DIL, DOSTI.. HUM!!#2 ch 43: pg 141/thread #3 added - Page 11

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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome
maan saying srk's dialogue
nd cooking geet's fav aloo paratha
omg more fun is ahead
waiting plz update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
part 27
nice lovely part...
cont soon dear...
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Posted: 12 years ago
its awesome Nats
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Posted: 12 years ago
ufff...m really addicted 2 ur writings..šŸ‘.yaar jldi jldi update krdo na.😳. can't w8 till saturday😭😭😭
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Posted: 12 years ago


the book of mystery called man singh khurana!
offcourse! you bet! thers a lot more left
and am waiting for the rest!

both watching and mouthing the dialogues together, maan cooking for geet and getting all drenched in flour, so mr perfect doesn't get it bang on this time but loved the gesture, he is bringing to fore the real geet,her preferences had somehow gotten lost in order to match up with her DD
overall a fantastic update
waiting for more
hungry
craving and drooling for more
amazing

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Posted: 12 years ago
it was awesome dear😊
so maan has proved he is not a borešŸ˜†
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Posted: 12 years ago
Grt update yar ... haaaye maneeet i luv them so mmuch cont soon ...
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Posted: 12 years ago
its sooo beautiful


loved their DATE...or say holidaying
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Posted: 12 years ago


Chapter 28

Geet

"hey why don't u check out d room at d top left..? u may find smthng der?"

"n wht is der?"

"u ll hv 2 c whts in store for u?!" he added smirking!!

"dusht danav.." I mumbled..

but

Don't know why I felt a shiver down my spine on hearing his words..

What more was left in store for me.. I wondered..

'twas a near perfect day!!

But der was smthng abt it, tht was teasing my senses..

N

If my intuition was nythng to go by, I had a feeling tht whtever it was, it was abt to bring a change in my life..!!

How, whr, wht, why??

I knew none of it..

But d feeling was way 2 strong to ignore..

Babaji.. plz let b a positive thng!!

I walked into d room..

I hadn't noticed it tht well b4, bt nw as I noticed it.. I fell in love wid it more than ny odr part of dis house..

It was d master bedroom!!


Done elegantly, and as equipped as d odr rooms.. bt it spoke volumes of elegance n comfort..

N

I absolutely loved it!!

My first thot was to just get into d cozy bed n crash for d nyt..

Bt wht caught my eye was a bag on d bed..

Was sis wat maan was talkin abt?

I hurried opened it..

To find

A saree!!

A beautiful one..

N

Again I fell in love..

..Wid his choice!!

Oh.. it felt so special.. n pampered!!

This man knew hw to treat a woman!!

N I actually told him he'd b lousy, boring company to d female gender..

Wen his mere presence was enuf to accelerate hearts to way beyond normal limts!!

Did he hv experience in dese matters..

No babaji..

Thts impossible.. he doesn't spend a moment away fm work..!!

Bt still geet he is here making u feel special!!

But why?

My intuition of a major change made way into my heart n I was lost again!!

Der was a knock at d door..

"geet.. did u find it?"

"umm.. yeah just give me sm tym.."

Forget all dis.. its just his challenge n he never backs out of one n neither does he do anything without his best effort!!

I gave up on all dat n got ready..

It wasn't perfect bt had turned out well enuf n thanking maa for forcing me to learn to wear a saree..!! though I had never really bothered much den bt having observed her so often.. it had worked out fyn!!

As I walked to d dressing table, I noticed it equipped wid every possible make up accessories ever possible!!

Babaji.. hw cud dis man think of evrythng?

But den I needed nthng more thn my kajal n lip gloss..

Which I had forgotten to our early mrng outing..

But was glad to find dem der..!

Finally done, I headed out.. feeling different!!


On opening d door, der was a red envelope by d door..

Nw whts dis, I wondered bt hurriedly opened it!!

Waiting for u at d terrace..

Maan

Hey babaji.. dis maan was such a tease!!

Bt den y m I blaming him.. I was d one who challenged him!!

It was all dark as I ascended d stairs!!

Uff.. dusht danav!!

The terrace too seemed way 2 dark..

I walked in.. looking arnd wid my cell phone light trying to steady myself, dose high heels n d saree!!

Suddenly..

D whole area lit up..

It took me a sec to get used to d brightness..

Bt wen I was able to..

The scene blew me away!!

It was beautifully decorated..

Der at one side was a candle lit table for two wid a bottle of champagne!

Hey babaji.. dis man was out of dis world..

Who wud have thot he's d same dusht danav who is so stringent even wid words..!!

Bt whr was he?

I looked arnd.. searching for him!!

"geet!!"

I heard a voice behind me..!!

I turned only to b blown ovr again.. dis tym evn more..

If I had been mesmerized by d beauty of d place, I was now lost in d man who stood in front of me!!


Dreamy, dhak dhak, greek god..

Adjectives were floating in my head..

N

I was drooling ovr him!!

But I was struck by d depth of his eyes, which had attracted me ryt fm d start..

Dey had der own enchantment..

One I cudnt break!!

"umm.. shall we sit?"

"hmm.."

I finally snapped back into reality!!

Smhw I felt bad tht he dint compliment me!!

But since wen did I get into all dis? It had never mattered to me!!

Bt nw.. don't know.. I was getting more n more apprehensive..

He opened d champagne bottle wid a pop..

Which jerked me out of my self thot n I chided my hyperactive brain for attempting to ruin d magic of dis moment!!

As we sipped our drinks in silence.. music played in d bkground..

I had been avoiding to look at him, wary of d way my thots were playing..

But it was impossible to avoid him..

Wen I saw him on his knees by my side..

I was too shocked to react..

Bt den I noticed his outstretched hand..

He was just asking for a dance!!

By d time I managed to ctrl myself n place my hand in his which felt so warm..

D song had changed..

"Tujhe milke laga hai ye, tujhe dhundh raha tha main
Tujhme hai kuch aisi subah sa
Jiski khaatir main tha jaga sa
Aa tu mere khwab sajaa ja re
Mahi aaja re, mahi aaja re

Dil roye ya ilahi, tu aaja mere mahi
Dil roye ya ilahi, tu aaja mere mahi
Dil roye ya ilahi, tu aaja mere mahi
Mere mahi, mere mahi tu aaja mere mahi"

The dance, d slow moves which were making me feel smthng like never b4..

I dint know wht steps I was doin, wht pace I was moving.. I followed his moves unknowingly..

I was lost..

..in him"

N it wasn't until d song ended tht I realised d situation..

I turned to him.. wanting to say smthng wen he shook his head n silenced me..


"ders smthng I need to tell u.."



phew..

finally found tym to finish dis..

hope it meets ur expectations..

Edited by nats0101 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
wowww me first


superb update dear

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