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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: mushiroxx

oh wow...riya is so damn bold...im loving it...😃👍🏼

thanks dear thsi jsut the start she will get bolder hehe 😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
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(Putting a finger on her lips)

"Shhh Riya what did you say? Die in love? Are out of you mind? I will not let anything happen to you." says Arjun

"I know you won't Arjun" I tell him ( I look deeply in his meaningful eyes'our eyes lock)

Shree starts coughing

*Cough cough*

"Arjun, so that means you will be staying here with us, right?" asks Shree

"Yes Shree, I have to Rathod's orders and if I'm here then he won't have a doubt about Riya and me," says Arjun

"Arjun you can stay in the room next to Riya's" says Shree

"Great, Shree! Arjun, we spend even more time with each other 'right, baby?" winks Riya.

"Riya please this is a serious matter and you-", says Arjun

"Acha baba. Uff! Sorry..." says Riya, holding my ears.

He begins to smile and hugs her.

"Tum bhi na Riya," says Arjun

**********?*********

later that night

Arjun's POV

I was lying in the room on the bed, thinking about what happened today. I was unable to fall asleep. The events of the night keep playing over and over again in my head.

"Riya, how could she go do such a foolish thing like this'? And why I mean suddenly? Kyun?" I think.

I close my eyes for a bit trying to relax, when I hear a knock.

I go and open the door

"Riya, tum? So late at night... what's wrong?"

She suddenly hugs me.

"Arjun, I'm really scared ...I have a bad feeling ...like something terrible will happen," she says.

"Please, can I sleep with you? 'I won't be able to sleep alone..." she asks.

"Riya '. Are you mad... Yeh ' ", but before I can finish...

"Ranveer please...I'm not here to have fun 'your acting as if I'm going rape you'

God! I just want to sleep... that's all... in your arms...you and your one track mind!" says Riya.

"Ok... Ok... I'm sorry... just a little on edge, I guess... I understand... yes, you can." I say.

I sit on the bed. She comes and puts her head on my lap and lies down.

I bend down and just hug her, reassuring her that I'm here for her.

Riya's POV

There is just a silnece between us, yet so much was being said.

I felt safe and secure in his arms.

Even if there were 1000 MP's, I knew Arjun would always protect m.

But why was I having a gut feeling that because of what happened today, tomorrow would be hell?

I close my eyes. And pray to god to protects us.

********?*******

At Rathod mansion, Rathod is in his room, on his sofa drinking and thinking.

Rathod's POV

"Riya... Riya... Why? Why? Why did you do this, huh? Kyun? I love you so much that I can't even hurt you, that I cant stay angery at , that I can over see and forgive such big mistake 'You are very luck. But your lover... Who ever he is 'He is the most unlucky man on this earth. By being with you he might feel as he is in heaven 'I'm gonna make his life a living hell. How dare he touch my Riya, MYWIFE , My jaan, who belongs to me, Sameer Rathod's Wife I will Ruin him." he thought.

"As for you Riya... the love of my life 'I won't let you go so easily 'I want this to work... for us... I will get you back'"

*******?*******

The next day, early morning, at Shree's.

Shree knocks on Arjun's door.

"Guys jiju is here... I just saw his car! Riya go to your room...Quickly!" says Shree.

"Wait, Shree I have a idea. Shree, go answer the door." says Arjun.

Arjun opens the bedroom door and starts yelling, "Oh! Come on! Riya, you are not allowed to leave this house without me, understood? I will come with you wherever you go. These are Rathod's orders."

"No I will not. You will not come. Anywhere. Get one thing clear Arjun who ever I am seeing doesn't concern you." Yells Riya.

"Well... It concerns me. And you better listen to Arjun." Says Rathod.

"What are you doing here? I don't want to talk or see you. Leave!" yells Riya.

"No. I will not leave." says Rathod

"What have you come here for? It's all over." says Riya

"No. It's not all over, Riya 'it's not." says Rathod

"Riya I came to meet you. So that we can work things out." says Rathod

"No sameer, it won't help us. There is no use." says Riya

"Rya I know distance came in to our relationship, after Sameera and the miscarriage . But only that can help our relationship." says Rathod

" Kya? What are you saying?" asks Riya

"Let's have a baby, Riya" says Rathod

"What?? A baby? With you? No!! With you, never Not again !" yells Riya

"But why, Riya? Kyun dehko Riya a baby brings two people closer this can help our marriage ?" says Rathod

"Did you not hear me?? Never! Not again! Not with man who kills their own child!" Riya screams

"%$#@& ! I didn't mean to ' What happened to Sameera..." says Rathod

"And what do you mean? Not with me, huh? You want a baby with your lover?
That
son of a ' "

But before he could finish, Riya slapped him hard.

