Aankhon ki gustaakhiyaan pt5 pg66 17/12

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What if .. Arnav Singh Raizada was not a self-made business man?
What if .. Khushi Kumari Gupta was not a halwai's daughter?
What if .. they had never met at Sheesh Mahal?


What if .. is a series of OS's or SS's about Arnav and Khushi, but have nothing to do with the show! Each OS or SS is a different love story about Arnav and Khushi .. where they meet under different circumstances, through different people, at different times.. and yet, fall in love every time ...


Once in a while,
Right in the middle of an ordinary life,
Love gives us a fairy tale.
~ Anonymous ~

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The following part is different, because not even a word is spoken.. it's all the eyes.. hence the title!




Quite a few heads turned as Khushi Kumari Gupta stepped into the living room of the Raizada mansion. The room was decorated with flowers and fairy lights and was bustling with people. Akash Singh Raizada was getting married to Khushi's sister, Payal Gupta. Khushi smiled, well aware of people's stares; she knew she looked gorgeous in her green lehenga with dark red border. She walked towards the mandap where her sister and jeeju were chanting mantras, along with the priest. Her smile disappeared as she felt a light breeze. She stopped, her hair flying in the breeze. She turned around and her eyes wandered, as if searching for someone. She had felt someone watching her; unlike the others, these pair of eyes was different. Not creepy different, but loving different, making-her-knees-go-weak different.

Arnav Singh Raizada smirked, as he saw a group of girls whispering and giggling, looking at him. Looking smart in a grey suit, he knew the effect he had on girls. Girls fainted when they saw him. Well all except one! Suddenly he felt a breeze; he turned around and saw her, a vision in green and red, walk in. He felt his heart skip a beat. He smiled and suddenly looked away as he saw her turn around.

Khushi's eyes wandered and finally rested on a guy in a grey suit. Her heartbeat quickened and she gulped. Suddenly he turned around and she looked away, her eyes opened wide.

Arnav was looking at his mobile phone, when he felt her eyes on him. Was she looking at him? His heart skipped a beat. Yes, it was her. It was definitely her. He turned around and saw her look away. He watched her sit down on the mandap and he smirked. He put his mobile phone in his pocket and walked towards the mandap.

Khushi giggled as she whispered something in Payal's ear. Her hair flew in the breeze and she looked up; her eyes met his. He smirked; his arms folded across his chest, he was standing on the other side of the mandap. Her eyes shot wide open and she looked away, scared. She gulped. A few seconds later, she lifted her eyes slowly to look at him. Her heart started beating wildly as her eyes found his loving deep brown eyes. She gulped and looked away.

Arnav smirked. He loved the effect his eyes had on her. Only he knew the effect her naughty eyes had on him. Every time their eyes met, his heart skipped a beat. He wanted to jump up on the mandap and run over to her and pull her into his arms. He gulped and closed his eyes; control yourself, Arnav. You don't even know what she wants. He opened his eyes as he felt her eyes on him.

Khushi slowly looked up and saw him standing in front of her, with his eyes closed. She relaxed and a faint smile appeared on her face. Suddenly he opened his eyes and their eyes met again. Her smile disappeared; his naughty smirk reappeared. Khushi felt her chest heaving with her quick breath intakes. All she could hear was her heart pounding in her chest. All she could see was him, standing in front of her.

Arnav smirked as he saw her hyperventilate when their eyes met. Payal touched her arm, startling her, interrupting her thoughts. She looked at Payal, stunned. Payal looked at her confused. She shook her head. Arnav smiled and slowly walked away.

Khushi smiled as Payal asked her something. She wasn't listening to what Payal said. She was thinking about the deep brown eyes and the tingling sensation in her body when those eyes met hers. She nodded absentmindedly and lifted her eyes slowly. Her eyes opened wide as she realized he was nowhere to be seen. She looked around and saw him walking up the stairs. Her eyes reflected disappointment and annoyance. Suddenly her face lit up, her eyes had a naughty twinkle and a faint smile appeared on her face. Hari Prakash was walking up the stairs. Khushi ran to him, grabbed the tray of flowers from him and ran up the stairs; Hari Prakash looked after her confused.

Khushi walked to the poolside and looked around; she pouted, disappointed, as she realized that there was no one there. She was about to turn around, when suddenly a hand grabbed her wrist and pulled her. The tray of flowers fell from her hand and the flowers flew up in the air. She crashed into his chest; she looked into his eyes, unaware that her hands were on his chest, her body pressed against his. The flowers landed on them; they looked into each other's eyes.

