herself while tears were flowing down her cheeks. He holds her by her hand pulling her up on her feet and he himself settled on the comfortable chair taking her on his lap with her legs on his sides. Maan kissed her cheeks while drinking the tears while his hands on her waist pulling her closer. He slips her strips of her night dress and places luscious kisses sucking her skin making her to flinch in pain but Maan was no where to stop. He increased his pressure of his lips on her while his teeth bit her skin making her to shed few more tears. He left her shoulders and the next moment he holds her head and smacked his rough lips into hers kissing her angrily. He bites her lower lip making blood to ooze out licking the blood he suck the lips into his mouth. He kissed her as if he wanted her to remember only him and no one else while his hands busy removing her nightdress from her body. He hands were quite successful in exposing her upper body by slipping the nighty out of her shoulders and leaving her only in her bra. He left her lips and hovered over her marble skin near her cleavage and shoulders getting wild with the thought tat she was hurting herself on the pretext of removing those touched which were long back erased by Maan. he was furious and his anger could be seen in his kisses and bites. Maan's lips reached the mark on her cleavage and he bit there so harsh tat made Geet scream and hold him tight digging her nails into his skin. Maan looked at her face with tears but he continue biting her making her flinch in pain. After some time Maan licked the place and placed wet kisses soothing her pain.
Maan: Why did you scream Geet, was I too harsh in removing tat B****** touches or did I fail to remove those touches.

Geet looked at his eyes which were spitting only anger but deep within she knew tat wat he meant.

Maan: bolo Geet.. was I successful or should I increase my pressure so tat I can remove even the last slight touches of him.

Maan saw Geet nodding her head in a no that made him angrier. he holds her by shoulder gripping her skin which once again made her to flinch in pain.

Maan: than wat the hell were you doing sitting here. Did not I tell last night tat he did nothing to you. did not I tell tat you skin, your heart and you soul only has me in them. Did not I tell you tat I don't want you to remember tat incident. (geet nodes again) than why Geet why do you do tat.

Geet: I …. Feel……..his….
Maan: feel wat Geet. Where was this feel for 3 long years. Did you even remember tat such thing had happened to you than why now. Why can't you simply believe tat it was just an accident. Why cant you just forget it. Do you know how difficult it was for us to put a lie in front of you. do you know how difficult it was for me to see you in tat state. Do you know how did I feel when I saw tat B****** over you. Forget tat Geet, do you still feel his filthy touch after all wat we have gone through. Do you feel his touches even after we almost broke all our limits in love? Is there any place tat my lips and hands did not touch your body. Is there any part that is not seen by me, than fine Geet I don't mind to make you mine in all senses.
Maan put her down on her feet making her nighty to further slip from her body leaving her only in her inners and in one swift move, he carried her to the bed. He threw her on the bed a bit harshly and tore his vest and the next second he was all over her kissing her violently while Geet only struggled under him with tears feeling each others pain. Maan bit her all over and once again pulled her for an aggressive kiss. He looked up into her eyes after parting away from her lips
Maan: don't Geet, don't even dare to cry now. It was not easy for me to be harsh on you after tat incident, it was not easy for me to see anyone else touching you rather than me.

Geet: m sorry….

Maan: Sorry…. Do you think Geet tat I was happy seeing you touched by him. I made his life hell and he was almost dead like Rahul. You wanted your old Maan back, you were angry on your Maan, coz I punished your Maan for hurting you but wat you did Geet. Why did you hurt yourself. I had waited for 3 long years to wipe off those filthy touches from your body and the day when you turned 18, I could not hold it, tat day I felt like I was successful in removing all those touches which were haunting me since 3 years without letting you know the real truth but now I feel tat I failed in tat.. I failed Jaan.. I failed and I myself made you to go in the past to remember tat. I failed Jaan I failed.