"Don't you dare say another word about him. I'm warning you Sameer." says Riya.

(holding his hand on his face eyes showing the anger )

"You didn't answer me Riya ' Huh? Why? Don't you want to have a baby with me YOUR HUSBAND? Why don't you want to work this out, huh? And have you slept with him? Answer me, damn it!!" yells Rathod

"bhai please calm down...Leave it, na? It will only make you get more hurt." says chotu

"No chotu I need answers."

"I told you already why I don't want to you to be the father of my child ... As for why I don't want work this out... Hear it loud and clear, Sameer...I'm not happy with you 'I don't love you...I love him. And as for if I slept with him'What's the definition of an affair, Sameer? If you don't know...Look it up in the dictionary!" says Riya

Rathod takes a vase and throws it on the floor. "Is he better in bed? Is that it? When you both are intimate, does he please you like I did?"

Yaar shree bahi is shock se itne pagal hoge hai jusy what is saying whispers Chotu

He pulls Riya close to him and kisses her neck.

Haan chotu tthis very akward whispers shree both chotu and shree close their eyes

Arjun has the how dare you look in his eye *

"Sameer stop it now...One slap didn't make you understand...here is another one."

She turns around and slaps him twice.

"You are sick... just sick'your touch is disgusting... just like you sameer!" yells Riya

"And for your kind information, Sameer I will not discuss my bedroom secrets with you... in front of everyone here. That's only for me and my lover to know..." says Riya

I have every right to know what goes on behind closes door in the bedroom if it concerns my wife understood yells Rathod

"And you and your gutter mind Sameer! Why do all men think one way? Sleeping doesn't always mean it in a bad way. I'm not denying the fact that I did have physical relation and as intimate with him. But the true meaning of sleeping with someone.. You won't ever know..." says Riya

"Oh really? Call me one track or gutter mind...I don't care...I know what it means when you sleep with someoneif you have forgotten let me remind you that we slept with each I kmow what it means !" yells Rathod

"No you don't, sameer 'the true meaning is..."

As Riya is explaining, she has a smile and a sparkle in her eyes as she thinks of Arjun , in front of Sameer.

"The true meaning of sleeping together...Nothing dirty... Nothing naughty... Just Sleeping...
It's just sleeping with that someone and knowing that they're in your arms and you're in theirs...They want to feel close to you...They want to know they are the closest to your heart... They want to hear you breathe as you fall asleep next to them'As you fall asleep, you want cuddle with that special someone... and just hold them close in your arms forever... in that moment you never want let go 'a moment that means the most 'cause in that moment you have your whole world in your arms...It's that moment where you don't want to let go and that moment where you don't want them to forget that this a special moment between the both of us ..."

"That's what it means." Says riya

Wow that was beautiful whispers chotu

"Nooo... Damn it! Nooo... How dare you think of him in front of me?" yells Rathod

Rathod grabs her and squeeze her. Suddenly she faints.

" Arjun !! Call the doctor!! Now!!" says rathod he takes he in the room

************?**********

Inside the room

"Doctor... Riya will be ok, right?" asks Sheer

"Don't worry... Congratulations! She is pregnant!" says the Doctor

"What? Ummm... thanks I'll show you out." saysShree

Shree and Doctor come out of the room.

"What happened? Doctor is Riya ok kya hua meri biwi kaise hai !" says Rathod

Mr. Rathod there is nothing to worry about 'aap papa bane wale hai congratulations just make sure there is no stress she will be fine says the doctor

Doctor leaves

Rathod is shocked, lost for words for a moment, and has tears in his eyes.

Arjun is smiling but suddenly changes his expressions

Bhai congrats says chotu

Chotu please yeh bacha mera nahi hai im not the father of this baby says a choked Rathod

They all go in the room to see Riya that is asleep.