Suddenly the tray fell into the pool. Khushi closed her eyes, as water droplets fell on her face. Arnav pushed her against the wall. Khushi instinctively opened her eyes, and blinked as she realized that his face was close to hers. She could feel his warm breath on her. His hands were on the wall on either side of her; she was trapped. She gulped as he moved closer. He placed his lips on her cheek and sucked a water droplet that had rolled down her cheek. She closed her eyes as she felt his lips on her; she grabbed her lehenga as she felt a familiar tingling sensation all over her body. He moved away and she opened her eyes. He moved closer again and placed his lips on her neck, sucking the drop of water that had managed to roll down her cheek onto her neck. Khushi closed her eyes and stiffened, as she felt his lips on her again. He moved away and she opened her eyes again. She looked into his eyes; he looked at her, as if waiting for her approval to continue. She gulped and looked at his lips. She leaned closer, threw her arms around his neck and pressed her lips against his. She slowly parted her lips and his tongue found hers.

A minute later, they pulled apart, panting. They looked at each other and smiled. Khushi's face turned a bright crimson and Arnav had a naughty smirk on his face. She pushed him away, lifted her lehenga and tried to run away. He grabbed her arm and she stopped and turned to look at him. Arnav took out something from his coat pocket; it was a gold bangle. He took her hand in his and slowly slid the bangle on her wrist. Khushi blushed again, as she slid her hand out of his hand, lifted her lehenga and ran into the room.

Akash and Payal were taking the seven pheres as Khushi threw flowers on them, smiling; her heart was still pounding in her chest and her cheeks were burning as she remembered the kiss. Suddenly her eyes opened wide, as she felt flowers falling on her. She looked to her right and saw Arnav standing next to her, throwing flowers on her. She stared at him and quickly shook her head, asking him to stop. She looked around; no one had noticed them. Everyone was looking at Akash and Payal. She lifted her hand and grabbed his wrist and pulled it down. Arnav chuckled. They looked into each other's eyes and smiled, their hands intertwined in between them.

A few feet away behind them, Anjali raised her eyebrows and grabbed Nani's arm. She pointed at Arnav and Khushi, horrified. Nani's eyes shot wide open and she grabbed Garima's arm. Garima looked towards where Nani was pointing and her eyes shot wide open. The three then looked at each other, horrified; soon a wide smile appeared on their faces.


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Do leave your comments, tell me .. do you want this to be an OS, which means I will end here or should it be an epilogue of an SS, in which case I will continue?


Decision : An SS it shall be!! Index below!

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boreddamsel thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
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This SS is dedicated to everyone who is upset that Shyam, Anjali and Dadi's drama is getting more importance than Arshi's marriage in the current track. Don't worry, Boreddamsel is here to cheer you up.. and give you exactly what you want!!

I have challenged myself to make this SS even better than NY to Delhi. You guys be the judge!! 😆


This SS is unique .. it starts with the ending, yes, just like Arnav wanted it! Read the last part above!

The index is below!

Part 2: .. Baahon Main Chali Aa (Pg 37)
Part 3: Tera hone laga hoon (Pg 50)
Part 4: Jhumka gira re (Pg 62)
Part 5 : Zara zara touch me (Pg 66)

Last part: Aankhon ki Gustaakhiyaan (above)



Boreddamsel
cordially invites you to attend the
wedding rituals and ceremony of
Payal Gupta
to
Akash Singh Raizada

What to expect : Fun and romance
What not to expect : Drama and villains 😡

Are you ready? I am already squealing with excitement here.. lol 😆

Edited by boreddamsel - 12 years ago
tmowla thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
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superb...so cute and gushy😳
loved the last part where the trio was shocked and happy...lol
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Posted: 12 years ago
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really good!! You mad me smiling through out the whole thing!! loved how you did it with no words said in-between them!! Also liked how you ended it.. when the 3 matajis noticing!! hahha

well written!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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this is awesome...just loved it...very well expressed...no dialogues but so much emotions which was so well described...or shall i say beautifully described :) I enjoyed reading it (which i generally do while reading the stuffs u write..its seriously unique) Can u please continue this :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
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WOW!!! This one was so good, quite an alternative! Loved it!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE continue
so far so good
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Posted: 12 years ago
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i freakin LOVE this!!!! im telling you again, please go join the cvs!!! this was the perfect scene!!! i cant get over how cute and perfect this was :) CONTINUE PEEELLEEJJ!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Overwhelming response?! You're getting it from meee! I LOOOVVVEEEDD IT :D the poolside scene was so passionate and breathtaking :3 xD I'm in the wedding mood too and it seems like the decorations won't be leaving soon instead they'll stay for the ArHi engagement/marriage to come now that the 3 fairies have caught them 😆 (Anjali, Nani and Garima) xD you should def turn this into a SS!! I would love to read it!! I love the romance that happens at weddings xD its so cute!!! So this is a continuation of what you wanted to happen instead of the MU?
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Aww...That was very sweet n cute...
They romance dint go unnoticed by there families...
Not even a single word is exchanged b/w them..
Plzz do continue...
I would love to read more

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