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Hey guys !!! I'm a silent user but I have decided to break my silence with an OS today, it's one of my first so go easy on me . Id love any kind of feedback or constructive criticism so please please leave your thoughts š
The house was decorated With glittering lights and shiny Baubles , but it had never looked so bare to him.The band played the finest music making the crowd squeal and laugh with glee but all he heard was the sound of a chair rocking resounding through his entire being. He watched silently as his mother took the necessary vows which would not only bind her to that horrid man but destroy any relationship that they shared.
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The house was decorated With glittering lights and shiny Baubles , but it had never looked so bare to him.The band played the finest music making the crowd squeal and laugh with glee but all he heard was the sound of a chair rocking resounding through his entire being. He watched silently as his mother took the necessary vows which would not only bind her to that horrid man but destroy any relationship that they shared.
He watched and he watched till he could watch no more, then made his way to his fathers room, the only place in the house which still felt like home, and there sitting in the now bare room was his fathers chair . He rocked back and forth on the chair in a very familiar pattern ,lost in memories of the the past and possibilities of the future till he fell asleep . He awoke an hour later to a sound. It wasn't a loud sound but it was who it came from. "Dad" He woke up with a start , rubbing his eyes countless times for confirmation,and there standing in front of him was his father just as he remembered him clad in white .
"Hey there champ , how you holding up " said the man , with a look of concern in his eyes and a warm yet reassuring smile on his face.The boy was stumped . So many questions to ask yet he could not choke out any of them." take your time son , I have no where to be " he said with a mischievous twinkle In his eyes." in the mean time you can tell me why you are not down there enjoying the celebration "his father asked rhetorically, " dosnt your mother look gorgeous, just like the first time I laid my eyes on her " he continued with a look which spoke volumes about the love and adoration he felt for her .
"She is no mother of mine " Rishabh uttered for the first time that night ,the disdain In his voice was apparent and it sent shudders down his fathers back.
" you have to forgive her son " . He whispered out in an almost pleading voice.
"forgive her " Rishabh spat with a sarcastic smirk on his face ,"shell be lucky if I ever speak to her again, she betrayed you and anyone who betrays you does so with the knowledge that they betray me "he said with a finality in his voice. "She did not have a choice " the man said desperate to get through to his son.
"we always have a choice ,it's just that we are to weak to make them , she's made her bed now it's time for her to sleep in it " the boys voice hardened .
"let go rishabh,before this hatred consumes you" the man tried once again.
"It's to late for that , this man will pay for what he did to you ... To us "his eyes watered with visions of the past, each tear strengthening his resolve.
"then I'm afraid you venture down this path alone my son "and with that the man disappeared into the shadows from where he once appeared from .
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