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Posted: 13 years ago
#71

Originally posted by: tanzz15

Heyaaa Nidhi!!! wow!!! OS MARATHON on SWARON...!!!😊😃


ABOUT YOUR FIRST OS-simply awesome!! loved it very much...😉
waiting for the next girlie...😃
thanks for the pm...😃



love tania...😊


Thanks a lot, Tania. 😃

Originally posted by: swaron_d3

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it was a perfect start..loved the way you penned down sharon's anxiety to talk to swayam. this surely brought me out of the gloominess i have been going through due to recent swaron track..! Ahh! The recent SwaRon ttrack. The thorn in every SwaRon fan's side.
the way sharon fell for swayam was a pleasant read..the way the OS began was quite amusing, sharon sharpening her pencil just to get a glimpse of swayam. the credit for making her realize that he acknowledged his presence goes not only to the father of philosophy but also the lecturer I guess we should give the teacher some credit too, huh? 😆..it was one of our awesome-est(i know there is no such word in the dictionary😆 )
works which i've ever read...thank you..thank you again for writing such an awesome OS..

so they have reached their first destiny ,6 yet to go...wish the flight takes off soon..😎 Don't worry. I'll put up the next one in some time. 😊


Thank you so much for commenting. 😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
#72

Originally posted by: Rutu

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I loved the start, a very common scene that we all witness in our classrooms. Very commanplace! 😳 Sharon pretending to sharpen her pencil gave me a picturesque view of how amusing she would be looking. Well there is role reversal here, where Sharon is waiting for one glimpse of Swayam. And then doodling and stealing glances at him😆 Yeah I really wanted to see how would Sharon carry out as Swayam. 😳
I like it!!! Thanks 😃
I loved the entire description of how she noticed his small details be his smile, running his hair when he is nervous or narrowing of his already small eyes!! Well we have already seen Swayam do it. So I guess its only fair that Sharon does it too.😉
The Cinderella joke,was it your creation? Even if it was, I would never claim it. But fortunately, it wasn't. The joke was purposefully lame. 😆
I could not imagine Sharon saying the same😆 I did imagine it. Not a pretty outcome, I must say.😳
The end was nice Swayam already knowing her name!! What can Sharon ask for more now?

Waiting for the next OS😃


Thanks so much Rutu. 😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
#73

Originally posted by: kimshu

thanks for the pm

and such a cute os love to read more of ur work
hope we could c such sweet swaron in d3 too


Thanks so much. 😃

Originally posted by: booksfreak07

It was the cutest OS I have read in a really long time. Loved the way you've written about Sharon's thoughts, her feelings, her nervousness and inhibitions. I just love the way she tried to analyze swayam's character based on her observations. That was seriously my favourite part.
Thanks for the pm!!!


Thank you so much. 😃 We rarely get any Sharon's POV OSs. So I thought I'd start with one that is completely Sharon's POV.
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Posted: 13 years ago
#74
you are an awsome writer... i am new to this forum but i believe i have read most of your's write ups...it will be a treat to read Swaron OS everyday written by you

The first one ws really awsome 👏

and THANKS for cheering up all the upset fans of swaron by your beautiful OS 😊👏
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Posted: 13 years ago
#75

Originally posted by: mili1987

you are an awsome writer... i am new to this forum but i believe i have read most of your's write ups...it will be a treat to read Swaron OS everyday written by you

The first one ws really awsome 👏

and THANKS for cheering up all the upset fans of swaron by your beautiful OS 😊👏


Thanks a lot. 😃 And welcome to the forum. 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
#76

Ha! I replied to all the comments this time! *pats self on the back* 😎

This next OS is, well, a bit childish. 🤔


With Great Power Comes Great Responsibility

"Aaahh! Sharon! Leave me!" yelled the eleven year old Swayam.

"No!" replied the ten year old Sharon, stubbornly.

"Please Sharon! Think about my precious hair!" yelped Swayam, his face contorted in pain.

Sharon came to a halt and contemplated for a second. Finally she gave a small sigh and let go off his hair with which she had been pulling him around.

"Fine!" she said, folding her arms, haughtily. "But it's only because I like your hair!"

"What did I do?" he asked, massaging his scalp and patting his hair consolingly.

"Who asked you to hit Rahul?" she demanded.

"He pulled on your ponytail!" replied Swayam, suddenly looking fierce.

"So?" asked Sharon.

"Only I have the right to pull your ponytail!" said Swayam, determinedly.

That was enough to pacify her.

"Fine. Let's go!" she said, grabbing his hand.

"Where are we going?" he asked.

"To the Swing, of course!" she said.

They snuck out of the house, full of guests, went out to Swayam's backyard, jumped over the fence and landed in Sharon's backyard. There, hanging on a sturdy banyan tree, was a big, merry little swing. It swung drunkenly as the wind gave it a gentle nudge or two. They ran towards it with bubbling excitement. This had been their haunt for the past two years when Sharon had demanded her Father to put up a Swing in the backyard.

Sharon plopped herself on the Swing and lifted her chin haughtily.

"Let's play a game. I'll be the Princess and you'll be my slave!" she said, cheerily.

Swayam sighed. They always played this game.

"Well what are you waiting for? Get down on your knees!" she commanded.

Shaking his head in commiseration, he bent down on one knee and said in a dull, bored voice-

"What can I do for you, my Princess?"

"Make me a tiara!" she said, happily.

He got up gruffly and fifteen minutes later he managed to procure a wreath made of flowers and twigs, entwined haphazardly.

He placed it on her head as she looked approvingly at him.

"Why do you always get to be the Princess? Even I want to be a Prince and give orders!" moaned Swayam.

Sharon frowned for a minute and gave a tired sigh.

