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Posted: 13 years ago

#81

When I think your OS cannot get any more cute,you prove me wrong.

This was so effin adorable.The whole Princess-Slave thing and horse ride was hilarious.😆

Sharon crying, knowing Swayam would leave her as soon as he gets to, was so cute.Swayam surely knows his way out with Sharon in this one.

And ending,Sharon always his princess was so Swayam like.

Me likey this one.

Thanks for the PM.

Edited by -Nia- - 13 years ago

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Madhura

@Madhura..

Stunner

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Posted: 13 years ago

#82

Firstly Nidhi, its was great to see your replies.

Happy u liked my idea and all, LOL.

I read this chapter, it was filled with innocence and childhood memories, swaron as children, with typical characters u built, ponytail thing and swing, as always pretty practical.

The horse thing was bit too much, poor swayam, but adorable OS I would say, the marriage thing was innocent and cute, well written.

Thank u for pm.

A suggestion, can u write the page no of the OS in your index so its easy to locate..?

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Snowey

@Snowey

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#83

^^ Hey Madhura 🤗

Like your DP 😳 and in the index the updates are hyperlinked.

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Sawyer_Tom

@Sawyer_Tom

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#84

Madhura were you really serious about the whole SwaRon sci-fi concept? 😲

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abhilasha_dream

@abhilasha_dream

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#85

Awww !! PooR Swayamm !! He is being ruled from his younger age itself that too so mercilessly 😆

But anyway its his own choice...

The OS was so cute... Loved it simply

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ABI

@ABBY92

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#86

AWWHHH !!! OMG, This is the cutest OS ever !! Just imagining SwaRon as small kids and yanking on each other's hair !! It was so sweet the way Swayam felt like only he has the right to pull her ponytail !! No one can be a better princess than Sharon and as always, no matter how old they are, Sharon's wish is always Swayam's command !! It was so adorable the way Sharon got upset when he said he won't marry her and true to being Swayam, he had to cheer up his princess immediately !! I had a big smile on my face through out the whole OS and couldn't stop sighing with delight !! Absolutely adorable !!

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Meera

@MirageSwaron

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#87

SwaRon as kids is refreshing coz thatz what they really are at heart anyways...pure in their feelings and innocent in their own way...whether it be Swayam's chivalry and possessiveness at the same time which drove him to fight with Rahul in the first place or Sharon's deep-set conviction that whatever happens Swayam will never leave her and go...even if for a few moments that happy belief was on the verge of cuming crushing down, our little gentleman knows how to do a balancing act and save the situation...Swayam and Sharon caught in their true essence wrapped in uncomplicated bachpan...

Going by the title, even though Peter Parker and Uncle Ben came to mind instantly😆...Swayam seems to taking up his responsibility to be always there for his princess quite seriously...

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kool kanz

@kool kanz

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#88

dat was d cuttest swaron i hv ever read...swaron as kids, stil 2gether,stil swayam bein sharon;s slave n she bein his princess...wow...d little sharon diva was so damn cute😊😊😊

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Madhura

@Madhura..

Stunner

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Posted: 13 years ago

#89

Nidhi, yes ofc I was serious with SwaRon science fiction.

Now I have hardly read Science fiction, possibly I may read in this Diwali vacations. I have heard Hitchiker's guide to galaxy is great sci-fi book, my friend has read a lot.

So if u want suggestions I can ask her, but am sure you also must have read lot of it.

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ananya randhawa

@Ananya.SwaRon

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#90

res..

unres..

loved the princess and her slave. they were shoo cute...feeling like pulling their cheeks. they are so adorable...love them and you to the core . loved the way you showed their possessiveness for each other in a way or another...the theme and the plot came out very well..loved the childishness you brought up in this OS..loved swayam being protective of her and she being the diva..oh sorry the *princess*..my heart skipped a beat when i read swayam say that he would run away from her but when i read the part where he gave her his half-eaten chocolate a huge smile spread across my face...! adoring the cuteness of this OS...

great-amazing-lovely-wonderful... that's all i could i say about this OS!

thanks for the PM. i wish this book of fairtytale doesn't end just with 7 OS...!

Edited by swaron_d3 - 13 years ago