well me back with my short fanfic (whic are more then 10 parts )😆
i had started this fanfic long time back but then didnt got time to conclude it
so i just wanted to conclude it now as i dont have anyting else to do😕
i guess this was the second fanfic to be wirtten in the ks forum (when i had started to write it at first)😃
i had started it from where jai marries bani and holdes her hand and grabs her from the mandap after the marriage is over😭
so heres part one
jai grabs bani in his car and goes away after some time he stops his car in some dark place where there is no one except both of them 😉
jai comes out of the car and tells bani to come out aswel ,as bani comes out he starts shouting at bani saying
jai--bani yeh kya mazak hai pia kaha hai
bani is speech less as she herself dont know where she is?😕
jai-- bani mein janta hu tumhe pata hai pia kaha hai
bani in slow voice --mein nahi janti woh kaha hai
jai becomes very angry and at the same time feeling very sad
then he holds bani close to him and says(in very caring and calm voice)
jai--bani mein janta hu ke tum pia ko bohot chahti ho lekin mein bhi usse bohot zyada pyaar karta hu tum please mujhe batawo woh kaha hai
bani looks at jai with tears in her eyes and says
bani--mr.walia mein nahi janti woh kaha hai mein sirf itna janti hu ke woh iswaqt hum sab ko chhorke chaligayi hai 😭
jai becomes very angry and says in very loud voice to bani
jai--mein pia ko dhund ke rahunga agar woh meri na hosaki to woh kisi aur ki bhi nahi hogi
bani is shock ,then jai goes back in his car and waits bani to sit as bani sits in the car jai drives the car strait to his home 😊
where everyone is waiting for them as they enter in the house dadi comes to welcome the new bride as dadi does the arti stuffs jai stops her and says ke apki bahu pia bhag chuki hai 🤢
everyone is shock as everyone is thinking if pia has run away then who is the bride with jai as she has covered her face with the duppatta
then jai himself openss the duppata and everyone is shock and speechless by seeing bani as the bride 😳
ajj ke liye this is it
ill have to make some changes to other parts also which i have already written😕
do tell me how was it 😃
prt 1 pg 1
prt 2,3,4 and 5 pg 2
prt 6 pg 4
prt 7 pg 5
prt 8 pg 7
prt 9 pg 8
prt 10 pg 9
prt 11 pg 12
prt 12 pg 14
prt 13 pg 15
prt 14 pg 16
prt 15 pg 18
prt 16 pg 20
prt 17 pg 21
prt 18 pg 23
prt 19 pg 24
prt 20 pg 25
prt 21 pg 26
prt 22 pg 27
prt 23 pg 29
prt 24 pg 30
prt 25 pg 32
prt 26 pg 34
prt 27 pg 36
prt 28 pg 39
prt 29 pg 42
prt 30(last part) pg 46
prt 9 pg