Maan hid his face into her neck crying for his failure while Geet slowly placed hands around his body trying to soothe him.
Geet: you did not fail Maan.. you did not. i…… m.. sorry… but don't.. say you failed… you never did… you never failed…. Only tried to keep me safe from all tat… and I always blamed you for your anger.. you did not fail Jaan…
Maan looked up to her and wiped of the tears kissing her eyes and slowly pecking her lips.
Maan: Than promise me tat you wont remember it. Promise me tat you will not think about it. Promise me tat you wont try to harm yourself like you did since last night. Remember Jaan tat your whole body only has my touch and I even don't like your trying to erase them from you skin.
Geet nodded for a yes and pulled her head up slightly placing her lips on his. This simple gesture was enough for Maan to take her lips into his pulling her for a more passionate kiss unknown to them tat they the black shadow devil is planning the worst for them.

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Jack saw Dev laughing like a manic which made him scared for his life. Jack very well knew tat this kind of behavior was not good for him and his life shaking him and fearing Dev. Jack looked up at Dev while Dev just laughed like a Devil in possession.

Dev: don't get scared Jack. Its not time for your death. There's long way still for you in my life.
Jack had a breadth of relief hearing his boss while Dev continued to laugh.
Dev: but, its time for someone to be somewhere they have to.
Jack looked up at Dev once again when Dev continued.
Dev: you are just a fool Jack but not. You know the idiot Khuranna's and Handa's who think tat by keeping secrecy about their so called trip no one will disturb them but alas they did forget tat it time to face Dev Raichand now and you know wat those so called clowns are coming back in two days.

Jack: two days… but how come.

Dev: Tats wat is DEV RAICHAND for Jack and you don't need to tense your brain for tat but right now the plan which I had discussed want it to be executed properly. I need the best professionalist in the field. No mistake and no clues there after should be remained after the success of the plan. Do you get it.

Jack: have already sent a word across boss and he will be here by tomorrow evening.
Dev: Good now I need my …
Jack: its ready boss and this time a much younger..
Dev: Its time up for you Geet Handa, the very next day you will be here in my den under me and I will show you wats real heaven in this world. Be ready to face your devil now the real devil and the real angel.
Dev stood up and walked inside his heaven but turned once before going.
Dev: you know Jack, it would be much good if you would have brought your girlfriend or sister here right now. They seem to be much prettier these days and I would love enjoy them under me. ( jack frightened) but don't worry I leave them for you as you are too sincere and this is your reward for being with me but yaa the day you betray me I will show you're the real Devil in me..
Dev moved inside closing the door once again to destroy another life. A innocent life who would be his prey tonight. A prey for a psycho who just needed girls to satisfy his unknown need of his body.
Precap: The teaser itself.. do you remember.. now lets make the teaser real..

He hugged her but felt his hands touching something cold and saw tat his hands were covered in blood and he slightly distanced himself to only to see her shrinking in pain and closing her eyelids but soon was hit by a strong bullet on his chest which pushed him away making her to fall her to fall down along with him….

Hi everyone.. now here is my update.. did not I compensate for not updating. Hope you all love the update..

Now coming on serious note.. I will be bit selfish hence forth for likes and comments. I never did so but now I really need them to continue or else you will all have to wait for long for my next update. I want each one who reads the update to atleast press .like and comment so tat I know tat the buddies on my list do appreciate my work which motivates me. I hope you all can do this.. and yaa now finish off this thread so tat my next dhamakedaar update would be on new thread and I know tat would literally scare you like the teaser..

Love you alll
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Posted: 12 years ago


wow lovely lovely painful update ji...so tis is te reason, my maan became maansingh khurana...bechare geet in her 15 years small kid bear so much...who is tat b*******?...my maan was erasing his touch, tats why he was like tis for protecting his geet...now geet knows why he is like tis, coz of her, and for her..he will be like that...te way my maaneet in deep sea making out was lovely..watever geet trys she cant be angry on my maan for long, he know how to manofly her...lovely lovely scenes...wat that dev stupid is planing?..but u r going to see te real hell, my maan soon...i love te update so much ji...precap was so scaring, my maan is getting bullet due to dev?..
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Posted: 12 years ago
ossum part dear
loved it
great dear
waiting for the next dear
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Posted: 12 years ago
amazing update
really loved it
superb part
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome update di
when maan is with geet nothing will happen to geet
even if 1000 dev come maan will tackel everyone
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome update...
but update or precap
is sooo scary
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome update shoba...ahh geet remembered about the past...dnt knw what is store in the future..precap sounds scary..

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