"I will be not upset at Riya or the innocent baby but... Arjun find the father of this baby. I want to deal with him personally" says rathod he kisses riya's forehead and walks out of the house.

That's it for now do comment

Precap ch 3

The next day Riya gets a text message, at lunch.

She is smiling and blushes... "Excuse me! I'll just come." says Riya

"Rathod I think it that it was that guys text message. Go. Check it out." says Arjun

In Riya's room, she goes in the bathroom, and leaves her cell on the bed.

The messages says:

Rathod is pissed. He throws the cell on the bed.

"Whoever you are... You messed with ETF Officer Rathod ... You're finished." saysRathod .

Edited by Fiza28 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#23
OMG I m really scared for arjun and riya... u have exchanged the personas of arjun and rathore a bit... i hope rathore tries to understand riya and divorce her happily...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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hmmm...actually yar i think arjun-riya in their real avatars can't do such things as hiding their affair ...etc. coz they r more sort of IN UR FACE type of people...😆
anyways nice part n this bold riya is surprising me...😳😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
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rofl
rathre ki aankho ke niche affair chal raha tha and arjun papa banne wala he
i was rolling again again
hahahaha tht superb yaar update next asap
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Di I am not happy with Rathore, Riya and Arjun.
Di theeno hi galath hain na.
I mean Riya did love Rathore right and Sameera wasn't Rathore's fault it was an accident!
She is punishing him for nothing
As for Rathore, uski ab ki soch galath hain, he is an officer to uphold law not misuse it.
Arjun ki galthi yeh thi ki he had physical relation with Riya while she was still married, they should've waited for a divorce.
I hope none of them suffers too much in the storm to come.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#27
Sorry but i cant enjoy reading this ff.. Its a betrayal.. They r having extra marital affair.. Even rathore misusing the law.. Shree & chotu supporting them.. Noone is good or following law/moral values being in higher position.. I know u've every right to write as per your wish.. But please dont add immoral things or concept.. I like your other stories but i cant just tolerate such immoral concept.. I'm sorry
Edited by puvini - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Important Note:

hey guys firstly i want just clear a few things abouth this ff but before i do i want say sorry to anyone i have offend by this ff i honestly didnt mean to do that ...
i as a writer know my limts and do my best not cross it. my morals and values mean alot to me i try not go against them when i write. taht being said i also feel taht in this day and age in the 21st century these things do happen im saying that they are right my any means betral is betral thats it and its is down right unexpectable but for teh storyline it was needed
things that needed to be cleared
1) Rathod in no way is going to misuse his postion at all he was never gonna do that just going cronfront the man who was having a affair with his wife in his anger he must seem that he would do that but he never has or will . he is a husband he is hurt beyond measures and in his hurt and anger he says things that he really would never do his duty is his pride and everything ...he lost his beti in his duty but never once thought damn my job ...
2) arjun is wrong in having a affair with a married woman thats no doubt but there is a back story that will be revealed
i know that doest justify what he did but maybe you will understand why he did it (thing of the saying everything is fair in love and war you all can guesse which one it is )
3) riya has gonna through so much that she is emotionally drained and cant get passed what happend with her daughher and when she was alone and helpless she saw the love n care she needed at that time she got form arjun and not her husband (riya is worng to do what she did but sheis not allat fault rathod should have been tere but he was busy with his duty
4) shreen as of now he is with arjun n riya but this because he wants find out more about arjun him and chotu have found out a few things and they feel arjun is at fault for what happend to sameera there for shree n chotu r on rathod side
5) there will be flashbacks and things will be revealed for why everyone is acting n doing what they are
again hope you all are not upset at me n sorry if i offended any oneIf u all dont like the concept and how the story is going then do let me know wether you want me to continue or not i have no problem in leaving this ff mid way if you all have a problem with it i resoect each and everyones POV and resoect it so i wont be upset or hurt we all hace r views and have aright to share them
so please drop line to just let me know if i should or shouldnt contiune
thanks fiza
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Posted: 12 years ago
#29
its just a story, besides everyone can think the way they want...
Continue with your story
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Di, aap story continue karne se koi problem nahin haim mujhe.
But Di don't make somebody's past a justification for their present.
Aaj ke zamaane mein yeh hotha zaroor hain, but that doesn't make it right na?
All three should realize that they are wrong.

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