ll Romeo and Juliet ll A Virman Abhiya SS - Page 2

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Posted: 13 years ago
#11
Interesting...after abhiya nwadays i m goin ga ga over virmaan.. & i luv manvi's pic :D abhiya & virmaan rocksss
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Posted: 13 years ago
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abhiya & virmaan are the most awesome & rocking couples.. would love to read their ss.. prologue is interesting. . pl. pm whenever you update
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hi Guys!!! Finally updating this part . Thank You so much for your previous comments really appreciated them .

Part 1

* 10 : 30 at the night *

Manvi had just winded up her studies when her phone rang . She kept her books aside and picked up the phone .

Manvi : Hello ?

" Hello Sugar "came in the reply from a the other side of the line . A husky voice which just made Manvi smile more .

Manvi : Virat , tum . Itni raat ko kyun call kar rahe ho ?

Virat : Raat ? Sugar raat kahan pe hui hain ? Abhi toh sirf dus baje hain .

Manvi : Virat maine tumhe kitni baar kahan hain mujhe Sugar mat bulaya karo .

Virat : Kyun ? It suits you so much . Your just as sweet as sugar . Jaise sugar har mithai ki necessity hoti hain waise hii tum humare group kii necessity ho . Waise tum kal aa rahi ho na ? Party mein .

Manvi ( making a small sulk ) : Haan par ek problem hain .

Virat : Problem ? Kaisi problem mujhe batao .

Manvi : Kapde . Mere pass kapde nahin nahin hain pehene ke liye . Um tumhari party mein saari ladkiyaan western kapde pehen kar aaygi . Mere pass toh koi western dress nahin hain .

Virat : Itni sii baat . Don't worry . When Virat is Here not to Fear . Kal subha dus baje tumhe tumhare problems ka solution mil jaayega . Ok now bye . Sleep well , sweet dreams , good night !!! ( Cuts The Phone )

Manvi : Par Virat ( hears a beep from the phone ) Virat …

Manvi keeping her phone : God ! Ab Virat kya karne wala hain ?

* In Virat's room *

A extremely handsome hunk stood between nowhere . If asked where he was now he would say he was in his room but was it actually a room ? It was more of a mess store . If he went to open his cupboard , tons of clothing would just fall off . Half washed Half not . Half he knew he had and the rest he would wonder " where did that come from ? " But at now he had a more important thing to wonder about . A dress . A dress for a person special to him , Manvi .

That was Virat Raichand . Carelessly Careful .

Virat ( making his hand go through his hair ) : Yaar Manvi ko bolt oh diya hain kii dress mil jaayegi , par dress milegi kaise . God !!!

* Thinks for sometime *

Virat : Abhay ! He can help me .

And then he runs to Abhay's Room .

* In Abhay's Room *

He stood there with his phone in his hand . His hot blue eyes viewing the messages . He was going to place a call when his room door banged open and in came Virat .

Abhay ( shocked by the sudden come ) : Virat , yeh kaunsa tareekha hain andar ghusne ka ? You could knock .

Virat looked at Abhay . It wasn't that Abhay was a total opposite of Virat . They both had many things in common . They both loved cars , coffee , chocolates and many more things . It was just that Abhay had been more affected by the actions of his father than Virat .

It was Abhay who had consoled his mom and stayed strong and because of this Virat respected him more.

The only thing different in both of them was their attitude . Abhay was a responsible and careful person. He thought of the feelings of the front person before he spoke . He was charming and it was all these qualities of his which had won Piya's heart .

On the other hand Virat was carefree , a bit careless but not irresponsible . He knew his duties and even performed them well .

Virat : Abhay woh ek problem aa gayi hain .

Abhay : Kaisi problem ?

Virat : Kal ghar mein party hain right ?

Abhay : Haan , so ?

Virat : Um woh dress , mujhe dress leni hain Manvi ke liye .

Abhay : Huh???

Virat explained him the whole thing and at the end Abhay's face held a smile .

Virat : So I wanna go to a mall to buy a dress , tum aa rahe ho ? I mean mujhe nahin pata ladkiyon ko kya pasand hain aur kya nahin . Tumhe atleast expertise hain , so please help me .

Abhay : Ok Virat , main aata hoon . Even Piya could use a new dress , I'll buy one for her too .

Virat : Cool then . Main gaadi nikal ta hoon , you come .

Abhay : Cool .

* After 15 minutes *

Virat and Abhay were standing in the middle of the biggest mall in Dehradhun, not knowing where to go after that .

Virat : Yaar Abhay yeh ladkiya shopping kar kaise leti hain ? Itne saare shops hain , kahan jaaye aur kahan na jaaye I don't get it .