"Fine, you can be the Prince for some time." She said, reluctantly.

Swayam, happy at the prospect of giving orders, excitedly sat on the Swing while Sharon knelt down on the grass and looked grumpily at him.

"Hmm...now what do I want you to do?" he said, scratching his chin.

Swayam tried to think of something that he could order her to do. Meanwhile, Sharon sat there seething with impatience.

"Well?" spat Sharon, annoyed.

"I can't think of anything that I want you to do!" he said, frowning.

"Well what did you think? Giving orders is an easy job? Only clever people like me can do it. It's not for people like you!" she said, scornfully.

"So you think I'm stupid?" asked Swayam.

"Yes!" said Sharon, unhesitatingly.

"I'm not stupid!" yelled back Swayam, yanking hard on her ponytail.

"Yes you are!" said Sharon, now angry.

The next instant, she pushed Swayam from the swing, making him fall on the ground and sat on the Swing herself.

"Now I'm Princess again!" she said, smugly.

"But I didn't even get to give you any order!" wailed Swayam.

"It's your fault that you wasted your time talking to me!" said Sharon, aloof. "Now I want a horseride! And you are going to be my horse!"

She made him bend down on his knees and place his palms flat on the ground, squatting down on all fours. Then unceremoniously she sat on his back and clutched his collar, making them her reins.

"C'mon! Giddy up, horsie!" she said, laughing.

Swayam managed to crawl for a step or two before falling down flat on his stomach.

Still sitting on him, Sharon said-

"You're the laziest horse ever!"

"And you're a big, fat bully!" retorted Swayam, frustrated and angry. "And when you grow up, you won't find anyone to marry you!"

"I don't need anyone. I have you." She said, showing her teeth and two cute little dimples.

"Me?" he scoffed. "The first chance I get I'm going to run away from you and leave you behind, all alone!"

He didn't get back any answer from her. Instead he felt the weight lift off from his back as she stood up and walked away.

He too stood up and saw that she was sitting next to a small, marble fountain that had been devoid of any water for the past many years.

She sat there with her elbows placed on her folded knees and her round face resting on the palms of her hand. She had a glum expression on her face and little drops of tears in her eyes.

Swayam suddenly felt extremely guilty.

A little while later, she saw his face appear before her.

She looked away, frowning.

"I'm sorry Sharon!" he said, pouting a little.

She looked at him, not convinced yet.

He offered her a bunch of purple bellflowers that he had gathered and had bundled together in a hasty bouquet.

Her frown lessened as she accepted those flowers. They were her favourite.

Finally he offered her a half-eaten chocolate from his pocket.

"I was saving it for later, but you can have it." he said, smiling.

She beamed at the sight of the chocolate, before snatching it from his hands and placing a swift kiss on his cheek.

"Yuck!" said Swayam, wiping the cheek on which she had kissed him. "Don't ever do that again!"

But she wasn't listening anymore. She was busy stuffing herself with chocolate.

Together they walked back to the Swing.

She sat on the Swing and he once again knelt on the ground.

"I will never leave you, Sharon." He said.

"Good." She said, smiling.

He smiled in return.

"Now what are you smiling about? I'm still your Princess!" she said, once again assuming her haughty mode.

"As you always will be." He said, smiling.

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Posted: 13 years ago
#77
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I would begin by saying that this OS was just freaking adorable. Kudos to you for exploring such an unexpected angle for your story and choosing such a cute plot for the OS.

As Sudha said it always has been a pleasure to your read work but this pleausre is something completely of different level when we read something written by you about entirely different age group. In LTD it was Kankshita's twist and here kiddo Swayam and Sharon. Their innocence, their possessiveness, their affection was awesomely presented before us. Moreover the theme of this OS was equally awesome. And the dialogue of Sharon was just so Sharon the diva like. ( Wo kehte hain poot
ke paon palnaye mein hi najar aa jate hain ). It was amusing as well as lovable.

Super awesome work again. Waiting for the next OS.

P.S - Waise can somebody tell me is their no defense against a girls tear ? 😆. I think I would have a better chance surviving from 'Avada Kedavra' then that.


Edited by marauder - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#78
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And good job on replying to everyone - 🤗

I thought i will just take a sneak and save the rest for later..but in no time found myself engrossed in it. Such a simple yet cute idea for a SwaRon OS and you have beautifully written it giving ample justice to how the kids of the age will react.
I have told you this before when you wrote Kanks ka character in LTD that i marvel how you write about a character that is not your age..just like then i just loved reading about the cute lil SwaRon in your OS.
The description about the swing was superb. the ending with she being his princess for ever SwaRon like.
Loved it
Edited by Sudha-SK - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#79

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I thought I would read it later but your description in the beginning made me read...Childish

So it was since 11 that he was obsessed with his hair and Sharon as well😆

Trust me reading Swaron with any proper story-line is like the need of the hour, so even if they are toddlers I wont mind reading about them too discussing whether they changed their diapers or not 😳

That's me the desperate Swaron fan🤔

Back to the update...Sharon wants to be the princess and Swayam the slave and they play on regular basis. Poor Swayam

And then he is the horse😆

I tell you he found that kiss on his cheeks yuck...but after 10 years he will literally crave for it!!

Edited by Rutu - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#80
First things first - So sorry for the late comment ! Din't get time with college and all..
Anyway, amazing ! Two supercute OSs !
Couldn't get an y better.
"I'll never leave you"
"Why are you smiling ? I'mm still your princess !"
"As you'll always be"
I'm bowled over. Awesome OSs. Sweet 😳
Loved 'em to the core.
Best part - An OS a day.
Now, we have something to look forward to everyday !
Edited by Monu_Deewani - 13 years ago

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