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Posted: 12 years ago
Part 5
They came back home safely,and muskaan was so happy so she told Arnav:"uncle,please aayein andar"
Aryan was really irritated at Muskaan's behavior,he just run into home
.
Arnav said:"no,its enough that mein tum dono ko lekar aaya,mujhe aur bhi kaam hein"

Saying that he left,
On the other side,khushi after handling the unwanted trouble,came home lately.
Nani already made dinner items but none of them finish their dinner,they impatiently wait for their mother.
So it is Aryan who first hug her and questioned for whatever she could not do anything for him,
She quitely said:"Golu,mera beta,you know your amma na?How can i neglect my child,some serious problem occured,thats why amma had to do sooo many work"
Looking at Muskaan she said:"what happened to you sona?my little princess's face is not glowing...why?"
Muskaan:"do you know today golu..."
Today's total story she had to tell her amma,so she without taking breath properly narrated it everything,how golu misbehaves that uncle and all...
Listening whole story she told golu:"tumne thik nehi kya,you sholud say sorry to him,dekho he saves your life,if you will meet him again,say SORRY and THANK YOU bhi bolna"
Aryan:"but ammaaa"
Khushi:"no beta,i will take both of you ice cream parlor tomorrow okay?"
Aryan looking at khushi stretched his arms:"promise?"
Khushi smiling at him:"promise"
then they finished their dinner peacefully.
On the other side Arnav could not find any info regarding khushi,he became impatient and restless...

Next day while returning home from school they went to ice cream parlor and muskaan was first to order what flavor they want and all,khushi told that she will not take any ice cream as she had cough.
So purchasing ice cream and handling that over them she just goes to nearby shop for recharging her cell.
In the meantime,Arnav was passing road in that location,suddenly he feels weird something related khushi he is feeling,so he immediately stops car.Looking outside he sees aryan and muskaan in ice cream parlor,
Thinking"ohh no,not again that children"
Muskaan seeing arnav screams"uncleee!!! How are you?😊"
and rushed towards arnav and goly seeing his sister's emotion feels angry but he has to go there for saying SORRY as her amma ordered him😲😲😲...
Arnav:"fine,why are you eating this in this time,its really poisonous for your health,it cannn"
Before he explains properly aryan stops him saying:"thats none of your business..
and sosoososory anddd thank youuu"
Arnav:"what??sooo mr.Aryan Gupta right? what happens to you?what did you say?i cnt get it"
Muskaan:"ohh unclee i am explaining what"
Aryan:"see Mr.bad uncle whatever you are i apolozise you because of my mother only."
Arnav:"your amma so irresponsible,cnt take care of her children,what lesson she taught to you,ha?"
Aryan angrily looked at him said muskaan:"amma,will wait for us,please go I dnt want to talk with that type low class mentality persons😡😡..."
What? Arnav screams but aryan took muskaan hand and ran away from that place.
Arnav being irritated left that place"
Khushi overheads all of the conversations between arnav and her children and gets shell shocked...



That's it,How's this?
Pleeease reply.Do comment.if you have time to read my post,you must have time to comment😊😊😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
Yay!! I'm the first one to comment!!!!!!!


The way you express Aryan and Muskaan is perfect!!

Aryan is a mini Arnav... Though talking cold to Arnav... He seems to be protective about his sis and gets angry when Arnav talks ill about Khushi...
Loved the part: "see Mr.Bad uncle" " low class mentality people"

Arnav is having a taste of his own medicine... ...Serves him right!





And Muskaan a mini Khushi... a bundle of joy... esp when she invited Arnav home with kindness... and said " uncleee"... She is a cutie!! just like our dear Khushi...



I want you to mention the pull he feels towards those children too... I know he has a pull towards Khushi... But as a father, I want him to realize that he has an in-explainable pull towards the kids... ( just a suggestion)




Gasp!!! Khushi overheard the conversation?? Did she see Arnav?? Will there be another hide and seek??? I can't wait for them to meet...


Waiting eagerly for the next update...







Edited by -Sunset- - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
plz write long OS...u r killing me wid dis suspense...
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Posted: 12 years ago
res

it was great...update soon
Edited by tanvia - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
so khushi saw arnav and her children together...i loved aryan...he is totally a competition for the arnav singh raizada :D
loved the update...btw last night i had this dream that you updated part five nad i am happily reading it...so earlier when i saw ur update 5 i thot last night u updated it so why PMing again...then i realized it ws my dream... :D
thanks for pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
Loved it. Arnav must be getting shell shocked listening to his words to Khushi thrown to him by Aryan
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: jahnvi.luvs.ASR

so khushi saw arnav and her children together...i loved aryan...he is totally a competition for the arnav singh raizada :D
loved the update...btw last night i had this dream that you updated part five nad i am happily reading it...so earlier when i saw ur update 5 i thot last night u updated it so why PMing again...then i realized it ws my dream... :D
thanks for pm


Your post gives me lots of energy yaar...you dreamt about it,how sweet,whenever i will get time i will write definitely...

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: cool-babe

plz write long OS...u r killing me wid dis suspense...


arre aur kitna looong likhu???
just kidding...😉
i try my best to stretch it...i will try also...
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: arpita20


Your post gives me lots of energy yaar...you dreamt about it,how sweet,whenever i will get time i will write definitely...




i seriously dreamt about the update...i dont know wht happened that i had that dream bt believe me...i ws reading prt 5...and the first thing i did ws chk my phne for update :)
some stories just leave you awestruck :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
great part
how will khushi react now to this
continue soon

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