Abhay ( pointing to one store ) : Virat , that store looks big , let's go there .

Virat : Fine-O

And then both the brothers headed towards the most expensive store of the mall . Not that the price mattered to them . All they wanted were two stunning dresses for two beautifuls .

* In The Store*

Virat and Abhay walked in and a young looking salesgirl came to help them .

Salesgirl : Welcome Sir , how may I help you ?

Abhay : Um , hume dresses dekhne hain.

Salesgirl : Sir can you please tell me more about your search . Like aapko kaise dresses dekhne hain ? Homecoming gowns , Evening Gowns or beach Gowns ?

Virat and Abhay looked at each other clueless . Dresses existed in so many species ?

Virat : Can you show us something which is just up to the knee level ? Like something not above knee and something not below the knee.

Salesgirl smiling : Sure Sir . Aap mere saath aayie main aapko humare collection kii best dresses dikhati hoon.

Abhay ( comes to Virat after the sales girl goes) : Challo mere Bhai . Let's go and see the dresses .

Virat : Yaar Abhay tumhe tension nahi ho rahi ? Like choosing two dresses for Manvi and Piya ?

Abhay : What's the prob in that ? Do dresses hii toh choose karni hain aur waise bhi Piya aur Manvi pe sab dresses suit karti hain . Come let's go .

But then not soon than 3min Abhay was forced to take his words back as he realized that choosing two dresses out 7 different types of them was not a easy job .

Virat and Abhay were just scanning the dresses with their eyes when Abhay picked a beautiful purple dress .

Abhay : Um show us more of this kind .

Salesgirl smiling : Sure sir .

And then after 5 more minutes Abhay and Virat were pouring down on another 25 dresses in various beautiful colours all of them which would have suited Manvi and Piya . They both would have looked drop dead gorgeous in any of them , but still the bros wanted the best for them . And just the wanting of the two best dresses made them only stare at the dresses . What were they supposed to do now ?

Virat (shuffling his hairs in confusion) : Bro what are we supposed to do now ?

* Main while in Piya and Manvi's room *

Manvi was sitting on her bed with her Chemistry book on her lap . She was supposed to be reading it but her mind had diverted to some other thoughts .

Piya comes out of the washroom and sees Manvi lost in thoughts . She goes and waves her hand in front of Manvi's eyes bringing her back to Earth .

Piya : Dreamer kya hua ? Kis baare mein socch rahi ho ?

Manvi : Huh kucch nahin , bas socch rahi thi kii mai kitni lucky hoon .

Piya ( Confused) : Huh ?

Manvi : I mean I'm just so lucky to have you , Mish , Tracker all of you . Kabhi soccha nahin tha kii life mei itne saare true friends milege . Purane college mein mere saath jo kucch bhi hua uske baad hasna kya hota hain main woh bhi bhool gayi . But you guys taught me to laugh and smile again .

Piya : Manvi kitni baar kahan hain unn baaton ko bhool jao . Tum hii kehti ho na kii yeh tumahri nayi life hain toh nayi life why are you allowing old memories to come ? Forget them , forget him . Pata hain abhi aisa lagta hain kii tumahre face par na ' No Entry for old memories ' ka board lagana chahiye .

Manvi : You know you can't do that .

Piya : I can , I'll show you wait .

And then she went forward to bring a white round paper and placed it on Manvi's face . Manvi got really cracked at that and so she playfully threw a pillow at her and in return she got a playful hit from Piya's pillow . And then and there started their pillow fight .

Manvi knew one thing for sure . She knew that this was her life . Where she knew what smiling and living is .

Phew ! Finally finished it . Gosh I'm so relived now . I know I kept you all waiting long but what to do ? Study on the head .

I know many of you will comment " Want more Virman/Abhiya as I gave none in this but I promise from the next part onwards you all will get tons of it .

But the next has a wait , actually this might be my last update . Don't get confused I'm not suffering cancer or anything deadly . It's just that exams are on the way and I need to put my seatbelts and get ready for it . But as soon as they get over my writing starts .

Ok know enough of talking , just hope you liked this part and plz plz comment .

Love You!

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Posted: 12 years ago
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nyc CS..do continue & PM me
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Posted: 12 years ago
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wow lovely update
poor abhay and virat o god do dress nai pasand kar paa rahe and pia and manvi pillow fight... bygod... wase wats manvi's past...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#16
hey buddy lovely concept and cs
wow abhiya already dating
virat and manvi so sweet na yar
really toughest job for abhay and virat to choose dress fro a girls lolzzz
will wait for update
plzzz pm me
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Posted: 12 years ago
#17
very nice update abhiya n virman r so cute n sweet n continue sooon..
Thanks 4 pm.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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lovely...do pm me the next time😳

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